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Join Date: Jul 2009
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Chapter 3 the curse of the dragon
Kentaru's chakra dragon send a blast Sasay. Once the blast was 10 feet away Sasay did a hand sign and use Water style: Water dragon vortex. A dragon made out of fire form awater vortex aroun Sasay. The hit the vortex. But instead it created steam. "What the heck is this?" Kentaru said in a confue way. " Your jutsu was a fire style jutsu so I used its wekness to save me. Now it is time for you to die" said Sasay. Giant wolf bark at Kentaru sending him flying to a buliding then Sasay took out a kunai charge at Kentaru then slash him but Kentaru blocked it with his giant sword. Then Sasay ran back on Giant wolf head. he form a hand sign and closed his eyes. Back at Marcus he is preparing his jutsu. Zara took out his sword and try to stab Marcus but Itachi blocked the attack with his sword. Zara pushed himself to the same spot. "So you are protecting this boy huh. This jutsu must be worth your death" said Zara charging at Itachi forming a hand sign Zrau uses headhunter jutsu. He grab Itachi fett from under ground nd pulled him in. But it was a subsitoution. Itachi apears infront of Zara and punches him. Zara flew to the end of the roof. Sasay opens his eyes and got up. "Ready Wolf" said Sasay. "Ready "he replied. Both Saqsay and Wolf uses super beast mode. Wolf looks normal but has chakra all around him. Sasay looks like he is a human wolf. He has wiskers, his nails turnlong, and his teath is sharp. Sasay jump off at wolf and tackle Kentaru then kept on punching him on the face for a while. He was about to punch Kentaru on the stomach but Kentaru used Subsitution. He apeared on a buliding. But Giant Wolf barked at him but instead of Kentaru flying. He sent a blast wave at him. Kentru was hit by the blast. While at Marcus he said"I'm ready" Itachi nods. Mracuses had was covered in chakra then chakra started to form at the palm of his hand. When it was finish the chakra was shaped in a ball. There was lightning in it. Marcus charges at Zara and says" I won't forgive you. For desroying my Parents old village and creatong this much detsructionI won't forgive you.". Zara was trapped o he took out a piece of paper and write down tied it to a kunai and throw it 3 miles away where Kentaru is. Marcus each near Zara and says " Lightning style: Lightning orb blast!!!!!". Marcus hits Zara in the stomach. It send Zara flying to a huge wall once Zra hits the huge wall and explosion was there. Once the smoke leared up Zara was on the ground. The kunai was about to hit Kentaru but he grabbed it. He open it up read it and vanish. Kentaru apears besides Zara. "So you had a little boy beat you like this." aske Kentaru. But he wasn't able to answer because he was pariz=lized. A bunch of ninja apears 10 feet infront of Zara and Kentaru with Itachi, Sasay, and Marcus at front. " So it seems that this boy is powerful. Hmmmm. Well we dcide to change targets. Look at your self. You almost lost. This village was about to be in flames. Well see you later Sasay and little boy." said Kentaru. Kentaru then vanish with Zara. It has been 7 weeks. The village was rebuilt. "So I guess you guys are going ahead huh." said Itachi with Marcus ans Sasay at the entranced. "Yep and this time to the hot springs " said Marcus. Itachi handed him a scroll." This will teaches you the jutsu and sommoning tenquis. " said Itachi. Marcus and Sasay lefthen Itachi wals towards the the Kagemansion. " You know once we get to the hot springs you will do 100 push ups once we reach the etran you know." said Sasay. "OH Man" said Marcus while they get deeper in the woods. To be continued in chapter 4 the meeting. |
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Chunin
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So how do you like it?
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chapter 4 rocks
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Special Jonin Candidate
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I like it
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Chunin Exam Proctor
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It's still Awesome!!!
Hey, Chidori can I be in it? PLEASE?!!!!
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Chunin
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sure you can.
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Chunin Exam Proctor
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Delfonsus Myomitus Wolf of the Black Flames ~Lycan of the Blood Mist~ Village Hidden in the Amazon Bloody Snake of the Amazon |
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Chunin
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Just tell me your chakra nature and I'll find a spot to put you in.
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Chunin Exam Proctor
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My Chakra Nature is Fire and my Ultimate Tech is Fire Style: Flame Destruction and Fire Style: Black Fire Dragon Jutsu.
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Chunin
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Chindori is making the chapters with me. We PM each other the ideas and what is going to be in it then I post it. We been doing this since tomorrow. I'll post next chapter later Today
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Genin
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He is correct. Chidori and I make tis. But chidori stream made this idea I decided to help once he posted the second chapter.
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Chunin
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PM for spoilors. I got the next 3 chapter planned. But I have to rename the arc
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Chunin
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Genin
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Gah I need to get my post up
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Genin
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So Chidori stream and I have planned it through the next few arcs
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Chunin
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O.K I'm going to start the next chapter now
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Chunin
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Chapter 5 the meeting
A hooded figure alked in a building. He saw stairs and went upstairs. Then he went inside of the room. A person was their. That person said "So it has been a while since you came here. What do you want?" . " I want to put another bounty for 3000 Ryo. He is the son of the Glindi and Momaru. He is strong he paralized Zara easily." said the hooded person. "Hmp. We will have our best then." said the other person. He snaped his fingers and two monsterouis beast appears. The hooded person took of the his hood. He was Kentaru laughing. |
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Chunin
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To be continued in chapter 6
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Chunin
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sO HAW DO YOU LIKE IT?
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