Ishtar: Origins

Ishtar · 07-14-2010, 09:31 AM

Characters:

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Chapters:

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Ishtar Butai Rekidaishi

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Just a little reminder to everyone:
When I post a chapter, don't assume I'm done with it yet, I am actually adding more and editing out the mistakes and adding whatever punctuaction I missed. So you'll most likely be reading the "Raw version" when it first gets released within the first ten minutes.

YumYumBubblegum · 07-15-2010, 02:31 AM

Hey, how are ya Ishtar?

Ishtar · 07-19-2010, 02:43 PM

Im good. Im currently writing the descriptions of the many charcters that I am including. My favorite character I have been working on is Naraku and Ishtar, Those are my primary goals, second is to come up with a devious plot, and so on and so forth until I finally have a story going on. I already have the plot so far, All I need are character developments. I mean, I have all the characters created, but I still need to fine tweak them and confirm they're roles into the story.

Slack 40 · 07-19-2010, 02:49 PM

YES KATSURO FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is the fanfic right?

Ishtar · 07-19-2010, 02:55 PM

Yes it is Slack. Say, Whats your favorite part thats going to be included besides Katsuro in thew story? Like whats going to be your favorite part?

Kiko-kun · 07-19-2010, 03:03 PM

Can you write the first chapter? xDD

Naraku · 07-19-2010, 03:09 PM

Yes, I can write the first chapter if you want xD

I'll get to work and It'll be here in the next few days.

Here is a sneak peak of one of my chapters >>>> Link

puppetmaster zack · 07-19-2010, 03:37 PM

i am in this right right i am a e-warrior

Ishtar · 07-19-2010, 04:05 PM

Yes you are Zack. :P You play an important role in the story.

puppetmaster zack · 07-19-2010, 04:06 PM

i do i do yes i am the only rebel woops do u want me to dellete this

Ishtar · 07-19-2010, 04:11 PM

Some people will already know, some dont have a clue whats going on. delete it if you want, Some wont get what you mean.

puppetmaster zack · 07-19-2010, 04:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Ishtar

Some people will already know, some dont have a clue whats going on. delete it if you want, Some wont get what you mean.

ok well so the get a hint and hey will the chapters be posted on here ?

Ishtar · 07-19-2010, 04:20 PM

Of course they will.

puppetmaster zack · 07-19-2010, 04:21 PM

ok when is the first one goin to be ready

Ishtar · 07-19-2010, 04:24 PM

I'd say roughly tomorrow.

puppetmaster zack · 07-19-2010, 04:29 PM

ok ok good cant wait to read it

Slack 40 · 07-19-2010, 06:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Ishtar

Yes it is Slack. Say, Whats your favorite part thats going to be included besides Katsuro in thew story? Like whats going to be your favorite part?

Everything else of corse xD

Ishtar · 07-19-2010, 06:37 PM

Hey, I got some of the characters up there. But I need to fit in they're descriptions now. Then write the first chapter. What do you think of it?

puppetmaster zack · 07-19-2010, 06:39 PM

.....dam i aint there yet

Ishtar · 07-19-2010, 07:02 PM

What do you think of the characters though? Any of them spark your curiousity?

07-14-2010, 09:31 AM	#1
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Ishtar: Origins Characters: Spoiler: Ishtar Spoiler: Ishtar has recently graduated from the academy at the age of 12. He lives in the village hidden in the elements. His jutsu consists of lesser fire bullets that he can shoot from his mouth and small water bullets. He has black hair and blue eyes and has acquired his very own sword from Sagara, the Taokage. His swords name is Butaiken literally meaning Elemental Sword. Description: Blue eyes, spiked black hair. Katsuro Spoiler: To be revealed later on. He also likes to drink liqueur in a flask. Kejon Spoiler: Kejon is the rank of jonin and has privileges of having his own 3 man squad, including Ishtar. He is 30 years old with blonde hair. He sort of has this thing going on with Hugh. Both personal and non-personal. He has a sword named Kinbu, his brother Keo was killed by a mysterious man. Description: Spiked blonde hair, wears a tao jonin vest. It is blue in color. The Village hidden in the elements Spoiler: This village has no barrier to keep intruders out. Mugendai Karuto Spoiler: The Mugendai Karuto, literally meaning "Infinity Cult." Mikomi Spoiler: Hotheaded? Cheerful 11 year old girl who graduated from the ninja academy. She is learning medical ninjutsu. She also has her pink hair done up in a bun twist with emerald eyes. Lilina Spoiler: She is 11 and she has a big crush on Ishtar, Her weapon is a steel bow with some arrows. Like Mikomi and Ishtar, she is placed in Kejon's squad. She has long purple hair, and pupiless amber eyes, favorite color is green. Sagara Spoiler: The sixth taokage of the elemental village, He has unreal ability in many varieties of elements. Raiku Spoiler: The taokage's assistant, He is also his student, he has started to train Ishtar on how to wield Butaiken. Kai Spoiler: Kai is Raiku's little brother. He is 13 years of age with messy black hair and red eyes. Toshiro Spoiler: He is from the Mugendai Karuto. Toshiro loves to fight. He lives to battle and defeat opponents. Hence the quote: "Man, I am itching to fight!" Puppet Master Zack Spoiler: Zack has been shown to have a mummy wrapped in bandages on the dining room table of the Mugendai Karuto. Not much is known about this puppetmaster. Naraku Spoiler: Naraku appeared to be looking for something.......or someone. His abilities can consist of moving objects on will, wielding a sword, absorbing jutsu and using genjutsu by placing his hand on top of a victim's head, thus taking over the mind. he wears shades, a hood and his mouth is wrapped in bandages. Queen (of the darkness) Spoiler: Queen seems like a twisted person at first, she's not that bad a person once you get to know her. The other members of the Mugendai Karuto has gotten used to her twisted personality, but they know deep inside she is pretending. Akio, Lord of puppets Spoiler: He rivals Zack wirh puppetry. Akasun Spoiler: She acts like the servant for the cult, yet she is still the same rank as the other members. Hugh Spoiler: Little is known about this cheery 29 year old female. She has short spiky brown hair with blue eyes, She has been known to harden her skin so far, She is also Naraku's partner, Or as she likes to call him, "Partner in crime". Kitsune Spoiler: She is a female, The newest addition to the Mugendai Karuto. "Tanoth" Spoiler: No one knows his real name, "Tanoth" is actually his codename that he lives by. He literally hides within peoples shadows without being detected. Zero Spoiler: A spiky blonde haired man with a skull dragon mask on with red glowing eye sockets and two protruding horns. The mysterious leader of the Mugendai Karuto. All cult members wear black robes with flame designs at the bottom of it. Only the zealots have the additional hoods. Normal cult members wear red robes. Zero, the leader wears a purple jewel embedded cloak. Hana Spoiler: Blue eyes with black hair. She is Ishtar's mother, wears an apron Sosuke Spoiler: Ishtar's father has brown hair and blue eyes, also wears glasses. Emina Kami Spoiler: Emina hails from the Kami Clan of the village hidden in the water. She had stolen the comb of transformation and fled the place she used to call home. The Kami clan has been exterminated by an unknown wanderer. She is classified as a missing nin Chapters: Spoiler: The Mugendai Karuto Spoiler: Chapter 1: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...2&postcount=24 Chapter 2: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...1&postcount=42 Chapter 3: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...7&postcount=52 Chapter 4: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...3&postcount=57 Chapter 5: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...0&postcount=82 Chapter 6: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...0&postcount=97 Chapter 7: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=108 Chapter 8: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=118 Chapter 9: http://www.naruto.viz.com/forum/show...&postcount=119 Chapter 10: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=128 C-Rank Mission! Delivery of the blade and the Kami ninja! Spoiler: Chapter 11: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost.php?p=3642629=142 Chapter 12: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=151 Chapter 13: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=176 Chapter 14: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=208 Chapter 15: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=232 Chapter 16: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=238 Chapter 17: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=253 Chapter 18: http://www.naruto.viz.com/forum/show...&postcount=307 Chapter 19: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=355 Chapter 20: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=361 New training mission: Grasping the element of air! Spoiler: Chapter 21: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=369 Chapter 22: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=370 Chapter 23: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=375 Chapter 24: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=385 Chapter 25: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=390 Chapter 26: http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...&postcount=407 Chapter 27: http://www.naruto.viz.com/forum/show...&postcount=420 Chapter 28: http://www.naruto.viz.com/forum/show...&postcount=421 Chapter 29: Chapter 30: Katsuro Arc (Unnamed) Mission Arc 3 (Unnamed) Chunin Exams Arc Part 1 Chunin Exams Arc Part 2 Katsuro Arc 2 (Unnamed) Village defection Arc Ishtar vs Kejon Arc Ishtar Butai Rekidaishi Spoiler: Butai Rekidaishi, literally meaning "Element Chronicles" is part 2 of Ishtar. Stay tuned for Ishtar Butai Rekidaishi, As it is several years into the future. Just a little reminder to everyone: When I post a chapter, don't assume I'm done with it yet, I am actually adding more and editing out the mistakes and adding whatever punctuaction I missed. So you'll most likely be reading the "Raw version" when it first gets released within the first ten minutes. Last edited by Ishtar; 07-29-2011 at 12:43 PM. Reason: Chapter update

07-15-2010, 02:31 AM	#2
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07-19-2010, 02:43 PM	#3
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Im good. Im currently writing the descriptions of the many charcters that I am including. My favorite character I have been working on is Naraku and Ishtar, Those are my primary goals, second is to come up with a devious plot, and so on and so forth until I finally have a story going on. I already have the plot so far, All I need are character developments. I mean, I have all the characters created, but I still need to fine tweak them and confirm they're roles into the story.

07-19-2010, 02:49 PM	#4
Slack 40 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Off and on Posts: 2,162 Rep Power: 7	Re: Ishtar YES KATSURO FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is the fanfic right? __________________ /l/l/l (^-^) My sword will eat your chakra!! /_!_\ Put this on your siggy if you love Kisame <^^^^> < ( 油 ) > </(/`_`\)\> v/o\ v /o\v *To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.* Swinging a sword at a hot pirate's basically first base

07-19-2010, 02:55 PM	#5
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Yes it is Slack. Say, Whats your favorite part thats going to be included besides Katsuro in thew story? Like whats going to be your favorite part?

07-19-2010, 03:03 PM	#6
Kiko-kun Jonin Formerly a Hyuuga Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: With my sidekicks. cough Trustie cough Posts: 10,208 Rep Power: 12	Re: Ishtar Can you write the first chapter? xDD __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Je n'aime pas toi. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. "Somewhere in the world there is a tree that is tirelessly working to produce oxygen for you. I think you owe that tree an apology." 'I am of the opinion that many a healthy relationship can be based purely on chloroform. Chloroform and lies. ' ~ Gol

07-19-2010, 03:09 PM	#7
Naraku Genin Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: . Posts: 352 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Yes, I can write the first chapter if you want xD I'll get to work and It'll be here in the next few days. Here is a sneak peak of one of my chapters >>>> Link __________________ Inu Yasha was here. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-19-2010, 03:37 PM	#8
puppetmaster zack Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Not sure anymore. Maybe in a burning house. Posts: 2,434 Rep Power: 8	Re: Ishtar i am in this right right i am a e-warrior __________________ I am PM Zack. Don't fear me. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-19-2010, 04:05 PM	#9
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Yes you are Zack. :P You play an important role in the story.

07-19-2010, 04:06 PM	#10
puppetmaster zack Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Not sure anymore. Maybe in a burning house. Posts: 2,434 Rep Power: 8	Re: Ishtar i do i do yes i am the only rebel woops do u want me to dellete this __________________ I am PM Zack. Don't fear me. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-19-2010, 04:11 PM	#11
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Some people will already know, some dont have a clue whats going on. delete it if you want, Some wont get what you mean.

07-19-2010, 04:20 PM	#13
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Of course they will.

07-19-2010, 04:21 PM	#14
puppetmaster zack Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Not sure anymore. Maybe in a burning house. Posts: 2,434 Rep Power: 8	Re: Ishtar ok when is the first one goin to be ready __________________ I am PM Zack. Don't fear me. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-19-2010, 04:24 PM	#15
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar I'd say roughly tomorrow.

07-19-2010, 04:29 PM	#16
puppetmaster zack Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Not sure anymore. Maybe in a burning house. Posts: 2,434 Rep Power: 8	Re: Ishtar ok ok good cant wait to read it __________________ I am PM Zack. Don't fear me. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-19-2010, 06:37 PM	#18
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar Hey, I got some of the characters up there. But I need to fit in they're descriptions now. Then write the first chapter. What do you think of it?

07-19-2010, 06:39 PM	#19
puppetmaster zack Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Not sure anymore. Maybe in a burning house. Posts: 2,434 Rep Power: 8	Re: Ishtar .....dam i aint there yet __________________ I am PM Zack. Don't fear me. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-19-2010, 07:02 PM	#20
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ishtar What do you think of the characters though? Any of them spark your curiousity?

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