Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Special: Nui Gaiden!


Chapter Thirty-Two: The Calm Before the Storm of Ice


Nui offered a confused look at his companions. "Frozen Wastelands?" Sakura returned his question with an answer:
"The Frozen Wastelands: Over ten thousand kilometers of nothing but ice and snow that is north of the Crossroads. The Ice Puppets Clan is located about twenty kilometers east of where we are now and that part of the land is managed by the Kurikage. It is also here where Hisagi Onimusha is rumored to reside."
With that, Sakura glared at the ice underneath her feet as Nui glanced away, both in a mixture of loss and pain.


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The Black Gate remained open, patiently waiting for its victims (Oh wait, did I said victims, whoops) users to come to it, releasing a menacing feel in the chilly wind as it sat there with that symbol on it that sent chills to everybody's spines for only one reason that only they knew.
The brunette-haired woman known as Matsumora then started walking toward the Black Gate. The child named Allon quickly followed suit, his eyes still closed. The wolf-faced Kaname was behind all of them, stomping on the ice floor as it shook and cracked with each step he took, threatening to break and sent him into the chilly depths of the ocean waiting just beneath him.

After crossing past twenty yards, they were now standing before the Black Gate, yet neither of them were excited about actually venturing in there, after have hearing all of the unconfirmed rumors. "So...who wants to go in first?" Matsumora asked, hoping someone would answer it with a "yes".
Neither of her companions answered, both of them as nervous as they are.
"Alright then," Matsumora muttered and then moved toward Allon. Before the boy could say anything, she kicked him in the rear end and he was sent flying into the Black Gate.
Matsumora then stood there for a moment. She then grinned when she heard nothing, deciding that it was safe. With that, she ran at the door excitedly and too disappeared into complete darkness.
Kaname went last, jumping into as the Black Gate closed with a slam.


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What inside the Black Gate was nothing that anyone would have expected, but what was the opposite of what they would have guessed. Matsumora, Allon, and Kaname all widened their eyes in shock as they flew through the hot air, steadily approaching the sandy desert below them and the sun hit their faces.
Allon was the first to land: he softly hit the crusty sand, causing a small but quiet explosion of sand as it flew around him. Matsumora landed to his right, and with a louder landing of sand. Kaname struck the ground like a bullet. The split-second he struck the calm desert, it exploded sand everywhere around him, creating a small sandstorm that only lasted a moment as everyone shielded their eyes.
They each slowly stood up, slowly taking in their surroundings.

"Surprising, isn't it? I'll give you all a few minutes to take it in."

Immediately, all heads turned to the direction where the voice had just come from. The voice seemed hypnotic, and had a light British accent to it. Soon, everyone's eyes widened as they looked at the man himself, in the flesh, Lord Hisagi Onimusha.


To be CONTINUED

[The Demon Zabuza]

They hid a desert inside a ice wasteland? Wowh. Mabye it steals shinobi's chakra to power it? That's why the victims.

'Glanced at ice'? An inkling of how she gets trapped prehaps? Unless then find their target, in which case it would be that the gate gets destroyed, or can't be escaped from. Like Gluttony.

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by The Demon Zabuza

They hid a desert inside a ice wasteland? Wowh. Mabye it steals shinobi's chakra to power it? That's why the victims.

'Glanced at ice'? An inkling of how she gets trapped prehaps? Unless then find their target, in which case it would be that the gate gets destroyed, or can't be escaped from. Like Gluttony.

Hmm, you're close, but not on the target.

You get a gold star for posting!

[The Demon Zabuza]

Shinobi's fire affinity perhaps?

And why is it that british are always bad guys?

[shinmarubountyhunter]

you copied a lot onimusha was a former member

ikkaku from bleach and the name arguement from bleach

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by The Demon Zabuza

Shinobi's fire affinity perhaps?

And why is it that british are always bad guys?

I don't know, whoever said they were the bad guys to even begin with.

Originally Posted by shinmarubountyhunter

you copied a lot onimusha was a former member

ikkaku from bleach and the name arguement from bleach

-__-".....it's his last name, Kama Ikkaku.

And Onimusha? Huh?
I don't follow you.

[shinmarubountyhunter]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Chapter Four: The Leader of the Light Clan.

Just as Kama swung his black sword down, Nui began to instantly form one handed handsings with his free hand. Suddenly, a burst of pure light exploded out of Nui's hand. The power generating from it sent Kama flying. He smashed into a wall, and through it. Rubble and bricks fell down as Kama lay on the ground. A human-sized hole was in the wall. Soon, it was a normal circular hole because of the rubble falling in. Nui stood before it, gazing grimly at the sight.
"Light Style: Light Palm: Achieved."


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"What do you mean that someone's here?" Vatas questioned. "I said that someone is watching us." Toshi replied. Just then, an giant object appeared out of the dark sky. It was big, about the size of a house. Watching the object, Vatas and Toshi stood, surprised. Menrui hung on Vatas's shoulder, asleep as ever, drooling, and seemingly snoring.


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Kama stumbled out of the ruined wall, obviously injured. His left foot was uncontrolably shaking; part of his rib has been broken and his face had signs of burnt: it seemed as if he had took a blast to the face. Kama's short black sword was broken in half, the sharp point dangling. In his other hand was his scythe, smoke hanging from it and drifting up to the sky. "You managed to put a dent in me.....who are you exactly?" Kama muttered, his eyes alert.
Nui ruffled through his hair with his hand. "I already said, Nui Onimusha." Immediatly, Kama's eyebrows shot up. "Onimusha? You don't mean...yes, you are." With that, he raised his scythe at Nui.
"You are the Kage of the Light Clan!"






To Be Continued

onimushas account http://naruto.viz.com/forum/member.php?u=6558

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by shinmarubountyhunter

onimushas account http://naruto.viz.com/forum/member.php?u=6558

Oh.....not my fault, I just chose a random but cool name.
-shrugs-

[shinmarubountyhunter]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Oh.....not my fault, I just chose a random but cool name.
-shrugs-

lol is that your fav face

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

No, not really, lol.
It's just that I have a lot of situations that requires the usage of it.

[shinmarubountyhunter]

hey so vat when is your character gonna become a jonin

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

That's a little off-topic so if you want the answer, you'll have to PM me.

[shinmarubountyhunter]

oh wrong place i meant to make a thread like this my bad

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Lol, try to edit that quickly before a mod or someone sees it and de-reps you.

[shinmarubountyhunter]

did it

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by shinmarubountyhunter

hey so vat when is your character gonna become a jonin

You mean Vatas?
Or who?

[shinmarubountyhunter]

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

You mean Vatas?
Or who?

vatas

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Originally Posted by shinmarubountyhunter

vatas

Oh, he'll get there eventually, but you should know, everything's not what it seems, just keep reading on, you'll find out what I mean soon enough.

[shinmarubountyhunter]

vat i just read chapter 8 24 more chapters to go

[Vatanui AKA Pride]

Thanks, how was it?