shadowslayer's story

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 10:21 AM

this is the story of my life so far.
(if this sounds like anyone elses... im sorry. i didnt mean it)

part 1: the encounter

i was in the park sitting alone. all my friends were at camp or had something better to do then sit alone. suddenly i saw a person in a trenchcoat even though it was a schorching hot day. i knew that there was something wrong with this guy. he came up to me. he smelled like blood and death. my instinct said to run away, but my feet felt like they were nailed to the ground. the man bit down hard into my neck. i could feel the blood rushing out from me. he let go and i fell to the ground...

vampire Lycan · 07-14-2009, 10:34 AM

wow......scary

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 01:28 PM

Part II: afraid

When i woke up i was in my own bed. there wernt any marks on my neck though i was sure that there should be some. I was afraid that a vampire would come to finish me off. everyone i asked said that i had been in bad with a bad fever and i just had a nightmare. i wasnt going to accept that because i knew that someone had almost killed me. later that year when i turned 13, i decided to travel the world and find the vampire that bit me.

Junchurikihost13 · 07-14-2009, 01:37 PM

interesting

rose93 · 07-14-2009, 01:38 PM

luved it, haha vampires!
vampires r cool can't wait to see wat happens next

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 01:39 PM

thnx every1

Ninja of Cao · 07-14-2009, 01:43 PM

Nice story.

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 01:57 PM

Part III: the school

As i wandered, i saw some interesting things. as i wandered i thought about what i would do if i found the vampire. i couldnt really kill it. soon after i left i started to run low on supplies. on the 11 day after leaving home, i collapsed in what appeared to be a schoolyard. when i woke up, i was in bed again. this seemed to be getting to be a regular event. as i woke up people came in. they fed me food and gave me things to wear. i was starting to feel at home when someone came up. "can i have some blood?" he asked while i watched tv. i just tilted my head back to look at him. he took that for a yes. the bit down. i could feel my blood rushing out from me again. then one said thats enough. he pulled the kid away. i was drained (of energy and blood) then the older vampire came in. he did something (i still dont understand what) and i immediatly felt better. just then i got news i was being moved to a diffrent school.

vampire Lycan · 07-14-2009, 04:22 PM

i almost killed you

vampire Lycan · 07-14-2009, 04:24 PM

i can't wait for more

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 04:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vampire Lycan

i almost killed you

yea u were the vampire.
(this event was covered from vl's point of view in part III of his story)

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 04:37 PM

part IV: new life

First thing the next day, i was sent to a diffrent school. there really wasnt any diffrence for me because i was treated the same way. i was fed and given clothes and a room. all i had to do was give some blood. I was a "personal" feeder which meant that i only let certain people feed off of me. after the first week i started to feel at home. thats when i saw the vampire that almost killed me. we quickly became friends (or something like that). i only let him and a few others feed from me. then one day, some1 killed two feeders. I hid in the corner until it was over. then my friend walked in. he searched the room. he didnt see me hiding in the shadows. then the doors clanged shut.

vampire Lycan · 07-14-2009, 04:41 PM

o_O...you were in there......scary

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 04:43 PM

i kno, it was

vampire Lycan · 07-14-2009, 04:45 PM

write more^^

vampire Lycan · 07-14-2009, 04:45 PM

your chapters are smaller than mine

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 04:48 PM

sorry

but i write them quicker so our output is about the same.

vampire Lycan · 07-14-2009, 04:49 PM

ok^^.

shadowslayer · 07-14-2009, 04:57 PM

part V: The Incident

I was silently pondering my fate when suddenly vl (my friend) perked up. i must have made a noise or something because he came over to where i was to investigate. i curled up into a ball and hoped that he wouldnt notice me. it didnt work well. "what r u doing?" he asked me. i was too scared to answer. i could hear his stomach growl and i could tell that he was hungry. i slowly peeked out. "r u hungry?" i asked. he just nodded. i slowly curled out of my ball. he bit down on my neck. this hurt more than usual. suddenly everything started to hurt. i felt fangs slowly growing out of my mouth. then everything was normal. i felt a raging thirst. i immediatly bit into the closest thing i could find. that thing was vl's neck. after a little bit he gently pushed me aside. then i heard the doors open...

vampire Lycan · 07-14-2009, 05:01 PM

i has changed you

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07-14-2009, 10:21 AM	#1
shadowslayer Apprentice Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: escaping the "organization" (see my story [chapter fourteen]) Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	shadowslayer's story this is the story of my life so far. (if this sounds like anyone elses... im sorry. i didnt mean it) part 1: the encounter i was in the park sitting alone. all my friends were at camp or had something better to do then sit alone. suddenly i saw a person in a trenchcoat even though it was a schorching hot day. i knew that there was something wrong with this guy. he came up to me. he smelled like blood and death. my instinct said to run away, but my feet felt like they were nailed to the ground. the man bit down hard into my neck. i could feel the blood rushing out from me. he let go and i fell to the ground... __________________ what i look like: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. im a vampire alternate name: Hikaru Daichi Uchiha My Story: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Forum Fam: Brothers: shadowninja7, Deidara Bro, Vampire Lycan Hellhound Bro: dogboy22 Sister: kazuki_65 vampire sis: sasuke uchiha gal when life gives u lemons... make brownies (not with the lemons though)-me To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-14-2009, 10:34 AM	#2
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story wow......scary

07-14-2009, 01:28 PM	#3
shadowslayer Apprentice Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: escaping the "organization" (see my story [chapter fourteen]) Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story Part II: afraid When i woke up i was in my own bed. there wernt any marks on my neck though i was sure that there should be some. I was afraid that a vampire would come to finish me off. everyone i asked said that i had been in bad with a bad fever and i just had a nightmare. i wasnt going to accept that because i knew that someone had almost killed me. later that year when i turned 13, i decided to travel the world and find the vampire that bit me. __________________ what i look like: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. im a vampire alternate name: Hikaru Daichi Uchiha My Story: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Forum Fam: Brothers: shadowninja7, Deidara Bro, Vampire Lycan Hellhound Bro: dogboy22 Sister: kazuki_65 vampire sis: sasuke uchiha gal when life gives u lemons... make brownies (not with the lemons though)-me To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by shadowslayer; 07-14-2009 at 01:58 PM.

07-14-2009, 01:37 PM	#4
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07-14-2009, 01:38 PM	#5
rose93 Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Where ever the wind blows... Posts: 1,811 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story luved it, haha vampires! vampires r cool can't wait to see wat happens next __________________ Follow the wind, Don't let anyone hold you back..... ~Silent Kills~ Spoiler: FAMILY Big Sis-kibaxino4ever234, Kunoichi of Tao,Yoshi-Chan, Yumi Kurosaki, Itachi's Rose Little Sis-Itachi To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. , C-C Big Bro-sasukexuchiha, naruto/fan boy, vampire Lycan, Shika,Nemico Little Bro-itachifan100, Junchurikihost13, shadowslayer, Should Of Had A V8 Twin Bro-pein_nagato ~Shhhh~

07-14-2009, 01:39 PM	#6
shadowslayer Apprentice Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: escaping the "organization" (see my story [chapter fourteen]) Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story thnx every1 __________________ what i look like: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. im a vampire alternate name: Hikaru Daichi Uchiha My Story: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Forum Fam: Brothers: shadowninja7, Deidara Bro, Vampire Lycan Hellhound Bro: dogboy22 Sister: kazuki_65 vampire sis: sasuke uchiha gal when life gives u lemons... make brownies (not with the lemons though)-me To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-14-2009, 01:43 PM	#7
Ninja of Cao Racistic My lil' Fuhrer Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Närke, Sweden. Posts: 5,762 Rep Power: 14 Member's Picture Albums	Re: shadowslayer's story Nice story. __________________ Thou ancient, Thou free, Thou mountainous North. Thou quiet, Thou joyful beauty. I greet Thee, most beautiful land upon earth, Thy sun, Thy sky, Thy meadows green. Thou art enthroned upon memories of great olden days, when honoured Thy name flew across the earth. I know that Thou art and wilt remain what Thou wast, Yes, I want to live, I want to die in the North. Hotmail: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: Rest in peace, Hugo Chavez

07-14-2009, 01:57 PM	#8
shadowslayer Apprentice Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: escaping the "organization" (see my story [chapter fourteen]) Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story Part III: the school As i wandered, i saw some interesting things. as i wandered i thought about what i would do if i found the vampire. i couldnt really kill it. soon after i left i started to run low on supplies. on the 11 day after leaving home, i collapsed in what appeared to be a schoolyard. when i woke up, i was in bed again. this seemed to be getting to be a regular event. as i woke up people came in. they fed me food and gave me things to wear. i was starting to feel at home when someone came up. "can i have some blood?" he asked while i watched tv. i just tilted my head back to look at him. he took that for a yes. the bit down. i could feel my blood rushing out from me again. then one said thats enough. he pulled the kid away. i was drained (of energy and blood) then the older vampire came in. he did something (i still dont understand what) and i immediatly felt better. just then i got news i was being moved to a diffrent school. __________________ what i look like: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. im a vampire alternate name: Hikaru Daichi Uchiha My Story: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Forum Fam: Brothers: shadowninja7, Deidara Bro, Vampire Lycan Hellhound Bro: dogboy22 Sister: kazuki_65 vampire sis: sasuke uchiha gal when life gives u lemons... make brownies (not with the lemons though)-me To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-14-2009, 04:22 PM	#9
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story i almost killed you

07-14-2009, 04:24 PM	#10
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story i can't wait for more

07-14-2009, 04:37 PM	#12
shadowslayer Apprentice Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: escaping the "organization" (see my story [chapter fourteen]) Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story part IV: new life First thing the next day, i was sent to a diffrent school. there really wasnt any diffrence for me because i was treated the same way. i was fed and given clothes and a room. all i had to do was give some blood. I was a "personal" feeder which meant that i only let certain people feed off of me. after the first week i started to feel at home. thats when i saw the vampire that almost killed me. we quickly became friends (or something like that). i only let him and a few others feed from me. then one day, some1 killed two feeders. I hid in the corner until it was over. then my friend walked in. he searched the room. he didnt see me hiding in the shadows. then the doors clanged shut. __________________ what i look like: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. im a vampire alternate name: Hikaru Daichi Uchiha My Story: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Forum Fam: Brothers: shadowninja7, Deidara Bro, Vampire Lycan Hellhound Bro: dogboy22 Sister: kazuki_65 vampire sis: sasuke uchiha gal when life gives u lemons... make brownies (not with the lemons though)-me To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-14-2009, 04:41 PM	#13
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story o_O...you were in there......scary

07-14-2009, 04:43 PM	#14
shadowslayer Apprentice Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: escaping the "organization" (see my story [chapter fourteen]) Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story i kno, it was __________________ what i look like: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. im a vampire alternate name: Hikaru Daichi Uchiha My Story: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Forum Fam: Brothers: shadowninja7, Deidara Bro, Vampire Lycan Hellhound Bro: dogboy22 Sister: kazuki_65 vampire sis: sasuke uchiha gal when life gives u lemons... make brownies (not with the lemons though)-me To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-14-2009, 04:45 PM	#15
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story write more^^

07-14-2009, 04:45 PM	#16
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story your chapters are smaller than mine

07-14-2009, 04:48 PM	#17
shadowslayer Apprentice Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: escaping the "organization" (see my story [chapter fourteen]) Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story sorry but i write them quicker so our output is about the same. __________________ what i look like: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. im a vampire alternate name: Hikaru Daichi Uchiha My Story: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Forum Fam: Brothers: shadowninja7, Deidara Bro, Vampire Lycan Hellhound Bro: dogboy22 Sister: kazuki_65 vampire sis: sasuke uchiha gal when life gives u lemons... make brownies (not with the lemons though)-me To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-14-2009, 04:49 PM	#18
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story ok^^.

07-14-2009, 04:57 PM	#19
shadowslayer Apprentice Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: escaping the "organization" (see my story [chapter fourteen]) Posts: 116 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story part V: The Incident I was silently pondering my fate when suddenly vl (my friend) perked up. i must have made a noise or something because he came over to where i was to investigate. i curled up into a ball and hoped that he wouldnt notice me. it didnt work well. "what r u doing?" he asked me. i was too scared to answer. i could hear his stomach growl and i could tell that he was hungry. i slowly peeked out. "r u hungry?" i asked. he just nodded. i slowly curled out of my ball. he bit down on my neck. this hurt more than usual. suddenly everything started to hurt. i felt fangs slowly growing out of my mouth. then everything was normal. i felt a raging thirst. i immediatly bit into the closest thing i could find. that thing was vl's neck. after a little bit he gently pushed me aside. then i heard the doors open... __________________ what i look like: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. im a vampire alternate name: Hikaru Daichi Uchiha My Story: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Forum Fam: Brothers: shadowninja7, Deidara Bro, Vampire Lycan Hellhound Bro: dogboy22 Sister: kazuki_65 vampire sis: sasuke uchiha gal when life gives u lemons... make brownies (not with the lemons though)-me To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-14-2009, 05:01 PM	#20
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: shadowslayer's story i has changed you

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