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Old 05-05-2013, 07:10 AM   #101
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Voices

The screams never end
The voices in me head
They tear me apart at the seams.


Do it.
Don't.
You'll regret it.

You won't.

Fighting them both is hard.
Agreeing with one is easy,
But the other stays,
Say's ive done wrong.
Fills me with guilt.


It's my fault.
I'm lonely and sad.
It's hard to smile,
Even a fake one,
Though im a champ.


The voices are sweet,
They never yell or fight.
Maybe that's why i seek their comfort at night.


When i'm all alone,
Sad and broken.
When no one is there,
To speak those words left unspoken.


All i want is an end,
Away from it all.
That's why i listen,
To the loudest voice of all.


I know i shouldn't.
I know it's wrong.
But i bleed out the sadness.



I take the punishment.
The hurt and regret.
But physiccal hurt,
Is better than hurt within.


So i cave to the voice,
That tells me to slice.
It's easier this way.
Cause that voice just wont go away.
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Old 05-05-2013, 04:24 PM   #102
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A Very, Very Cold Day

My heart died today,
On a very, very cold day in May.
The one I loved with all my heart,
With one simple "good-bye," tore me apart...

He said I wasn't to blame
As he left and I cried out his name.
"Don't leave me! I love you!"
"Don't force me to do something I don't want to do..."

Rain is the sky's tears,
And my own join them as he realized my fears.
Is he thinking of me?
Were him and I never meant to be?

Is it terrible to say
That I hope he's suffering every day?
Is it horrible to cry,
And wish I would die?

Every second I think of him.
Then I remember he only accepted me on a whim.
I pray one day he'll say he wants to be mine
Then we'll go back to being happy for all time.

I thought I'd never have to say good-bye.
I thought he'd keep his promises instead of cause my heart to die.
I thought we'd solve our problems together.
I guess we just fell short of forever...

Tell me, do you care I'm so broken?
Or all my tears some sort of token?
You wanted to be alone,
And here I am soaked in sorrow, to the bone...

Why did you lie to me?
Why didn't you let me see
The sadness in your heart?
Because of that, you tore us apart...

I would've risked it all to be with you,
But that just wasn't something you were willing to do.
You watched me as I brokenly cried
And when you left I died...

Sunlight feels so cold...
Fear consumed the girl you thought was so bold...
I miss your smile...
For you, I would've walked every mile...

I cannot feel happy!
Romance movies now hurt instead of being sappy!
I look at people together
And think could that have been our forever?

Sure, I've made mistakes...
But you're the reason my heart now breaks...
Why won't you come back to me...?
Why won't you let me help you to be happy?

I cried while writing this...
You probabuly don't care but there it is...
Listening to sad music that sings
About the sorrow your memory now brings...

All I wanted was to be happy with you,
But apparently you're sad no matter what I do...
You didn't want an emotional attatchment,
And now my heart is all miss-shapen and bent...

Good-bye my love...
Apparentely I was never enough...
I would've kept you forever...
But you ran away and we're not together...

Do you know I can't trust anyone?
I crave the darkness instead of the laughing rays of the sun...
Do you know I feel completely alone?
I want to just fade away till I'm nothing but bone...

Did you ever care about me?
Or did it take heartbreak for me to see
That you never cared at all,
As you watched me fall, fall, fall...

"I'll always catch you when you fall."
What about now as my eyes start to bawl?
"I'll never let you go again, I promise."
Then why was I so easy to dismiss?

My heart died today...
It was a very, very cold day in May...
Today, the one I loved above all,
Was the one who broke me and made me fall...
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Old 05-12-2013, 05:03 PM   #103
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Dont let me fall.
Dont let this be the end.

O haven't said good-bye.
To my dearest friend.
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It sure was easy,
for you to go away,
You didn't take the time to say one word,
it only took a day.

You poked me and said you cared,
And I laid my feelings bare;
24 hours later you hold her hand,
and your lips will never be mine to kiss.

To you I'm only a toy,
a game to play when she doesn't care.
Two years I've been second best,
I tell them I'm done but I haven't moved on yet.
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Old 05-16-2013, 10:57 AM   #105
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What do you call it when all you feel is pain?
When your loved ones look at you and all you feel is shame?
When you're tired of living and playing this game?
When you know your life is meaningless and you're the only one to blame?

What do you call it when the hurt is in your soul?
When you smile and laugh but you know its all a show?
When you feel like you've hit your all time low?
When nothing makes you happy and the darkness around you grows?

What do you call it when you feel so alone?
When you're home but it doesn't feel like home?
When you look back in your life and every choice you made now seems wrong?
When the wait to die seems too long.
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I used to know a girl,
with a smile on her face,
a rose in her cheeks,
and a symphony in her lips.

Now I know a girl,
with scars and slices on her wrists,
snow in her cheeks,
and a secret the persists.
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I wrote this thinking of Hinata's story arch up till the fight vs. Pain.
It ain't quite finished yet... It's intended as song lyrics actually, but whether that'll ever happen depends on a bunch of other people apart from me
Sorry that it ain't finished, I'll update it when it's done. And I look forward to reading the poetry the rest of you've posted!



Bright light love
Undercover
From her Eyes
To her Lover

Too shy to say
She wants him
to stay
To breathe in her eyes
A song
But it won't be long


White light love
Undercover
Through her eyes
To her Lover

She walked a long
Lonely road
Looking for what
She was owed
Grow Strong


(Something something terrible... Maybe this:

It was a red Blood Day
Death fell from the Sky
Pain came to town
Where He stood Alone


(and then bridge)


Bright Light Love
Broke Cover
Burning Eyes
For her Lover


(And then finale!)
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What do you call it when all you feel is pain?
When your loved ones look at you and all you feel is shame?
When you're tired of living and playing this game?
When you know your life is meaningless and you're the only one to blame?

What do you call it when the hurt is in your soul?
When you smile and laugh but you know its all a show?
When you feel like you've hit your all time low?
When nothing makes you happy and the darkness around you grows?

What do you call it when you feel so alone?
When you're home but it doesn't feel like home?
When you look back in your life and every choice you made now seems wrong?
When the wait to die seems too long.
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I used to know a girl,
with a smile on her face,
a rose in her cheeks,
and a symphony in her lips.

Now I know a girl,
with scars and slices on her wrists,
snow in her cheeks,
and a secret the persists.
These describe how i feel.

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I wrote this thinking of Hinata's story arch up till the fight vs. Pain.
It ain't quite finished yet... It's intended as song lyrics actually, but whether that'll ever happen depends on a bunch of other people apart from me
Sorry that it ain't finished, I'll update it when it's done. And I look forward to reading the poetry the rest of you've posted!



Bright light love
Undercover
From her Eyes
To her Lover

Too shy to say
She wants him
to stay
To breathe in her eyes
A song
But it won't be long


White light love
Undercover
Through her eyes
To her Lover

She walked a long
Lonely road
Looking for what
She was owed
Grow Strong


(Something something terrible... Maybe this:

It was a red Blood Day
Death fell from the Sky
Pain came to town
Where He stood Alone


(and then bridge)


Bright Light Love
Broke Cover
Burning Eyes
For her Lover


(And then finale!)
Its really good.
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Death

What do i say
When death calls my name.
Her voice screaming
And filling me with blame.


Her voice is cold
But theirs are colder
I cant go on
With the worlds on my shoulders


My angel is gone
Even my devil
They both ran from
This hell on my level


I screamed for help
But no one came
And that is why i
Am full of shame


Alone, falling
Grasping, waiting.
For death to come to me calling


She screams my name
Says things will always be the same
It's gotten harder to refuse her
I fear i soon will cave


Do not think bad of me
If she takes me away
I reached for help
But no one came


I am alone
Is it my fault
I think i'll jut lay here with death
And have a talk
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It sure was easy,

for you to go away,
You didn't take the time to say one word,
it only took a day.

You poked me and said you cared,
And I laid my feelings bare;
24 hours later you hold her hand,
and your lips will never be mine to kiss.

To you I'm only a toy,
a game to play when she doesn't care.
Two years I've been second best,

I tell them I'm done but I haven't moved on yet.
Very good poem. This poem has described me many times. It's very well written. I approve!
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What do you call it when all you feel is pain?
When your loved ones look at you and all you feel is shame?
When you're tired of living and playing this game?
When you know your life is meaningless and you're the only one to blame?

What do you call it when the hurt is in your soul?
When you smile and laugh but you know its all a show?
When you feel like you've hit your all time low?
When nothing makes you happy and the darkness around you grows?

What do you call it when you feel so alone?
When you're home but it doesn't feel like home?
When you look back in your life and every choice you made now seems wrong?
When the wait to die seems too long.
This poem is very well written and the rhyming is creative, and the emotional feeling I can really connect with. Excellent job.
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I used to know a girl,
with a smile on her face,
a rose in her cheeks,
and a symphony in her lips.

Now I know a girl,
with scars and slices on her wrists,
snow in her cheeks,
and a secret the persists.
I used to know a girl like that too... Great job, and amazing poem.

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Originally Posted by Geezer View Post
I wrote this thinking of Hinata's story arch up till the fight vs. Pain.
It ain't quite finished yet... It's intended as song lyrics actually, but whether that'll ever happen depends on a bunch of other people apart from me
Sorry that it ain't finished, I'll update it when it's done. And I look forward to reading the poetry the rest of you've posted!



Bright light love
Undercover
From her Eyes
To her Lover

Too shy to say
She wants him
to stay
To breathe in her eyes
A song
But it won't be long


White light love
Undercover
Through her eyes
To her Lover

She walked a long
Lonely road
Looking for what
She was owed
Grow Strong


(Something something terrible... Maybe this:

It was a red Blood Day
Death fell from the Sky
Pain came to town
Where He stood Alone


(and then bridge)


Bright Light Love
Broke Cover
Burning Eyes
For her Lover


(And then finale!)
I think this is the first poem on here Nartuo related (I might be wrong) and it's great! I really like it. Sometimes when I write poems I imagine them as a song in my head so I guess my poems are song lyrics to me too. Great job.


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Death


What do i say
When death calls my name.
Her voice screaming
And filling me with blame.


Her voice is cold
But theirs are colder
I cant go on
With the worlds on my shoulders


My angel is gone
Even my devil
They both ran from
This hell on my level


I screamed for help
But no one came
And that is why i
Am full of shame


Alone, falling
Grasping, waiting.
For death to come to me calling


She screams my name
Says things will always be the same
It's gotten harder to refuse her
I fear i soon will cave


Do not think bad of me
If she takes me away
I reached for help
But no one came


I am alone
Is it my fault
I think i'll jut lay here with death

And have a talk

Amazing poem...very sad...but amazing... and I'm always here for you sis, I hope you know that.
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I Am At War With Myself

Search, find it, glue it together.
Search, find another, this is taking forever.
Search, fit it, grab the glue.
Search, fit it, this is all because of you.
Search, piece by piece, find every part
And eventually I'll put together my shattered heart.

Scream, scream and pound the wall.
Scream, scream you're sick of it all.
Cry, cry and fall to the ground.
Cry, cry and remember when he was still around.
Fight, fight against the pain he brought
And remember all the times you fought.

Fall, fall down the dark hole of pain.
Fall, fall to the ground and drown in the rain.
Stare, stare as your life passes you by.
Stare, stare up at the cold, lifeless sky.
Hide, hide what you really feel
While everyone says what you had was never real.

Fight, fight them all off.
Fight, fight to get past all the painful stuff.
Cut, cut the pain from every vein.
Cut, cut all the scars since you'll never feel the same.
Swear, swear off of love and forever
Because you're sick of you're heart not being together.

I am at war with myself. One is broken.
The other is angry. Wanna take me on? I'll leaving you croakin'.
I cry as my soul yearns for him to be there.
While my mind cusses that it doesn't care.
Will I ever be together again?
Who cares? That's what you get for trusting men!

Search, find it, glue it together.
Search, find another, this is taking forever.
Search, fit it, grab the glue.
Search, fit it, this is all because of you.
Search, piece by piece, find every part
And eventually I'll put together my shattered heart.


Everything he said was a lie,
Until the day he looked me in the eye,
Took my hand, knowing I would die,
And whispered to me "It's time I said good-bye."
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So Tired...

I'm so tired of trying to be strong
When I knew I wasn't all along.

I'm so tired of hiding my pain
With a smile, and laughter I have to fain.

I'm so tired of being everyone's rock
As my own heart chips every second, tick-tock.

I'm so tired of pretending others care
Even though when I needed help, no one was there.

I'm tired of never being good enough to keep
Then no one caring when I begin to weep.

I'm so very tired of it all...

Maybe it's time to answer Death's call...

I don't know who's to blame for how I feel,
But yelling at me that I'm lying doesn't help. My pain is real.

Seconds feel like years to me
And no one sees how messed up I can be.

Why won't anyone help me?
Why won't anyone open their eyes and see?

I'm calling for help!

Help, help! Nevermind... no one ever cared how I felt...

I'm so tired of this life.
Though I'm not strong enough to end it with a knife.

Sometimes I want to throw a rope around my pale neck
And say "this is what's going to happen if someone doesn't see I'm a wreck!"

Or sometimes, I fantasize of dying in some horrible accident
So I can listen to what people really thought. Did they say what they meant?

I used to think Love was all I needed...
Until I realized I only attract men who are cruel and conceided...

They only wanted one thing; when they got it they fled,
And I was left alone with the carpet stained red.

I tried to rebuild my heart,
But someone else always stole it away and tore it apart.

I'm so tired of being treated like dirt.
I'm a good girl! I don't even flirt...

I'm so tired of the world beating up on me.
I can't handle it anymore, don't you see?

I want to feel what it's like to be happy!
And smile instead of cry when I see something sappy!

I want to feel what it's like to be loved!
Instead of always being pushed to my limit and shoved!

You wanted to see me angry?! Now I am!
I've had enough! You hate me? Well I don't give a damn!

I'm so tired of trying to be strong
When I knew I wasn't all along!


I'm so tired of hiding my pain
With a smile and laughter I have to fain!

I'm so tired of being everyone's rock
As my own heart chips every second, tick-f-ing-tock.

I'm so tired of pretending others care,
Even though, when I needed help, no one was there!

I'm tired of never being good enough to keep
Then no one caring when I begin to weep!

Go ahead! Beat me to the floor!
I'll get right back up and kiss your ass out my door!

Go ahead! I dare you to try!
Now I'll be the one making you cry!

I'm so tired of wanting someone to help me!
You know what! F- the world who refused to see!

I'm going to find my own way to get out of the dark
And everytime I feel I'm going to cry I'm going to stop before I start!

You'll see no more tears from me!
I won't be happy, I'll just be forever angry!

You all brought this on yourself!
No more hiding, no more stealth.

Watch me as I take on the world.
The world, versus one seriously pissed-off, hurting girl...



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@Luna & Rayque: Tnx, I'm glad yall could connect to those poems...

Teardrops fall like rain
From a soul filled with fear
Fear of darkness within
Both far and so near

Darkness shrouded
By a smiling face
living in a turmoil
This pain that I face

Granting the pain
To do as its dark deed
My mind and body
Succomb to its greed

It takes me down deeper
To fear and shame
Depths that I cannot fathom
As I feel its dark reign

Life as I know it
May soon cease to be
For the pain that laid dormant
Is now free in me

It ravages corners
And every inch of my soul
It tears me to shreds
With a heart as black as coal

This pain is alive
I can feel it within
My spirit not willing
To try and stop it again

I give in to pleasure
That is twisted and dark
This pain that's within
will soon leave its mark

The mark that it leaves
Will be what it does crave
The mark on my tombstone
As I lay in my grave

Don't cry for me
As I lay in the ground
I live now in peace
That in life was not found

I hold no more fear
No pain or no hate
I lay still in victory
As death as my only mate

Crying eyes no more here
My tears are now dried
As I lay in the darkness
That I lived with inside

My soul is not hurting
My fear is now gone
As my lifeblood stops flowing
In this life of a new dawn

A dawn of beginning
Of a new shining sun
Only seen by the departed
Of which I am now one
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@Luna & Rayque: Tnx, I'm glad yall could connect to those poems...

Teardrops fall like rain
From a soul filled with fear
Fear of darkness within
Both far and so near

Darkness shrouded
By a smiling face
living in a turmoil
This pain that I face

Granting the pain
To do as its dark deed
My mind and body
Succomb to its greed

It takes me down deeper
To fear and shame
Depths that I cannot fathom
As I feel its dark reign

Life as I know it
May soon cease to be
For the pain that laid dormant
Is now free in me

It ravages corners
And every inch of my soul
It tears me to shreds
With a heart as black as coal

This pain is alive
I can feel it within
My spirit not willing
To try and stop it again

I give in to pleasure
That is twisted and dark
This pain that's within
will soon leave its mark

The mark that it leaves
Will be what it does crave
The mark on my tombstone
As I lay in my grave

Don't cry for me
As I lay in the ground
I live now in peace
That in life was not found

I hold no more fear
No pain or no hate
I lay still in victory
As death as my only mate

Crying eyes no more here
My tears are now dried
As I lay in the darkness
That I lived with inside

My soul is not hurting
My fear is now gone
As my lifeblood stops flowing
In this life of a new dawn

A dawn of beginning
Of a new shining sun
Only seen by the departed
Of which I am now one
I love this poem. Your rhyming scheme is very sophisticated and I'm jealous. I also can really relate to the poem as well...excellent job.
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Tnx, again. Even thou I don't feel like anybody should be jeaulous of anything I do

Look at the girl
How she sits so still
Motionless in her depression
Not knowing her will

Silently watching
Eyes open wide
Never does she blink
So her feelings she doesn't hide

Shes looking through the glass
At the people that surround her
How they stare at her helplessly
Wishing she was there

But she just sits there silently
With the smile upon her face
To bad that its a mask
And she holds it firmly in place

That was in the past
As the scene sadly shows
In the photograph she will sit forever
With the sadness nobody knows
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A bit of slightly more positive vibes necessary in here! Great poems though


To some the subconscious speaks, or God. You choose.

Rays of joy shall pave
Like dolphins on the wave
The way prepared and true
The path that leads to you

"My Sun" the call goes forth
Will this road take me north?
Will it take me south or west?
Or was the east the best?

The road is straight and true
Leads nowhere but to you
Needs neither foot nor stride
Nor ship or cart beside

And still the waves they roll
And still the bells will toll
The dolphins jump for joy
And men think life a toy

I cross the ocean at your call
though o'erboard I fall
Be then for me the light
Outshine my darkest night
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Since I wrote my last poem and entry I've been thinking that I didn't take you guys seriously. But reading your poems was like looking at a rain soaked window and all that flowed down it was profound agony.


I cried while writing this...
You probably don't care but there it is...

I know that deep, terrible agony. In this shape it's hauntingly beautiful, unlike the words of Rouge Uchiha18 which contains the deep dark death-like chasm that follows in it's wake. Awaiting soul silence and resurrection...

A dawn of beginning
Of a new shining sun
Only seen by the departed
Of which I am now one


Or Ryaque

Everything he said was a lie,
Until the day he looked me in the eye,
Took my hand, knowing I would die,
And whispered to me "It's time I said good-bye."


And then promising the break-out at the end!

Watch me as I take on the world.
The world, versus one seriously pissed-off, hurting girl...


Awesome! Thanks, I know someone who feels like that about me these days... It helps to understand the hate.

My agony's gone now and I try not to stick around where it's at, I looked away from the abyss, but the memory lingers, like so many ghosts left behind.

I can't remember when I wrote the poem I posted, but I'm pretty certain it was some time after heartbreak ground zero. Years ago, but no longer than a blink in the eye of time. By now, life's easy! Because I know that there ain't much out there worse than that feeling...

What I guess I'm saying is that it ain't all that "positive vibe" like, but it was part of the soul rebuilding that follows.

You'll see
It's all meant
unintentionally cruel
To be
To set you free
Know Thyself



To Luna,

Do not think bad of me
If she takes me away
I reached for help
But no one came

Your poem is perhaps the best of all. I flee from it's essence alone. Because it holds a kind of pain that I don't understand... The hurt is so deep it's strange!


Death is lovely, but we're here now, alive. Love is always slightly deadly and totally too late!

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Never More

Dark waves crash on the barren shore.
The sky is starless; nothing but a black abyss.
I ask when I'll be happy again and only hear "Never more, never more..."
I don't think Life can get any worse then this...

The sand is cold on my feet
And the roar of the ocean is in my ears.
I can't believe I again fell for his lies and deceit.
Thinking about him does nothing but bring endless pain and tears...

Once upon a time, there was a girl with a guy,
And they seemed happy on the outside.
Together, they were in-love under an endless sky...
She spoke the truth while he only lied...

I used to think I finally found the One.
I was willing to give him my life, my soul, my heart.
Now I'm comptemplating if I should kill myself with a gun.
I fell for him...The naive girlfriend, it was the perfect part...

The light has gone out of my life.
Now, where I reside, there is only darkness.
I wish I was strong enough to end it all with a knife.
Every day that passes by, I recognize myself less and less...

How many times do I have to write these sorrowful words
Before you realize what you did to me?
People around me say "love was never ment for nerds"
But I thought we were the exeception, but now I see...

The water is very cold.
Yet my heart is even colder...
I guess I wasn't a good girl; should've done what I was told.
People say I'm too young for love. Try again when I'm older...

I remember what it was like when you held me tight.
You'd whisper sweet words in my ear.
Back then, we just felt so right...
Yes this pain increases day-by-day, year-by-year...

What did I do wrong? Did I scare you away?
Did my dreams of the future trap you?
Or were you lying to me every single day...
Until breaking up was the only thing fun left to do...?

Step-by-step, deeper into the water I go.
Will you cry for me when I'm dead?
Did you ever love me? I guess I'll never know...
It's too late now, the water's over my head...

Death comes slowly under the waves.
The darkness comes out of my heart and surrounds me.
Funny, as the body is dying, how the mind behaves...
It takes me away to a happy place far away from the sea...

Horses graze on delicious green grass.
It's warm in this place of light.
I can see I'm not the first to come here, and won't be the last.
Others will give in to Suicide's venomous bite...

I'm not alone anymore...
I am finally cared for...
To exist is a pleasure, not a chore...
And the best part? My heart hurts no more...

As my body sinks to the ocean floor,
I think this is a most fitting way indeed.
This ocean is the tears I will weap never more,
Crying? Here in Death, never again will there be a need...
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The World Is A Cold Place To Be

Hush, say not another word.
My baby girl, haven't you heard?
The world is a cold place to be,
Trust your mother, soon you'll see.

People will smile to your face,
But no sooner kill your spirit, leaving no trace.
Men will say you posses their heart,
Then when they tire of you, they'll rip you apart.

Hush, my dear, everything will be okay.
This is how the world is, all day, every day.
Hustlers pick your pockets of all you possess,
And peoples' hearts slow, beating less and less.

Children snort drugs up their noses,
And the next thing, parents are buying black roses.
Husbands beat their wives, their daughters, their sons
While everyone turns a blind eye as misfortune gathers in tons.

Love is a rare thing now-a-days,
But to take advantage of you? Oh, there are so many ways.
Maybe you will find the man for you,
But you better hang on, other else he'll leave you too.

Hush my dear, why do you cry?
This is how the world is, the innocent die.
Police take bribes and protect the guilty
While they abandon the poor like you, like me.

I have a solution to stop the pain.
No more will tears fall like rain.
Go to the bridge in the dark,
Yes, the large one in the park.

Call out into the night,
Then take a left step, then a right.
The water will embrass you in her loving arms
And no more will you succum to the world's deadly charms...

"This just in, a mother leaped off a three story bridge
with her infant daughter; the bodies were found near Dead Man's Ridge.
Upon investigation, police have decided it was a suicide.
The mother was dead on scene, and later in the hospital the child died..."
Hush, say not another word.
My baby girl, haven't you heard?
The world is a cold place to be,
Trust your mother, soon you'll see.


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I seriously love this place
Also, sorry for not submitting any poems this time.
Just wanted to take some time to say to you guys you all are amazing <3
Some of you really inspire me to get back at writing some.
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