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08-12-2011, 10:55 AM
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Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
So, yeah. This is a original story of mine I wrote like 5 minutes ago.
By the way don't expect like a huge romance or anything here. Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy "Boy loves girl, girl loves boy. Boy loves girl, girl loves boy." I had been saying this to myself for weeks, I was so happy when I met her. She may be the best thing that's ever happened to me. I may love her to much, but our love is so real I don't even care. I can't wait to see her today. I wonder what we'll do? Maybe catch a movie or just go to the park or something. It won't matter as long as I'm with her. I'm here. I walk up to the door and open it. It was unlocked, how strange.Boy's POV Girl's POV I'm scared. I don't know what I'm doing. Who is he and why is he doing this? I don't even know who would do something like this. I'm scared to death right now, I just hope I make it through this alive and unscathed. Please god, let me get through this. I pick up the phone and I call him. He says he'll be over as soon as he can. I can only hope he gets here soon. Other Boy's POV I know that something's wrong, I can tell. I drive to her house, I brought a switchblade just in case of, well anything happening. I'm worried. What will I have to do? What will happen? These are just some of the questions going through my head right now. How am I supposed to know what I'm doing is right or not? I'm worried for my own safety and everyone else's. This is no time to be selfish. I drive up to the house, knock on the door, and I get an answer. Third Person POV The boy walks into the house."Who are you and what are you doing here?!" Says the other boy. The boy looks over. "Huh? Who are you?" Says the boy. The other boy looks at him angrily and points at the girl. "I'm her boyfriend!" The girl is sitting on the couch scared and shocked. She doesn't know what's going on. The boy sees the girl and ignores the other boy's statement and walks over to the girl. "You're here." He smiles. The girl stands up and is about to get away but the boy is closing in. The other boy tries to stop the boy, but the boy pushes him away. The boy closes in on the girl with his arms wide open. The other boy walks up from behind with the switchblade and stabs the boy. The boy spits out blood and falls over. "Oh god." The other boy says. "I-I killed him." The other boy looks at his hands in horror. "T-these are the hands that killed him. I-I'm a murderer." He falls down on the ground in shock and mumbles to himself. The girl, with blood on her face, stares at the body. "W-what just happened?" The girl is in shock. "W-what is going on?" She is now on her knees in shock and lays her head down. "I-is he-" She stops."H-he's, dead." The girl laughs.
So yeah, original story, so tell me what you thought.
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08-12-2011, 01:29 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
Hmmmm, gory, me likey ~crazy laugh~
(I like your profile pic, hahaha) EDIT; I meant sig pic xD thinking of FB for a sec there
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08-12-2011, 01:41 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
Awesome!!
And Depressing xD
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08-12-2011, 01:55 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
Its Like School Days . :3
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08-12-2011, 01:56 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
Good story but title made me think of this:
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
This Story Made Me Think Of This . o.o
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08-12-2011, 02:40 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
I saw death and I was like "I understand why Toni" p_o
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08-12-2011, 09:32 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
O-o weird.
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08-12-2011, 09:34 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
Lulzer.
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08-12-2011, 09:42 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
Its pretty good.
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08-12-2011, 09:43 PM
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Re: Boy loves Girl, Girl loves Boy (read it and you'll understand)
Thankz you Leo.
I actually made it because I felt like writing a really depressing story p.o
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You're welcome, and Thats cool.
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I knowz
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I've never seen school days so I have no idea what you people mean.
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