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Old 01-13-2010, 12:41 PM   #201
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Kye's dead!
Man, that was REALLY unexpected.
Who would have known that Kye wanted to kill Ryaque?
That was cool.
I knew, lol.
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Old 01-13-2010, 12:44 PM   #202
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wow what a change of plot i thought they were all going to meet back up kill the rest of the black hourse kye was going to show true power then when they won kye an rayque was going to marry an it was over after mikkio tried to kill kye an raqyue killed him an they lived happily ever after i never thought kye was on the humans side what a real twist i wonder whats going to happen next
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Old 01-13-2010, 01:17 PM   #203
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this is like a rayque fanclub
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Old 01-13-2010, 01:29 PM   #204
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I'm glad you liked it. I try to keep people guessing.
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Old 01-13-2010, 02:40 PM   #205
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*bouncing up and down in seat* YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! KYE IS DEAD DEAD DEAD DEAD DEAD!!!! YES! WOO HOO! RYAKIKO~ RYAKIKO~ RYAKIKO~ RYAKIKO~!!!!!!!!!! *jumps around screaming* and dang, that was a good plot twist... HE WAS SERGEANT WILKS SON?! *kills him again* he deserved that for trying to kill all of them.
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oh god the nervesness is getting to meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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RYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAQUU UUUUUUUUUUUEEEEE!!! please update.
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update why is none of the writters on first shinny now ryaque
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i wanted kye dead, but not like THAT!
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Old 01-15-2010, 01:19 PM   #210
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Okay everyone listen up please. The reason there is not a new part is because, on Thurdays, I go skiing till 8:00, get home, then go to bed. I don't have time to update on Thurdays, but here will be a new part soon.
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Okay everyone listen up please. The reason there is not a new part is because, on Thurdays, I go skiing till 8:00, get home, then go to bed. I don't have time to update on Thurdays, but here will be a new part soon.

Well then what did YOU have in mind?
him dying......being a turncoat just destroyed all respect i had of him (and that wasnt much).........*waves a kiyomaru banner*
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Old 01-16-2010, 03:55 PM   #212
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Chapter Fourteen: Something's Wrong With Me~

"LEAVE ME ALONE!!!" I screamed at the top of my lungs as I ran from a pack of hungry wolves. My arm and chest were bleeding bad and I could already feel myself slipping away, but if I fell with these dogs on me....I was a goner for sure. "LEAVE ME ALONE I SAID!!!" The wolves didn't even slow down. Running faster then ever I climbed a tree and hoped they wouldn't follow me. At the bottom, they were howling and yiping while trying to climb the tree to get me. Suddenly they all turned towards something in the darkness and retreated. Something was coming....twigs snapped and the sound of trees falling over echoed in my ears. "Who's there?" I timidly asked as the noise got closer and closer to me. "Go away!!" I climbed higher into the tree, trying to escape this new enemy but slipped and fell. Branches slapped me on my head, chest, and both my legs....I couldn't move as I just helplessly dangled on the lower branches of the tree. Out of the darkness came glowing yellow eyes and rancid breath. "GO AWAY!!" I tried to get down but my body couldn't move...I was dead and I knew it. The creature kept coming closer until finally it stood infront of me. It was so large it had to crouch to look me in the eyes. "Ryaque......." the beast called my name, "you're going to die now...." I felt it's jaws squeeze my neck as I let out a blood curtling scream...
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It wasn't very long before I heard footsteps behind me, and I knew exactly who it was too. "Mikiko....what the hell do you want?" I snapped at him as he finally caught up to me. "You really scared me back there......what's wrong?" I pushed my hands through my hair and shook my head. "I...I don't know...I don't know what's happening to me! I can't get Him out of my head!!!" A fury of tears fell from my eyes and angry sobs erupted from my throat. Falling to my knees, I let my sorrow over take me and I wasn't sure I would ever be able to stop crying. Mikiko sat next to me and hugged me tight. "Ryaque....Kye is dead....he can't hurt you." The sobs only got worse at the mention of his name. "Don't...EVER....mention that name around me EVER again!!!" The sorrow in my voice over powered my anger and only make Mikiko worry more. "Ryaque.....I won't let anything happen to you...I promise." I sat on him lap as he wrapped his arms around me; never once did he grow tired of my crying...all he wanted to do was help. "Mikiko...what's wrong with me? I feel like I'm falling apart...." He kissed me gently on the forehead and rocked slowely back and forth. "I don't know, but whatever it is......it's killing me to see you like this...." I fell asleep in his arms, but that same dream happened again only this time....instead of the monster....it was Him....I want to die....
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now i see where you are getting mikiko from.......STOP QUOTING ME! lolz
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Oh...opps...I didn't realize I did....
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Chapter Fifteen: A Miner Set-back~

"Mikiko, is this really nessesary?" I asked as he handcuffed my arm. "I'm not going to have you run away again." He replied then used then hancuffed his own arm so we were stuck together. "Why do I get the feeling this isn't just for me running away?" Mikiko looked away to try and hide his smile.

Now, stuck to a smelly dog, we all continued toward the nearest Black Horse HQ. "Probabuly only two or three days away." I said to everyong, but Haruko laughed. "With you Ryaque, everything is more complicated then it appears." Kiyomaru nodded and chuckled slightly. "He does have a point...." I would've slapped both of them but Mikiko held me back. Just for precation, Jiro walked on the other side of me and held my arm against my side, giving me this "Don't even think about it" look. Great...prison all over again.....where's my executioner?

A spinning shuriken appeared out the the forest and made us all scatter. "What was that?" Kiyomaru asked and pulled out his sword. Haruko sniffed heavily and a evil smile spread across his face. "Humans....." Jiro ran to his brother as they both pulled out their weapons. Mikiko grabbed his but I couldn't reach my sword...."Hey give me something to fight with!!" Before anything came another shuriken appeared and broke the chain between Mikiko and I. Instantly grabbing my sword, I looked around trying to find out adversaries. "Where are they?" Kiyomaru stood protectively infront of me and scoured the bushes. "Who ever they are I think they're gone...." "GUESS AGAIN DAEMON!!" A young boy jumped out of the woods and lunged at him. Kiyomaru parried the attack and counter attack by jumping in the air and throwing posionous knives. "There's more then one!!" I yelled as more people popped out of the woods. Next came a girl with blue hair, and finally came a daemon with horns. "KILL THEM ALL!!" The leader yelled and tried to fight Kiyomaru off. The Horned Daemon went for Jiro and Haruko and made a horrible growling noise. "The one thing I can't stand...is a stupid cat daemon!!" The last girl yelled and charged at me, swinging a flaming chain high above her head. My instincts took over while I charged at the girl. The chain wrapped around my body, pinning my arms to my sides. "What is this thing??" I tried to break the chain but something was different about it. "You're looking at the Daemon Chain of the Aruken Village!!!" The girl pulled me two my knees and the chain started to burn through my clothes. Mikiko tried to help me but only got blocked by the other two people. Jiro was on the ground, bleeding from a head wound given by the Horned Daemon. Haruko on the other hand was helping his brother and didn't care less about what happened to us. "Mikiko, Kiyomaru, RUN!!!" I yelled to them as I was being dragged away by the blue haired girl and her horse. "I'll find you and set you free!! I swear to GOD!!!" Mikiko's voice faded into the distance.

"This can't be the daemon we're looking for....she would've transformed by now." The Daemon said, tilting her head and looking me up and down. "You should talk, Kaori, she probabuly thinks your a daemon rather then a shape shifter. The leader laughed and looked at the blue haired girl. "Good thing we have that chain of yours or else we would've had to fight her true form." She gave me a smirked and wrapped the chain around her arm. "You know me....feared by daemons everywhere. Hahahaha." The leader crouched down and smiled. "Look we won't hurt you as long as you tell us where our brother is." I glared at his and hissed. "I don't know your brother....." The blue haired girl slapped me across the face. "Stop lying you stupid monster. KYE is our brother......YOU know him....we know you do." My heart nearly started crying again as the mention of his name...."Kye is your brother? Does that mean Seargent Wilks is also your father?" They all glared at me. "How do you know about that?" The boy laughed. "Kye told her......no, daemon, Seargent Wilks kidnapped Kye and brainwashed him. He thought he was his father...but he escaped and we would've found him if you didn't kill our wolves." I looked away from them and tried my hardest not to cry...."Kye...is dead." They all nearly fell over, two from sorrow, but one from pure rage. "Kye...."
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