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Sweet, do it bro.
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WCA Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat.
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Well, it'll either be Friday or Saturday. xD
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So, Saturday it is I guess. lol
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Sage of Raw Honey
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: Inside your television!
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Lolcats @^
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Cradle Robber
Join Date: May 2009
Location: In front of a closet waiting for Vat to get out.
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I cant wait for the new chapter
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has a farm...
WCA Join Date: Mar 2009
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I'll be posting it this evening.
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has a farm...
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Turn Back the Pendulum Mini-Arc
Chapter Eighty-Eight: When Things Start to Go Bad Note: Sorry for the wait, but this chapter is now here...! There is a zero percent chance that I won't be finishing this chapter, just you know. Also, this is also the first chapter when things start to go "interesting", indeed. Also, for other news, the second interview will began after the Turn Back the Pendulum Mini-Arc, more or less. Anyways, it's now time for this chapter...! Hari offered a grunt. Meanwhile, Pat said nothing, oblivious to Hari's grunt. His eyes were widened as his recent discovery; the blue lights above him shone on Pat and Hari, nearly blinding them. Slowly but silently, an intrigued Pat quietly approached the room beyond him. Meanwhile, Hari followed suit, too curious. The room beyond them was seemingly high-tech; the large room was composed of several dozen tables. On each of the tables were an array of technologies and sciences, ranging from computers, to scientific vials that contained strange substances and liquids of varying colors, to several row-by-row tables that were set to several firearms of and rounds of bullets that beside the many types of guns. On all five walls of the room, several large plasma widescreen televisions were latched onto the wall. "This definitely isn't your average orphanage home." Hari commented to himself, as Pat nodded in return. As the two slowly halted, now in the center of the room, they glanced around them, eying all the various items around them. After a few glances here and there, Pat and Hari slowly approached the set of long tables east of them, where various firearms and other weapons laid. "I agree," Pat then slowly replied to Hari, as he picked up a sleek black shotgun. The shotgun seemed new and was surprisingly heavy as normal shotguns. Hari then glanced at the shotgun that Pat was holding with interest. "A Blackly Nex Shotgun. It's bullet caliber is .345. Bullet speed is 2,002.45 meters per second." Hari then observed after a glance, as Pat offered a glance. "When did you became a firearms' expert?" he questioned curiously. In return, Hari then offered Pat a strange smile. "Let's just say, I just know." he said with a silver gleam in his eyes. Pat in return said nothing, as he was now interested in another weapon. Picking up a pitch black pistol, he then glanced at Hari, who immediately understood. "Yex Nightly Pistol, bullet caliber .234. Speed movement is 3,450.56 meters per second." Hari soon calculated, as Pat then nodded. Soon setting the pistol down along with the shotgun, he and Hari then turned to the large television mounted on the wall in front of them. "What do think is this?" Hari asked, as Pat shrugged. However, just as they turned to face the television directly, a strange invisible mechanic snapped on. As if this mechanic had been pre-set before, this mechanic snapped to a start, as a abrupt white glow in the television instantly appeared, to Hari's and Pat's surprise. Stopping in their tracks, a large echo then appeared around them, coming from an unknown source. "Welcome to the Cami Island Branch Headquarters of the Black Nyx Institute." the voice was not feminine nor male, and seemed to have no source, as it traveled from around the whole large room. However, that particular voice had a sense of power in it, a certain power that somehow drove both two children to their knees in response to it. Pat and Hari's eyes then turned to the large television, where the words "Password?" were now on the screen. What is this? Pat thought to himself, as he then said nothing. Hari meanwhile too remained silent, as the word remained on the screen. Eventually, the silence was released, as Pat began to open his mouth to answer. "The Password is...Nyx?" he guessed, as the word then abruptly disappeared from the screen. "Invalid Code. Have a good day." the cold voice then said once again, with a hint of steel in it, as the floor Pat and Hari was standing on suddenly split and half. As both two's eyes widened in surprise, their feet left the floor, which now was in two segments, as gravity overcame them and they started falling, into a dark pit below, leading them into an unknown place. __________________________________________________ _______________ On the third floor of the orphanage building was where the cafeteria was. The cafeteria was composed of a large rectangle-shaped room. A long table was laid in the center of the room where several worn-out chairs were set, with orphans sitting in them. Ms.Kat too was present, as she sat on the last chair, farthest from the table, as if sitting near the orphans sickened her. As the orphans' eyes remained on the dirty dishes on nearby them, they glanced at the set of peas and little food on their dishes in hunger. As Ms.Kat said nothing, silent as a rock, the orphans ate slowly. Then a large noise was heard above. As the orphans then stopped devouring their dinner and glanced at the ceiling above them, Ms.Kat too glance at the ceiling in question. And she said nothing, as a soft yet wicked smile appeared on her lips. The ceiling suddenly collapsed, as two screams were heard from above. Almost immediately, the orphans sitting retreated from the table, near the walls and into safety as the ceiling immediately crashed onto the table, to Ms.Kat's pleasure. On impact, a cloud of dust was released, which covered the whole room in a swirly mist. As Ms.Kat remained sitting, a broad smile was on her face. Meanwhile, the orphans remained latched onto the walls, terrified. Eventually, the cloud of dust cleared, as Ms.Kat and the surrounding orphans found themselves staring at two children amidst the collateral damage. Hari's stomach growled. "Just in time for dinner," he murmured as he and Pat sat in the ruins of the ceiling and table. To be continued...
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Yay the chapter has come
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has a farm...
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Any parts you really liked?
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Sort of odd, finding a place that has more guns than the gun store then dropping into the middle of the caferteria.
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Cradle Robber
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not really l just liked the overall chapter
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Thanks, who's your favorite character? xD
Indeed.
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In the whole story i like menrui.
In the turn back the pendelum i like pat
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Menrui will have an interesting past.
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I hope he does.
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Did Pat keep the Pistol?
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You just what Pat to be badass as a kid too, Sasori!xD
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No, but like I told you in PM, he'll have a weapon sort of like that in the present.
He will, trust me. Indeed.
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Yes, I'm a bit biased.
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Indeed you are.
------------------- You can always reply to my PM for more spoilers relating his present weapon[s].
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