The village hidden in the sand storm *CLOSED*

[Deadman]

The village hidden in the sand storm

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*The village is underground and surrounded by ancient statues, and the houses are a bit old, short, strong built and stuck together in one piece, with a large temple for the kazekage and co-kage that is built from gold and titanium and surrounded with jewels with large posts and ancient writing all over the temple with sand guard protecting it with their lives, and it has a giant 150 foot high gate protected by the hidden sand demon that cannot be opened by anyone other than the kazekage. Our weather is extreme heat and we have an internal sun that is always shining.


*The birth of the new sand village: this is the story of the village and how it turned up like this, it started when a group of village enemies (unknown) gathered there troops and used ((Summoning: Impure World Resurrection)) to bring back some dead ninjas for a period of time to destroy the village, the bloodless assault lasted long and it showed no mercy to anyone. After the death of the 5th kazekage Gaara, the ministry of sand had to chose a new kazekage fast, but the war didn't wait; the armies attacked the village and causing even more destruction and kills, the ministry didn't know what to do, the attack continued and the villagers where terrified and the sand armies had no instructor, it was a disaster!
in the end after the complete devastation there was nothing left to destroy, and the enemies wanted the village's key but the ministry refused to give up, but on the other hand everybody was waiting for the new kazekage to appear, and he appeared without there notice, the 6th kazekage (Deadman) appeared and forced the enemies to retreat in a tactical way (hey made a mirage of a 10'000 men army) and he followed them by a huge sand tsunami, in believe that the new kazekage came with mighty enforcements after the destruction of the village the conflicts retreated from the village with nothing left behind them but disaster. After that long war the kazekage and his companions putt all there energy into rebuilding the village, 5 years later the village went back to normal but with a few edits on the buildings, the ministry of sand and the villagers and the kazekage's pride decided to reward the kazekage for saving the village, so they built a mighty temple for him, but the 6th kazekage didn't finish yet with the village, he knew that if the village stays like this the enemies will come back and attack the village again, so he berried the village under the sand, then he used all his energy and chakara to create a huge sand storm, his sand storm is created to hide the village's gate "with it's powerful winds a tornadoes" with out stopping, by this no one can ever spot the village (and that's why I called it the village hidden in the sandstorm), the only way to enter is to find the giant gate and pass the beast guarding it, but only the sand villagers can do so, with there ability to stand the tough conditions of the sand storm and there special type chakara "given from the Kazekage when they first join" they can spot the gate, pass the beast then open the doors of the village, and only the sand storm villagers can do that, and that what makes our village highly secured.
And so after this incident the new Kazekage Deadman changed the head band symbol to show the new start of the village, and so on he made a new history for the village and the assault was berried in the pages of forgets, but it will stay written in the hearts of whom who say the tragedy.


*The 6th Kazekage "Lord Deadman": the great lord who saved the village twice and leaded them to many victories, and he gave his word to protect it with his soul and blood no matter what happens.
He promised the village and villagers that someday the sand village will rule over everything.
And he had a famous quote that the villagers use as a symbol for the village that will lead them to glory:
"We were created to rule, either we live proudly or we die sadly"


*Battle history:
-Battle against Kirigakure during the 5th great ninja war, a 9 month stalemate.-Battle against Kumogakure during 5th great ninja war, victory in all battles.


*Traditions:
-Ninja academy graduation exam requires fighting a low-level genin in the middle of the desert.
-Most popular foods are the roasted sand wort with special spices (actually tastes rather good), specially grown raiza wheat made into bread.
-Important place is the 8 statues of the great sand lords (the founders of the village).


*Training for all ninja and ninja trainees takes place in the desert.
all sandstorm ninja are masters of sand controlling jutsu (how else would they survive in a village constantly surrounded by sandstorms) and they are professionals in making and using explosives, but one of the most important things about the sand villagers is that the can control the high energy which is in stored in there bodies, if that energy goes out of control (high anger) it can lead to a disaster!


*Our Chakara elements are:
1) Earth: it is our main chakara wich everyone can use.
2) Lightning: Some well trained fighters can control lightning to tiger rain, because we are underground and away from any water source.


*Uniform:

-Kazekage

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-Males

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-Females

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The Jutsus :

Aproved Jutsus

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- Earth style: Shurikan Rain (lvl 3)
Strength - N/A.
Weakness - lightning style lvl 4 or more.
Range - any.
Description - A rain of sand shurikens that are very sharp.

- Earth style: Sandstorm Coffin (lvl 4)
Strength - Water Style Jutsus Level 4 or Lower.
Weakness - Lightning Style Jutsus Level 4 or Higher.
Range - Medium
Description - Very similar to Sand Coffin as used by Gaara, it covers your whole body, but this one injures the opponent's entire body severely.

- Earth style: ULTRA sand barrier (lvl 5)
Strength - earth style lvl 4 or less.
Weakness - water style lvl 3 or more.
Range - high.
Description - a sand hand wraps around you and pulls you in the sand then the ultra barrier comes and causes a 500m radios barrier of high destruction.

Pending for aproval Jutsus

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*Level 1*

- Earth style: Sand Substitution.
Strength - water style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - lightning style lvl 2 or more.
Range - short.
Description - a normal substitution but instead of a log there is sand.


- Medical style: Quick Heal.
Strength - N/A.
Weakness - N/A.
Range - N/A.
Desription - a quick heal to a simple injury in the battle (ex: a cut of a knife), it needs (2) seals and (5) seconds of chakara gathering.


- Water style: Tsunami Wall.
Strength - fire style lvl 3 or less.
Weakness - ice style lvl 2 or more.
Range - short to med.
Description - a simple wall of tsunami that blocks any level one or two attack from the opponent for a short period of time, when the wall of water rises it charges and drifts away the attack towards the opponent but he can stay still and avoid the hit, but if he doesn't stay still it might drift him away a few meters, this needs (3) seals.


- Wind style: Stunning Tornado.
Strength - water style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - fire style lvl 3 or more.
Range - med.
Description - a tornado that stuns your opponent for a few seconds so you could attack him more easily, but if the user takes more than 5 seconds to attack the stunned opponent the tornado will disappear, this requires (2) seals then you hold the last seal for (3) seconds.


- Earth style: Sand Shield.
Strength - wind style lvl 3 or less.
Weakness - water style lvl 3 or more.
Range - N/A.
Description - a sand coffin that wraps around the user to protect him from one attack, it's mainly a hiding place to gather chakara, no seals needed for this jutsu, it just needs a two hand order.


- Ice style: Freezing Rasengan.
Strength - water style lvl 4 or less.
Weakness - fire style lvl 3 or more.
Range - short.
Description - a rasengan that a person could use to freeze a level one attack and then has the advantage to destroy the frozen jutsu to throw ice spikes at the opponent, this requires (2) seals.


- Earth style: Sand Teleportation.
Strength - water style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - ice style lvl 2 or more.
Range - med to long.
Description - you teleport to a place near your enemy for close attacks, but the attack needs a close sand poodle near the opponent so that the jutsu could be done, the place you teleport to isn't too close to the opponent, this jutsu requires (2) seals.


- Fire style: Rapid Comets.
Strength - lightning and wood style lvl 3 or less.
Weakness - water style lvl 2 or or more.
Range - med.
Description - you fire mini fire balls rapidly, the attack could cause minor burns on the opponent's skin or could just knock out flying weapons to the ground, this jutsu requires (4) seals.


- Earth style: Goliath Stomp
Strength - earth style lvl 2 or less
Weakness - water style lvl 3 or more
Range - med
Description - A jutsu without hand seals (only a few gathering of chakara), that allows the user to stomb on the floor causing a 10m radios mini earth quake, this is used either to stop an earth jutsu (or weakening it) or used to stop the opponent when he's running towards the user, this jutsu requires (3) seals.


- Water style: Violet Steam Spray
Strength - fire style lvl 3 or less
Weakness - Lightning style lvl 1 or more
Range - High
Description - The user holds only one hand as a seal fore the jutsu, then he blows a huge amount of steam that causes a fog of high heat that the opponent can't take (but the sandstorm villager's know how to fight with high heat) and that will weaken the opponent so that the user gets more advantage in his attacks, plus the jutsu makes the vision for the opponent hard so you'll get an upper hand (when releasing the jutsu) because you see him and he doesn't see you, this jutsu requires only (2) seals and holding one of your hands in chakara gathering position.

*level 2*

- Ninja art: Invisible Combo.
Strength - wind style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - water style lvl 3 or more.
Range - short.
Description - a strong combo that can't be seen because of its high speed, it is a combination of fast attack that start by throwing your opponent in the air to preform the attacks, but it needs high amounts of chakara, you have to gather a lot of chakara before the attack.


-Ninja ART: Cobra Clutch.
Strength - water style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - fire style lvl 2 or more.
Range - med.
Description - a surprising and huge wight king cobra that appears suddenly from behind your opponent and bites him then wraps around the bite then explodes, but the explode isn't big, the damage will be caused because of the close explosive range, this jutsu requires (3) seals.


- Lightning style: plasma strike.
Strength - water style lvl 4 or less.
Weakness - fire style lvl 3 or more.
Range - short.
Description - this attack can't be preformed unless your enemy is covered with water (soaked), then you hit the seals and quickly appears a large lightning strike that targets the opponenet directly then it hits him with high shock pulse (he can't resist it), this jutsu requires (5) seals, and at least (3) seconds of chakara gathering.


-Wood style: Hazardous Shield.
Strength - water style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - fire style lvl 2 or more.
Range - short.
Description - tree routs come out of the ground and wrap around you making a tree that is flammable, a fire match would burn the roots and that will cause mild burns on the opponent, this jutsu requires (3) seals.


- Earth style: Demon Clones.
Strength - water style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - wind style lvl 2 or more.
Range - any.
Description - you create a sand demon or 2, the clones mainly assist the user with his jutsus and sacrifice them selves to protect the user, but they can't jump and they are abit slow but with strong attack and very high defense power.


- Fire style: Fire Spear.
Strength - water style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - wind style lvl 3 or more.
Range - very high
Description - A long, big and thick beam of fire that could reach the opponent in any rang and in a few seconds, it can cause a serious and sometimes dangerous injury to the opponent but it can be dogged easily, this technique is similar to sasuke's "Chidori Spear" but less effective, this jutsu requires (4) seals.

*level 3*

- Fire style: lotus falcon.
Strength - wood style lvl 3 or less.
Weakness - water style lvl 4 or more.
Range - N/A.
Description - this move is special because it is a Collaboration Jutsu between many fire style jutsus, using the lotus style, it is a simple attack with high impact, you open 4 gates, jump high in the air and then you head towards your enemy with a huge fist to the heart with a fire falcon around you, the attack will push your enemy back leaving him exhausted due to the hit that targets the heart of the opponent and that will cut his breath for a short period with high damage to the chest, this technique requires at least 1/2 a minute of chakara gathering, it can leave the user completely exhausted.


- Lightning style: Thunder God Fist.
Strength - water style lvl 3 or less.
Weakness - wind style lvl 3 or more.
Range - short
Description -


- Ninja ART: 3 Star Seal.
Strength - N/A.
Weakness - N/A.
Range - any.
Description -


- Fire style: Blaze Rasengan.
Strength - lightning style lvl 2 or less.
Weakness - wind style lvl 4 or more.
Range - short
Description -

*level 4*

- Earth style: giant sand drill.
Strength - water style lvl 3 or more.
Weakness - lightning style lvl 3 or more.
Range - short to med.
Description - while you are standing on sand you get stuck by shifting sand then you face a huge sand drill that drills you in the sand deeply (this jutsu is copied from the 2nd hokage).

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KG of the village (Pending for aproval) :

*Form 1 : you have a sand shield around your body (as a second layer of skin) that protects you from 1 level 3 or less attack, and reduces the effect of a level 4 & 5 attack.

*Form 2 : you can transport some of your body parts to other places in the field using sand (like Gaara) to assit you through out the battle, but you can transport only one part at a time "when activated", and you can't transport them to a far place from you.

*Form 3 : You get a few sand arms coming out of the places were there is sand, they help the user through out the battle be grabbing, hitting and distracting the opponent and if the user has enough chakara he can make them collide and create bigger arms to cause bigger damage, but if there is no sand near by this activation can't be possible.

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Our members :

(kazekage) : Deadman

(co-kazeage) : Japaneseanimeforlife (former)

sarutobi17 (ANBU) : Genin

mangagirl : Genin

Innersakura : Genin

kay : Genin

Takashi Haltro : Genin

Narudo : Genin

Espada Ulquiorra : Genin

kakashi jiriya uzumaki : Genin

deidara63 : Genin

anime-e : Genin

Taruko : Genin

I_Keel_U : Genin

EndMaker : Genin

The Green Beast : Genin


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Our allies:

1- The village hidden in the Sakura.

2- The village hidden in the Aspen.

3- The village hidden in the Islands.

4- The village hidden in the Sunset.

5- The village hidden in the Storm.

6- The village hidden in the Lightning.

7- The village hidden in the Shadows.

8- The village hidden in the Mountains.

9- The village hidden in the Metal.

10- The village hidden in the Fire.



Ally Rogues:

garra12345

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My clan : The Dark Clan

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Theme Song:

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***All ACTIVE members are in Yellow

*** Important Notice: For all Mods and SMods, there has been an ERROR in this village, in the past Taker369 used to be the Co-Kage so he used to post a lot here (more than 100 posts) and I used to answer each of his posts because we were the only members, but because of this ERROR all his posts where deleted at once leaving me suspected of SPAMMING, so I ask the Mods and SMods to read this notice before doing anything BAD to me "you know".
EDIT: About the error; Taker369's posts where deleted by the Mods as they where spams, I'm really sorry for this time waste!

[Deadman]

man rate the village (exellent)

[Deadman]

ok i have 130 friends i'll invite them all, and you try to invite some

[Cade]

Is this a offical village?

[Deadman]

Originally Posted by Cade

Is this a offical village?

not yet can you tell me how

[Cade]

Well you have to add a village description.You have to create justus for the village,and tell what does the justu do,and what level it is from 1 to 5.You have to have some allies.You don't have to craete one,but you could create a clan.You have to have ranks like Genin,Chunin,and Jonin.There can only be two Jonin at a village.The kage and co-kage are the Jonin.There can only be 3 Chunin,and the rest who join are Genin.

[Deadman]

Originally Posted by Cade

Well you have to add a village description.You have to create justus for the village,and tell what does the justu do,and what level it is from 1 to 5.You have to have some allies.You don't have to craete one,but you could create a clan.You have to have ranks like Genin,Chunin,and Jonin.There can only be two Jonin at a village.The kage and co-kage are the Jonin.There can only be 3 Chunin,and the rest who join are Genin.

how can i add a description, and i didn't understand the levels and the clan

[Cade]

Well the description of a village is what does the village looks like.Example:The village has a large wall surronding it.It has plenty of tall bulidings.etc...

The levels is for your justus so people can see what rank can use them.Level 1 justu is for everyone.Level 2 justu is for Genin and higher.Level 3 Justu is for Chunin and higher.Level 4 is Jonin and higher.Plus, you have to tell what does the justu do.Example: Lighting Style:Sting Ray Justu lvl.3 A justu tha sends a paralyzing shock to your opponent.

Now to clans.A clan is part of a village,not a diffrenet village.Anyone from your village can create on.If you wanna create a clan you must have a Kekkai Genkai.For Kekkai Genkai's you make three forms of the Kekkai Genkai. Form 1 Genin and higher can use.Form 2 Chunin and higer can use.Form 3 Jonin and higher can use. Example:
Form 1
User can have 5 sceond visions of the future.
Form 2
User can Predict a attack
Form 3
User has the ablity to manipulate the opponents mind and see what's he planning.

I hope this can help you.

[Deadman]

Originally Posted by Cade

Well the description of a village is what does the village looks like.Example:The village has a large wall surronding it.It has plenty of tall bulidings.etc...

The levels is for your justus so people can see what rank can use them.Level 1 justu is for everyone.Level 2 justu is for Genin and higher.Level 3 Justu is for Chunin and higher.Level 4 is Jonin and higher.Plus, you have to tell what does the justu do.Example: Lighting Style:Sting Ray Justu lvl.3 A justu tha sends a paralyzing shock to your opponent.

Now to clans.A clan is part of a village,not a diffrenet village.Anyone from your village can create on.If you wanna create a clan you must have a Kekkai Genkai.For Kekkai Genkai's you make three forms of the Kekkai Genkai. Form 1 Genin and higher can use.Form 2 Chunin and higer can use.Form 3 Jonin and higher can use. Example:
Form 1
User can have 5 sceond visions of the future.
Form 2
User can Predict a attack
Form 3
User has the ablity to manipulate the opponents mind and see what's he planning.

I hope this can help you.

yes man thanks, but does all this go in this thread.

[Cade]

Yes,It does..Just edit the first post in the thread.

[<Aurega?>]

Apparently deadman doesn't read any of the stickies...

He still thinks villages are chat groups...

[Deadman]

Originally Posted by Aurega

Apparently deadman doesn't read any of the stickies...

He still thinks villages are chat groups...

man leave me alone your the last one i want to see here

[Cade]

He's a war coucill member,and the sticked threads also tell you more info about creating a village.

[Sai's brother]

Originally Posted by Cade

He's a war coucill member,and the sticked threads also tell you more info about creating a village.

You are correct Cade

[Sasuke/Itachi]

So who are the members and village description and members rank. Please be more detailed.

[Deadman]

Originally Posted by Sasuke/Itachi

So who are the members and village description and members rank. Please be more detailed.

they are in the first post

[Deadman]

*The village in the hidden sand storm.

*The village is underground and surrounded by ancient statues, and the houses are stuck together in one piece, with a large temple for the kage and co-kage, and it has a giant gate guarded by me.

*The jutsu :
Level 1: sand tornado, a sand tornado that stuns your enemy so you can attack him freely.
Level 2: sand disaster, a huge storm that destroys every thing in its way.
Level 3: shuriken rain, a rain of sand shuriken.
Level 4: snake seal art, a giant sand cobra wraps around your enemy and crushes him then explodes.
Level 5: ULTRA sand barrier, the sand under you turns to shifting sand that pulls you and wraps a sand coffin around you then the ultra barrier comes and causes a 500m radios barrier of full destruction.

*The clans :
Form 1 : you have a high speed for any combo's.
Form 2 : your sand reacts fast like a humman.
Form 3 : high distructive power (multiple power).

*Our kage is (taker369) and our co-kage will be anounced in 10/10/2010!

[Deadman]

Originally Posted by Taker369

as the kage what do i do exactly ?

your the one who accept's members, and give orders MASTER

[Deadman]

yes master.

[Deadman]

Originally Posted by Taker369

whos coming in 10/10/2010 ?

he's closer to you than you could imagine, i'll send you a PM