Psychic by Cloud_Love_Ninja

Cloud_Love_Ninja · 08-07-2009, 01:41 PM

Please comment my work.
There graphic aid some time it will be comic.
Plz injoy my work.

Cloud_Love_Ninja · 08-09-2009, 10:03 AM

~Chapter 1~ The Secret
It sometime around midnight. Sally Sue was woken by a voices. She eyes are amazed about that what she see is real. She looking at boy with scratches all over his body. He looks at her with distress. Sally Sue frighten 5 year old asked small boy all most same as her, "H-Hello? How did you get in here?" The boy didn't answer and he vantage in to thin air. That was the first ghost Sally ever saw. She never told here parents and any of her friends. 10 years later. "Mom and Dad, I am going to school now", Sue yell up stairs. But the problem with that her mother died in her sleep 10 years ago. But Sally refuses that her mother is dead because she has seen her mom every day before and after school. "Sal, sit with me" waving his hand. Her boyfriend Derek. Sally sat down next to Derek. Sally is beautiful 15 year old with black hair, dark brown eyes, and ever slim. She told Derek all her secrets even one about seeing ghosts. He finds that so amazing. "Since we been dating a lot. I was wondering wanna come over my house to watch movies and stuff like that tonight." Asked Derek nervously. "I love to. Make it Horror movie and you have a deal" Sally replied. The bus arrived at school Sally and Derek walk in holding hands. "See you on Bus" Sally says, "Deal!"

(I look for picture to closes to my imagination to make her look close to Sally)

Cloud_Love_Ninja · 08-13-2009, 08:27 PM

:'(No Comments

KyuubiAkatsuki · 08-13-2009, 08:34 PM

ooooh i readses it, its good

Cloud_Love_Ninja · 08-13-2009, 09:47 PM

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Originally Posted by KyuubiAkatsuki

ooooh i readses it, its good

thnx-^^-

dogboy22 · 08-13-2009, 09:49 PM

That was really good

Cloud_Love_Ninja · 08-13-2009, 09:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by dogboy22

That was really good

thnx
I am in writer block idk what write next

Anbu-Phoenix · 08-13-2009, 09:54 PM

That is a very good story i cant wait to read more

Cloud_Love_Ninja · 08-13-2009, 09:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Anbu-Phoenix

That is a very good story i cant wait to read more

Thnx Try tonight

08-07-2009, 01:41 PM	#1
Cloud_Love_Ninja Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Silent Sucide Posts: 1,936 Rep Power: 0	Psychic by Cloud_Love_Ninja Please comment my work. There graphic aid some time it will be comic. Plz injoy my work. __________________ "Have faith in me Cause there are things that I've seen I don't believe"♥ A Day To Remember My Nindo: Knife To throat will slice open it, So you drink your own blood, As death due us part Last edited by Cloud_Love_Ninja; 08-09-2009 at 09:19 AM.

08-09-2009, 10:03 AM	#2
Cloud_Love_Ninja Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Silent Sucide Posts: 1,936 Rep Power: 0	Re: Psychic by Cloud_Love_Ninja ~Chapter 1~ The Secret It sometime around midnight. Sally Sue was woken by a voices. She eyes are amazed about that what she see is real. She looking at boy with scratches all over his body. He looks at her with distress. Sally Sue frighten 5 year old asked small boy all most same as her, "H-Hello? How did you get in here?" The boy didn't answer and he vantage in to thin air. That was the first ghost Sally ever saw. She never told here parents and any of her friends. 10 years later. "Mom and Dad, I am going to school now", Sue yell up stairs. But the problem with that her mother died in her sleep 10 years ago. But Sally refuses that her mother is dead because she has seen her mom every day before and after school. "Sal, sit with me" waving his hand. Her boyfriend Derek. Sally sat down next to Derek. Sally is beautiful 15 year old with black hair, dark brown eyes, and ever slim. She told Derek all her secrets even one about seeing ghosts. He finds that so amazing. "Since we been dating a lot. I was wondering wanna come over my house to watch movies and stuff like that tonight." Asked Derek nervously. "I love to. Make it Horror movie and you have a deal" Sally replied. The bus arrived at school Sally and Derek walk in holding hands. "See you on Bus" Sally says, "Deal!" (I look for picture to closes to my imagination to make her look close to Sally) __________________ "Have faith in me Cause there are things that I've seen I don't believe"♥ A Day To Remember My Nindo: Knife To throat will slice open it, So you drink your own blood, As death due us part

08-13-2009, 08:27 PM	#3
Cloud_Love_Ninja Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Silent Sucide Posts: 1,936 Rep Power: 0	Re: Psychic by Cloud_Love_Ninja :'(No Comments __________________ "Have faith in me Cause there are things that I've seen I don't believe"♥ A Day To Remember My Nindo: Knife To throat will slice open it, So you drink your own blood, As death due us part

08-13-2009, 08:34 PM	#4
KyuubiAkatsuki Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: California! Posts: 6,813 Rep Power: 14	Re: Psychic by Cloud_Love_Ninja ooooh i readses it, its good __________________ R.I.P My little bro RedBlade, he was one of the best people i knew "If sacred places are spared the ravages of war then make all places sacred. And if the holy people are to be kept harmless from war then make all peoples holy." ----- Silver Surfer from Silver Surfer Requiem Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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dogboy22 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Ghosts Posts: 4,360 Rep Power: 8	Re: Psychic by Cloud_Love_Ninja That was really good __________________ ~Lucifer's Lil Protege~ Hika-Chan's Pet Doggy = Best Demon Ever To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

08-13-2009, 09:54 PM	#8
Anbu-Phoenix Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Why do you wanna know i think its kinda private, Pervert! Posts: 3,521 Rep Power: 0	Re: Psychic by Cloud_Love_Ninja That is a very good story i cant wait to read more __________________ Electricity is really just organized lightning. Fighting for peace is like screwing for virginity. Have you ever noticed that anybody driving slower than you is an idiot, and anyone going faster than you is a maniac? I would never want to be a member of a group whose symbol was a guy nailed to two pieces of wood. --- George Carlin Blood Village For Life!!! Love Hurts But Being Unloved Hurts Worse ~ Me

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