Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story - Page 16

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 12:07 PM

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Originally Posted by nine tailed fury

im going to fall apart from the wonders that are vatas shadow pridus. im a critic. and on a scale of 1 to 10 i say.......

Spoiler:

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Originally Posted by Taker369

i hope to see Vatas fight soon awsome job by the way.

He's gonna fight.

nine tailed fury · 08-03-2009, 12:08 PM

awsome. i cant wait for today's vatas shadow pridus.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 12:10 PM

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Originally Posted by nine tailed fury

awsome. i cant wait for today's vatas shadow pridus.

This Arc is gonna end sometime close to Chapter 20.

nine tailed fury · 08-03-2009, 12:11 PM

*gets on knees and yells into the sky* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 12:23 PM

What are you sad about?
I promise you, the second and third arc are gonna be more exciting.

nine tailed fury · 08-03-2009, 12:25 PM

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 12:26 PM

Yep, and I can promise you, there will be a lot of new faces.

nine tailed fury · 08-03-2009, 03:06 PM

MAKE THE NEW EPISODE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *faints*

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 03:40 PM

Chapter Seventeen: Mission Succeeded, Sort Of

Nui sheathed his blade and calmly strolled over to the awed Hanataro and the smiling Toshi, who said, "Overdid it a bit, didn't you? With that Yata Orb." Nui remained silent while Hanataro immediately questioned her. "Yata Orb?"

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"Nui finished his fight, Vatas." Menrui muttered as he and Vatas stood before half a dozen armed guards. Vatas nodded and unsheathed his sword. With that, he waved his long blade in a clean swipe and suddenly, all six guards collapsed, all with deep gashes on them as their blood poured from their newly inflicted wounds and pured down to the streets. "I know, let's go." Vatas replied and broke into a dash. "Hey, Nui told us to not kill anyone! And wait for me!" Menrui yelled at Vatas and ran after him.

Note: We Interrupt this Story with a Brief Discussion Involving the Main Characters and the Author Himself!

The Author: "Welcome to the Brief Discussion Place, Where Our Characters Share Their Thoughts on the Story!"

Vatas: "Why the hell haven't I fought in any of these chapters?!"

Menrui: "Ditto!"

Nui: "................."

Toshi: "Oh shut up, it's because you guys clearly aren't important enough to have any involvement in this arc!"

Vatas & Menrui: -looks at Toshi angrily and slowly grasp their swords' handles-

The Author: "It's because, um, eh, oh look, this discussion time limit has exceeded! Now, back to the story!"

Vatas: "Now just wait a damn min--"

Toshi glanced at Hanataro and explained, "The Yata Orb is a special sealing object that only the Head of the Onimusha Family may posses. It is similar to the infamous Yata Shield."
Nui slowly nodded as Hanataro slowly absorbed Toshi's explanation into his mind. Suddenly, a shout came from the outside as, suddenly, dozens of figures swarmed from the outside, all holding weapons of the trade. They flashed angry at Nui and the group as they realized their Kage was missing. "What have you monsters done to our Kage?!" one ninja yelled, clutching his sword tightly.
Nui and Toshi grasped their sword in alarm as the large mob of ninjas charged right out at them. Suddenly, something whipped down from the roof of the building as it flashed in the sunlight and twirled around the hand of one of the ninjas leading the rampaging mob. The ninja gasped in surprise as it wrapped around his arm and with a pull, he was sent flying. Everyone immediately turned their eyes to the source and saw two figures, standing on the rooftop before the sun, their shadows reflecting in the light.
"What's up, Nui?" Vatas asked, smiling.

TO
BE CONTINUED.

nine tailed fury · 08-03-2009, 03:47 PM

I loved it

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 03:48 PM

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Originally Posted by nine tailed fury

I loved it

I wanted to add a little comedy to it.

nine tailed fury · 08-03-2009, 03:49 PM

lol character disscution

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 03:49 PM

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Originally Posted by nine tailed fury

lol character disscution

Yes, if it continued, we would have seen "Toshi VS Vatas and Menrui".

Taker369 · 08-03-2009, 03:56 PM

the more comedy the better awsome job ecspeically with school coming back soon.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 03:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Taker369

the more comedy the better awsome job ecspeically with school coming back soon.

Yep, we'll be having more of these "Character Discussions" more in the future.

Taker369 · 08-03-2009, 03:59 PM

lol i know were u got that from.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 04:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Taker369

lol i know were u got that from.

Where?

Taker369 · 08-03-2009, 04:10 PM

Bleach when the show preview of the next episode they argue and chat.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-03-2009, 04:11 PM

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Originally Posted by Taker369

Bleach when the show preview of the next episode they argue and chat.

Yep..

nine tailed fury · 08-03-2009, 04:12 PM

wow. i need to start watching bleach.

08-03-2009, 12:08 PM	#302
nine tailed fury Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The last casualty of the first generation. Posts: 2,693 Rep Power: 8	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story awsome. i cant wait for today's vatas shadow pridus.

08-03-2009, 12:11 PM	#304
nine tailed fury Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The last casualty of the first generation. Posts: 2,693 Rep Power: 8	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story gets on knees and yells into the sky NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

08-03-2009, 12:23 PM	#305
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story What are you sad about? I promise you, the second and third arc are gonna be more exciting. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

08-03-2009, 12:25 PM	#306
nine tailed fury Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The last casualty of the first generation. Posts: 2,693 Rep Power: 8	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

08-03-2009, 12:26 PM	#307
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Yep, and I can promise you, there will be a lot of new faces. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

08-03-2009, 03:06 PM	#308
nine tailed fury Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The last casualty of the first generation. Posts: 2,693 Rep Power: 8	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story MAKE THE NEW EPISODE ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! faints

08-03-2009, 03:40 PM	#309
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story *Chapter Seventeen: Mission Succeeded, Sort Of* Nui sheathed his blade and calmly strolled over to the awed Hanataro and the smiling Toshi, who said, "Overdid it a bit, didn't you? With that Yata Orb." Nui remained silent while Hanataro immediately questioned her. "Yata Orb?" __________________________________________________ _______________ "Nui finished his fight, Vatas." Menrui muttered as he and Vatas stood before half a dozen armed guards. Vatas nodded and unsheathed his sword. With that, he waved his long blade in a clean swipe and suddenly, all six guards collapsed, all with deep gashes on them as their blood poured from their newly inflicted wounds and pured down to the streets. "I know, let's go." Vatas replied and broke into a dash. "Hey, Nui told us to not kill anyone! And wait for me!" Menrui yelled at Vatas and ran after him. Note: We Interrupt this Story with a Brief Discussion Involving the Main Characters and the Author Himself! The Author: "Welcome to the Brief Discussion Place, Where Our Characters Share Their Thoughts on the Story!" Vatas: "Why the hell haven't I fought in any of these chapters?!" Menrui: "Ditto!" Nui: "................." Toshi: "Oh shut up, it's because you guys clearly aren't important enough to have any involvement in this arc!" Vatas & Menrui: -looks at Toshi angrily and slowly grasp their swords' handles- The Author: "It's because, um, eh, oh look, this discussion time limit has exceeded! Now, back to the story!" Vatas: "Now just wait a damn min--" Toshi glanced at Hanataro and explained, "The Yata Orb is a special sealing object that only the Head of the Onimusha Family may posses. It is similar to the infamous Yata Shield." Nui slowly nodded as Hanataro slowly absorbed Toshi's explanation into his mind. Suddenly, a shout came from the outside as, suddenly, dozens of figures swarmed from the outside, all holding weapons of the trade. They flashed angry at Nui and the group as they realized their Kage was missing. "What have you monsters done to our Kage?!" one ninja yelled, clutching his sword tightly. Nui and Toshi grasped their sword in alarm as the large mob of ninjas charged right out at them. Suddenly, something whipped down from the roof of the building as it flashed in the sunlight and twirled around the hand of one of the ninjas leading the rampaging mob. The ninja gasped in surprise as it wrapped around his arm and with a pull, he was sent flying. Everyone immediately turned their eyes to the source and saw two figures, standing on the rooftop before the sun, their shadows reflecting in the light. "What's up, Nui?" Vatas asked, smiling. TO BE CONTINUED. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

08-03-2009, 03:47 PM	#310
nine tailed fury Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The last casualty of the first generation. Posts: 2,693 Rep Power: 8	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story I loved it

08-03-2009, 03:49 PM	#312
nine tailed fury Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The last casualty of the first generation. Posts: 2,693 Rep Power: 8	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story lol character disscution

08-03-2009, 03:56 PM	#314
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08-03-2009, 04:10 PM	#318
Taker369 Has Surpassed Outdoor Activities Coca Cola Disciple Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Arkham Posts: 61,818 Rep Power: 25	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Bleach when the show preview of the next episode they argue and chat. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: Tifa Legacy is now in my sig =3 To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

08-03-2009, 04:12 PM	#320
nine tailed fury Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: The last casualty of the first generation. Posts: 2,693 Rep Power: 8	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story wow. i need to start watching bleach.

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