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Old 07-04-2009, 01:21 PM   #1
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i was walking alone one night in the cold snow.i was walking home from a s-rank mission that my squad had failed.we were surrounded by s-rank criminals.my squad leader shiroi had told me and my squad to run.shiroi stayed behind and fought the enemies as we escaped.when we were 3 miles away from the enemies and shiroi we heard a scream...from shiroi.i was in front of the squad.i paused for a minute to make out where we were.we heard some noises in the bushes and started again.the enemies, 3 of them, had followed us here.one of them said that our sensei had died but they were the only ones of them left.me and my squad had fought greatly.we killed them all.my two squad members had died and i had been greatly wounded.i promised that i would never forget shiroi and my two comrades.i also promised that i would avenge all of them by killing the enemies boss, shigor.he is a crime warlord that was at the top of the wanted list in my village.i soon came across a cave.i went in, and treated some of my wounds.then i started out again.thatv is where i am now.i soon found myself fighting a wolf.i killed him but was wounded more.i soon fainted from loss of blood.when i awoke i was in a bed.someone came to me and said that his name was izen, and i was in the village hidden in the darkness.

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Old 07-04-2009, 01:23 PM   #2
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its a very good story
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its good keep going with it i also have a story going called Daichi Katsumi maybe u can check it out sometime
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Old 07-04-2009, 01:24 PM   #4
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its good keep going with it i also have a story going called Daichi Katsumi maybe u can check it out sometime
ok.ill check it out later.i need to write part two.ill check it out when im done.
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cool well on with the story
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Old 07-04-2009, 01:42 PM   #6
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once i was healed by a medic group i tried to figure out where shigor is.i asked izen where he thinks he would be.he said that i shouldnt worry about it now.he said i should rest in bed and when im done, go train.i layed in bed wondering what would have happened if me and my squad stayed and helped shiroi.i figured that if we stayed we wouldve defeated all of the ninja and none of us would have died.later izen came in the room to see how i was doing.i asked izen if he knew anyone named shiroi.i asked him it because before we ran i saw shirois pupils turned into stars.once i saw them i knew that he was the last survivor of the taka clan from my village.the great war had killed them all but one.nobody knew who that person is.i figured it out because when your pupils turn to stars it means that you have the taara eye.only the taka clan can use it.i figured out that my old sensei, shiroi, was actually shiroi taka.he hesitated when he heard the name and said that he didnt.i told him that i knew he was lieing.he told me that he knew him and said that he was a top ranked guard of shigor.i thought he was lieing when he said that he was one of the great guards of shigor.but he wasnt. a few months later i was out of the hospital and at the training ground.i trained my signature move, radori, and peirced right through a 98 foot high 78 foot long boulder.everyone there saw it and ran away.i wondered why.i just noticed that i adapted the move from shiroi and it was his signature move.i was als still wearing my headband from my village.shiroi said that i looked a little like him.a little kid about 4 years old came up to me and said "mr.shiroi of the high guards.please dont destroy our village."i told him that i wasnt shiroi and that my name is gorai, and i was shirois old student unknowing that he was one of the great guards.over at the uchikages office..."who is this boy izen?"the uchikage said."he is a boy from the hidden chaos clan whos squad was killed on an s-rank mission.his sensei appeared to be shiroi taka of the great guards.the boy didnt know who he really was.he was greatly wounded and was knocked out in the snow" izen told him."well.by tommorrow, bring me the boy.i will asign him a new squad and sensei.but he will have to wear a hidden darkness village headband." the uchikage said.

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here it is.im gonna check ur story out.
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once i adapted a new jutsu, rainbow impulse, izen told me to follow him.i followed him to the uchikages office.the uchikage told me i would be in a new squad as the sensei.he then gave me a hidden darkness village headband.i then headed to the training ground.i met my knew team.it was made up of shinori bakaru, a full of himself brat from a exstinguished clan, shishi karu, a medic ninja who thinks shes the smartest person in the world, and gorisho sheno, a ninja who can`t sit still and has no friends.i told them my name and our first mission.we had to go out and defeat 3 d-ranked rouge ninja who think they`re a s-rank team.we set out to mount shiro. we found a cave at the bottom of the hill.i first got to see my squads powers.shinori used long ranged water style attacks.shishi just threw senbon needles.goshiro just made 4 dark clones and they all took out kunais and attacked meelee on them.soon they were defeated and their boss came out.it turned out to be a c-ranked criminal and told them to stay back.they were not ready for this.i used one rainbow impulse straight on his heart and he was defeated.we returned home and were sent to go train.i showed them what i can do.they were amazed by it.soon we all had to go home and get some rest.went i climbed into bed i wondered wat shiroi is doing right now.and what shigor was going to plan to do next.i soon found myself in a horrible dream.i was fighting shiroi and my comrades.i was by myself.i defeated my comrades and was fighting shiroi.we both used radori on each other and was stuck in a ball of dark chakra.i said goodbye and charged chisengan, a reverse of radori, and striked shiroi in the heart.i woke up to find myself face to face with goshiro.he asked me to teach him the radori.

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hey wat u think of them takuya?
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i just made this one.i got bored so i just threw something together.
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i left for a bit but i just read it i like it i hope to seem more of his team
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i left for a bit but i just read it i like it i hope to seem more of his team
im gonna write part 4 now.
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its pretty long but its great
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i told goshiro that i would teach him it.he headed to the training grounds and started.first i told him that he would first need to learn chidori.i told him to make a ball of lightning in his hand.first charge lightning chakra in youy hand, then discharge it.he got it on his first try.then i told him that he had to learn the rasengan.i told him to make a stream of chakra going in a circle in his hand.he did that on his first try.then i told him to do both at the same time in one hand.it took him one month to do it.but he finnaly got it.after that i went to go get him some ramen.he said that he wanted to tell me a secret.he said that he had the 16 tailed demon, animo inside of him.he even showed me the seal.i wanted to tell him something but i couldnt.that same demon...almost destroyed my village.we defeated it but it killed my parents...

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ok!whoever was anxious to know wat haapened next!here it is!part of 4 of the story!
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i felt like making it longer cuz i got bored.but im not mad at u.hey.i just broke up with my gf.but i did it.she started acting all weird.she said that she was scared of everything and kept a paper bag over her head sometimes.
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i need a new gf.u have anyone in mind?
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O.O wow that was a long read, but very good! Keep it up! and i loved how u put our village there
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Once i heard about animo inside of goshiro i was devastated.animo killed my parents.but i wont hold it against goshiro.animo killed my parents way before goshiro was born.a few days later me and my squad had a dangerous mission.it was a c-rank mission that my squad was ready for.it was a mission to defeat a c-rank squad from the hidden wave village.they were said to be on a mission to defeat goshiro.i didnt tell goshiro but i told the others.they promised to defend him.we found the squad and defeated them.but the sensei wasnt around.i was wondering who and where she was.the only information who had on her was that she was female with high qualities and her name was kirai.her nickname was animelover.we went to the hidden wave village to treat our wounds.we needed full stamina to get home.on our way there, we got ambushed.a women,she looked familiar to me.i couldnt quite put my finger on it.she turned around and said,"hello brother.gotai!"

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