Pokemon Fan-Fic - Page 2

ILIKEPIE · 05-03-2012, 12:21 AM

no geodude is part ground type

BoxHead · 05-03-2012, 06:47 AM

Idea been stolen!

Taka-hebi1 · 05-03-2012, 06:50 AM

Geodude is Ground and Rock type.

ILIKEPIE · 05-03-2012, 09:48 AM

the main point is electric attacks don't hurt Geodude and you could just have Pikachu kill it with Iron Tail or something that isn't an electric attack

Cloukora · 05-03-2012, 02:57 PM

Ugh fine I'll fix it later on today xD

ILIKEPIE · 05-03-2012, 03:01 PM

a manga I read had an electric attack work on a onix casus it was in the air and thus off the ground

Cloukora · 05-03-2012, 05:34 PM

Hmm I'll try something with that then. Thanks I wasn't looking forward to changing something as big as that again lol

Taka-hebi1 · 05-03-2012, 05:43 PM

Actually electric type attacks work on geodude

They dont work on pokemon with the ability Leviatate.

Taka-hebi1 · 05-03-2012, 05:47 PM

Wait i'm wrong pokemon with the leviatate arent affect or hurt by ground type moves so stupid *FacePalm*

Taka-hebi1 · 05-03-2012, 05:50 PM

Pokemon with the ability Lightning Rod arent affected by Electric type moves.

ILIKEPIE · 05-03-2012, 05:51 PM

it was manga logic (which is closer to the games than the anime)

Hidden Ninja45 · 05-03-2012, 07:51 PM

Does the "Sponsors" link to Pool's story lead to an Invalid Thread message, or is that just me?

Pool · 05-03-2012, 07:58 PM

The thread got deleted because I accidentally copied it too many times xD. The thread is still like the second from the top in this section.

Cloukora · 05-03-2012, 08:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Taka-hebi1

Pokemon with the ability Lightning Rod arent affected by Electric type moves.

So, the lightning attack on Geodude works then? So many situational cases xD I don't watch the show anymore, I play the game every now and then though.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pool

The thread got deleted because I accidentally copied it too many times xD. The thread is still like the second from the top in this section.

WOW thanks Pool for telling me that! xD

@Pie, well it's also physics or whatever. If "ground" is referring to when you stop the flow of electricity, and not the literal ground, then that would work.

Cloukora · 05-04-2012, 07:31 PM

Alright, I fixed it again, Geodude jumps in the air when Pikachu attacks. I'll get chapter 3 posted on either monday or tuesday

Pool · 05-08-2012, 03:18 PM

Excited for chapter 3, I am.

Cloukora · 05-08-2012, 11:22 PM

Here is chapter 3 ya'll

Spoiler:

Chapter 3: A Shadow
A man in a military uniform with a red “R” patch on his shoulders walked into a dark room with a man behind the desk, and saluted the man by placing his fist on his heart. Shadows were cast over the other man’s face, so it was hard to tell who it was. His hand was shown though, as it was petting a large cat perhaps the size of a panther. “Sir, I bring a report from the mine.”

“Yes, commander?” The man asked; he hadn’t moved even when the commander walked in.

“U.S. Marines showed up at the mine. Our soldiers defended themselves as best as they could. But…”

“But what?”

“One of the eggs, a Pikachu, hatched. And, well, it attacked the men, and caused a Pidgey and Sandlash to faint. What’s worse, is it also made a Geodude faint with thunderbolt.”

“Impossible, electric attacks don’t work on ground Pokemon.”

“Well, it did sir. That must have been one hell of a Pikachu.”

The man behind the desk threw all of his stuff off his desk and shouted in rage. “Dammit!! Must have been Ash’s Pikachu.” His face could be seen now, age marked his face, he looked about 40, and he has short black hair that was receding to baldness. “This is why my ancestor tried to hunt it down when he was alive! That damned Ash. He just had to bury all those pokemon!”

“If you don’t mind me asking, sir Giovanni, but how did he do it?”

“I’m not sure. I believe he used some kind of machine to revert all Pokemon back to their egg form. Luckily we kept some hidden within the family. We’d be at a weaker state if we had to start all over again. Where is this Pikachu now?”

“With the Marines, on the way back to their base, sir.”

“I want it found. NOW!”

“Yes sir!” The commander saluted and walked out of the room, while Giovanni sat back down at his desk. This was going to make things complicated if he can’t get that Pikachu.

I'll try to get the next one up on Friday, but I got a lot of schoolwork to get done this week. It will end up being short like this one, if I even write it.

ILIKEPIE · 05-09-2012, 12:21 AM

Lt Surge as a Team Rocket member the manga did that Sabrina and Koga were also members of team rocket in the manga

Cloukora · 05-09-2012, 12:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ILIKEPIE

Lt Surge as a Team Rocket member the manga did that Sabrina and Koga were also members of team rocket in the manga

No, the commander is just a random character. Giovanni and Corporal Surge are descendants of the originals. It's a modernized fan-fic, where Pokemon games and the show or whatever took place way in the past.

ILIKEPIE · 05-09-2012, 12:32 AM

I didn't like the Ash reference

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05-03-2012, 05:34 PM	#27
Cloukora Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: In Johto catching Pokemon Posts: 7,810 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Pokemon Fan-Fic Hmm I'll try something with that then. Thanks I wasn't looking forward to changing something as big as that again lol __________________ POOL WAS HERE. DEAL WITH IT. Call me Cloukana now. I'm becoming a woman! GF/BF: None ): Fight back against bullies! Go down on your feet, not your knees! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Thunder Buddy: Pool Friends: Tifa Legacy, Ino's Girl, deadtaka, Sagemaster, Apa, Sai's Brother, Taker, The Shady Ninja, Shayd, Kanisawa,Vino, Hikari-Chan, Leaf, Ninja Pink, and many more

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Taka-hebi1 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Mar 2012 Location: Not here, certainly not there Posts: 2,896 Rep Power: 3 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Pokemon Fan-Fic Actually electric type attacks work on geodude They dont work on pokemon with the ability Leviatate. __________________ The cure To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. The one you may be looking for may be closer than you think.

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Cloukora Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: In Johto catching Pokemon Posts: 7,810 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Pokemon Fan-Fic Alright, I fixed it again, Geodude jumps in the air when Pikachu attacks. I'll get chapter 3 posted on either monday or tuesday __________________ POOL WAS HERE. DEAL WITH IT. Call me Cloukana now. I'm becoming a woman! GF/BF: None ): Fight back against bullies! Go down on your feet, not your knees! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Thunder Buddy: Pool Friends: Tifa Legacy, Ino's Girl, deadtaka, Sagemaster, Apa, Sai's Brother, Taker, The Shady Ninja, Shayd, Kanisawa,Vino, Hikari-Chan, Leaf, Ninja Pink, and many more

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Cloukora Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: In Johto catching Pokemon Posts: 7,810 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Pokemon Fan-Fic Here is chapter 3 ya'll Spoiler: Chapter 3: A Shadow A man in a military uniform with a red “R” patch on his shoulders walked into a dark room with a man behind the desk, and saluted the man by placing his fist on his heart. Shadows were cast over the other man’s face, so it was hard to tell who it was. His hand was shown though, as it was petting a large cat perhaps the size of a panther. “Sir, I bring a report from the mine.” “Yes, commander?” The man asked; he hadn’t moved even when the commander walked in. “U.S. Marines showed up at the mine. Our soldiers defended themselves as best as they could. But…” “But what?” “One of the eggs, a Pikachu, hatched. And, well, it attacked the men, and caused a Pidgey and Sandlash to faint. What’s worse, is it also made a Geodude faint with thunderbolt.” “Impossible, electric attacks don’t work on ground Pokemon.” “Well, it did sir. That must have been one hell of a Pikachu.” The man behind the desk threw all of his stuff off his desk and shouted in rage. “Dammit!! Must have been Ash’s Pikachu.” His face could be seen now, age marked his face, he looked about 40, and he has short black hair that was receding to baldness. “This is why my ancestor tried to hunt it down when he was alive! That damned Ash. He just had to bury all those pokemon!” “If you don’t mind me asking, sir Giovanni, but how did he do it?” “I’m not sure. I believe he used some kind of machine to revert all Pokemon back to their egg form. Luckily we kept some hidden within the family. We’d be at a weaker state if we had to start all over again. Where is this Pikachu now?” “With the Marines, on the way back to their base, sir.” “I want it found. NOW!” “Yes sir!” The commander saluted and walked out of the room, while Giovanni sat back down at his desk. This was going to make things complicated if he can’t get that Pikachu. I'll try to get the next one up on Friday, but I got a lot of schoolwork to get done this week. It will end up being short like this one, if I even write it. __________________ POOL WAS HERE. DEAL WITH IT. Call me Cloukana now. I'm becoming a woman! GF/BF: None ): Fight back against bullies! Go down on your feet, not your knees! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Thunder Buddy: Pool Friends: Tifa Legacy, Ino's Girl, deadtaka, Sagemaster, Apa, Sai's Brother, Taker, The Shady Ninja, Shayd, Kanisawa,Vino, Hikari-Chan, Leaf, Ninja Pink, and many more Last edited by Cloukora; 05-08-2012 at 11:26 PM.

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