The legendary rogue Marcus - Page 4

itachifan100 · 08-09-2009, 02:37 PM

perfect

Chindori · 08-09-2009, 02:38 PM

That was supose to be the shortest chapter

Chidori stream · 08-09-2009, 02:45 PM

Yeah next chapter comes out tomorrow because it was short

itachifan100 · 08-09-2009, 02:50 PM

Sasuke/Itachi · 08-09-2009, 06:10 PM

cool so far. I know one thing. Marcus will be training

Chidori stream · 08-09-2009, 06:12 PM

The arc is over. The poll is closed I'll need to delete it now.

Chidori stream · 08-09-2009, 06:18 PM

Man I can't delete that poll.Oh well. Tomorrow is when the next chapter will come. Here is a thing to know what it is about

Spoiler:

HinaUchihatheRogue2 · 08-09-2009, 06:29 PM

.........?

kentaru · 08-09-2009, 07:38 PM

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Originally Posted by itachifan100

XD EPIC parking fail

Chidori stream · 08-11-2009, 05:48 PM

I'm about to begin

Chidori stream · 08-11-2009, 06:04 PM

Chapter 5 akatsuki 2nd division

Marcus and Sassay are at the hot springs relaxing tell Marcu said this" So who is this akatsuki 2nd division?". " So I'll tll you everything. It started when a rogue ninja wqnted power great power. So he decided that to maintane that goal he needs to form a group of talented ninja. He got 6. Together they were know as the akatsuki 2nd division..They were takin down villages and imprisoning tailed beast host. Eventual most members quit because the leadership wasn't good and also everybody hated them. So the only members left are Zara and Kentaru. I was once a member of the group but left" explain Sassay.
"Zara and kentaru are after us now so I'll need to train you hard. So we are going to make the ultimte jutsu combine wih your lightning chakra and your other one." said Sasa. ""SO I knoq every member of my clan have two chakra natures but why start raining now?" asked Marcus. "That is easy. We may end up fighting the akatsuki 2nd division or the black rains so we need to be prepare. Here take these fingers and hold it. It will explain your chakra nature." said Sassa giving him the paper. Marcus ttook the paper and hold it few seconds later it ripped." You havethe wind change of chakra. The wind change of chakra is rare and very useful for shortand medium range fights" explain Sassay. Few hour later they met in the woods. He handed him a leaf. Try to cut the leaf with only chakra." said Sassay. Marcus nods and does what he says.

To be contunued

kentaru · 08-11-2009, 07:42 PM

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Originally Posted by Chidori stream

Chapter 5 akatsuki 2nd division

Marcus and Sassay are at the hot springs relaxing tell Marcu said this" So who is this akatsuki 2nd division?". " So I'll tll you everything. It started when a rogue ninja wqnted power great power. So he decided that to maintane that goal he needs to form a group of talented ninja. He got 6. Together they were know as the akatsuki 2nd division..They were takin down villages and imprisoning tailed beast host. Eventual most members quit because the leadership wasn't good and also everybody hated them. So the only members left are Zara and Kentaru. I was once a member of the group but left" explain Sassay.
"Zara and kentaru are after us now so I'll need to train you hard. So we are going to make the ultimte jutsu combine wih your lightning chakra and your other one." said Sasa. ""SO I knoq every member of my clan have two chakra natures but why start raining now?" asked Marcus. "That is easy. We may end up fighting the akatsuki 2nd division or the black rains so we need to be prepare. Here take these fingers and hold it. It will explain your chakra nature." said Sassa giving him the paper. Marcus ttook the paper and hold it few seconds later it ripped." You havethe wind change of chakra. The wind change of chakra is rare and very useful for shortand medium range fights" explain Sassay. Few hour later they met in the woods. He handed him a leaf. Try to cut the leaf with only chakra." said Sassay. Marcus nods and does what he says.

To be contunued

...wow ton of spelling errors

AkatsukiMember · 08-14-2009, 05:51 PM

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...wow ton of spelling errors

Yeah, but I like it.

And I'm still waiting for my debute.

itachifan100 · 08-14-2009, 06:15 PM

awesome

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08-09-2009, 02:37 PM	#61
itachifan100 Banned Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: "Join me tomorrow when i rape a cow"~Dane Cook Posts: 8,182 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus perfect

08-09-2009, 02:38 PM	#62
Chindori Genin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Feeding cows Posts: 253 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus That was supose to be the shortest chapter

08-09-2009, 02:45 PM	#63
Chidori stream Chunin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the ninja world Posts: 904 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus Yeah next chapter comes out tomorrow because it was short

08-09-2009, 02:50 PM	#64
itachifan100 Banned Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: "Join me tomorrow when i rape a cow"~Dane Cook Posts: 8,182 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus

08-09-2009, 06:10 PM	#65
Sasuke/Itachi Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Village hidden in the fire Posts: 2,514 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus cool so far. I know one thing. Marcus will be training

08-09-2009, 06:12 PM	#66
Chidori stream Chunin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the ninja world Posts: 904 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus The arc is over. The poll is closed I'll need to delete it now.

08-09-2009, 06:18 PM	#67
Chidori stream Chunin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the ninja world Posts: 904 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus Man I can't delete that poll.Oh well. Tomorrow is when the next chapter will come. Here is a thing to know what it is about Spoiler: Marcus doeses the change of chakra training. Can his second chakra nature help him survive the world. Even when two assins are after him

08-09-2009, 06:29 PM	#68
HinaUchihatheRogue2 Chunin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: searching for my twin brother Sasuke! Posts: 1,056 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus .........?

08-11-2009, 05:48 PM	#70
Chidori stream Chunin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the ninja world Posts: 904 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus I'm about to begin

08-11-2009, 06:04 PM	#71
Chidori stream Chunin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: In the ninja world Posts: 904 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus Chapter 5 akatsuki 2nd division Marcus and Sassay are at the hot springs relaxing tell Marcu said this" So who is this akatsuki 2nd division?". " So I'll tll you everything. It started when a rogue ninja wqnted power great power. So he decided that to maintane that goal he needs to form a group of talented ninja. He got 6. Together they were know as the akatsuki 2nd division..They were takin down villages and imprisoning tailed beast host. Eventual most members quit because the leadership wasn't good and also everybody hated them. So the only members left are Zara and Kentaru. I was once a member of the group but left" explain Sassay. "Zara and kentaru are after us now so I'll need to train you hard. So we are going to make the ultimte jutsu combine wih your lightning chakra and your other one." said Sasa. ""SO I knoq every member of my clan have two chakra natures but why start raining now?" asked Marcus. "That is easy. We may end up fighting the akatsuki 2nd division or the black rains so we need to be prepare. Here take these fingers and hold it. It will explain your chakra nature." said Sassa giving him the paper. Marcus ttook the paper and hold it few seconds later it ripped." You havethe wind change of chakra. The wind change of chakra is rare and very useful for shortand medium range fights" explain Sassay. Few hour later they met in the woods. He handed him a leaf. Try to cut the leaf with only chakra." said Sassay. Marcus nods and does what he says. To be contunued

08-14-2009, 06:15 PM	#74
itachifan100 Banned Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: "Join me tomorrow when i rape a cow"~Dane Cook Posts: 8,182 Rep Power: 0	Re: The legendary rogue Marcus awesome

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