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Old 07-14-2009, 10:21 AM   #1
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this is the story of my life so far.
(if this sounds like anyone elses... im sorry. i didnt mean it)

part 1: the encounter

i was in the park sitting alone. all my friends were at camp or had something better to do then sit alone. suddenly i saw a person in a trenchcoat even though it was a schorching hot day. i knew that there was something wrong with this guy. he came up to me. he smelled like blood and death. my instinct said to run away, but my feet felt like they were nailed to the ground. the man bit down hard into my neck. i could feel the blood rushing out from me. he let go and i fell to the ground...
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Old 07-14-2009, 10:34 AM   #2
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wow......scary
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Old 07-14-2009, 01:28 PM   #3
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Part II: afraid

When i woke up i was in my own bed. there wernt any marks on my neck though i was sure that there should be some. I was afraid that a vampire would come to finish me off. everyone i asked said that i had been in bad with a bad fever and i just had a nightmare. i wasnt going to accept that because i knew that someone had almost killed me. later that year when i turned 13, i decided to travel the world and find the vampire that bit me.
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Old 07-14-2009, 01:37 PM   #4
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interesting
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Old 07-14-2009, 01:38 PM   #5
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luved it, haha vampires!
vampires r cool can't wait to see wat happens next
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thnx every1
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Nice story.
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Part III: the school

As i wandered, i saw some interesting things. as i wandered i thought about what i would do if i found the vampire. i couldnt really kill it. soon after i left i started to run low on supplies. on the 11 day after leaving home, i collapsed in what appeared to be a schoolyard. when i woke up, i was in bed again. this seemed to be getting to be a regular event. as i woke up people came in. they fed me food and gave me things to wear. i was starting to feel at home when someone came up. "can i have some blood?" he asked while i watched tv. i just tilted my head back to look at him. he took that for a yes. the bit down. i could feel my blood rushing out from me again. then one said thats enough. he pulled the kid away. i was drained (of energy and blood) then the older vampire came in. he did something (i still dont understand what) and i immediatly felt better. just then i got news i was being moved to a diffrent school.
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i almost killed you
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i can't wait for more
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Old 07-14-2009, 04:28 PM   #11
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part IV: new life

First thing the next day, i was sent to a diffrent school. there really wasnt any diffrence for me because i was treated the same way. i was fed and given clothes and a room. all i had to do was give some blood. I was a "personal" feeder which meant that i only let certain people feed off of me. after the first week i started to feel at home. thats when i saw the vampire that almost killed me. we quickly became friends (or something like that). i only let him and a few others feed from me. then one day, some1 killed two feeders. I hid in the corner until it was over. then my friend walked in. he searched the room. he didnt see me hiding in the shadows. then the doors clanged shut.
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o_O...you were in there......scary
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Old 07-14-2009, 04:43 PM   #14
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i kno, it was
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write more^^
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your chapters are smaller than mine
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Old 07-14-2009, 04:48 PM   #17
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sorry
but i write them quicker so our output is about the same.
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part V: The Incident

I was silently pondering my fate when suddenly vl (my friend) perked up. i must have made a noise or something because he came over to where i was to investigate. i curled up into a ball and hoped that he wouldnt notice me. it didnt work well. "what r u doing?" he asked me. i was too scared to answer. i could hear his stomach growl and i could tell that he was hungry. i slowly peeked out. "r u hungry?" i asked. he just nodded. i slowly curled out of my ball. he bit down on my neck. this hurt more than usual. suddenly everything started to hurt. i felt fangs slowly growing out of my mouth. then everything was normal. i felt a raging thirst. i immediatly bit into the closest thing i could find. that thing was vl's neck. after a little bit he gently pushed me aside. then i heard the doors open...
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i has changed you
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