Ruins - Page 2

Raiden · 06-23-2009, 05:44 PM

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Originally Posted by Sai's brother

Part Seven
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Scared, i was..my body shooked in fear for a second. As iI heard a blade being drawed out I quickly took my out to block it....The...The man from my last visit here. My shoulder started to bleed and blood was on his sword, i didnt even seen him move! I held onto my shoulder and swung my blade at his stomach,.....my blade went through him.....it failed. I got shocked and wondered what happen, quickly i found out he copied my moves. So i changed into spirit form to be able to have a fighting chance. Time froze, i could move...seconds later there were around 8 blades cuts on me,
When it unfroze i fell down bleeding. I used a posion move on him but he grabbed it and toss it back, he didnt got posioned at all, but i did. Ugn....what to do i thought......then i used a move called Dark chill on him...he got frozen soild!
Whew....i got up and tried to leave...as i got to the door i heard something. The ice was cracking...and the tailed beast awoke....how can i handle too oppenets at once, im posioned i cant do anything right now.
The ice broke and he was free and the beast had arrived...today wasnt my lucky day!

nice, very nice, keep up the good work

Sai's brother · 06-23-2009, 05:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sai's brother

Part Seven
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Scared, i was..my body shooked in fear for a second. As iI heard a blade being drawed out I quickly took my out to block it....The...The man from my last visit here. My shoulder started to bleed and blood was on his sword, i didnt even seen him move! I held onto my shoulder and swung my blade at his stomach,.....my blade went through him.....it failed. I got shocked and wondered what happen, quickly i found out he copied my moves. So i changed into spirit form to be able to have a fighting chance. Time froze, i could move...seconds later there were around 8 blades cuts on me,
When it unfroze i fell down bleeding. I used a posion move on him but he grabbed it and toss it back, he didnt got posioned at all, but i did. Ugn....what to do i thought......then i used a move called Dark chill on him...he got frozen soild!
Whew....i got up and tried to leave...as i got to the door i heard something. The ice was cracking...and the tailed beast awoke....how can i handle too oppenets at once, im posioned i cant do anything right now.
The ice broke and he was free and the beast had arrived...today wasnt my lucky day!

Part 8
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Surrouned, no where to run, i was forced to fight in the condition i was in.
I quickly swung my sword towards the man, sliceling off his arm.....as the red blood covered my sword his arm feel to the ground and blood filled the ground. The tailed beast attack me with a dark force....i felt alot of pain...but i liked this one for some reason.
The man panted and his arm rose in the air....i got starled as his arm got reconnected.
His sword went through my chest and the tailed beast shot out a dark fire at my back.
I collasped.... on the ground, unable to move. The tailed beast growled...and the man place his sword above my heart...he rose it in the air and forced it down.

kakashi uzumaki · 06-23-2009, 06:57 PM

wow

i am speechless

Sai's brother · 06-23-2009, 10:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sai's brother

Part 8
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Surrouned, no where to run, i was forced to fight in the condition i was in.
I quickly swung my sword towards the man, sliceling off his arm.....as the red blood covered my sword his arm feel to the ground and blood filled the ground. The tailed beast attack me with a dark force....i felt alot of pain...but i liked this one for some reason.
The man panted and his arm rose in the air....i got starled as his arm got reconnected.
His sword went through my chest and the tailed beast shot out a dark fire at my back.
I collasped.... on the ground, unable to move. The tailed beast growled...and the man place his sword above my heart...he rose it in the air and forced it down.

Part 9
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....Uh.....i..im not dead?...I looked up and seen someone else....he was...resucing me!
I tried to help with my sword but it was...broken. He killed the other man easily with lighting....this man is fimilar...but its too dark to see. The 12 tails growled its tails flew in the air...it..it was not twelve tails..but more....twenty-four! It shoot a Dark fireball at the person.... The man teleported behind the beast and de-headed it. ....Now i know who i is....it was..my brother...from the darkness village....J..Jeremy!!

Sephiroth · 06-23-2009, 10:04 PM

very good bro Jeremy comes and saves the day

Sai's brother · 06-23-2009, 10:05 PM

^/O\^ - yep

Sai's brother · 06-23-2009, 10:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Sai's brother

Part 9
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....Uh.....i..im not dead?...I looked up and seen someone else....he was...resucing me!
I tried to help with my sword but it was...broken. He killed the other man easily with lighting....this man is fimilar...but its too dark to see. The 12 tails growled its tails flew in the air...it..it was not twelve tails..but more....twenty-four! It shoot a Dark fireball at the person.... The man teleported behind the beast and de-headed it. ....Now i know who i is....it was..my brother...from the darkness village....J..Jeremy!!

Part 10
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I was glad that he came....but one thing I wondered was how did he find me? All well, so questions arent ment to be asked... He helped me up. He made a promise also that he will protect me more often.
I just smiled at him and said "Thank you brother"..
He took me back to the darkness village...back home.

Ruin Saga~End
Next Saga, Destruction of the Darkness Village?

Sai's brother · 06-24-2009, 06:44 PM

Part One~ I was tooken back home after what happened in the ruins. Jeremy took me took me to the hospital. I was critcaly low on blood. I spent around two days here in the hospital. After i was better and got out,i went to get something good to eat. I met some of my old friends there. i was still a little tired so i decided to rest at the village hot springs.
It was so relaxing, soon after i feel asleep in the hot springs.

Sooner or later i knew something bad was going to happen.

Raiden · 06-24-2009, 07:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Sai's brother

Part One~ I was tooken back home after what happened in the ruins. Jeremy took me took me to the hospital. I was critcaly low on blood. I spent around two days here in the hospital. After i was better and got out,i went to get something good to eat. I met some of my old friends there. i was still a little tired so i decided to rest at the village hot springs.
It was so relaxing, soon after i feel asleep in the hot springs.

Sooner or later i knew something bad was going to happen.

nice sai, cant weit to see what happens next

yondaime · 06-26-2009, 04:07 PM

great story sai's brother

vampire Lycan · 06-28-2009, 04:17 PM

can't wait^^

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 04:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sai's brother

Part One~ I was tooken back home after what happened in the ruins. Jeremy took me took me to the hospital. I was critcaly low on blood. I spent around two days here in the hospital. After i was better and got out,i went to get something good to eat. I met some of my old friends there. i was still a little tired so i decided to rest at the village hot springs.
It was so relaxing, soon after i feel asleep in the hot springs.

Sooner or later i knew something bad was going to happen.

Part 2
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I woke up feeling dizzy, i stayed in too long...i got dressed and teleported home..i couldnt walk that good.
At home i had a drink,i had cold juice! I sipped the drink and not to long late i smelt something.......I walked around to see if it came from my house but i didnt see anything. All the rooms were clear. All well nothing i guess. I sat down reading a book then i heard something loud striking the ground and then the scent grew. I went outside and seen craters in the ground and many houses on fire!
What in the world is going on here!?!?!

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 05:04 PM

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Originally Posted by Sai's brother

Part 2
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I woke up feeling dizzy, i stayed in too long...i got dressed and teleported home..i couldnt walk that good.
At home i had a drink,i had cold juice! I sipped the drink and not to long late i smelt something.......I walked around to see if it came from my house but i didnt see anything. All the rooms were clear. All well nothing i guess. I sat down reading a book then i heard something loud striking the ground and then the scent grew. I went outside and seen craters in the ground and many houses on fire!
What in the world is going on here!?!?!

PART 3
I saw fire everywhere...i grasped for air it was smokey outside...my home broke down.
i seen the village being attacked, by.....three people....one was my brother!
I followed where he went and i saw he was fighting the 2nd kage of the village...he was retired but he was strong!
I watched the match, and towards the end he used a one hit kill move on my brother.
I didnt really care that my brother was attacking the village i quickly grabbed his arm and smashed it against the ground, no one was going to kill him.
The battles in the village continued as my brother and my friend helped destory it.
After everyone was done fighting, the first kage of the village appeared.
he summoned a giant flaming star and it was going to strike the village very soon!

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 05:08 PM

Part 4
(VERY VERY VERY SHORT)
I saw the stars coming towards the village,...i was in it too!
I changed into Spirit form to avoid it.....the end....it was gone....no more of the village is was destroyed...i had no where to go but with him...my brother

vampire Lycan · 06-28-2009, 06:28 PM

wow....

Sai's brother · 06-28-2009, 06:32 PM

The end ^/.\^
i made another story though, go find it ^^

sasruto · 07-22-2009, 10:27 PM

GG...oo...oo...d.

06-23-2009, 06:57 PM	#23
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06-24-2009, 06:44 PM	#28
Sai's brother Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I live with you. We share beds remember D: Posts: 17,208 Rep Power: 16 Member's Picture Albums	Destruction of the Darkness saga Part One~ I was tooken back home after what happened in the ruins. Jeremy took me took me to the hospital. I was critcaly low on blood. I spent around two days here in the hospital. After i was better and got out,i went to get something good to eat. I met some of my old friends there. i was still a little tired so i decided to rest at the village hot springs. It was so relaxing, soon after i feel asleep in the hot springs. Sooner or later i knew something bad was going to happen.

06-26-2009, 04:07 PM	#30
yondaime Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 4,681 Rep Power: 9	Re: Ruins great story sai's brother

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06-28-2009, 05:08 PM	#34
Sai's brother Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I live with you. We share beds remember D: Posts: 17,208 Rep Power: 16 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Ruins Part 4 (VERY VERY VERY SHORT) I saw the stars coming towards the village,...i was in it too! I changed into Spirit form to avoid it.....the end....it was gone....no more of the village is was destroyed...i had no where to go but with him...my brother

06-28-2009, 06:28 PM	#35
vampire Lycan Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: May 2009 Location: I live at home Posts: 1,662 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ruins wow....

06-28-2009, 06:32 PM	#36
Sai's brother Jonin Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I live with you. We share beds remember D: Posts: 17,208 Rep Power: 16 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Ruins The end ^/.\^ i made another story though, go find it ^^

07-22-2009, 10:27 PM	#37
sasruto Veteran Chunin Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Don't ask me, because I don't know. Posts: 1,325 Rep Power: 0	Re: Ruins GG...oo...oo...d. __________________ ~ I'm sorry to say that i'm going to be leaving the forums. I'll come back for a visit once a month or so. Ooh...new emotions, Well, bye. ~ ~ (UPDATE 2/6/11) I will come here twice per week, instead of once per month. ~ ~ (UPDATE 10/27/12) I definitely quit this site. I bet no one even knows me anymore, but oh well. I'll update again in a year. ~

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