Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story - Page 6

mangagirl · 07-20-2009, 04:44 PM

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Note: Character Profiles has been Updated!

yay!!!lolz!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-20-2009, 04:50 PM

Thanks, manga!

mangagirl · 07-20-2009, 04:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Thanks, manga!

anytime vat

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-20-2009, 05:22 PM

Chapter Seven: Bloody Arm

"Who are you calling fat?!" the Cager yelled at Toshi as he charged. "You." Toshi replied, smiling. Before the Cager could respond, Toshi leaped and slashed at him with her sword. The blade connected the Cager's arm and blood splashed everywhere as his arm was sent flying and the Cager's shout of pain echoed across the streets.

Note: I TOLD you it would be bloody. Also, Curse my Brother!!!!!!!!!!! He ruined my sketch!

Kama never got to stab himself, thus killing Nui if he had. Before he could, Nui had pushed Kama out of the circle and had washed the circle away with a water jutsu.
"You're smart..." Kama muttered. Nui remained silent and attacked with his sword. Kama sidestepped, dodging it and jumped back. Immediatly, Nui started stringing together handseals. A second later, he stopped and smiled. A wave of water appeared and headed, right for Kama. Just as the water was before Kama, Kama jumped back, landing on the roof of a house as the water hit the wall instead. "But you heavily underestimate me, not resorting to jutsus of your level." Kama muttered. Suddenly, the wall started to crack. Suddenly, the wall broke as the water poured through the other side of the wall and Kama falling into the water.
Nui stood at the center of the street, serious as ever and forming handseals. He then stopped and said, "Lightning Spread Jutsu." as lightning crackled, appearing in his hand.

__________________________________________________ _______________

Grasping the part of his arm that hasn't been disconnected from his body, the Cager stood 20 feet away from Toshi, glaring needles at her. Toshi stood, grinning, holding her sword as blood slowly dripped to the ground. She raised her sword again and charged as the Cager set into a stance.

__________________________________________________ _______________

Vatas immediatly realized something as he ran through the streets with Menrui. Always quick to catch on, Menrui noticed this. "What's wrong?" He asked.
Vatas glanced at Menrui with a somewhat troubled face. "Toshi is having fun."
Menrui nodded. "You noticed that too, huh? She always release a change in the atmosphere when she gets this way....man, she is a pain, always getting bloody and chopping off arms and such."

T.B.C.
(To Be Continued)

mangagirl · 07-20-2009, 05:25 PM

wow awesome!!!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-20-2009, 05:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mangagirl

wow awesome!!!

Thanks, manga!

mangagirl · 07-20-2009, 05:34 PM

anytime vat!*smiles*

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-20-2009, 05:38 PM

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Originally Posted by mangagirl

anytime vat!*smiles*

*smiles back*

SakuraGirl · 07-20-2009, 06:11 PM

it getting great

mangagirl · 07-20-2009, 06:25 PM

ya i agree

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-20-2009, 06:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mangagirl

ya i agree

Thanks

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Originally Posted by SakuraGirl

it getting great

Thanks. Do you want spoilers?

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-21-2009, 12:32 PM

Chapter Eight: Dawn

Kama slowly stood up, drenched and tired. One of the three blades on his scythe was broken: it was destroyed when a giant piece of the wall had fallen on it and broken it. Smoke hung from him everywhere: Nui's lightning attack had spread through him and also had heavily injured him.
"You posses a Lightning Affinity? And that attack earlier, you seemingly posses a Water Affinity too." Kama observed, slowly setting into a defensive stance. Nui kept silent as Kama continued talking. "That attack on my face earlier was also Light Style with a little fire mixed in it. So you can use Fire too. Typical for a Kage, to be able to use several elements." Kama continued as Nui lifted his sword. Immediatly, Nui threw his sword in the sky. It flew upwards, twirling as Nui started to string together handsigns. Kama, using that to his advantage, charged straight out, right for Nui. Nui stopped as Kama slashed at him. Nui jumped, dodging the scythe. His sword finally flew down and grabbing it while in the air, Nui slashed downwards at Kama.
And blood flew everywhere, splashing on the floor and streets as Kama collapsed to the ground, with a giant gash in both his shoulders. Nui gazed to the setting dawn as Kama collapsed to the ground. "You're good..." Kama muttered and with that, he fell unconscious.
"I'm sorry, but it had to be done." Nui muttered and with that, he left.

__________________________________________________ _______________

Toshi gazed at the setting sun, slowly approaching to the dark blue sky. "Crap, it's dawn....this is gonna get harder...more guards are bound to notice us." With that, she formed a handsign and suddenly, a cloud of white smoke exploded out. Soon, the smoke cleared, revealing nobody there, except for a giant body laying on the ground, drenched in blood and his face etched in eternal terror.

To Be Continued

mangagirl · 07-21-2009, 12:33 PM

wow awsome i love ur story

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-21-2009, 12:35 PM

Wow, you just finished Chapter Eight, manga?

mangagirl · 07-21-2009, 12:36 PM

ya i read fast

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-21-2009, 12:37 PM

Cool!

mangagirl · 07-21-2009, 12:38 PM

yay!!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-21-2009, 12:46 PM

Yep, and also, if you want a hint for the chapters to come, go to the first page to see the names of the upcoming arcs!

Sephiroth · 07-21-2009, 12:57 PM

*claps hands* brovo borvo pride

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-21-2009, 01:07 PM

Thanks, Jeremy!

07-20-2009, 04:50 PM	#102
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Thanks, manga! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-20-2009, 05:22 PM	#104
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story *Chapter Seven: Bloody Arm* "Who are you calling fat?!" the Cager yelled at Toshi as he charged. "You." Toshi replied, smiling. Before the Cager could respond, Toshi leaped and slashed at him with her sword. The blade connected the Cager's arm and blood splashed everywhere as his arm was sent flying and the Cager's shout of pain echoed across the streets. Note: I TOLD you it would be bloody. Also, Curse my Brother!!!!!!!!!!! He ruined my sketch! Kama never got to stab himself, thus killing Nui if he had. Before he could, Nui had pushed Kama out of the circle and had washed the circle away with a water jutsu. "You're smart..." Kama muttered. Nui remained silent and attacked with his sword. Kama sidestepped, dodging it and jumped back. Immediatly, Nui started stringing together handseals. A second later, he stopped and smiled. A wave of water appeared and headed, right for Kama. Just as the water was before Kama, Kama jumped back, landing on the roof of a house as the water hit the wall instead. "But you heavily underestimate me, not resorting to jutsus of your level." Kama muttered. Suddenly, the wall started to crack. Suddenly, the wall broke as the water poured through the other side of the wall and Kama falling into the water. Nui stood at the center of the street, serious as ever and forming handseals. He then stopped and said, "Lightning Spread Jutsu." as lightning crackled, appearing in his hand. __________________________________________________ _______________ Grasping the part of his arm that hasn't been disconnected from his body, the Cager stood 20 feet away from Toshi, glaring needles at her. Toshi stood, grinning, holding her sword as blood slowly dripped to the ground. She raised her sword again and charged as the Cager set into a stance. __________________________________________________ _______________ Vatas immediatly realized something as he ran through the streets with Menrui. Always quick to catch on, Menrui noticed this. "What's wrong?" He asked. Vatas glanced at Menrui with a somewhat troubled face. "Toshi is having fun." Menrui nodded. "You noticed that too, huh? She always release a change in the atmosphere when she gets this way....man, she is a pain, always getting bloody and chopping off arms and such." T.B.C. (To Be Continued) __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Vatanui AKA Pride; 08-03-2009 at 04:59 PM.

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07-20-2009, 06:11 PM	#109
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07-21-2009, 12:32 PM	#112
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story *Chapter Eight: Dawn* Kama slowly stood up, drenched and tired. One of the three blades on his scythe was broken: it was destroyed when a giant piece of the wall had fallen on it and broken it. Smoke hung from him everywhere: Nui's lightning attack had spread through him and also had heavily injured him. "You posses a Lightning Affinity? And that attack earlier, you seemingly posses a Water Affinity too." Kama observed, slowly setting into a defensive stance. Nui kept silent as Kama continued talking. "That attack on my face earlier was also Light Style with a little fire mixed in it. So you can use Fire too. Typical for a Kage, to be able to use several elements." Kama continued as Nui lifted his sword. Immediatly, Nui threw his sword in the sky. It flew upwards, twirling as Nui started to string together handsigns. Kama, using that to his advantage, charged straight out, right for Nui. Nui stopped as Kama slashed at him. Nui jumped, dodging the scythe. His sword finally flew down and grabbing it while in the air, Nui slashed downwards at Kama. And blood flew everywhere, splashing on the floor and streets as Kama collapsed to the ground, with a giant gash in both his shoulders. Nui gazed to the setting dawn as Kama collapsed to the ground. "You're good..." Kama muttered and with that, he fell unconscious. "I'm sorry, but it had to be done." Nui muttered and with that, he left. __________________________________________________ _______________ Toshi gazed at the setting sun, slowly approaching to the dark blue sky. "Crap, it's dawn....this is gonna get harder...more guards are bound to notice us." With that, she formed a handsign and suddenly, a cloud of white smoke exploded out. Soon, the smoke cleared, revealing nobody there, except for a giant body laying on the ground, drenched in blood and his face etched in eternal terror. To Be Continued __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Vatanui AKA Pride; 07-22-2009 at 08:47 AM.

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Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Yep, and also, if you want a hint for the chapters to come, go to the first page to see the names of the upcoming arcs! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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