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Old 10-06-2009, 06:25 PM   #1
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as i said when i came up with my next poem i'ld start writing all my poems in the same thread...

actually a song if you catch the beat
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dead inside
but i won't hide
all alone
rotting to the bone
cut up wrist
i won't be missed
if i die
you may cry
let the rain
wash away your pain
i'll never leave your side
i have not yet died
i'll curse my soul
with an empty hole
to save your heart
that lovely work of art
trust in me
and you will see
a life of peace
all war will cease


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there was once a time
a time I speak in this rhyme
when I was the king
a king with golden wings
in one of my hands
I held all of the lands
that I ever saw
I was a man without a single flaw
then on my throne
I dark seed i had sewn
an unforgivable sin I made
a sin that has laid
dreams to waste
all the power I had chased
In one fleeting moment I lost it all
this is when I fall
for the seed I have sewn
I shall live alone
inside the black
this poem is totally wack
I have no worth
I lost what I had had since birth
I live in a curse
for better or worse
I endure the pain
the pain that drives me insane
this is my punishment
for I must repent
for this deed I have done
I shall not run
from what is my fate
it is my life that I hate
I pray I'm forgiven
for my sin
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"My plan was perfect! But there was one thing I overlooked, one facter I failed to calculate. He's a dumba$$. And there's no accounting for dumba$$...ness." ~Agito

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Old 10-06-2009, 06:28 PM   #2
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i dont know why, but u know how i feel, maybe not now, but sometimes, its a great poem
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Old 10-06-2009, 06:31 PM   #3
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Good Poem and are you emo? Just asking.
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Old 10-06-2009, 06:33 PM   #4
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Good Poem and are you emo? Just asking.
if homicidal depression is your definition of emo than yes i am...
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Old 10-06-2009, 06:34 PM   #5
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a year ago i was emo
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Old 11-03-2009, 05:41 PM   #6
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second poem added
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Old 11-03-2009, 05:52 PM   #7
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yeah don't read my work...why do I bother writing these if no one reads them?
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Old 11-03-2009, 06:20 PM   #8
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i read 'em.
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Old 11-14-2009, 08:42 PM   #9
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Here's some:
"Tears
They no longer fall
What's lost is gone
And I can't cry about the future"

"I don't torment myself,
Nor do I to others
I'm at peace with myself
You are not"
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I wrote this one a while ago.

Holding back emotions
Keeping feelings hidden within
A somber feeling it does bring
Experiencing the world's harsh, cold sting
Depressing thoughts have a tight embrace
Hide them all behind a stoic face
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Old 11-15-2009, 05:11 AM   #11
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*sigh*
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These are good, the second one kind of reminds me of Viva la Vida by Coldplay... I like them I'd love to read more.
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