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Old 10-11-2009, 05:57 PM   #1
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Exclamation The Perfect World-part 1

originally based off a roleplay be me,dogboy,Tao,akatsukiLOVE,jesse uzumaki.and kay


part 2 coming soon



the chapters and arcs

Spoiler:


the planning arc


chapter 1-
Sagara Helps
chapter 2-
Sagara gives 3 crystals
chapter 3-
Innuen and Kay join
______________
the quest arc


chapter 4-
onward to the Forest of Life
chapter 5-
the guardian,Zipher
chapter 6-
Hades and Zerbures
_______________
the "perfect world" arc

chapter 7-
eternal canyon
chapter 8-
Terror's interferacne
chapter 9-
the "perfect world"
chapter 10-
drop 'em into the core!



Charecters-
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Dark
Dark-ES
Kay Getsuy
Innuen Hagashii
Sagara
Zipher
Terror
Kanon
Zeik
Light
Hades
Cerbures


The Antagonists-

Spoiler:

Dark-ES
Cerbures
Hades



The Proantagonists-

Spoiler:

Dark
Zipher
Kay Getsuy
Innuen Hagashii
Terror
Kanon
Zeik
Light


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The Planning Arc



Chapter 1-


Sagara Helps


Finally!, Dark-ES said while closing a Big, Dusty book. I know how to make the perfect world! Now who can I get to help me? I know! Sagara should be able to. He teleported away to the home of Sagara hoping that he could get him to help.Dark-ES knocked on the door. Sagara slowly opened the door. Hello Dark-ES, why have you come to my home? I need your help Dark-ES said. Sagara looked at Dark-ES, what do you need my friend? Our world as it is has been corrupted by man with war, violence, and evil. I plan on making a new world where there is peace. Sagara, will you help me? After a moment of silence, Sagara answered, I agree with you, and I will help you




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Sagara gives 3 crystals


Sagara, you have made a wise choice Dark-ES said. We need the crystals of life to make the new world though .The red crystal stabilizes the warmth and the cold, the white crystal stabilizes the moon and the stars, the yellow stabilizes sickness, purple stabilizes death, blue stabilizes the waters, green stabilizes nature, and most important, orange stabilizes life. Sagara quickly looked at Dark-ES. I have the green, red , and purple crystals. Sagara handed the crystals to Dark-ES. Dark-ES took the crystals. Now we need the yellow, white, and blue. Sagara, I believe the orange crystal is deep in the Forest of Life, where life began. Sagara packed supplies. Lets go Sagara said

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Old 10-11-2009, 11:49 PM   #2
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Well, then.
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Old 10-12-2009, 01:15 AM   #3
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Forum: I am Sagara. I have lived for 500 years, and fought in the Hitokiri wars. I come from another world, that's why I am so "old" in your human eyes. I have no emotions.

Real life: I took the name Sagara from a leader of his own army during the Meji revolution in Japan. Captain Sagara Sozo was a hero of the country who fought for freeing Japan, but he was executed by the Meji goverment because of "betrayal of the country" and "rebellion". His army was either banned from the country or executed, althought some of them hide their identity, but kept living under captain Sagara's wishes to free Japan. And yes, this has happened in real life, something about year 1885.

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Old 10-12-2009, 04:46 AM   #4
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originally based off a roleplay be me,dogboy,Tao,and kay

part 2 coming soon

the chapters and arcs

the planning arc

chapter 1-
Sagara Helps
chapter 2-
Sagara gives 3 crystals
chapter 3-
Innuen and Kay join
______________
the quest arc

chapter 4-
onward to the Forest of Life
chapter 5-
the guardian,Zipher
chapter 6-
Hades and Zerbures
_______________
the "perfect world" arc

chapter 7-
eternal canyon
chapter 8-
Terror's interferacne
chapter 9-
the "perfect world"
chapter 10-
drop 'em into the core!



Charecters-
Dark
Dark-ES
Kay Getsuy
Innuen Hagashii
Sagara
Zipher
Terror
Kanon
Zeik
Light


The Antagonists-
Dark-ES
Cerbures
Hades


The Proantagonists-
Dark
Zipher
Kay Getsuy
Innuen Hagashii
Terror
Kanon
Zeik
Light

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The Planning Arc



Chapter 1-


Sagara Helps


Finally!, Dark-ES said while closing a Big, Dusty book. I know how to make the perfect world! Now who can I get to help me? I know! Sagara should be able to. He teleported away to the home of Sagara hoping that he could get him to help.Dark-ES knocked on the door. Sagara slowly opened the door. Hello Dark-ES, why have you come to my home? I need your help Dark-ES said. Sagara looked at Dark-ES, what do you need my friend? Our world as it is has been corrupted by man with war, violence, and evil. I plan on making a new world where there is peace. Sagara, will you help me? After a moment of silence, Sagara answered, I agree with you, and I will help you


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Old 10-12-2009, 05:45 AM   #5
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Old 10-12-2009, 06:09 AM   #6
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originally based off a roleplay be me,dogboy,Tao,and kay


part 2 coming soon

the chapters and arcs

the planning arc

chapter 1-
Sagara Helps
chapter 2-
Sagara gives 3 crystals
chapter 3-
Innuen and Kay join
______________
the quest arc

chapter 4-
onward to the Forest of Life
chapter 5-
the guardian,Zipher
chapter 6-
Hades and Zerbures
_______________
the "perfect world" arc

chapter 7-
eternal canyon
chapter 8-
Terror's interferacne
chapter 9-
the "perfect world"
chapter 10-
drop 'em into the core!



Charecters-
Dark
Dark-ES
Kay Getsuy
Innuen Hagashii
Sagara
Zipher
Terror
Kanon
Zeik
Light


The Antagonists-
Dark-ES
Cerbures
Hades


The Proantagonists-
Dark
Zipher
Kay Getsuy
Innuen Hagashii
Terror
Kanon
Zeik
Light

_________________________________________________

The Planning Arc



Chapter 1-


Sagara Helps


Finally!, Dark-ES said while closing a Big, Dusty book. I know how to make the perfect world! Now who can I get to help me? I know! Sagara should be able to. He teleported away to the home of Sagara hoping that he could get him to help.Dark-ES knocked on the door. Sagara slowly opened the door. Hello Dark-ES, why have you come to my home? I need your help Dark-ES said. Sagara looked at Dark-ES, what do you need my friend? Our world as it is has been corrupted by man with war, violence, and evil. I plan on making a new world where there is peace. Sagara, will you help me? After a moment of silence, Sagara answered, I agree with you, and I will help you


it's awsom,ekeep up the good work dude
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Old 10-12-2009, 07:26 AM   #7
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hades:....oh whatever.....
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cool so far
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Old 10-12-2009, 05:01 PM   #11
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You spelled my name wrong its Inuuen Hageshii
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Where are the quotaion marks?
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I like it but you need to um add tgis when people are speaking "
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