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Chunin Exam Participant
Join Date: Jul 2009
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Please Delete this post!
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Lightning Village - "The Great Lightning Sage" Squad Sasori's Sensei - Chunin - 球|火 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ,,,,,, (o)) "Tobi is a good boy! : ] -Tobi / ||| \ -Put this on your sig if you like Tobi! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ "When the rich wage war, it's the poor who die." ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to see my shinobi ninja, Sasori Hatori Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to read my fanfic Last edited by Sasori Hatori; 12-06-2009 at 04:29 PM. |
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No one is going to comment?!?!?!
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Lightning Village - "The Great Lightning Sage" Squad Sasori's Sensei - Chunin - 球|火 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ,,,,,, (o)) "Tobi is a good boy! : ] -Tobi / ||| \ -Put this on your sig if you like Tobi! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ "When the rich wage war, it's the poor who die." ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to see my shinobi ninja, Sasori Hatori Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to read my fanfic |
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: I don't care where you are or what your doing...SO STOP TELLING ME ON TWITTER!
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not bad...not bad at all
you could add a few things like whether your a chunin or not and all that other stuff but other then a few thing's missing this is a pretty damn good job
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k i fixed it!
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Lightning Village - "The Great Lightning Sage" Squad Sasori's Sensei - Chunin - 球|火 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ,,,,,, (o)) "Tobi is a good boy! : ] -Tobi / ||| \ -Put this on your sig if you like Tobi! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ "When the rich wage war, it's the poor who die." ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to see my shinobi ninja, Sasori Hatori Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to read my fanfic |
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O_o omg i love it!!
good work!
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Lightning Village - "The Great Lightning Sage" Squad Sasori's Sensei - Chunin - 球|火 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ,,,,,, (o)) "Tobi is a good boy! : ] -Tobi / ||| \ -Put this on your sig if you like Tobi! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ "When the rich wage war, it's the poor who die." ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to see my shinobi ninja, Sasori Hatori Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to read my fanfic |
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now it's pretty much fine I don't see anything you really need to add
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Hey. I suggest you change the name sasori, something like Sori, or Sora
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Umm, Ace this is the wrong character, this is the old one, my new one is "The Great Lightning Sage"
Here is the link: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=36023
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Lightning Village - "The Great Lightning Sage" Squad Sasori's Sensei - Chunin - 球|火 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ,,,,,, (o)) "Tobi is a good boy! : ] -Tobi / ||| \ -Put this on your sig if you like Tobi! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ "When the rich wage war, it's the poor who die." ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to see my shinobi ninja, Sasori Hatori Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to read my fanfic |
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Please Delete this post, mods!!
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Lightning Village - "The Great Lightning Sage" Squad Sasori's Sensei - Chunin - 球|火 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ ,,,,,, (o)) "Tobi is a good boy! : ] -Tobi / ||| \ -Put this on your sig if you like Tobi! ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ "When the rich wage war, it's the poor who die." ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to see my shinobi ninja, Sasori Hatori Go To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. to read my fanfic |
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