Kyousei - Page 7

Cyl · 11-29-2009, 03:38 PM

I'll never finish this D:

darkamaru · 11-29-2009, 03:45 PM

YES YOU WILL!!!all it takes is faith,trust,and

Spoiler:

Cyl · 11-29-2009, 03:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by darkamaru

YES YOU WILL!!!all it takes is faith,trust,and

Spoiler:

LOL, pixie stix..

sakuracha!!! · 11-29-2009, 04:00 PM

cool it ws awsome

Cyl · 11-29-2009, 04:07 PM

Thanks sakuracha

Cyl · 11-29-2009, 04:29 PM

Im finished with chapter 6 (for gods sake)

and i have like two chapters left before im done with arc 1...

what a looong arc..

darkamaru · 11-29-2009, 04:32 PM

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AY!!!!!!!1and the chapter im writing STILL doesn't reveal the identity of the person who sent the letter...

Cyl · 12-10-2009, 05:55 PM

Im going to make the next chapter and it might be the last chapter for this arc

or maybe the next after the new one, either wya the ninja will be revealed.

and i will start making em every day i thinkk lol

darkamaru · 12-11-2009, 01:48 PM

yay!!

Cyl · 12-11-2009, 05:22 PM

Ok now i gotta make two chapters today

Cyl · 12-11-2009, 07:29 PM

Chapter VI

Spoiler:

So Kyousei, on a mission of malevolence, was more determined than ever to kill the one who killed his clan. "What's the matter, Sensei?" asked Yukida. "Nothing, just a little focused on a certain someone." Kyousei stated. Kyousei, on guard, hears something. "Kyuosei, WATCH YOUR BACK!" Uruyad exclaimed! Five kunai were closing in on Kyousei, then Kyousei completely dodged them. "So, its you?" Kyousei said. "Long time no see, before I kill you, I will get rid of your annoying friends!" The ninja said. "No the hell you won't" Kyousei jumped in the air, did a few handsigns, and five hundred earth made kunai flew into a tree, the ninja jumped out the tree, trying to dodge the kunai, but kyousei, knew what he was doing! "DIE!" Kyousei exclaimed, and the kunai came from above and below! The ninja was inserted with over 500 kunai, but then crumbled away, it was an Earth clone!

"He's still around!" yelled Uruyad. "yeah, right behind you" the ninja said while kicking Uruyad into the air, then throwing a few shruiken into his back. "AAGH!" screamed Uruyad, while falling down and hitting the ground, paralyzed. Kyousei ordered Yukida to tend to Uruyad! "The ninja screamed ((Earth style: Branching Spike of Doom!)) A huge spike, erected from the ground and came charging at Kyousei with immense speed! Kyousei tries to dodge the spike a number of times, while the ninja is sitting there, watching. "Damn." Kyousei screamed as the spike went right past his head, "Almost got me." " Hahaha, why wont you die already?" the ninja said while another spike flew out of the ground! Another one? I cant spawn a defensive wall because the spikes are too fast, I have to think of something fast! Thought Kyousei. While Kyousei was occupied, the ninja walked towards Yukida and Uruyad, Yukida was aware of him! That's right! I can encase the spikes in stone! I hope this works! Kyousei thought as using his Tsuchi Metsukigan to encase the two dangerously fast and powerful spikes in hard, durable stone. "Hey, you bastard!" Yelled Kyousei while looking at the ninja! "I hope you like stone, NOW DIE" Yelled kyousei in a rage, stone was about to encase the ninja in stone, making it up his leg then broke into little pieces! What? what happened? Wondered Kyousei! "You havent figured it out yet? Kyousei, you can't use your Kekkei Genkai on me, because I can halt that, I can halt all of your efforts with those eyes, because i have the same eyes as you, I am apart of your clan, I am... Your father....."

darkamaru · 12-11-2009, 07:39 PM

ZOMG THAT WAS PWNROCKIN!!!nice chapter...

Cyl · 12-11-2009, 07:42 PM

Thanks, now i await your new chapter 8D

Ur Mom · 12-12-2009, 06:39 AM

TOO MUCH, NOT ENOUGH ATTENTION SPAN! *brain explodes* (it's was still good through the 5th chapter, I don't have the attention span to go any longer)

darkamaru · 12-12-2009, 07:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cyl

Thanks, now i await your new chapter 8D

can you post there first?i'm too lazy to dig through my subscribed threads so i need it on the front page for me to click on it...lolz

kakashi 4 · 01-03-2010, 04:14 PM

I have hte attention span of a squirrel

shinedown1 · 01-04-2010, 06:15 PM

It's really good so far! ^^ I can't wait for more!

Cyl · 01-04-2010, 06:21 PM

Cool thanks, but untill the weekend I won't be adding the next chapter.

shinedown1 · 01-05-2010, 01:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cyl

Cool thanks, but untill the weekend I won't be adding the next chapter.

Rawwwr!!!!!! Me want more now! >.< (JK)

Kassie · 01-11-2010, 09:59 PM

Really like it

. I love to read so I did read it all and its great, nice job

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11-29-2009, 03:38 PM	#121
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11-29-2009, 03:45 PM	#122
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11-29-2009, 04:07 PM	#125
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: cyl's story Thanks sakuracha __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

11-29-2009, 04:29 PM	#126
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: cyl's story Im finished with chapter 6 (for gods sake) and i have like two chapters left before im done with arc 1... what a looong arc.. __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

11-29-2009, 04:32 PM	#127
darkamaru Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: the shadow village Posts: 3,000 Rep Power: 9	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AY!!!!!!!1and the chapter im writing STILL doesn't reveal the identity of the person who sent the letter... __________________ ((O Shadows For Life- Ex-Darkage Of The Shadow []--.-[]----------[]--.-[] []--[]-----------.[]--[] [] []----Peace---[] [] \|\|\|\|\|\|\|----------\|\|\|\|\|\|\| -\|\|\|\|\|------------\|\|\|\|\|

12-10-2009, 05:55 PM	#128
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness Im going to make the next chapter and it might be the last chapter for this arc or maybe the next after the new one, either wya the ninja will be revealed. and i will start making em every day i thinkk lol __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

12-11-2009, 01:48 PM	#129
darkamaru Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: the shadow village Posts: 3,000 Rep Power: 9	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness yay!! __________________ ((O Shadows For Life- Ex-Darkage Of The Shadow []--.-[]----------[]--.-[] []--[]-----------.[]--[] [] []----Peace---[] [] \|\|\|\|\|\|\|----------\|\|\|\|\|\|\| -\|\|\|\|\|------------\|\|\|\|\|

12-11-2009, 05:22 PM	#130
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness Ok now i gotta make two chapters today __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

12-11-2009, 07:29 PM	#131
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness Chapter VI Spoiler: So Kyousei, on a mission of malevolence, was more determined than ever to kill the one who killed his clan. "What's the matter, Sensei?" asked Yukida. "Nothing, just a little focused on a certain someone." Kyousei stated. Kyousei, on guard, hears something. "Kyuosei, WATCH YOUR BACK!" Uruyad exclaimed! Five kunai were closing in on Kyousei, then Kyousei completely dodged them. "So, its you?" Kyousei said. "Long time no see, before I kill you, I will get rid of your annoying friends!" The ninja said. "No the hell you won't" Kyousei jumped in the air, did a few handsigns, and five hundred earth made kunai flew into a tree, the ninja jumped out the tree, trying to dodge the kunai, but kyousei, knew what he was doing! "DIE!" Kyousei exclaimed, and the kunai came from above and below! The ninja was inserted with over 500 kunai, but then crumbled away, it was an Earth clone! "He's still around!" yelled Uruyad. "yeah, right behind you" the ninja said while kicking Uruyad into the air, then throwing a few shruiken into his back. "AAGH!" screamed Uruyad, while falling down and hitting the ground, paralyzed. Kyousei ordered Yukida to tend to Uruyad! "The ninja screamed ((Earth style: Branching Spike of Doom!)) A huge spike, erected from the ground and came charging at Kyousei with immense speed! Kyousei tries to dodge the spike a number of times, while the ninja is sitting there, watching. "Damn." Kyousei screamed as the spike went right past his head, "Almost got me." " Hahaha, why wont you die already?" the ninja said while another spike flew out of the ground! Another one? I cant spawn a defensive wall because the spikes are too fast, I have to think of something fast! Thought Kyousei. While Kyousei was occupied, the ninja walked towards Yukida and Uruyad, Yukida was aware of him! That's right! I can encase the spikes in stone! I hope this works! Kyousei thought as using his Tsuchi Metsukigan to encase the two dangerously fast and powerful spikes in hard, durable stone. "Hey, you bastard!" Yelled Kyousei while looking at the ninja! "I hope you like stone, NOW DIE" Yelled kyousei in a rage, stone was about to encase the ninja in stone, making it up his leg then broke into little pieces! What? what happened? Wondered Kyousei! "You havent figured it out yet? Kyousei, you can't use your Kekkei Genkai on me, because I can halt that, I can halt all of your efforts with those eyes, because i have the same eyes as you, I am apart of your clan, I am... Your father....." __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!! Last edited by Cyl; 05-24-2010 at 11:16 PM.

12-11-2009, 07:39 PM	#132
darkamaru Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: the shadow village Posts: 3,000 Rep Power: 9	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness ZOMG THAT WAS PWNROCKIN!!!nice chapter... __________________ ((O Shadows For Life- Ex-Darkage Of The Shadow []--.-[]----------[]--.-[] []--[]-----------.[]--[] [] []----Peace---[] [] \|\|\|\|\|\|\|----------\|\|\|\|\|\|\| -\|\|\|\|\|------------\|\|\|\|\|

12-11-2009, 07:42 PM	#133
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness Thanks, now i await your new chapter 8D __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

12-12-2009, 06:39 AM	#134
Ur Mom Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: James Bond lobbing Status: Proud Punkarse Nerd Posts: 11,054 Rep Power: 13	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness TOO MUCH, NOT ENOUGH ATTENTION SPAN! brain explodes (it's was still good through the 5th chapter, I don't have the attention span to go any longer) __________________

01-03-2010, 04:14 PM	#136
kakashi 4 Chunin Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: At your house eating your peanut butter Posts: 998 Rep Power: 0	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness I have hte attention span of a squirrel

01-04-2010, 06:15 PM	#137
shinedown1 Veteran Chunin Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Defending ONI Alpha Site from Convenant forces in New Mossamba..... Posts: 1,240 Rep Power: 8	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness It's really good so far! ^^ I can't wait for more!

01-04-2010, 06:21 PM	#138
Cyl Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the shadows Posts: 13,510 Rep Power: 13	Re: Kyousei: The boy of greatness Cool thanks, but untill the weekend I won't be adding the next chapter. __________________ YouTube: soft dalek, warm dalek. little ball of hate. happy dalek, sleepy dalek. EX-TER-MI-NATE!!!

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