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What the heck is Cr@psule? And I'm writing the chapter right now.
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i know it doesny make sense
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Um, Zabuza, that COULD be classified as off-topic stuff in this thread, you know...
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I'll delete it, no worries.
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you copied hanataro from bleach the shinigami didnt care if he died either
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...........do you HAVE to point out every thing I do?
lol
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Special: Nui Gaiden!
Chapter Thirty-Three: Just Before The Storm Standing directly ten yards behind Matsumora and her group was the dashingly handsome Hisagi Onimusha, father of Nui Onimusha. He had broad shoulders as well as a strongly-built body, but was slender. Hisagi stood tall and proud, resembling a highly-respected and powerful ruler. He wore a white and seemingly slick robe, the collars, sleeves and bottom of the robe in black and red. White hair fell on his shoulders, matching along with the essence from his robe. Two large swords that resembled Chinese scimitars were on his back, cleaned and not even a little rusted even though it had tasted the blood of battle for years. A single long scar ran over his right eye, showing proof of his battles. His black eyes seemed to pierce at everyone who looked into them, which most people never dared to look. With that, he offered a small hand to Matsumora, Allon, and Kaname as they slowly walked to him, in a mixture of both fear and respect. __________________________________________________ _______________ "You sure those ANBU were right," Sakura muttered as she quickly glanced at her surroundings, "Because I can't see a thing." It had been over fifteen minutes since they had begun their search, and things were going uneventful so far. Senso had sent Nui to scout ahead a few minutes ago, and he hasn't returned since then. Since they had begun their search, Sakura had realized that those rumors about the Country of Snow were very true, all she had saw so far was nothing but ice and snow, and for miles to come. Senso was next to her, five feet across to her left. He was kneeling on one leg, his hand touching the icy ground. "Well, the information was reliable, they even sent in a blurry picture of what seemed to be Hisagi Onimusha, but then....." "Then what?" Sakura asked, wincing at the sound of her previous sensei's name. "...........we suddenly lost contact with them. It was a few days after the image arrived." "How are you sure?" Sakura asked quietly. Senso said nothing in reply, instead pointing at the ice where his hand was. "Look below, Sakura..." Sakura looked at what he was pointing at, instinctively knowing what ever Senso was pointing at, it wouldn't be pleasant at all. And she was right, once again, as she saw the outlines of the bodies floating through the chilly water, now stained with blood. She was more astonished to see their masks drifting lazily alongside them, all three slashed in half. Alarmingly, she quickly glanced at Senso. "Where is Nui?!" __________________________________________________ _______________ "Now you are aware of the importance of this particular mission, are you ready?" Hisagi asked as he stood before the group he had personally chosen for this mission. Matsumora offered a shrug while Kaname nodded simply. "I am prepared for this mission, Lord Hisagi, but working with some of these people, I am not so happy about..." Allon muttered, glancing at Matsumora, still sore from the kicking incident incident involving Matsumora's foot and Allon's rear behind. Hisagi remained silent, and then decided to ignore Allon's comment in his mind. He then brought out his left arm and with that, snapped. Immediately, the snapping sound lashed out and echoed across the hot desert, seemingly getting more and more distanced by the second. Finally, the sound seemed to stop as a huge change in the atmosphere happened, shaking everything. Allon collapsed first, Matsumora second, and Kaname third, desperately trying to fight against it, but to no better as they all tried to breathe, but couldn't. The only one remained standing was Hisagi, who seemingly had no trouble keeping it at bay or breathing. Suddenly, something appeared before Hisagi. It was pure black, and quickly slammed down onto the crusty warm sand. Upon impact, sand flew everywhere as everyone covered their eyes. The sand eventually stopped blowing and suddenly, the atmosphere once again let up back to it's normal level. Matsumora coughed, sand flying out of her mouth while Allon was on his legs in a kneeling position, his eyes wide open. Incredible! I can't believe it....the strength of that chakra, it completely overwhelmed me, Allon thought, shocked. Kaname was now standing, bewildered as well. "This is a hint of what you will receive if you fail me." Hisagi said coldly, his black eyes staring right into their souls as they gulped. He then pointed to the object behind it, and everyone saw that it was another Black Gate. "Now go. You're dismissed." Matsumora, Allon, and Kaname all nodded and instanteniusly started running toward the Black Gate as if their lives depended on it, and each knew that their lives really did depend on the outcome of this mission. __________________________________________________ _______________ "Senso, let's move," Sakura announced, "Nui might be in danger." Senso offered a small nod as he watched a small bird fly up to the skies, holding a small scroll on its back, heading for the Light Clan. "Yes, let's go." Tobecontinued With these powerful forces gathering around the young Nui Onimusha, who will survive to see the light of the next day, or who will spend their last day in this Battlefield of Ice?!
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I'm now scared of Hisagi.
But I like the fact that the antagonist is strong in this arc. Maybe... Sakura could use her own chakra to collapse the place that they are in? Which, BTW, seems like an alternate dimension that Hisagi created to me.
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Dang, you're REALLY close.
But Hisagi is stronger than a average Kage, as seeing the fact that he managed to get three Jonin-Level on their knees and coughing and grasping for air with just a single snap.
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I know that he's strong, but I don't think that he could survive the explosion of the dimension that he's in. His strength is what made me think that it would have to be really big to take him out. Anyway, I'm going to bed now. See if my predictions were right in the morning!
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But remember, to get to the King, you'll have to take out the Pawns first.
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Hey, shinimaru, what chapter are you on right now?
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the first nui gaiden
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Hmm, alright.
Wat's your favorite character so far?
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No episode today?
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I was writing it, but had to go do something for an hour.
Now I'm back and ready to finish today's chapter.
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Just normally you've written it by now. I'll stay up to read it, and then go to bed.
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Special: Nui Gaiden!
Chapter Thirty-Four: The Beginning of the Frosty Storm "Damn that wannabe assassin," Sakura muttered as she ran, her feet stomping on the ice softly. She moved fast, covering about a quarter-kilometer every ten seconds. Senso followed behind her, about thirty meters from her, growing more and more distance by the second, "He was lying the whole time, he fooled all of us." She narrowed her eyes in fiery anger and then glanced back at Senso, "Hurry up, slowpoke! We're not gonna make it if you keep running at that pace!", in a mixture of both anger for Hisagi as well as excitement for the reunion. __________________________________________________ _______________ "Allon, do you know where the target is right now?" Kaname muttered to Allon. They were now standing on the ice floor. After going into the Black Gate, they had instantly appeared here, and still all were adapting from the weather change. Matsumora stood alongside them, quietly gazing at the slowly drifting sun on the horizon. Allon remained silent, and after a long moment, slowly closed his eyes once again. With that, he responded. "Yes, I have located the target, Kaname. Nui Onimusha is currently forty-nine meters, five yards, ten feet, and two and a half centimeters north-west of us." __________________________________________________ _______________ Nui slowly walked around, glancing at all of the surroundings around him quickly. As he had imagined, he had seen nothing out of the ordinary either. After just scouting at random places, he still had seen nothing. Suddenly, he heard a familiar yell behind him. Upon reaction, Nui immediately spun around, grasping a kunai in his left hand. His grip loosened as he saw that it Sakura. Nui then yelled out, "Where's Senso?" Sakura seemed to suddenly halt as she glanced alarmingly at something over Nui. Nui quickly realized that there was a enormous shadow hanging over him and turned around to see the wolf-faced Kaname slam his fist into Nui's head as blood flew in the chilly air, scattering to the ice. __________________________________________________ _______________ "Nui!!!" Sakura yelled in both alarm and shock as she saw the remains of Nui's body, now surrounded by a large puddle of his blood, collapse onto the ice floor. She had seen Kaname appear and smash his fist right into Nui's head, and heard the crunching from the skulls and watched as the crushed head fly as the body fell. "Damn, you took all the fun." Matsumora muttered. Sakura turned her head to the newly arrived person who was now standing beside Kaname. Allon stood next to her, his eyes still closed. Allon then moved closer to Matsumora and then whispered into her ears as Matsumora's lips slowly curled into an evilly smile. "Well, well, looks like this kid is gonna be a little harder than what it seems." She then glanced at Sakura. "Maybe this one will prove a little more of a challenge." Sakura stood, unmoving as she began to grip her hands in anger. Her shocked expression quickly turned into anger as she immediately broke into a mad rush at Kaname, Matsumora, and Allon as the group immediately set into a defensive stance. Then, to Sakura's surprised, Nui's body exploded into white smoke, making a "poofing" noise. The smoke created a small cloud as everyone jumped back while Matsumora continued her somewhat-careless but seemingly wicked grin. "Seems like you were right, Allon. It was a clone after all." The group watched as the cloud of white smoke faded away, and gazed with bored expressions as Sakura immediately burst out of the cloud, holding a strange-looking kunai in both hands. Matsumora smiled and started to unbutton one of the higher buttons on her robe. With that, she quickly pulled out something as Sakura came clashing in, and the sound of swords clashing against one another was heard as the two female Shinobi stood, Sakura's dual kunais against Matsumora's gigantic executioner blade. Before either Allon or Kaname could react, something lashed out of the sky and landed right before Kaname in a kneeling position. Just when Kaname was about to notice, he felt something on his back. "Don't move." Kaname slowly turned his head, to look at the face of Senso, holding his lance at Kaname's neck. Senso then glanced at the person next to him, and was not surprised to see Nui holding a long katana to Allon's chest, it's sharp end least then a centimeter away from piercing his skin. Sakura smiled as her kunai shake from the force of Matsumora's executioner blade. "Now then, anyone of you people willing to tell us where Hisagi Onimusha is?" To Be Continued
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I loled at the two and a half centimeters bit
Also, Nui as a youngster never seemed that strong to me. I also thought that Senso would be weaker than Sakura, the 'flash' of the Light. But I loved the fighting, pure win.
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