jenny`s new story - Page 3

sasu_girl · 11-25-2009, 10:50 AM

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Originally Posted by jenny

-_-" thanks..i think...

you iz welcome. and again, good job.

george hyuga · 11-26-2009, 09:43 AM

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Originally Posted by jenny

The Discovery

I was out for a walk, when suddenly it started to rain. I was near a culvult, so I went inside it, before I got to wet. Inside, was something shiny in the water, and something I`ve never seen before. I picked it up and observed it. A very peculiar peice, of what looks to be a rock. I put it in my pocket, and went home. Even though it was down pouring, I knew if I didn`t get home soon, mom was going to yell at me. About, quarter half to my house, it stoped raining.
I finally reached my house, I went in and heard "You`re in trouble" with a snooty voice. "Hey,Danielle, why don`t you do us all a favor and shut up!" I snaped. My mom rased in, looking worried and mad at the same time, "Erica! Where have u been?!" My mom said. "Mooooom, i`m fine. Really! i am," I said "Am I cut? Am I hurt? Am I dead?! No! I`m perfectly fine.
"Yeah mom, she`s just as a freak as she left." Danielle said. I glared at her.
"Alright you two. Stop it,now!" my mom called out to us both, "Now, Erica, I want you up stairs and to get washed up for dinner."
I went upstairs to get ready. I changed out of my wet, soaked clothes into dry ones. I back came down stairs to eat supper. I didn`t tell anyone about the rock I found, because figured my sisters and brothers would want to take it and keep it or worse. My parents would want to take it and give it to science or somethng. I couldn`t take that risk, so I kept it a secret, and hidden away where no one would find it.

This is my new and improved story. Im not sure if it is good or not,but u decide if i should write more,or not.

plz post of wat u thnk, and how i did!!

*yawn* whats with the fairy tale? i rather read my "city of bones book"

jenny · 11-26-2009, 09:48 AM

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Originally Posted by george hyuga

*yawn* whats with the fairy tale? i rather read my "city of bones book"

...-_- THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!! Someone who agrres with me that my story is the most horrible story in the history of stories!!! YES!!!

sasu_girl · 11-26-2009, 09:49 AM

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Originally Posted by jenny

...-_- THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!! Someone who agrres with me that my story is the most horrible story in the history of stories!!! YES!!!

wow, you sure like to put yourself down. it's a good story!!! because i say so!!!

george hyuga · 11-26-2009, 10:08 AM

jenny...... nvm..... (takes a nap)ZZZZZZZZzzzzzZZZzzzzZZzzz

jenny · 11-26-2009, 12:09 PM

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Originally Posted by george hyuga

jenny...... nvm..... (takes a nap)ZZZZZZZZzzzzzZZZzzzzZZzzz

i hate the damn story..and ur the first to agree..

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Originally Posted by sasu_girl

wow, you sure like to put yourself down. it's a good story!!! because i say so!!!

hehehehe good thing ur not like narusakufluff4ever, or ud slap me...

sasu_girl · 11-26-2009, 12:11 PM

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Originally Posted by jenny

i hate the damn story..and ur the first to agree..

hehehehe good thing ur not like narusakufluff4ever, or ud slap me...

i iz against violence. but i iz not against yelling!!!

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jenny · 11-26-2009, 12:59 PM

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Originally Posted by sasu_girl

i iz against violence. but i iz not against yelling!!!

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i am goin to write it, no duh. but im not writing it for me, im writing it for everyone else..cus they like it..

sasu_girl · 11-26-2009, 01:00 PM

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Originally Posted by jenny

i am goin to write it, no duh. but im not writing it for me, im writing it for everyone else..cus they like it..

i can live with that. but you should like your own story. i mean, you wrote it.

george hyuga · 11-26-2009, 01:48 PM

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Originally Posted by jenny

i am goin to write it, no duh. but im not writing it for me, im writing it for everyone else..cus they like it..

*psht* ur a writer now

jenny · 11-26-2009, 01:58 PM

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Originally Posted by sasu_girl

i can live with that. but you should like your own story. i mean, you wrote it.

i hate it, no matter what you say..im going to hate it...

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Originally Posted by george hyuga

*psht* ur a writer now

..xD _-_

kakashi_sempai · 11-26-2009, 02:02 PM

then stop writing it since u hate it

george hyuga · 11-26-2009, 02:02 PM

he he yeah......... -_-

jenny · 11-26-2009, 02:09 PM

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Originally Posted by kakashi_sempai

then stop writing it since u hate it

like i said, i will write for the people who like. when everyone dont like it, i wont continue. i will kinda do what im doing...of whatever im doing...-_- _-_

sasu_girl · 11-26-2009, 03:24 PM

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Originally Posted by jenny

i hate it, no matter what you say..im going to hate it...

..xD _-_

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assassin · 11-26-2009, 03:28 PM

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Originally Posted by sasu_girl

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O.O
I thought you said you were against violence

sasu_girl · 11-26-2009, 03:34 PM

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Originally Posted by assassin

O.O
I thought you said you were against violence

well, i don't like blood. well, other peoples blood. it's kinda freaky. and i can get violent if i want. =^^=

jenny · 11-26-2009, 04:10 PM

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Originally Posted by sasu_girl

well, i don't like blood. well, other peoples blood. it's kinda freaky. and i can get violent if i want. =^^=

xD niiiice....

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O.O
I thought you said you were against violence

lmao xD

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xD lmao oook.....u can do whatever u want to me, but it wont change my mind! i will always hate it! xD

sasu_girl · 11-26-2009, 04:21 PM

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Originally Posted by jenny

xD niiiice....

lmao xD

xD lmao oook.....u can do whatever u want to me, but it wont change my mind! i will always hate it! xD

you sure are a stubborn one aren't you. I WILL CHANGE YOUR MIND!!!!! MUAHAHAHA!!!

jenny · 11-26-2009, 04:26 PM

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you sure are a stubborn one aren't you. I WILL CHANGE YOUR MIND!!!!! MUAHAHAHA!!!

yeah, im pretty stubborn...you should see me at home.. xD
NO YOU WONT!!! ITS IMPOSSIBLE!!! xD

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