Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story - Page 124

yondaime · 04-30-2010, 06:29 PM

Just finished Chapter Twenty-Seven: Family Assassin Attempt. It was a good chapter. I can't believe that Nui's dad wants to kill him. BTW, is Senso that guy that was underground with Nui before the flashback?

Vatanui AKA Pride · 04-30-2010, 10:09 PM

Yes, Senso is the one in red; he's Nui's mentor in the flashback and the one underground with them in the present. Also, about Nui's dad wanting to kill him, don't take everything as it seems. As of now, this may sound like your cliche "I will avenge my family lolz!!?!!??1" thing, but things aren't what it seem like.

yondaime · 05-01-2010, 08:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Yes, Senso is the one in red; he's Nui's mentor in the flashback and the one underground with them in the present. Also, about Nui's dad wanting to kill him, don't take everything as it seems. As of now, this may sound like your cliche "I will avenge my family lolz!!?!!??1" thing, but things aren't what it seem like.

Ok, I'll keep that in mind.

yondaime · 05-02-2010, 12:31 PM

I just finished reading Chapter Twenty-Eight: Before The Interrogation. Not much action but we got to learn some more people. BTW, is Nami the Kage?

Vatanui AKA Pride · 05-04-2010, 04:10 PM

Nami isn't the Kage. There is no official Kage for the clan at this point, because it's still recovering from the betrayal.

Keep up the good work.

yondaime · 05-05-2010, 03:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Nami isn't the Kage. There is no official Kage for the clan at this point, because it's still recovering from the betrayal.

Keep up the good work.

Ok, I get it. Good work?

yondaime · 05-05-2010, 05:36 PM

Just finished reading Twenty-Nine: The Interrogation. It was alright not much action, suspenseful though. I wonder what Nui's reaction would be. Nothing for good work?

takuya · 05-05-2010, 05:58 PM

*Hands you a cookie*Happy now?

Vatanui AKA Pride · 05-05-2010, 06:24 PM

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Originally Posted by takuya

*Hands you a cookie*Happy now?

Very.

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Originally Posted by yondaime

Just finished reading Twenty-Nine: The Interrogation. It was alright not much action, suspenseful though. I wonder what Nui's reaction would be. Nothing for good work?

A chapter a day?xD

yondaime · 05-05-2010, 07:02 PM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Very.

A chapter a day?xD

What do you mean a chapter a day? Also, I think the cookie was given to me so, give it back! xD

Vatanui AKA Pride · 05-05-2010, 07:14 PM

I mean by you reading a chapter per day.

Nuh-Uh.

Teddie · 05-06-2010, 07:24 PM

Hmmm. I dunno. The turn back the pendelum is nice and all, but I would like some like present storyline stuff soon...ya know, when you're off hiatus xD
This doesnt cater to me though. I support your creative endeavors. Besides, Daikou's a beast anyways.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 05-06-2010, 07:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Chidori4

Hmmm. I dunno. The turn back the pendelum is nice and all, but I would like some like present storyline stuff soon...ya know, when you're off hiatus xD
This doesnt cater to me though. I support your creative endeavors. Besides, Daikou's a beast anyways.

Well, I say Turn Back the Pendulum should end in about sometime near July or late June if I go at normal pace.

But Vatas's storyline will start off strange.

You like Daikou?

SakuraGirl · 05-06-2010, 07:28 PM

do you need more character?

Teddie · 05-06-2010, 07:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Well, I say Turn Back the Pendulum should end in about sometime near July or late June if I go at normal pace.

But Vatas's storyline will start off strange.

You like Daikou?

Sounds like a plan

I usually like strange. Why do you think I named my main character Lavernius?

Eh, kinda. He's a bamf for the most part.

We really like the cookie monster tonight

Vatanui AKA Pride · 05-06-2010, 07:47 PM

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Originally Posted by SakuraGirl

do you need more character?

If you have any ideas, then feel free to submit them to me.

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Originally Posted by Chidori4

Sounds like a plan

I usually like strange. Why do you think I named my main character Lavernius?

Eh, kinda. He's a bamf for the most part.

We really like the cookie monster tonight

Tis indeed.

Because it's a name filled with badassery?

For now, he is.

Indeed, my friend.

What do you think of Sigma?

Teddie · 05-06-2010, 08:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

If you have any ideas, then feel free to submit them to me.

Tis indeed.

Because it's a name filled with badassery?

For now, he is.

Indeed, my friend.

What do you think of Sigma?

Uh, yes it is badassery

FOR NOW? DOES HE BECOME....NON BAMF?

Quite.

Eh, not incredibly striking. Just kinda there.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 05-06-2010, 08:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Chidori4

Uh, yes it is badassery

FOR NOW? DOES HE BECOME....NON BAMF?

Quite.

Eh, not incredibly striking. Just kinda there.

Nah, he just beats up a lot of people in the present and becomes even more badassery material.

Well, he'll be an important character in the future.

Teddie · 05-07-2010, 03:45 AM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Nah, he just beats up a lot of people in the present and becomes even more badassery material.

Well, he'll be an important character in the future.

AHAHAHH YES!

Oooooooh. Hmmmm. Interesting.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 05-07-2010, 03:16 PM

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Originally Posted by Chidori4

AHAHAHH YES!

Oooooooh. Hmmmm. Interesting.

Cookie Monster FTW!

Just like DBZ.

He's like your average joe though.

04-30-2010, 06:29 PM	#2461
yondaime Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 4,681 Rep Power: 9	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Just finished Chapter Twenty-Seven: Family Assassin Attempt. It was a good chapter. I can't believe that Nui's dad wants to kill him. BTW, is Senso that guy that was underground with Nui before the flashback?

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Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Yes, Senso is the one in red; he's Nui's mentor in the flashback and the one underground with them in the present. Also, about Nui's dad wanting to kill him, don't take everything as it seems. As of now, this may sound like your cliche "I will avenge my family lolz!!?!!??1" thing, but things aren't what it seem like. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

05-02-2010, 12:31 PM	#2464
yondaime Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 4,681 Rep Power: 9	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story I just finished reading Chapter Twenty-Eight: Before The Interrogation. Not much action but we got to learn some more people. BTW, is Nami the Kage?

05-04-2010, 04:10 PM	#2465
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Nami isn't the Kage. There is no official Kage for the clan at this point, because it's still recovering from the betrayal. Keep up the good work. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

05-05-2010, 05:36 PM	#2467
yondaime Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 4,681 Rep Power: 9	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Just finished reading Twenty-Nine: The Interrogation. It was alright not much action, suspenseful though. I wonder what Nui's reaction would be. Nothing for good work?

05-05-2010, 05:58 PM	#2468
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,538 Rep Power: 12	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Hands you a cookieHappy now? __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

05-05-2010, 07:14 PM	#2471
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story I mean by you reading a chapter per day. Nuh-Uh. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

05-06-2010, 07:24 PM	#2472
Teddie Sage of Raw Honey Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Inside your television! Posts: 2,702 Rep Power: 8	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Hmmm. I dunno. The turn back the pendelum is nice and all, but I would like some like present storyline stuff soon...ya know, when you're off hiatus xD This doesnt cater to me though. I support your creative endeavors. Besides, Daikou's a beast anyways. __________________ Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Teddie isn't here anymore. Goodbye.

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