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|06-27-2013, 05:06 PM||#1|
Special Jonin Candidate
Soul Bound: Shoned Story (read if you like bleach and Naruto and others.)
Chapter 1 - Grass, Space and unknown voices.
The cool breeze blew through town as a young boy sat in his class in Osaka, Japan. Hi, my name is Kusa Uchū. I am 16 years old. For as long as I can remember, I have always has this feeling of other watching me. When I get angry things break, for unknown reasons. I came to think I was imagining things with my wanting to be a hero. Not sure why, but I have always wanted to protect my family. For as long I have known, my family has been dead. All I know is my brother who vanished long ago in a boating accident. Sometimes... I am told I shock people or that I am wearing make up. Not sure why I would, but they say I tend to dress up as an animal. The static shock is from what I know called friction. But I am unsure. Many things have happened to me lately that gets me worried. I have been living in Osaka for twelve years.
Sometimes I get this feeling this girl is there with me. I am not sure why, but I hear voices... two actually. Mostly the girl. the other one is this annoying male voice, about my age is not college thinking he can beat me up. But lets not get to far into about me and get to where we need to be.
Authors note: Please advise at times when the word camera or anything like that, it is based on video or picture mode. You are to read it as if you where watching a show or reading a comic. Thank you and enjoy.
*birds chirping out side as all you see is the side of a normal Japanese school building. You zoom in slightly as you now see a young sixteen year old boy with white hair that sticks up slightly to the left and the bangs to his eyes and nose. He is resting his half open eyes on his left hand and the right resting across his desk*
"Class, you will need a paper and a pen for this next assignment." Hitohana-sensei told the class. She was a normal teacher with a tight skirt to her knees and the kind of glasses that had no holder on the top of the class, like it made a long 'u' for each eye. Her hair was pulled back and to her mid back. She noticed I was acting slower today then normal, "Uchū-san. Come to me please." She asked him aloud.
Not sure why, but she just did, so I stood up and walked to her. She was heading outside the classroom so I followed her. She then shut the door and looked at me. Being 5'11 and her 5'6, I towered over her.
"Uchū-San, is there an issue? You seem very slow today then normal."
"I'm sorry Hitohana-sensei... I just keep getting these thoughts... Like... Someone is there. To be honest, last test you gave us... I kept hearing the answers given to me, a boy and a girl telling me. But not of our class."
By this time, Hitohana-sensei was giving me this strange look like I was crazy. "Ok... Umm I will give you a note if that is what you really want."
"I mean... If it is for the best."
"Oh trust... It is." She told me in a very unusual voice. She then pulled out this note back like thing and began to write on it as she then handed me the paper.
"Now, do not read it. Ok? This is for staff only."
"Yes ma'am." And with that I left for the office. On my way I came across my English speaking teacher, Mr. Norm. For us in Japan we normally have a slim look. Most that is. But Mr. Norm on the other hand was not. He would where a sleeveless black Nike shirt and black basketball shorts and some black and red basketball shoes. Jordan's if I remember right. For a present, we all got him some to show our gratitude to him for helping us.
"Hey there Kusa!" Although he was an English teacher, it was rude to not use honorifics in Japan unless there is a reason not too. I never liked him as he always seemed harder on me. "Where you heading partner?"
"Umm.. Nurse. I am not feeling well. I keep... Hearing voices I guess."
"Voices? Hmm." Now at this point he got this strange look like he was towering over me and hungry to eat my brains. Drool coming out. Or maybe I am sick because then he began to ask me. "You ok there? Here.. Don't go to the nurse, go home. I will handle it for you... But that means 230 push-ups when you get to class tomorrow!" He said with an smile like he wanted to beat me in a competition. Not sure why, but he always makes me do them and in front of the class.
I then headed home from there as I left the school and began to walk home.
*A Pair of bare feet can bee seen behind him standing in the air where a what seems to be a torn dress of some kind as it looked ripped on the liner near the feet as they began to walk on the air to him.*
Next Chapter - Apparition
Last edited by Shisko Shi; 07-05-2013 at 11:58 PM.
|07-05-2013, 11:08 PM||#2|
Special Jonin Candidate
Chapter 2 - Apparition
As he neared closer to his home the unknown legs from before had vanished. Turning the corner he could see his home, the only one with a more Chinese look to it. Being adopted, they just happen to be Chinese living in Japan. Walking to the door he held his hand on the door thinking about entering and what his parents would think. He then braved into the world as he opened it to find no one home but his mother.
"Home so early? Why you home early? You need to be at school." He demanded to him.
"Ha-ha, sorry mother, I was sent home too day. I have not been feeling good." Being supportive of him and knowing his ability in school to pass at a high level in his class and never missed one day of school, she could let it slide.
"You father is at the tore getting parts. He will be back soon and will need your help."
"Yes mother, I will do it. I will be..." He stopped, as soon he began to hear voices.
"You think? Na way silly! Ha-ha-ha! Really?! Ha-ha-ha!" A female voice was heard.
"... umm.. Be in my room. He told her as he ran up stairs with his shoes on. Once up there he opened his door and shut it closed. He then slid down his door and to the floor with his eyes closed.
Soon the noise began again. "Damn it! who's there!?" He yelled.
Soon his mother replied, "Me who else? Kids now a days, must be the drugs." He said to herself.
"Urg." He said in a deep sigh. He then closed his eyes and fell asleep. The night went fairly well until it was night.
It was then that night, sitting on a tall lamp post in the night a figure hidden by the shadow sat. His left knee hung with his right on the pole with him sitting down as he rested his right arm on the right knee. The moon behind him in a bright white and crescent moon. The moon light shadowed his face as he let a smile off. "It's time." He said as a creature appeared. He looked very close to a small purple and black monkey. Teeth grinned high and his sharp teeth showing with his eyes wide open like circles. He had a Top hat that was high and black too with a purple ribbon line.
"He-he, Yes! Shall I send it?"
"Heh, yes. Send him out. Let us see what he can do. I sure would love to see if he is what he is all meant to be."
"As you command!"
Soon the monkey glowed bright and dark purple as a ball in the earth formed in a sphere and then vanished as a strange creature appeared. His body covered in shadow.
"Do it... But don't kill him unless it is needed."
The creature then moved out to the distance leaving the boy behind.
"I can sense him... Even from here."
"YES! His spirit power feels... Powerful and maybe even more then yours. But it feels unstable at the moment. Like a flower in the wind." The monkey told the boy.
Back at Kusa's house where he sat on his bed in shock. "Who are you?" He asked.
"HI! I have been waiting for the day to meet you face to face. I am Natsumi and this sad face cat is Karasu. We are your spirits. And we are you and you are us!"
"Guardians, what ever you want. We are normally a part of you and born with you. Think of use as your tools and you are the user. We all go through the process through reincarnation. But you are special!"
"Good for you..." The male one said. "Consider yourself lucky." He said as he had jet black leather jacket, pants and boots. His black hair covering his right eye with the other half opened and brown eye.
Soon a bloody scream was heard in the distance. With the sound Kusa swiftly jumped up and to his window. "What was that!" Soon a feeing rushed over his body. "W... What is this?!"
"That is the presence of a Spiritual Force... It is given off by other spirit beings or humans."
Looking out the wind he saw a creature. But worse he was near someone, his father. "NO! What is that?!" He said as he demanded an answer.
"I'm not sure." the girl said in a sad voice.
With that Kusa rushed out and seeing the monster. ITs red eyes and black claws. It had grey fur with spins and the red skin with spots. The beast was standing over his adoptive father as he slowly came to Kusa as he then let out a load roar sending pieces of the ground to him. Jumping out of the way he saw the girl. "Call my name! Hold out your arm!"
"M... My arm?!" Forgetting the name he got a sour look. "Could you tell me again?"
"WHAT!? How do you not know!"
"I uh... Have bad memory."
"No you don't! I am a part of you, I think I would know!"
Soon the beast was there as he brought his hand down to Kusa where he would die. Soon then hand lay on the ground as a look of confusion came over the monsters face. He looked down at the crater only to see nothing. Standing behind the beast was Kusa. In his hand was a blade that was colored in a fine shine of metallic gray of the steel.
"Good job! You have me, now we fight together!" She told him, "Focus your energy into me and I will do it to you, this will sync our souls together."
From that he closed his eyes as he looked down at his father and felt nothing. Looking up at the monster a wave of force blew some dust away as he then speed to the beast cutting through it and spun around and repeated cutting the head off. As its head fell and blood spud, the body dropped. Soon the body glowed as the girl spoke.
"This spirit feels funny. The spiritual power and essence does not feel write."
"It is the bond of all living things, it is the manifestation of all being, either in or not in a vessel. But this one it f..." She was then cut off as the form of the spirit formed into a ball and shot out into the distance.
Far off the boy sat as he held his hand out and palm up as the spirit came into his palm.
"He... Is a disappointment... Ningyō.... You have failed me."
In a scared look he backed a little as he was floating in the air.
"I... I am sorry! It will not happen again."
"No... No it will not. Let us go... We have much to do." He said as a form of shadow engulfed them and vanished from the area.
Back where young Uchū was, he looked as the weapon formed back into the young girl.
"I have a bad feeling, but we should do more work before going into more pressing matters. You should get some sleep." She said with a smile to him.
Over looking his fathers body he felt no life as he began to cry. He was supposed to help do some repairs, but not he wouldn't get to. He saw the bag of supplies on the ground as he began to cry. His mother came out and was in shack as she ran to him. In the air Natsumi watched as they cried from the mans death.
"It seems it has begun."
"Yes. Indeed. I trust you will watch him well. Just remember your place." The male spirit told her.
"... He is not ready to know."
"It will be the first of many to come when he learns it until then, we work with him." he said to her.
END - Next Chapter will be longer with the beginning of the end. A new chapter into his world. Stay tuned with it and PM me for ideas you like or would like.
Next Chapter: True, False and the Unknown
Last edited by Shisko Shi; 07-06-2013 at 01:48 PM.
|07-26-2013, 09:05 PM||#3|
Special Jonin Candidate
Re: Unknown Title: Shoned Story (read if you like bleach and Naruto and others.)
Chapter 3 - True, False and the Unknown
Devastated by the night that happened, the blood of the strange beast on him as he watched as his mother and father leave. He only hoped his father would be ok. By some chance to be alive. He has entered the house, the silent and calm of the sound of the house as he walked in and the lights off. He walked by a frame of his Adopted father. A tear of grief fell as he headed up to his room to sleep the night away.
The morning sun hit as his alarm went off. He smacked it off as he turned in his bed. He was looking out the window to see that the sun seemed to be at 6:30 and not 7:45 like his clock said. He was wandering what it meant, but gave it no thought as he got up and put his school uniform on. When he opened the door he was surprised by the fact no one was in the house. Thinking his mother slept at the hospital, he grabbed some food and then left after finishing it. He had his brief case on his back as it was a single strap. His collar up and top button undone. The fact he did not care about rules at the moment, what did was that he heard nothing. Not even the sound of birds in the air. as he walked as heard the voice again.
"What that real?" He thought. "This morning has been strange. And where is that girl at?" Not long did he see his friend running to him.
His face become sour at the site. He had forgot his belt and his pants.
"Toshiro, what.... What are you doing?"
"Going to school man. Why?"
"You don't have pants on!"
"Huh? AHHH! Where are my pants!!"
"Toshiro... Have you noticed anything strange?"
Toshiro at this point was pulling a pair of dress pants for ceremonies out of his back and putting them on. "Yea... Come to think of it, there as been no one. The cars all stopped. And there are no birds. Yet I feel slightly tired for some reason, yet you seem fine it looks like to me."
"Yea, not sure why..."
Soon, Natsumi appeared. "MORNING!!!!!!!"
"AAAHHH!" Kusa screamed in surprise as he fell on his ass. "What the hell are you doing here!"
"Me? Well I am you silly!" She said with a extremely big smile.
Toshiro at this time was wandering hard on Kusa. "Yo man, who are you talking to?" He said acting like a fool and waving his hands in front of him like he was looking for wall, but actually weaving through Natsumi.
"Hehe, He is trying to touch me?" She asked. "Strange, He seems fine. Yet something feels wrong. I see you arrived."
Soon the male spirit appeared next to Kusa, "You can just call me Muramasa. I came to tell you that things are not right." He said looking off in the distance looking all serious.
"Ya think?" Kusa said with a slight of sarcasm.
Soon as the three talked, Toshiro was just belting his pants as a door opened.
It was like a swirling portal, Unsure what it was or who it was, they watched.
"We need to go." Muramasa said aloud.
"Why? Did you open that?" Kusa asked.
"I don't think that was for the best... Your moving to fast..." Natsumi said looking worried and serious at Muramasa.
"Who are you talking to? Open what?" Toshiro asked thinking his friend was going crazy only seeing the air.
"Hey is still here... He comes. Follow and go forward Kusa. No questions. But if you wish to save your fathers life... Then you will do it." Muramasa said sternly.
Wanting that more then ever, he rushed in. Toshiro, just naturally followed.
"What the hell is this?" he though as he could now see the door. Soon they become enveloped by a strange light as the shut behind them. They kept running as they got a weird feeling to them.
"Kusa! W... What is this!? Where are we going!?"
"I... I don't know... They tol... err... I mean I have a feeling this is the best way to go."
"But what is this? Where are we?!"
"I... I don't know. Just trust me." Kusa told his friend. Now getting a shocking memory.
Toshiro thought back to when they first met, both now sixteen, they where only 15 at the time.
"HELP! HELP!" A young voice cried in an alleyway.
"Shut up kid... You want to die faster!? HUH?!?!" a Older man with a afro asked as his yellow and black leather coat with a collar sticking up and his friends began to kick the young boy.
"Hey... You should pick on someone who can fight back..." A boy said as his boy covered in shadow. "Pretty stupid to fight someone smaller, weak and out numbered then you. Only makes you look weak." he said as he had an evil intent to his eyes.
"Oh yea!? You want some to kid? COME ON!!!!!" The man said holding his right arm up with a bat as he placed his left hand on his bicep sprinting and jumped forward to the boy with a grin.
The boy spun around slightly moving to the side from it as he thrust his leg out as the man tripped. He then brought it up and stepped on the mans neck.
"You want some too?" He asked the other two. They then began to run at him as Kusa who was now shown from the shadows from the light on a near by sign. He kicked the bat up as he spun and ducked, swinging the bat to one of the mans knees. He then when to thrust his foot to the other mans face and pushed him into the ground.
He walked up to the boy and smiled at him, you ok? Names Kusa, Kusa Uchū."
"T... Toshiro Mitsunari. Heh, thanks. I might have died if you hadn't shown up. I owe you."
"HA! Don't mention it man, they where a bunch of losers."
The two laughed as the flashback faded to Toshiro running with his friend in some strange land as he kept running knowing he could be trusted. He smiled as he followed.
"Damn, how long it this thing?" Kusa asked as he was finally answered to them falling out of the door as it closed and onto some grass. Toshiro landing on top of him.
"Ugh... Where are we?" Toshiro asked getting up.
"I don't remember grass lands in or near Osaka." Kusa replied only to be shocked at the sky. It was a mix of day time, but with stars out that shined bright and a planet that was half gone.
"Where the hell are we?" Soon Kusa was stopped by the fact a sword laid in front of him and Toshiro. Two, each stuck in the ground. Each a Katana. One that Kusa with out warning walked up to and with out knowing why. He saw a sword that he felt was right that had eight spikes in three layers. Making three octagons. He reached for it as a power surged through him. It flashed and took the form of the sword he held just last night then back. "What... What is this?" He said as he pulled it out as a tornado of power energy thrust up into the air. When the dust faded he stood with the sword in his hand and a his normal cloths. But a strange marking on him, it was something he never saw before. It was a center fold diamond on the center of his chest and expanded lines over each shoulder and to his neck and arms and two more down to his legs.
"What just happened. You look different! You... Your hair is longer! and you seem taller!" Toshiro said in surprise of the new look. Kusa, now with his hair longer, where his bangs touched the center of his nose.
"Your turn." He said back to Toshiro as he then followed. Although the power not as powerful in the blast, it was still massive and he came out the same, but his hair spiked slightly and mix of black and white.
"Strange. He seems to have some power too, but I can not sense his spiritual energy or aura." Natsumi said, but not seen.
Soon a loud clamping like horses could be heard as they looked around only to soon be surrounded by a bunch of armored man on horses as they had spear type weapons pointed to their necks.
"You are coming with us." A man with a demonic mask on his face said in a order with a fierce power to his voice. "Resist and you will die right here."
End - Soul Bound
Next Chapter - Desperation
|08-17-2013, 03:18 AM||#4|
Special Jonin Candidate
Chapter 4 - Desperation
Chapter 4 - Desperation
With that, they where tied up and weapons removed as they where each on a horse with a soldier. The ride and the bumping was painful and thoughts would creep into Kusa's mind. How did they get here? Where are they? Why was he drawn to that sword? Why where there even sword? What was that gust of power? Who are those people and is this even earth?
Arriving in a town that seemed like a Japanese city. Normal to him, but something was off. They seemed to be normal, but not skyscrapers. It was a mix of many times in one. But they just kept riding as they received many stares.
Arriving at a gate as they kept going they stopped before entering the gate. They where covered on the head with a back and knocked out. When they come two, they were on their knees and the bags removed. Only this time alone, Kusa was alone. Toshiro was nowhere to be seen, but the real question is where was he?
"An Arena?" He thought, "!!!" "WHERES NATSUMI!?" He began to freak out, but then it came to him. "Was she sealed in the sword?!" Soon a man stood in the arena with him about 85 feet away and a men behind him cut his rope free and walked behind a line that soon was shown to be a hole for a gate that come up. The man in front of him appeared in some sort of armor, it was glistening red from just being polished as it shined a glittering ray of light from the sun to it then to those looking to it. The red plate was gilded on edges and other areas with a grey touch. The man has a black cap that spread shoulder length and touched just above his ankle. The outlines of the cape where a crimson red.
"Well, it seems you where sentenced to death. You should know better then to grab something that is not yours." He said with a smile and his right hand on a weapon. A long metal like pose with a saint type trinity bladed staff on the top. Almost like a trident. His hair was white and to his back as it was in a pony tail and his voice like a smooth man that spoke drinking wine at a party of leaders. The sound of running water in a smooth but able to be fierce voice. "Shame really, I do not wish to kill. But it has come. Prepare yourself. I can only hold back so much until they demand your death." He said.
He then bent down in a battle position. It was his left foot forward with the bottom leg end, or the calf arched 30 degrees from the ground to his knee cap. His thigh bent in a shorter degree to meet the body, lowering the height growth and the back straight with the upper slightly arched forward to the opponent. His left side facing to the opponent with his left foot. And the right in the back sideways. This was a martial art move to give the user the ability in control on his and the battles balance. And for pushing power. The weapon tip pointed to the ground in the same 30 degree arch from the ground to the end. Matching his left foot. He looked up to the man with his left hand in the front of the weapon in position and the right in the back near the end, but with about 1 1/2 feet of extra room.
He then smiled as the fading of it followed. He thrust forward to the man speeding across the dry dirt like ground to Kusa with the edge pointing right to his neck. Eyes wide opened from shock he forced himself back as he dodged by moving his body to the left and spinning to the right 90 degrees to the man and grabbed with his left hand. The man laughed with a small chuckle, "GOOD! Fight will you? I hope it is not going to get you KILLED!" He said as he spun to his right and a complete 360 as the boy only went 180. From the left side of the wall to the right. The man basically putting him on the side he wants.
Kusa used his feet on the wall and was using his force to push with both hands near the bladed end. The man countered to his as he began to apply force like a baseball bat stuck with people holding it in mid-swing. Kusa was scared. He was lost and scared for his friend. "Where are you?" He asked almost crying. The man looked up at him with a surprise to his face.
Kusa began again, "I have to protect you... I... I wont let anything happen to you... Where are you? TOSHIRO!!!!" He said as his energy level began to spike a little as he was outlined with a bluish look of energy, he applied it subconsciously to his body as he began to push the poll with his hand like it was a wall. "WHAT?!" The man said as he put his hands in the same way. The wall cracked and a crater formed as he pushed harder and harder.
"GIVE ME MY FRIEND BACK!!!" He said in a loud scream that gave just enough force as the man flew tumbling on the ground in a roll backwards through the dirt. He landed on his feet to stop him and his left hand free on the ground as a support with his feet to stop the slid. His right hand holding the weapon that now rested its middle base of its pole on his bad and blade pointing down to the ground and the end of the pole coming up to the air on the other side of his body from his left shoulder.
Kusa on the ground with the small aura around him as he then sprinted to the man and went to punch him on the left eye then the right bottom of his ribs and more. All over as the man kept blocking over and over again using the pole as a shield. "That's it... I seem to not have anytime left..." He said with a grim look as he glowed back surprising Kusa. It was a red aura as he spun the weapon around from the front to his left side and to his back and around from hand to hand with impressive skill then above him as the bladed area glowed. He then pointed it to the man stopping the spinning with the blade to Kusa, and the glow immense. With out warning a blast shot out and past him, unable to even move as it scraped a few hairs off. The wall behind shattered to dust in a massive explosion behind him. Sweat dripping from fear. "W... What the hell?!" He said scared.
The man known as Joseph, only looked in a state of slaying, ready to end the match in the next move. Knowing full well Kusa would not make it. "For breaking the Sacred Law and stealing our Holy Weapons Intruder, You will die a painful death..." His eyes squinted. "And there is no running away." He said in a cold tone.
End - Soul Bound
A Man who matches powers with Kusa in a position to kill him at any moment with an attack that Kusa seems to not be able to even understand. Will this be it? Or will he be saved by someone else? And what has happened to Toshiro and Natsumi?-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Next Chapter - Desperation 2
Last edited by Shisko Shi; 08-17-2013 at 03:40 AM.
|08-26-2013, 03:53 AM||#5|
Special Jonin Candidate
Chapter 5 - Desperation 2
Chapter 5 - Desperation 2-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Upon the blast, Kusa scared at the amazing speed before him he knew he must become under control. The man pointing his weapon to him he sprinted straight at him. "I have to win... I MUST WIN." He thought as the man spoke up.
"Heh... Surprised? You shouldn't, that is a specialized energy blast of my soul. Faster then sound my friend..." He said with a wicked smile upon his face. "Count yourself lucky I missed only to show you real power." He then closed his eyes for a moment as then reopened them, "Now rest in peace and die thief." With that the glowing weapon shot out.
Upon hearing this, and with the determination he jolted to the left just dodging it and being hit on the side with a deep burn. He skid through the dirt and rolled four feet before stopping. Kusa then sprinted to the man and went for a punch but was blocked. He now in the air from a superman like attack, landed and brought his left foot towards the mans head and then spun sending his right foot in a turn around to his where his foot went to add for the double power. This caused Joseph to stagger a bit and then was upper punched to the chin from Kusa.
"I am not a thief!" He yelled as he dodged back as Joseph went to stab him. It had just touched making a mark, but not deep and his shirt ripped. Joseph smiled as he then used that momentum to spin around and use what he did to get close and cut to the mans head. Kusa would not allow it as he held his hands up to his left part of his face, the forearms blocking the attack as a part of the blade stuck in his skin. He then went to knee the man only to his the armor. Joseph then flung the weapon like a fishing pole sending Kusa flying into the dirt. The motion of what was happening was effecting him, where was he? His home, friends, family... His father who died and his mother who left to the hospital that night. He did not want Toshiro to die. He had to do something... Anything.
"Please... At... At least let my friend go... Please..." He begged looking at the dirt and tears rolling down. "I don't know who you people are or even where I am, but I will take the death blame if it so much is needed for such a fact of doing nothing!"
The Joseph heard this dropped the tip of his bladed weapon to the ground. "You know... I just do as I am told, those... Swords, where relics to us. You say you are not from here?" Joseph began to think if the boy was truthful, the emotions rolling out of him like it was. He needed to make sure. He could not handle killing someone who did nothing.
"No, I have no idea what area of Japan I am even from!"
"Japan? Is that where you are from? I think I see now." He then turned to the shadowed man above sitting in a throne. "My Lord, May I ask for a pardon? If he says what he said is true, then he can not be a thief. I request an fast evaluation Sir!"
Thinking hard upon hearing this, the King knew this would make him look back, the mind evaluation was a need. "I see... Then we shall do it. Him help us all if it is the Ones I think that put this boy and his friend behind this... Possibly to mess with us and screw us over." He then stood up and swiftly swung his hand in the air in command, "TAKE THIS BOY AND HIS FRIEND WITH OUR GENERAL NOW!" He yelled to his men. The man in armor bowed as he took the boy.
"What is going on?"
"You are to come with me... I am General Joseph of the Crimson Knights. And you will be interrogated till we find out what is going on." He told him as he was then lead out of the arena. They made their way to the halls that stood in the roof twenty feet to thirty feet from their heads. Massive statues with what seemed to be hero's. Then he came across one that seemed strange. It for an add reason reminded him of Mr. Norm, that then reminded him of home. The only difference was this man was younger and buff. His hair longer and what seemed like a scare over his right over, but on the edge end towards his ear.
"I see you found Noah. He was a powerful man many years ago."
"How long ago?"
"Well... three hundred years ago. If what you said was true, then be lucky I thought fast to save you. Because we are in high alert of a group that is extremely powerful and you might be the ticket to finding them. But in this world, there is 730 days. Our would is an interdenominational plan made of soul particles that is very much a borderline of the death and the life. We have a galaxy. But never ventured as we use other means. But Noah was a Hero beyond any we have seen. If he wished to, he could wipe us all out in a flash. Because of him we are here today. Back then a beast that was like us. Skin on the out, and bone on the inside. But he had two sets of bone, one on the outside over his skin. He had no legs that we have records of and had a massive serpent like tail. His energy was so massive that the very thing that protects us and keeps our land alive was shattering before him. It was like a demon from hell itself... It ha..." He was stopped by someone far off.
"COME ON!" They said as Joseph forgot and was scratching the back of his head with his eyes closed. "Sorry, haha I get lost in history sometimes. Great for old strategies." They then continued along the hall towards their destination.
Far off in a dark room at an unknown location sat a white table. It from the center had four black lines shooting out and growing wider, very much like an umbrella. The table sat eight seats. One of which was a figure who, based on his shadow and the shadow on him, was sitting upright and arms crossed. When he spoke, it was that of an aggressive voice, one with power and terror to it. One that would go and take on those in its path.
"So... I assume I am here for a reason?" He asked. Another spoke from behind the chair of another directly in front of the man.
"Well my Lord, the information rega..."
"I do not care about this boy again... What does he have that poses something I can use? To be frank, I am getting extremely annoyed just being here talking about him..." He said to the man.
Soon the picture appeared of the aerial view of the arena where Kusa and Joseph began to walk to.
"I still sense nothing worth me killing..." The rage like one said.
"Calm down princess... If you use your brain for once Gekido, you would see the promise to him."
"What did you just call me?" Said the man as he slammed his hands on the table.
"I said that it makes you look more feminine."
"You little rodent... You are-a-making me a so mad!" He bellowed as his muscles grew slightly from the rage. He then heard the man give a small cold laugh. "THAT'S IT!!!" HE yelled as a burst of his power surged through the room as he flipped the table far int the air. He the kicked the man far into the wall as his follower Anger tried to stop him. "Sir I am with you, but now is not the t..." He was then smacked like a fly with out him being looked at taking his head right off.
The man he kicked left a part of the wall broken as he stood up. "Ok... Ok... Enough. We need to get back to order..."
"You and your people acting like nothing phases you..."
"We will finish this later..."
"How about a better idea... I take on this boy, he beats me or even puts a scratch on me, I will bring him here. He doesn't and dies, then no worry. Either way a win win for us."
"I am surprised y..."
"What was that?"
Soon another spoke up that was resting his mouth that was also covered by his hands that held each other in a serious gaze. "That is enough... Both of you... Gekido... You wish to do this then go a head, get steam off of you or collect it. The rest of us will stay and watch."
"Then I take Fear until my guy brings me someone worthy of the title Anger. Plus Fears abilities will come in handy when I arrive." He said aloud. He face now shown, he is light-skinned with dark eyes and long black spiky black hair reaching mid-back with short bangs framing his forehead. As an adult Gekido is very tall with a lean but well-built frame. He wears a crown with a blue jewel in it. In addition to the crown, Gekido wears a golden necklace, boots, wristbands, and a belt that all sport blue jewels like his crown, along with golden bands on his upper arms and neck. The rest of his attire consists of white pants and a red sash.
With that he left the building with a man known as Fear who worked for a man sitting in a chair in front of him known as Terror. Before he left, Terror not even caring to look whispered a phrase of words to Fear, "Remember to get me information on them. Anything is good." He told him making sure no one heard.
Back at the city, Kusa asked the General a question that had been on his mind, "So what City is this?"
"This is Herculos, the great city of wealth, happiness and power. I serve as head commander of all the forces and the army of the Crimson Knights."
"I see." Kusa then saw a door a head of him, "And this is Toshiro's location?"
"Yes... We um... Tend to..." But before he could finish, Kusa rushed to the door that opened to show Toshiro in a room with many seductive girls feeding him and treating him like a king. Grape, apple and more just added and added. Each filling him with delight.
Kusa's face dropped at the sight. "KUSA!" Toshiro said rushing to him with a huge smile, "I was wandering when it would be your turn! I thought you left me."
"Left you!? I was being killed and attacked while they.... They... Treated you?!" He then turned to the General. "WHY IS HE BEING TREATED LIKE THIS IF I WAS BRANDED A THIEF!?"
Crossing one arm and resting his other on his forearm, he tapped with the free one his lip with his index finger while looking up. "Yea that is a good one. I thought you knew."
"Knew! Know what? Bag off my head and nearly killed?!"
"Hey hey look at the bright side!" Joseph said with a huge smile.
"What bright side?!"
"...." His mouth was left open and finger in the air. "Yea I got nothing."
Kusa sighed loudly and fell to the floor floating like paper. Upon landing he opened his eyes with a tired look when a girl came to him. "Banana?" She asked with a bright smile, but he rejected her upon seeing a girl walk through the hall.
Quickly he jumped up to the door and looked out to his left, hanging on the door. He tried to find her, but nothing. He ran through in hopes to find her. He was turning the corner when he bumped into her.
"I... I'm sorry. Here let em help you." He said as he saw that she dropped a few books. He tried to grab them, but she rejected like it was a secret.
"No! Just go! You have ruined everything!" She demanded as she got up and left down the hall. General Joseph placed his hand on his shoulder seeing the whole thing.
"Don't mind her, she tries to study a lot with those books of hers. That was the princess."
"The Princess? I didn't mean to do that, I... I just thought I saw something."
"It's fine. She is like that to a lot of people." Soon a sharp look came over the generals face, but did not make it clear as to what it was or that he was even doing it. His only thought, "Who is this... This Power..." He thought.
What the power was turned out to be the man from before, Gekido, he stood in the air above the city right above the out skirts.
"Heh... And the fun begins." He said with a crooked and most evil smile.
End - Soul Bound-----------------------------------------------------------------------
Gekido, the man with the terrible power of strength and anger arrives to the scene, can they survive? Or will they be defeated? The first real enemy emerges here to test the ability of Kusa. Now Kusa will have to fight for his life against an enemy who nearly tried to kill his own and killed his own man with one blow, the Next chapter is the first real fight of this Arc.-----------------------------------------------------------------------
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I'm surprised you haven't received any feedback, in all fairness these are quite well written.
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didnt know this existed but got to work now.
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Chapter 6 - The Fearful Raging Madness
Chapter 6 -The Fearful Raging Madness
Upon feeling this presence, General Joseph ran to a nearby window, two very small dots in the sky outside the walls. “Crap…” He said aloud.
“What’s wrong?” Kusa asked in surprise to Joseph’s facial expression.
“I fear we may be under attack, we need to hurry and prepare if I am correct.” He said as he then went to lead him and Toshiro off to the armory.
All the while Gekido stood with his arms crossed, his black spiky hair with the bangs lifted up a bit from his golden head band like crown with the blue jewel in its center. “Fear…”
“Yes my Lord, it shall be done.” Fear replied as he vanished from sight at an impressive speed. Landing done in the center of the city he raised his arm outwards a he got a few looks. Soon a gassy like miasma of purple smoke fumed out from his skin like tiny holes in them spitting the gas out. He then spun around and created a ball of it as it filled the streets and breathed in by the people.
Coughing went on as some people feel to the ground, others seeing illusions of their worst fear. So much, as to force them into the trance of fear. Fear was the height of Kusa, about 5’9” with a slim built, his white hair that would shoulder length. A calm look and a white outfit like his Leader, Terror. A few soldiers that noticed this from the walls and from buildings tried to get in close, but avoiding the gas. One such group stood guard, “Watch your self’s men!” The leader of the group yelled as they got into a defensive position.
This was quickly failed from Fear speeding out of the smoke that seemed almost instant as he smashed his palm into the man’s face and chucked him, then spun to his left smacking another with his left back hand and then jumped while still spinning, then shot his right foot to the man that was to his right not in front from the spin and kicked him in the face that shot him into a building and threw the wall. All three defeated as a few archers appeared. A spiritual arrow in each bow ready to be shot, the arrows would shatter a spiritual essence, ultimately preventing that part of the body from regenerating, as they shot he jumped with a fast speed run to the side of the street, then shot gas at them as some shot their allies thinking it to be a monster.
“Ha-ha, weak fools.” Fear said in gesture to what was happening as he began to float up into the air. He was above the city as the light shined down onto him, he hands spread out and his coy smile and his shadow onto the land. “Now, learn FEAR!!!!” He yelled as form his sleeves and hand a powerful wave of the smoke shot out to cover the city. It reached a 250 feet radius both ways around him as he began to spin his hands around like he was mixing cake in the sky. The cloud of gas became to spin around the city and rise like a tornado of it.
General Joseph entered the armory to find Captain Asura, of the elites of the Crimson Knights and an agile man. Asura was a well-known leader of the fronts and had a black hair style, it was a messy to straight, depending on the time and it was colored with some white. “General, did you hear?”
“No I saw, get your men and get out. We ne…” Soon as he was talking, he became interrupted by a soldier bursting in, wounds and blood everywhere as he couched hard.
“Gas… Gas everywhere… Nightmares!”
“Get yourself together soldier! What’s it this ‘Nightmare’ you speak of?”
Soon the man began to swell as his eyes turned purple and check growing.
“Huh!?” Joseph said in shock, he had to think fast, “GET DOWN!?” With that the man exploded sending a wave of the gas outwards as they all ducked and crawled out with their eyes, mouth and nose closed and covered. They managed to get to a door that slid open as they neared and got out just in time. They looked back to see Joseph burst out with some weapons and armor.
“Put this on…” He said while panting hard. He handed each a katana and a set of basic covering armor. The chest plated with three layers, and the shoulder two. They got fitted up like the other knights, but more light in terms of cover, but were just as durable. “Good, let’s get going… We must defend this place. Afterwards your evaluation will be done.”
“Y… Yes sir.” Kusa replied.
“Then let’s go.” He said as the four ran towards a sliding automatic door. As it opened, they came upon a large wooden door that the two leaders pushed open. Kusa and Toshiro ran to see that they were on a cliff overlooking the massive city, below them was a dark cloud of a purple mass, but seemed to be in a poor district.
“It seems they are going out on us, MEN! READY YOUR ARROWS!” Soon some men above Kusa and Toshiro appeared in a shiny glistering Crimson Armor, their metal like bows with a weird looking string with a device in the center of the string laid in their hands. They pulled back as they began to glow light blue and the device grew a ball that shot to an arrow shape and they shot them off to the clouds. One by one each shooting as the arrows hit the cloud and dissolving the area they hit.
“What the…? What are those?” Toshiro asked in surprise of the attack.
“That is an arrow from one of our special bows that focus your spiritual essence into the device in the center of the string that is so concentrated, that one hit will dissolve that spiritual particle it hits. Even your arm, meaning it will not ever return. You would have lost those essences of the particles to the world to return to its very basic form. Although with enough practice you can return your particles, over time of course. This prevents people who can heal from regenerating their parts.” Soon Fear could be seen in the center of the storm gas cloud as he then appeared in front of them. Just over the castle wall ledge. When he appeared there was ripping sound from the speed.
“He is flying? Can you do that?” Toshiro asked but no answer.
“State your business…” General Joseph demanded from Fear.
“Our business is simple… But you may not know, I will tell you that I do wish to see how powerful the fabled General Joseph Allan really is.” He said with a wicked smile.
Soon he shot a line of the gas at the archers as they entered their deepest fear. With that he appeared in front of them as he shot a ball of gas to them that would explode, but was cut off as Joseph shot one of his beams at it like with Kusa. “I said to state your business…”
“Heh, I do not need to answer to you being…” He said with a frowning look to them as if a pest in a house. He then shot a ball at Joseph and 3 towards Kusa, Joseph only had time to his as Asura jumped in front and used his shield on his left forearm that spun out into a big shield.
As this went on, Fear lunged towards them as Joseph jumped over the ledge and blocked the incoming punch from with his weapons metal pole.
“!!!” – Fear (Meaning in surprise of what happened.)
With both hands on the ends and pushing on the man’s center fist, he then brought it up by giving force to his that brought Fears fist up too. He then swung his bottom end of his weapon towards the intruders face. Fear bent back with his head as his teeth gritted at the attack just dodging it.
“Crap!” he though in his head as he made his dodging move. He then went to punch again as his fist covered up in a gas like aura that covered up to his forearm as he punched to Joseph. Joseph, who blocked this, was thrown down through the sky by the force as Fear the pointed his palm to him and a gas like energy formed into a hard solid dark purple ball. He then shot it to Joseph as he was in surprise as his eyes widened from it as it reached him and all that could be seen was a big explosion of the gas. Fear then turned to the three who saw.
“General!” Asura screamed looking down over the edge.
Asura then jumped onto the ledge and towards the man bringing his sword down towards the invader. But before it could he, it was blocked with right forearm. “Heh, you think you can break through me?! I would not be stupid enough to let my body be hit without using some form of protection.” He then pushed out as Asura came back landing on the ground in front of the two. With that Fear lifted his sleeve. Soon tiny pores showed as gas shot out to them in attempt to put them in the illusion. All that could be seen as a mass of a while wall with a red boarder outline.
“What!?” Fear said looking down only to see General Joseph panting from the move. “How the hell did you survive?! That much gas should have killed you!!!”
Soon a smile showed its way onto his face as he told him, “Why don’t you find out…”
Before Fear could react, Joseph was in front of him in a blade upper cut that sliced his chin as he flipped back. Blood dripped from his chin where the cut came from showing it going from the chin to right under his eye. Landing on the wall with the rest he ordered them to stand back as Fear shot a wave of gas to them. Spinning his staff like weapon around from in front, to his sides and behind and above him in a fast pace as the cloud mixed in allowing control as he threw the end to Fears area with the force of wind sending the gas back and then as he was covered shot as blast of the energy from his staff to Fear.
The blast was on its way there as Fear watched in surprise at the speed as it neared him. Before it hit, something it back as a man slowly came down.
“So… You are the boy? Not much fight in you it seems.” Gekido said aloud.
“What do you want?” Asura said to the man.
“I am Gekido the Kanjo of Rage, one of the Eight Legendry Kanjo.”
Both Asura and Joseph brought a stunned look to their face at the sight and sound of that word. But then Gekido took notice of Kusa and Toshiro who did not even say or react. “You feel it don’t you? The very essence of me being here fills you with rage doesn’t it?”
“I believe you were asked a question Gekido.” Joseph told him.
“Why I am here to fight of course… Ha-ha-ha, it should be bluntly obvious by now.”
“Somewhere else…” Kusa stuttered out. Gekido looked at him with one eye brow raised. All the while Asura standing next to him whispered with Joseph blocking the view.
“I need you two to focus yourself… Try to find some spirit energy in you and focus it to your feet and legs. Then run past him, ground or not just trust me.”
Toshiro and Kusa did as he said as they tried, but Kusa managed first. He felt the power in him as he tried to focus. It was little, but it was there. He never felt such a feeling before. “What is this?” He thought to himself. Now wasting time he ran and jumped. He noticed he moved so fast, but too fast. He just kept going. He looked down at the cloud and the people that looked dead. “I have to do something.” He said as he neared the outside of the wall and landed in a harsh smash on his shoulder and side as he skidded through the dirt. When he looked back Asura followed with Toshiro being held in his hand.
Soon Joseph followed, but it seemed as if the man just allowed it. He the vanished from sight. “Where did he go!?” Kusa asked aloud as he suddenly heard that ripping effect.
“Heh, pretty good for a first timer.” Gekido said as he then thrust his leg up into Kusa’s ass and send him flying to the others. “Shall we begin?” He said cracking a evil smile.
End - Soul Bound
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