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meh....i thought it would be fun to right one
(setting:a kingdom with an evil ruler) ------------ Intro: As a young man paced in the waiting room of the hospital he prayed "Please don't let this one die too". Later,a docter came out and walked to the man.The man said "Are the alive." the docter said "....i'm sorry your wife didn't make it."then the man said "What about the baby." Then the docter paused and said "Edward your newborn boy is alive and well." Enven though Edward was filled with sadness he smiled then he said "I will call him.....Dusk" ------- i am not the best at writing but this is the best i can do(p.s. there are a few time skips) Last edited by Moon; 07-16-2009 at 09:44 AM. |
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Chapter one:The curse
After months of Dusk's birth Edward tried to keep Dusk from dieing.Dusk keeped on having near death experiences like somehow getting ontop of his house and jumping off to being attacked by wild animals.Edward heard that a Magician was coming to his town.He doesn't belive in magic but it was worth a try. Weeks later,Edward and Dusk went to the Magicians cart they saw many srange potions and dusts. Then out of nowhere a man appeared and asked "Yes what can i do for you" so edward said "Is there any way you can make my son immortal." the Magician looked shocked and said "Yes,i can but there is a few rules to this immortality" Edward looked confused and asked "There is more than one kind of immortality" the Mage said "Yes and this one is called a Heart Lock.You see i can lock his heart where he never dies but the rules are.if someone had a heart key they can kill him by unlocking his heart.He is immortal when his friends are not around.The next one is crucial if he ever draws blood from another human two will be born from one" Edward looked surprised and said "What do you mean by 'two will be born from one' " Then the mage said "i am not to say no more so shall we begin" Edward nodded and the mage began the ritual. |
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Good, Moon. Keep working!
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YAY. I like it for now
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Chapter 2:The rebels
13 horrid years have passed and the evil king's reign grew larger every month. As strange people came into the town Edward and Dusk live people hid knowing how they are....but Edward and his son. Soon after they came Edward nock over the leader of the people so Edward said "Sorry my....." then the leader hit Edward to a wall "watch where you are going" then Dusk said "Hey leave me dad alone" then Dusk helped his dad up but then the leader kicked Dusk to the ground "Stay down kid before i hurt you." Then something snapped in Edward and he said "Stay away from my kid" the the leader said "Who's gonna stop me you." the suddenly Edward nocked out the leader and the rest of the stange people attacked only to be deafeted by Edward.Hours later the leader woke up and walked to Edward and said "I am sorry for what happened" so Edward said "It's ok it was an acciedent that went wrong" the leader nodded and asked "How would you like to lead the rebels agianst the king" Edward looked shocked and said "I don't know but it will be better for the people so yes i would." Dusk overheard the conversation and asked "Hey can i join" Edward paused and said "No you are too young" Dusk sighed and said "ok fine" The former leader said "My name is Leon ok" Edward nodded and said "Rest tonight and attack tomorrow" Soon the king noticed a rebelliation started and the king was frustrated. As the king walked with his war general he asked "How many battles have our army fought with those rotten rebels" then the general answered "Over 30 sire but the have a new comander they say." the king asked "Ok what is his name if you know it" the general stopped and said "Edward......your brother." Then the king stopped cold in his tracks and said "That rotten scumbag." |
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dude thats hecka good
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ooh cool, do you have the idea already?
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lol weird, but at least it gives you the ideas
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ooh, cool man
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lol are you a girl or a guy in those dreams?
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