path of the assassin's - Page 7

KaiokenX5 Karo · 10-10-2009, 04:27 PM

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Originally Posted by assassin

i thought the same...a good writer keeps some humor in his story along with some blood...

a good story consists of 3 things:
-blood
-sex
-drugs

I will have all 3 in this story

actually 5 things

4. people that in real life you cant stand but still like them
5. badasses

cherryflower · 10-10-2009, 04:28 PM

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Originally Posted by assassin

chapter 5:Miyo's power and Karo's thoughts

Karo and Miyo's side:
Miyo still wondering why Karo decided to help her asks "Karo, why are you helping me?" "Well i know what it's like to lose a friend. I lost two very close friends a long time ago. I don't want to see that happen to anyone else. Also you're the only person i've gotten to talk to for a while and you know I didn't want to feel lonely guess you can call me selfish heheh." Karo answerd. "Oh, well thanks." "No problem." god shes hot, wonder how old she is Karo thought. Miyo got an annoyed expression on her face "pervert" she said.

Karo got tense and had a how'ld she know look on his face. "i forgot to mention, i can read the dreams and thoughts of others" Miyo said "so..." Miyo slaps Karo across the face. "OW" karo exclaimed "what was that for?" "being a perv" Miyo said. Then she giggled and said "I know what you said was the truth but I also know your a pervert" and she padded ahead of him. "whoa" Karo said "what a girl" then he realized Miyo was getting ahead of him "HEY MIYO! WAIT UP!" he exclaimed. "then come on" Miyo called behind her.

TO BE CONTINUED

Lol, Cool

assassin · 10-10-2009, 04:30 PM

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Originally Posted by KaiokenX5 Karo

actually 5 things

4. people that in real life you cant stand but still like them
5. badasses

badasses is sex....and blood

4 makes a story better but you need the other 3 to make it great

KaiokenX5 Karo · 10-10-2009, 04:31 PM

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Originally Posted by assassin

badasses is sex....and blood

4 makes a story better but you need the other 3 to make it great

yea that is true

SakuraGirl · 10-10-2009, 05:27 PM

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Originally Posted by assassin

chapter 5:Miyo's power and Karo's thoughts

Karo and Miyo's side:
Miyo still wondering why Karo decided to help her asks "Karo, why are you helping me?" "Well i know what it's like to lose a friend. I lost two very close friends a long time ago. I don't want to see that happen to anyone else. Also you're the only person i've gotten to talk to for a while and you know I didn't want to feel lonely guess you can call me selfish heheh." Karo answerd. "Oh, well thanks." "No problem." god shes hot, wonder how old she is Karo thought. Miyo got an annoyed expression on her face "pervert" she said.

Karo got tense and had a how'ld she know look on his face. "i forgot to mention, i can read the dreams and thoughts of others" Miyo said "so..." Miyo slaps Karo across the face. "OW" karo exclaimed "what was that for?" "being a perv" Miyo said. Then she giggled and said "I know what you said was the truth but I also know your a pervert" and she padded ahead of him. "whoa" Karo said "what a girl" then he realized Miyo was getting ahead of him "HEY MIYO! WAIT UP!" he exclaimed. "then come on" Miyo called behind her.

TO BE CONTINUED

lol i like it

Naruto & Hinata · 10-10-2009, 05:29 PM

these are very good

KaiokenX5 Karo · 10-10-2009, 06:04 PM

what you planning to do for the story next

cherryflower · 10-10-2009, 06:15 PM

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what you planning to do for the story next

I was wondering that too but do you know what sucks. I wrote a story here a long time ago and want to continue writeing it but I have it in a word doc. and when ever I copy paste it it always gets cut off (even if it's in a spoiler) I'll probably end up writing it again any ways though because my writeing stlye has changed alot since then

SakuraGirl · 10-10-2009, 06:21 PM

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Originally Posted by cherryflower

I was wondering that too but do you know what sucks. I wrote a story here a long time ago and want to continue writeing it but I have it in a word doc. and when ever I copy paste it it always gets cut off (even if it's in a spoiler) I'll probably end up writing it again any ways though because my writeing stlye has changed alot since then

I would like to read your story

cherryflower · 10-10-2009, 06:25 PM

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I would like to read your story

It's not that good, I wrote it a long time ago. It's called the Gems of darkness.

SakuraGirl · 10-10-2009, 06:28 PM

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Originally Posted by cherryflower

It's not that good, I wrote it a long time ago. It's called the Gems of darkness.

Maybe you should redo it

KaiokenX5 Karo · 10-10-2009, 06:31 PM

yea my manga was 1st like a spin off of naruto bleach dragon ball and inuyasha (now u see how that would never work) it had sortof an interesting plot though

cherryflower · 10-10-2009, 06:35 PM

Hm. well I'm typeing in it right now. I hope it turns out good. I will post a link when I'm done.

KaiokenX5 Karo · 10-10-2009, 06:36 PM

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Hm. well I'm typeing in it right now. I hope it turns out good. I will post a link when I'm done.

*thumbs up* good good

assassin · 10-10-2009, 06:54 PM

i'll read it cherry...

SakuraGirl · 10-10-2009, 07:06 PM

sound like a plan cherry, tell me went your done i will take a look

cherryflower · 10-10-2009, 07:21 PM

http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=10930

Here it is. all the posts but the last one (on the second page) Sorta suck..... but I will edit them and put in more details. like i said before my writeing style has changed alot and i'm horrible at writeing in first person.

SakuraGirl · 10-10-2009, 08:04 PM

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Originally Posted by cherryflower

http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=10930

Here it is. all the posts but the last one (on the second page) Sorta suck..... but I will edit them and put in more details. like i said before my writeing style has changed alot and i'm horrible at writeing in first person.

i like it

KaiokenX5 Karo · 10-10-2009, 08:12 PM

any1 here

SakuraGirl · 10-10-2009, 08:18 PM

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any1 here

i am here

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cherryflower Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Haveing a blast :D Posts: 5,305 Rep Power: 9	Re: path of the assassin's Hm. well I'm typeing in it right now. I hope it turns out good. I will post a link when I'm done. __________________ <33 This is where awesomeness occurs: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. SASUKEXLEE SUPPORTER Saucely

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cherryflower Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Haveing a blast :D Posts: 5,305 Rep Power: 9	Re: path of the assassin's http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showthread.php?t=10930 Here it is. all the posts but the last one (on the second page) Sorta suck..... but I will edit them and put in more details. like i said before my writeing style has changed alot and i'm horrible at writeing in first person. __________________ <33 This is where awesomeness occurs: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. SASUKEXLEE SUPPORTER Saucely

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