Fantasy Battle Contest: Voting The Winner! - Page 3

LilHinataGirl · 10-27-2012, 07:45 AM

My my I wish I could write more on the 2nd story lol but I got grounded off my phone bahahahahahahaha and I'm using my mamas iPad lol but yay thanks Maik I appreciate it (:

LilHinataGirl · 11-04-2012, 12:27 PM

This thread must LIVE!

pokeruto · 11-05-2012, 06:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Cloukora

When it introduced the bad guy I'm just like no, don't do it! DON'T LISTEN TO HIM! NO! NOOOO! The good guy part surprised me, I had thought about if he was really a bad guy as well, but I didn't even think about how he would bring peace about. I probably confused you, I just don't to reveal much for the other readers xD
An idea though: When the bad guy is "discovered" don't have him just admit to being a bad guy, have him try to confuse the other characters. The classic "Who is the real bad guy" because that IS a tough decision to make when you don't know who's telling the truth. Just my thought. You don't have to follow it.

Thanks Clouk, I appreciate the feedback!

And I honestly love the idea. It'll add more suspense just with a little tweak. I'll definitely implement it. And now your name can be somewhere near mine in the credits XD. I understand what you meant, except is the "good guy part" Katsuo?

Cloukora · 11-07-2012, 12:00 AM

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Originally Posted by pokeruto

Thanks Clouk, I appreciate the feedback!

And I honestly love the idea. It'll add more suspense just with a little tweak. I'll definitely implement it. And now your name can be somewhere near mine in the credits XD. I understand what you meant, except is the "good guy part" Katsuo?

Nah, you don't need to credit me xD I can't remember the names, but I believe so. The one who wanted to bring peace to the world

It looks like LHG is winning. I knew I should have created something original! xD Jk, I had fun writing something laidback and not that original. I think more people need to vote though ._.

Naruto321 · 11-07-2012, 04:08 AM

There's a tie between that. So I need more votes. Probably get one of the quasi's to vote ot something before the poll closes

Cloukora · 11-07-2012, 06:54 PM

Wait, we're tied? I mean even subtracting LHG's vote for herself, she's still ahead.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 11-07-2012, 07:03 PM

I don't see how 6-5 or 7-5 is a tie. [o.o]

I already voted as a quasi.

Devroux · 11-07-2012, 07:12 PM

Face.

Naruto321 · 11-07-2012, 07:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Maikeru D. Shinigami

I don't see how 6-5 or 7-5 is a tie. [o.o]

I already voted as a quasi.

Yea I see that

But someone had 4 votes and someone else had 4 votes.

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Originally Posted by Cloukora

Wait, we're tied? I mean even subtracting LHG's vote for herself, she's still ahead.

That's correct

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 11-07-2012, 07:59 PM

Oh, so are we deciding between two entries still?

LilHinataGirl · 11-08-2012, 07:24 PM

Ooooo interesting 0:

joon61 · 11-10-2012, 10:09 AM

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Originally Posted by Maikeru D. Shinigami

LilHinataGirl: You have an interesting story, I will say that now. However, the way you present the story makes it sort of confusing. Not because of the story itself but the way you structure your sentences and paragraphs. There were times were I had to reread to figure out what was happening to who, who was doing what or who was saying what. I understood it in the end, but it could be improved. One thing I would recommend is to separate your paragraphs so that only one person says something in each paragraph. I would also recommend that when you have more than two people in a scene that you call them by their names instead of 'he' or 'she'. You didn't really get enough time to have the characters sink home for me, but it could be an interesting story and I like the set up for the next chapter.

joon61: Yours is too long for me to read right now. I want to commend you on putting in the effort to make it that long though. I can tell that you really tried to make something good. I might try to read it later on, but for now, I think it's only fair for me to give you a thumbs up and give you credit for doing as much as you did.

I ended it in a part. In a month or so,there will be a second part to it with new characters so keep reading.

LilHinataGirl · 11-12-2012, 05:59 AM

Yayay contest should be ending today right right? (:

Edit: there's a 3 way tie for last O: ... Good luck :3

LilHinataGirl · 11-12-2012, 03:15 PM

Well I'm trying to bring this back to life! But damn tied for first ... Vote people for which you like so we can even out the winners :3

Cloukora · 11-12-2012, 03:16 PM

FFF I was ahead! D: xD
Yes, people, VOTE! NAO

pokeruto · 11-12-2012, 03:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Cloukora

FFF I was ahead! D: xD
Yes, people, VOTE! NAO

Yes....please........vote... :'( lol

Doesn't the contest end on the 14th?

LilHinataGirl · 11-12-2012, 03:22 PM

^ he said on the 12th which is today haha!! I know your pain clou!!

Naruto321 · 11-12-2012, 06:24 PM

But you do see that it says the poll ends on the 14th

Hinata, your still tied with Cloukora because you voted for yourself. So your tied at the moment.

trouble88 · 11-12-2012, 06:45 PM

damn I in third place o.o awesome

LilHinataGirl · 11-13-2012, 01:50 PM

@naruto I know we're tied xD!! We need them voters lol n I thought it ended on the 12th oh well I just had a blonde moment hahaha

View Poll Results: Which one has the best story?
Cloukora	7	26.92%
LilHinataGirl	8	30.77%
joon61	3	11.54%
trouble88	4	15.38%
pokeruto	4	15.38%
Voters: 26. You may not vote on this poll

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