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Old 07-31-2009, 11:52 AM   #1
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Bored as heck, I thought why not? So now I'm making this story up about someone named Kinen. I guess I'll start with explaining him.

Name: Kinen

Origin: Village Hidden in Storms

Height: 5"11

Weight: 110 lbs

Eye color: blue

Hair color: white

Skin tone: tan

Clothes: Basically what naruto wears, but replace the black with white and the orange with black.

perferred weapon: Staff

Level:
Taijutsu skill level: 10/10
Ninjutsu skill level: 9/10
Genjutsu skill level: N/A
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Cool, you finally decided to make a story, eh, Rogue-san? ^^
Have you read my story?
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Cool, you finally decided to make a story, eh, Rogue-san? ^^
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wow that awesome ann by the way i like yur story
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Cool, you finally decided to make a story, eh, Rogue-san? ^^
Have you read my story?
Neh, I'll only add to this when I'm bored. I'm going to start out with his history.
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Hey Rogue whats this about.
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wow that awesome ann by the way i like yur story
Please comment on it in the thread of my story. ^^

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Neh, I'll only add to this when I'm bored. I'm going to start out with his history.
Oh, that so.
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Hey Rogue whats this about.
Story, similar to Sasuke's, but my character ain't some emo bent on revenge and doesn't think he's above everyone.

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Oh, that so.
yes, yes it is so. XD
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Story, similar to Sasuke's, but my character ain't some emo bent on revenge and doesn't think he's above everyone.

yes, yes it is so. XD
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yes, yes it is so. XD
Okay then. ^^
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History_____
Alright, I'm going to start off with his history first.

He comes from the village hidden in storms, a village that had previously wanted to war with everyone, but decided to stop and become a peaceful village, most of the other villages still held grudges towards them and decided that they needed to go. So the villages were constantly declaring war on this village, but the village still held its ground and almost never took any damage, but when they did, it was very great.


He was only 3 years old, but he was a very advanced child, his parents had already placed him in a ninja school and he exceeded most of his peers at such a young age. One day something unexpected happened, the enemey managed to get many soldiers into the village and attacked almost every civilian they could find, Kinen's parents were one of them. The enemy ninjas broke into their home and decided they might have some fun, they killed both of his parents right in front of Kinen and when they were about to get him, two ninjas opped in and beat them. From then on, Kinen swore to protect others and become as advanced a ninja as he could.


((kinda weird since at the time, he's only 3, but it makes it all the more interesting))
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cool history. He is a lucky kid.
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cool history. He is a lucky kid.
Yup. ^_^ I wanted him to be mature at a young age.
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When he was on duty_____

At just the age of 6, he was already more talented than any other ninja in the whole village. Since he was born at a time of war, he was sent out in the front lines, killing as many people as he could, but it always haunted him, their faces never left his mind, he even counted how many he killed, by the time he was eight years old, he had already killed 200 ninjas, 121 civilians and 50 children, he never had forgotten their faces right before he killed them. Those faces had haunted his memories and dreams from then on.

Not much to write here, this doesn't have much inportance.
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Why is he blood thirsty
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He isn't, he was sent out in wars too early is all and he had to fight many battles, so he got traumatized.
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He isn't, he was sent out in wars too early is all and he had to fight many battles, so he got traumatized.
So it's kinda like with Itachi.
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So it's kinda like with Itachi.
Worse thank Itachi actually, you'll see the further you read.
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Alrighty.
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The beggining of a new friendship _____

One day, when Kinen came back from the bbattle field, he decided to looks around town and try not to think about all those faces that were in his mind. He found himself standing in front of a library, he loved libraries, they were quiet and peaceful, the complete opposite of the battle field. He went inside the library and he bumped into an old man, he apologized but the old man stopped him and told him something," I know what you're going through."

Kinen looked puzzled and his response was,"What do you mean?"

The old man laughed and said,"You're too young to br experiencing war. If you want, I could teach you how to control your emotions."

Kinen was excited at the idea and told him with a smile, " I'll do it!"
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Good so far.
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