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Old 07-28-2012, 11:35 PM   #1
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Default My Wide Variety of Poetry!

Hello everyone! I'm going to be posting some poems as I write them, varying from light and happy poems to bitter and depressed or angry depending on my mood or what I'm thinking of when I write the poems so just a heads up for people who want just one specific mood throughout all of the poems, this is not for you!

So to start off well, because I think this is one of the best poems I've ever written, this first poem is called This Day Without Pain. I hope you like it, if you do please let me know so that I know that I'm doing something right, and if you don't just let me know what you don't like and what I could improve and I promise I'll listen! I'll probably just post all of the poems on this one post just to be orginized and all so check here for updates and if I tell you there's a new poem up, it will be here!

This Day Without Pain
Spoiler:

Fly away angel, and don't look back
This world is haunting
and full of pain
-/-/-/-/-
Don't look at me
please
don't look at what I've become
I can't bear to see the look of disgust
you try to hide
-/-/-/-/-
You're so brilliant, angel
so full of light
why do you stay with me?
I'm so strongly your opposite
Yet you stay you care for me
why?
-/-/-/-/-
There's no one I'd rather die beside than you, angel
my time of pain is ending
and you've been with me through it all
-/-/-/-/-
Fly away please
grow your white angel wings and soar above my misery
leave me to be swallowed up in my own pain
please don't watch me suffer
-/-/-/-/-
I love you, Angel
I never told you
but this life is fleeting and mine too rapidly
so in these last moments I say
-/-/-/-/-
I've loved you from the first moment
that day in the rain
I'll love you til the last moment
this first day without pain


This second poem is like a total turn around, it goes from being kinda sad to pretty light and happy I guess haha.

Cherry Blossom Tree
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Can I lay here with you?
Just you and me
under this cherry blossom tree?
With the evening sun just shining through


Can I hold your hand?
Just your fingers with mine
intertwined
Or can I play with your hair, just a strand?


Would you lay your head on my chest?
I want you to feel my heart beating
Beating for you and this moment that seems so fleeting
Before I met you that chest was tight, I was so depressed


My dear, would you give me a kiss?
Ever so soft, soft as the gentle summer breeze
Now I'm asking you please
My dear, your lips are pure bliss


Now will you lay here with me, and sleep?
I promise to hold you
Under this cherry blossom tree, until this dark sky turns blue
And then, angel, my heart will be yours to keep

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