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08-18-2009, 10:49 AM
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My Poem (SakuraGirl)
There is a God Who know you like no other,
For he is the one the that create you. he know every heartache, he know every good and every bad thing you have done, he know what you believe in,What you have trust in, and the hope you have,you are his child and he love you no matter what, but you must ask him into your heart, he will force himself in, he will ask you in your heart and you will say yes or no. God see others different then we do,He know when you sleep he know when you awake and he know every end of your of you soul and you can not hide from god for he see every thing you do every day that Go's by every hour, every min, every sec their nothing that he does not know about you,So don,t try hide because he know you more more than you know youself. So watch what you say and do because he is always with you.
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SakuraGirl-Once I hid in your Shadows,but now I will fight for the both of you My Character Miyo Ai Member of the Village hidden in the Moonlight I'm a Christian and don't care what everyone else thinks about me. If you feel the same, copy and paster this into your sig. put this on your siggy if you love Taker . -I give Rep,May you give it back. |
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08-18-2009, 10:50 AM
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...wants a different title?
Formerly Naruto/Fan Boy 
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Re: My Poem (SakuraGirl)
wow cool poem
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08-18-2009, 10:51 AM
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Drama Queen
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Re: My Poem (SakuraGirl)
whatd i start? lol.
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08-18-2009, 10:53 AM
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Re: My Poem (SakuraGirl)
cool poem
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08-18-2009, 11:32 AM
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Re: My Poem (SakuraGirl)
not bad. i like it. sorta.
i felt a little lost and it sounded more like a story after line four.
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08-18-2009, 11:33 AM
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Re: My Poem (SakuraGirl)
yea i know it start out as a poem then it kinde became a story
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