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Old 08-03-2009, 05:10 PM   #1
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My first story thing. (If the prologue is bad, well... it was written at 2:00 in the morning.)

Its about the resistance of humans, in the middle of a massive war against the "Capitals". More specificly, Gamma Squad. And elite squad of Stealth Infiltration Troopers, that have been trained for years to fight the Capitals. Hope you like it.

Part 1- The troubles on Aldeern
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Part 2- Defense of Botanic
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter 21
Chapter 22
Chapter 23
Chapter 24
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Prologue
The start, it wasn’t fun.
Planet Quantom, Loading docks-Hangar 21C
September 24, Year 2633

“We never get anything out here. Just space rocks, and trash…” “Ahh, quit complaining marine, at least we’re not dead.” Muttered Corporal, Andy Jackson. “I’m just saying we never get anything interesting out here…” Suddenly a strange, blue-grey, bulbous ship appears out of hyperspace, near the docks. “Whoa, sir what is that?” “How should I know marine, never seen anything like it...”
“Sir, they’ve pinged us! Seems they want a transmission. Orders?” “A strange ship appears out of hyperspace and pings us… why wouldn’t we answer? Open transmission.”
An olive green skinned, alien appears on the screen. “We are sorry for the intrusion of your space, but we are hopelessly lost, and require repairs.” “Sir, what should we do?” “We invite them in. Don’t need to make enemies of them.” Replied the corporal. “Sir, yes sir!”
As the blue-grey, alien ship enters the docks, its guns begin to hum, and glow a bright red. “Sir, they’re going to fire at us!” “Well I can see that, what are they even firing?!” The atmosphere crackles with heat, as three bolts of energy arc towards the dock. “We’re screwed!” A marine yells before his section of the dock erupts in flames.
“This is the planet Quantom, requesting reinforcements. We have unknown hostiles and are severely outgunned-” “Infidels! This is merely the beginning! Your filth shall be cleansed! The Capitals shall rule.” Multiple grey drop ships fly out of the alien hangar. As they fly to the surface, many pieces of the loading docks are falling to the ground.
With the dock system destroyed the marines on the ground had no way out. It truly was the end of Quantom… but the beginning something much bigger.

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That was a great story Jarod! Now...post chapter 1!
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Because its a great book! Or story!
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Because its a great book! Or story!
Ill put chapter one, after I get more readers...
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Chapter 1
This is Gamma, right?
Planet Octamis, Training facility-B
January 16, Year 2649

“You’ve been training since you were children. You are going to be the most elite squad out there. You are Gamma Squadron. Five Stealth Infiltration Troopers, you are the best of the United Colonies Resistance.
Michael, Gamma 1, Designation: Leader. The leader of Gamma team, he specializes in medium range combat, mainly using automatic guns.

Morgan, Gamma 2, Designation: Sniper. The sniper of Gamma, she is unmatched in her ability, and can hit targets any normal person wouldn’t even see. Specializing in with the sniper rifle, she naturally is the best for long-range combat.

Will, Gamma 3, Designation: Weapon Specialist. He knows about everything Capital. He can use their weapons to even greater effectiveness than even they can. He specializes in anything Capital, including vehicles.

John, Gamma 4, Designation: Explosives. Ranging from rocket launchers, to handheld door breaches, he knows explosives. He excels with the rocket launcher, and will be seen using one very often.

Ashley, Gamma 5, Designation: Close Quarters Combat. She can’t be beat, when it comes to close range. Specializing with the shotgun, you’ll never see her with a sniper rifle.”
“Alright Gamma Squad, here is your first mission. You are to sneak into, and take over the Capital base, on the planet Aldeern. It may seem easy, but it is heavily guarded, we’re counting on you for this.” Ordered Commander Polen. “But I suppose you should know what you’re up against… the Capitals have enslaved many races, and forced them to fight in this war. So, I’ll give you a little slide show.”
“First we have the Stigmea, or as we call them, ‘Stalkers’. This brutish, primitive race is a force to be reckoned with. They seem to have cloaking devices and always come in trios. They use primitive weapons, which propel spikes through the air. We don’t have much data on what the look like, as they have cloaking but we know that they are grey skinned, lightly armored, and have a long tail, ending in a spike. Watch out for it, it’s deadly at close range.”
“Second there is the very first race we met, the green-skinned, four-eyed freaks, know as the Tigaanien, or ‘Orcs’. They have never been seen in ground combat, yet it seems they are the main pilots of their ships. They are probably one of the most intelligent races in the Capitals, but they continue the talk about this ‘religion’ of theirs, just a bunch of gibberish.”
“Then we have the An’kum, or ‘Elephants’. As the name implies, they are huge. They tend to carry large explosive launchers, not that they need them. With a swipe from their massive arm they can toss a car. Close combat it not good against them, as they can break all the bones in your body with one hit. They have relatively small eyes for their size, so you may be able to assassinate them fairly easy. They have short tails and blue skin. They may be rare, but their deadly.”
“And lastly, we have the Bungama, or ‘Roaches’. The cannon fodder of the Capitals, these small insect like creatures are not much of a threat, except in large numbers. They are able to stand on their hind legs for short amounts of time, as well as being able to slice into armor with their mandibles. They have a tough, black exoskeleton, making them good at their role of cannon fodder.”
“So that’s the rundown Gamma. Go prepare for the travel to Aldeern. You need to get some rest.” Said the Commander.
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Chapter one is mainly just a big description of the Squad, and Capital races.
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Nice story Jarod! Its great so far! Keep it up!
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You really should keep writing. You and ash are the only people not basing theirs on ninja, and even then they are very different. I like to read different styles and storylines, so keep it up!
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Chapter 2
Off to Aldeern, doesn’t look safe.
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January 30, 2649


“Alright Gamma, we’re here. Gear up, and get ready for drop.” As Gamma team walks towards the armory, many marines stop and stare. They were already a legend before their first mission.
“Hey Will, what are you gonna use? We don’t have anything Capital here.” Asked Michael. “Hehe, I’ll just go with the pistol, until I can get my hands on something… And by that, I mean until the first Roach goes down.” “Looks like you all know what you’re doing…” The loudspeakers roar, “Gamma Squad, report to the hangar decks immediately for drop.”
As Gamma enters the ‘Tetra’ drop ship at the hangar, explosions are heard all around the planet. “Ya know, we really should get a professional pilot.” “Cut the chatter Will, we’re going in hard.” Ordered Michael. As the Tetra soars down into the atmosphere, the remnants of the UCR are struggling to fight off the Capital forces on the ground. It was a losing battle.
“Gamma, we’re going in hot!” Yelled Michael as the Tetra swerves out of control, straight towards a forest. “I told you we needed a professional.” Complained Will, as the tetra crashes into the trees. “For once, I think I have to go with Will.” Agreed Morgan. As the Tetra plows head on into a tree, and Gamma is knocked from their seats, into the undergrowth.
“Ugh… Gammas, report in.” Ordered Michael. “Gamma two here.” Replied Morgan. “You got five, too.” Answered Ashley. “Why is it you two are always the first to report in?” “Don’t worry about that, worry about where John and Will are.” Complained Ashley. “Urgh… Gamma four, reporting in.” “So that leaves Wil-” “I have multiple contacts, Gamma come in! I need reinforcements.” “Was that Will?” Asked Morgan. “I think it was. Morgan, I need you and John to take the ‘Mako’ and get to his position, ASAP.” Ordered Michael. “Yeah, give us a two person ATV, that’s nice.” Complained Morgan. “Can it. It’s the best we can do, be glad I’m not making you walk.”
“Ashley, we should link up with the remaining UCR forces. The more help we get, the easier this mission becomes.” “Shouldn’t we wait for them to get back though?” Inquired Ashley. “We all were trained together, they’re probably going to circle back to the remnants anyway.” “Ok, I guess… but I’m going to look for them, if they don’t radio back soon.”
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“Gah, weren’t they gonna send me reinforcements. I can’t hold out forever.” Complained Will. Suddenly three Stalkers uncloak, guns to Will’s head. “Yeah… they better get here soon...”
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Yay! You posted chapter 2!!! And that was where I last left off! Yay! Nnow..you need to post chapter 3. GO GO GO!
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