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Old 05-07-2013, 12:01 PM   #1
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In the sky a palace chamber holds,
chamber such as none before,
prince young on the throne,
great view has he on the World.

As time passes, rivers flow,
forests spread and children grow,
wind is nice and clear is coast,
prince is looking at the World.

On the throne he looks below,
trying to get his point across,
prince who peace does hold.

He is young and he is strong,
passing knowledge as he goes,
young is prince who peace adores.

This is Eisten Ode!!!
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well thank you for that bit of poetry UC
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I really like:
1.
Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
"Forward, the Light Brigade!
"Charge for the guns!" he said:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

2.
"Forward, the Light Brigade!"
Was there a man dismay'd?
Not tho' the soldier knew
Someone had blunder'd:
Theirs not to make reply,
Theirs not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

3.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the six hundred.

4.
Flash'd all their sabres bare,
Flash'd as they turn'd in air,
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army, while
All the world wonder'd:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro' the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel'd from the sabre stroke
Shatter'd and sunder'd.
Then they rode back, but not
Not the six hundred.

5.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred.

6.
When can their glory fade?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wondered.
Honor the charge they made,
Honor the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred.
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well thank you for that bit of poetry UC
You are welcome!!!

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I really like:
1.
Half a league, half a league,
Half a league onward,
All in the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.
"Forward, the Light Brigade!
"Charge for the guns!" he said:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

2.
"Forward, the Light Brigade!"
Was there a man dismay'd?
Not tho' the soldier knew
Someone had blunder'd:
Theirs not to make reply,
Theirs not to reason why,
Theirs but to do and die:
Into the valley of Death
Rode the six hundred.

3.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon in front of them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
Boldly they rode and well,
Into the jaws of Death,
Into the mouth of Hell
Rode the six hundred.

4.
Flash'd all their sabres bare,
Flash'd as they turn'd in air,
Sabring the gunners there,
Charging an army, while
All the world wonder'd:
Plunged in the battery-smoke
Right thro' the line they broke;
Cossack and Russian
Reel'd from the sabre stroke
Shatter'd and sunder'd.
Then they rode back, but not
Not the six hundred.

5.
Cannon to right of them,
Cannon to left of them,
Cannon behind them
Volley'd and thunder'd;
Storm'd at with shot and shell,
While horse and hero fell,
They that had fought so well
Came thro' the jaws of Death
Back from the mouth of Hell,
All that was left of them,
Left of six hundred.

6.
When can their glory fade?
O the wild charge they made!
All the world wondered.
Honor the charge they made,
Honor the Light Brigade,
Noble six hundred.
Thank you for sharing this with us!!!
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Wow I am speechless!
I took a scren shot of it cuz it was that good
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Old 05-07-2013, 04:33 PM   #6
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Wow I am speechless!
I took a scren shot of it cuz it was that good
I am glad you like it!!!
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Old 05-18-2013, 09:17 AM   #7
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The world is grey, the mountains old
The forge's fire is ashen-cold
No harp is wrung, no hammer falls
The darkness dwells in Durin's halls
The shadow lies upon his tomb
In Moria, in Khazad-dum.

This is epic.
Maybe you could rename the thread so that we can post other fiction-related songs?

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Old 05-20-2013, 04:17 PM   #8
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This just came out of my head. Sorry if it sucks

Spoiler:
Upon the hilltop
From where I stood,
My eyes were locked
On this once green land.

Upon the hilltop
From where I saw,
An endless kingdom
that was once grand.

Upon the hilltop
From where I heard,
The staves and melodies
Of the now silent band.

Upon the hilltop
From where I smelled,
The sweet flowers
With dead beauty
now in demand.

Upon the hilltop
From where I felt,
The cool breeze
That no longer
kissed my hand.

Upon the hilltop
From where I stood,
I witnessed it all
turn around.

Upon the hilltop
From where I saw,
Gates of hell
Tear up the ground.

Upon the hilltop
From where I heard,
Cries and screams
That could not be drowned.

Upon the hilltop
From where I smelled,
Sulfur and decay
That was abound.

Upon the hilltop
From where I felt,
my heart
that no longer
made a pound.
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well, war babies come from war, nerd babies from from trees, peace babies come from birds, ect
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Did you write that, WF?
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yessir
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well, war babies come from war, nerd babies from from trees, peace babies come from birds, ect
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That's awesome
Share something else with us?
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you can't just force these things >.<
Here's a senryu I made right now, early in the morning before school.

Castle falls,
Enemies advance.
Heroes rise.
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This just came out of my head. Sorry if it sucks

Spoiler:
Upon the hilltop
From where I stood,
My eyes were locked
On this once green land.

Upon the hilltop
From where I saw,
An endless kingdom
that was once grand.

Upon the hilltop
From where I heard,
The staves and melodies
Of the now silent band.

Upon the hilltop
From where I smelled,
The sweet flowers
With dead beauty
now in demand.

Upon the hilltop
From where I felt,
The cool breeze
That no longer
kissed my hand.

Upon the hilltop
From where I stood,
I witnessed it all
turn around.

Upon the hilltop
From where I saw,
Gates of hell
Tear up the ground.

Upon the hilltop
From where I heard,
Cries and screams
That could not be drowned.

Upon the hilltop
From where I smelled,
Sulfur and decay
That was abound.

Upon the hilltop
From where I felt,
my heart
that no longer
made a pound.
It is a wonderful poem that you made!!!
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My fav. song by Tolkien. A nice cover also. Godly.



Lyrics:
An Elven-maid there was of old,
A shining star by day:
Her mantle white was hemmed with gold,
Her shoes of silver-grey.

A star was bound upon her brows,
A light was on her hair
As sun upon the golden boughs
In Lórien the fair.

Her hair was long, her limbs were white,
And fair she was and free;
And in the wind she went as light
As leaf of linden-tree.

Beside the falls of Nimrodel,
By water clear and cool,
Her voice as falling silver fell
Into the shining pool.

Where now she wanders none can tell,
In sunlight or in shade;
For lost of yore was Nimrodel
And in the mountains strayed.

The elven-ship in haven grey
Beneath the mountain-lee
Awaited her for many a day
Beside the roaring sea.

A wind by night in Northern lands
Arose, and loud it cried,
And drove the ship from elven-strands
Across the streaming tide.

When dawn came dim the land was lost,
The mountains sinking grey
Beyond the heaving waves that tossed
Their plumes of blinding spray.

Amroth beheld the fading shore
Now low beyond the swell,
And cursed the faithless ship that bore
Him far from Nimrodel.



Of old he was an Elven-king,
A lord of tree and glen,
When golden were the boughs in spring
In fair Lothlórien.

From helm to sea they saw him leap,
As arrow from the string,
And dive into water deep,
As mew upon the wing.

The wind was in his flowing hair,
The foam about him shone;
Afar they saw him strong and fair
Go riding like a swan.

But from the West has come no word,
And on the Hither Shore
No tidings Elven-folk have heard
Of Amroth evermore
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