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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: In a pit, hoping that I get out
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Chapter 19: A Unexpected Twist Of Events
The scene starts with Rukia, Zach, Akiyoshi, Miyo, Akira, and Jounin walking through a forest, Rukia looks up into the sky and she starts to say “Hey Akiyoshi, can you come with me for a minute?” and he says “Sure, I don’t see why not.” And they walk off into the distance, and Akira says “Hey should we continue or wait for them?” and Zach says “Go ahead, they will catch up.” and Akira says “Fine with me, they were holding us up anyways.” They continue to run forward until they see Katsu collapsed on the ground, they go run up to him and he wakes up to see them around him, I say “Hey, what are you guys doing?” and Zach responds “We heard you went after the Juuichibi and thought we could lend a hand, oh by the way where is the Juuichibi?” and I said “Well, I sealed it inside myself.” And Zach screams “Why, why would you do that?!” and I say “Because… I don’t want to shock you but I bet you noticed as well, the Shinigami that created the Lightning Village, that became so unstable that we had to seal it underground, but it has now re-awaken and it won’t be a matter of time before it breaks free, we need to get ready, by the way where is Rukia and Akiyoshi, they didn’t come with you?” and Zach says “Well, she needed something so they walked off, I say do not disturb them if you know what I mean.” And I say “Well, lets go find them, I can sense Rukia’s chakra a few miles away, lets go.” As they are running Akira says “Wait, I smell the sent of blood, let me look into this.” He starts looking around and he sees something, he sees Akiyoshi dead, he then calls everyone to look around and Katsu says “WHERE’S RUKIA!” and Zach says “I can still sense he chakra, but she was here, you do know what this looks like, I mean she once was a part of the Vil…” and Katsu says “Shut up, I won’t believe it until she admits that she did it, and even then I won’t believe it.” Then Zach says “Well looks like she is the village, my Keikei Genkai is able to track peoples positions with just anything they have ever touched, that’s how I always find you and sneak up on you.” And Katsu says “I know, lets just get to the village already.” As they run to the village the Elder approaches them, he says “It looks like your mission was a success.” And Katsu runs up to him and says “Who cares about that, I need to see Rukia.” And he says “Even as Kage you must not!” and Katsu says “Why, I need to talk to her.” And the Elder says “About a half an hour ago Rukia came up to me covered in blood, I asked her why she was like that and she stated, ‘You know, just committed a crime, I killed one of your Villagers that was a part of your villages military, you have no choice but to put me in jail.’ And I replied back to her as ‘Very well, you will be put in solitary confinement with only authorized personal that I can trust with you to visit and get your requests for and also bring you food and water once a day.’ She then said ‘I accept those terms, please bring me there’ and I then replied as ‘Okay, as you wish’” A shocked look comes over there faces.
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: In a pit, hoping that I get out
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Chapter 20: Roundabout Situations and Predicaments
The scene starts with a silence from Katsu, Zach, Miyo, Akira, and Jounin, The Elder then says “Listen, none of you may see her, only authorized personal that I assign may go, furthermore, all of you have been assigned new missions except for you Katsu, you need to go back to your job as Kage, and Miyo, I see no reason for you to be here any longer, go back to your village seeing as we do not need your assistance any longer and go report to your Kage to tell her what has happened.” And then Miyo says “But wait, I can still help out here, I mean I need to finish my mis…” and the Elder repeats “YOU MUST NOT! Everyone do as ordered, Zach, your Kekei Genkai is able to track people with just something they have ever touched, we need you to track down a ninja that just went rogue, Akira and Jounin, I need you two to keep guard of the village for any intruders while Katsu and I make preparations for the upcoming actions ahead of us.” Katsu then looks at the ground and says “everyone heard that, go to your mission, we can not afford to lose anytime.” The scene switches the White Blood Village we see the Inzukage get kicked to the ground, then a man appears out of the shadows and says “It’s Over” then the Inzukage gets sliced in half, we then see the man appears, he has pink hair and is wearing a completely white shirt with black cloak covering, he is wielding a blue scythe in his right hand now stained with blood and he is also wearing black jeans, he states “Well this battle was intriguing, but he wasn’t all that strong, he was one of the weaker opponents I have ever fought.” He then looks up in the air, and states “I can feel this insane power surge though, it feels as if it were going to eat me, well I as the new Inzukage I need to find the strongest fighter here and kill all the rest, I only need one person to complete me goal.” The scene switches over back to Katsu at the village gate and he says “See you Miyo, I will see you soon.” And she states “Yup” as she runs off. Katsu then looks up and states “Well once Zach comes back we can start the mission.” The elder then approaches Katsu and says “We need to start right now.” And Katsu says “I understand.” And the Elder says “As well, once Zach comes back no villagers are allowed to leave the village, if any one does they are to be executed while being apart of the Lightning Village.” And I say “Yes, I understand, I will make that announcement.” And then the Elder says “Well what are you waiting for, lets get started” and I say under my breath “you old man, what do you think you are doing ordering the kage around.” And he says “What did you say!?” and I say “Oh nothing.” And we walk off.
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Chapter 21: The Uneventful Day
Katsu and the Elder approach a group of ninja which have a suit of seals surrounding them, the Elder then says “Each of you go to a point near the outskirts of the village and begin the seal, we will start once Zach comes back.” And they say “Yes sir.” As I walk off into my office, just a few minutes later Zach breaks through the window and I say “Was that really necessary.” And Zach says “Sorry, I accidentally hit window instead of the wall, next time the wall will enter through the wall.” And I say “I rather the window, well anyways are we all set up.” And Zach says “Yup, Akira, Jounin and Miyo are waiting for us.” And I say “Great, well lets go.” The scene goes to the gate of the village where the previously mentioned people are at, Katsu says “I will miss this village, but for right now we must go, well this will most likely be my last day as Kage, I hope the village is intact by the time we get back, oh and Miyo, are you sure you want to do this, you have no current obligation to help us and could get punished severely.” And she says “Yeah, this will get rid of any threat towards my Kage, I need to keep that.” And I look up into the sky and say “All right, let us go then.” And Akira says “Remind me, where are we going?” and I say “We are going to get a villages help, even just one member will do, but we need all the help we can get.” They start to walk off and the scene switches to the White Blood Village, and he says “By my name, Kampiki I will find a way how to obtain that power, now villagers of the White Blood, battle to the death and the last one surviving gets to be my helper.” They all draw out swords and start clashing, Kampiki then walks off. About 24 hours later Katsu and the others are still walking and somehow managed to get in a dessert, Jounin then says “Hey Katsu, you do know where you are heading right?” and I say “Yeah, the village is up ahead.” And then Miyo says “Can we atleast take a minute to just sit down, I mean we have been walking for almost a day now.” And Katsu says “Sure you can, but don’t expect me to wait up.” Then Zach says “Why are you in such a hurry?” and Katsu says “Because, I haven’t seen this person for a while, and he can be just what we need.” Then Miyo says “That’s it, time to use some chakra.” She then movers her hand to a central point and makes a surfboard out of compacted flower petals made from her chakra, then Katsu says “Hey, that isn’t fair.” And she says “Well you wouldn’t wait for me so I got to do this.” And Katsu says I guess you are right, and hey Akira, why have you been so quiet?” and he says “I just merely have nothing to say is all.” And Katsu says “is that so, well, we will be there in two days.” The scene switches to the Lightning Village, the Elder says “Where is Katsu!” and one villager says “According to surveillance, he with a squad consisting of Zach Rex, Akira Mashimoto, Jounin, and Miyo from the Village Hidden in the Sakura have gone rogue to pursue their goals.” And the Elder says “Damn them, we need as much help as we can…” and he starts to feel and earth quake, then the earth starts to crack and then a black claw reaches out of the hole, it pushes the ground up and gets its other hand pushes the ground above it out of the way, it starts to climb up and it appears to be as big as tailed beast, it is completely black and has a demonic mask over it’s face, it climbs out and yells out a giant roar as it quickly vanishes, as the Elder goes to the outskirts of the village and see's a giant gapping hole is in the center, the only building that was not destroyed was the Jail Cell that Rukia was in. He then sends 2 Anbu to check on her condition.
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Chapter 22: Devising
The Anbu approach the building and enter, they walk slowly and right in front of the solitaire jail cell, Rukia says “I hear someone approaching, I heard a huge commotion outside, what just happened?” and one of the Anbu says “We are not allowed to tell you.” And she says “Oh, then why did you come here?” and one of the other Anbu says “We were asked to see your condition.” And she says “Well, can I see Katsu, I am prepared to make a deal.” And the first Anbu said “Sorry, that won’t be necessary, we have no attention of cooperating with you, anyways Katsu is no longer a ninja of this village.” And the Rukia says “Then bring me to who ever is in charge at the time being.” And the second Anbu says “No, we will not, but we will bring him here if he feels like he should.” And Rukia says “Hmm, but can you at least bring me something to eat, I haven’t eaten for a few days” and they just walk off. The scene switches to Katsu looking up in the sky, he then sees a quick flash of darkness straight above him, he then says “We may be to late, come on we need to pick up the pace.” And Miyo says “What has happened?” and Katsu responds by saying “I believe the Shinigami has escaped and is recovering it’s power, I thought I just saw it fly over our heads, we don’t have much time.” And Zach says “Wait, but we still have a Day and a Half till we get to that village.” And Katsu says “Well, for you guys maybe but not for me.” And he taps into his Jinchuuriki Chakra to be able to move at large speeds, he then goes zooming off and Zach says “Looks like he is off, well I can get us there in the same speed with help of Miyo.” And Miyo says “Huh, why me?” and Zach says “Because, I need the extra chakra and looks like you can do this.” And Zach takes out a scroll and lays it out, he then makes some hand signs and lays his flat palm onto the center, he then says “Miyo, I need your flower chakra techniques to keep this at a rapid speed, if this is successful then we should be exactly where Katsu is and following.” And She says “How does that work?” and Zach states “The last time we took a drink I put some of my chakra into his drink and since he drank it we will be able to do this, but I need to make sphere of flower petals around us.” And she says “Oh, okay.” As she does they instantly warp right behind Katsu.” Then Zach says “Right now we see out of Katsu’s eyes, we will not reappear out of this dimension until I release it, I will do so once we get there, but Miyo, you can not release the technique, okay.” And she says “Got it.” They continue to follow him, the scene switches to the Elder approaching the Jail Cell and yells out “You wanted to see me?!” and she replies “Yes, I need to inform you of something.” And he says “What benefit will you get from this?” and she just looks at the roof and whispers “You will find that all out later.” Off in some foreign mountains we see a group of 8 and they are walking across and one of them says “So it has begun.”
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nice long as hek story though still cool
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