Spiritual world of magic

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I fixed it.

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Jinku:As Marik charged at me, I shook my head. "Only fools rush in."
I duck under his punch and send my fist and his stomech at high speed.
Marik:I got hit in the stomech and I almost fell unconcious. I might want to stay away from him since he uses earth.
I grunt in pain as I fell to the ground and quickly got back up, yet still a little off balance.
Jinku:I hit the ground, making earth spikes come up from below marik and also coating my arm with rocks. I then tap the rocks, reinforcing them into one piece, making it a long earth glove. I then rush and marik and jump into the sky, attempting to come down with a crushing blow that is aimed at his head.
Marik:I was still off balance and then earth spikes came up from below me.
I jumped up in the air real quick and shot lighting down at them, taking care of that dangerous ideal.
Then, Jinku made his own glove and was coming falling, trying to smash me with his arm in the process.
I quickly spun around, creating a lightning tornado around me and dashed towards Jinku.
Jinku:"I'lll kill the girl."
Marik:Jinku's comment threw me off guard and made me lose my concentration, stoping the lightning tornado and geting hit in the back with the earth glove.
Jinku:He was smashed to the ground, injured by the look of it.
"Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. Friends are for the weak.
Freinds just slow you down and hold you back.
As long as you have freinds, you will never beat anyone."
Marik:My back was broken and I could hardly move.
"You're...................Wrong.
People with freinds..........Fight to protect them.
Which is why I'm fighting now."
I turn over on my back and shoot 10 lightning bolts at Jinku.
The lightning bolts sping around Jinku, making a sphere of lightning around him.
"Flares bolton!!!"
I shoot a lightning bolt at the sphere, making the sphere turn into blue lighting from the inside but yellow lightning on the outside.
Jinku:I was finished. In that faint second, I saw my whole life flash before my eyes.


Flash back

Boy:"Big brother, do you want to play with me."
Jinku:"Sure."
I played tag with my 6 year old little brother.
Boy:"Brother, what do you want to do when you grow up?"
Jinku:"I want to be a chef."
Boy:"Really?"
Jinku:"Yeah."
Boy:"Will you cook good food for me when you become a chef big brother?"
Jinku:"Yeah"
Boy:"Yay!!! big brother is going to cook for me.

3 years later


Jinku:I was crying. My brother had passed away.
I promised him that I would cook good food but I knew that I could offer him none if he was not here.
The pass 2 days, I stayed cooped up in my house, Still crying.

I got over it 3 days later, I went to take a cooking class and I met some freinds there.
I was the top of my class.
A year later, I graduated.
As I was about to get on my plain to paris, my freind called me and said he needed help right away.
I rushed over there, missing my flight.
When I got there, my freinds were holding a gun aginst me.
I could not belive it, my freinds were jealous of me.
They shot me down and ran away.
I heard sirens as I blacked out.
I woke up in a new world and my wounds were completly healed.
I met Zebelidus and he gave me everything.
I then realized that no one could really be trusted but Zebelidus.
He showed me light. He did not hold me back.
And he was always there for me.
And now.

Marik:Jinku was finished.
I quickly shot a bolt of lightning that Julie was in, making a hole in it.
I then passed out, tired, hoping that she would be ok.

Max:"Are we there yet?"
Zero:"No."
A dragon appears before us.
"Now we are."
Max:"Smart ass."

To be continued.

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Max:"It's too stuffy in here."
I ignite my feat and grab Zero.
I then rush out of the cave with some increased speed.
Zebelidus:I see a faint light and it was geting closer by the second.
I could also feel some stomping coming from something big.
I saw Max dash right pass me.
I then turned around and saw a dragon.
"Damn!!"
I ran out of there as fast as I could.
Max:I come out of the cave and land and wait for the dragon to come out of the cave.
But I saw someone unexpected come out.
"You!!!!"
Zebelidus:"Oh be quiet."
Zero:"It comes."
The dragon came rushing out and let out a powerful roar.
Dragon:"All shall perish before me for disturbing my eternal sleep."
Max:"What? Zero, what is he talking about?"
Zero:"Why are you asking me?"
Max:"What do you mean why I'm asking you."
Zero:"I thought he was sleep so I wanted to kill him without waking him.
But it seems that the plan has slightly changed."
Max:"Slightly changed?!"
Zero:"Question. Are you scared?"
Max:"No but why did he wake up?"
Zero:"We will have to improvise."
I fly into the air and shoot 2 bubbles of wind presure at the dragon.
I then make a sharp spear and position my self as a drill, with the spear in front of me.
I spin around and dash towards the dragon, attempting to drill right through the dragon.
Dragon:As the bubbles come to me, I blow them away with my mighty breath, getting the insects caught up in it as well.
Max:Me, Zero, and Zebelidus, were all blown away from the dragon.
"Those trees did not do me any good."
I got up slowly as I saw just about all the trees koocked down.
"Damn dragon."
I looked around and saw a surprise that I wish I never saw.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=Lfa2QLV3MaA

Ben:"I told you I would be back."
You can't escape now.
Max:"Where did you go last time you big ape? Did you get scared and leave?"
Ben:Memory loss, huh. He must have blacked out once he turned to normal.
"You're a freak you know that?"
Max:"I don't see how I'm any different then what you are."
I smirk.
Ben:"I'll shut that smart mouth of yours!!!!"
I stomp the ground, making a tidal wave of earth that is heading for Max.
Max:"Crap!"
I shoot a torrent of flame at ben's earth wave, making it hotter and weaker as it begins to melt.
I then ignite my fist and jump in the air and hit the weakened part of the wave with my fist, breaking through it.
I then land and shoot a barrage of fireballs at Ben.
Ben:I hit the ground, making a earth wall in front of me, blocking the fireballs.
Doing this also coats my fist with rocks.
I then tap my fist, reinforcing the rocks.
I then rush at Max and try to hit him with it.
Max:I jump over Ben, dodging his punch.
"Blazing beam!!!"
I shoot a fiery beam at Ben, hoping to hit him with it while 10 feet in the air.
Ben:I quickly turn around while saying.
"Metal buster sheild!!!"
I block the the beam with my sheild and it shoot the blast right back at him.
Max:"Oh no!!"


Meanwhile


Anna:"He's over there!!!"
Zack:"I'm tired of running."
Zebelidus:"I don't like when people betray me Anna, you should know that."
Zack:"Ready for round 2?"
Anna:"My covers blown. Oh well."

To be continued.

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Anna:I run over to Zebelidus and shoot 2 blasts of wind at him.
Zack:I make a fireball and throw it in the air.
I then hit it at Zebelidus with my sword.
Zebelidus:The blasts of wind push me back a bit. Then, the fireball blows up in my face. I get up,weakened.
"You will not get the best of me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

I transform as all my wounds become healed.
I am black all over but my eyes are green and yellow.
I dash behind Anna and Zack as I kick them into the air and fly up, spining like a drill.
Zack:"Damn! He snaped."
Anna:"We have to do something."
Zack:As Zebelidus was coming towards us, I quickly kicked Anna out of the way and put my sword in the way to block him. But he broke my sword and he went right through me.
Anna:"Nooo!!!!!
Zack:I fell on the ground, injured.
Luckly, he missed my heart but some of my eternal orgens were destroyed.
Zebelidus:As I land and see Zack fall to the ground, I see Anna on the floor.
"Hmmm, I must have missed her. Idiotic boy!!!!"
I walk toward zack slowly.
"You must have known there would have been a price for protecting the weak.
People who cannot help themselves should just kill themselves to save others the suffering.
And now, you must die because of that.
I am sorry my boy, but it is fate that has brought you this ideal."
I create a spear of pure darkness and attempt to stab zack with it but a orb a light diminishes it.
Anna"I'm not weak."
I spin around with holy energy covering me as I absorb it all into my hand and release it all at zebelidus at blinding speed.
Zebelidus:I am hit with the blast that anna sent my way.
"Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Stop it at once!!!!!!!!!!!"
Anna:I tried my best to keep the blast going but he had to much dark energy and this was taking a toll on my life force.
Zebelidus:"Arg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
???:I quickly come and kick anna in the face to save zebelidus.
I then flip my hair.
"Tramp."
Zebelidus:"Thank you Donna. You are truely a life saver."
Donna:"True."
Anna:I was weak from the blast and some guards came to pick me up.
I couldn't even fight back.
I passed out as they carried me away.

Meanwhile

Max:The blast hit me, but it did not hurt me.
I felt better.
My wounds cleared up.
Ben:"You're just full of surprises, aren't you?"
I stomp the ground, making a rock come out of the ground as I throw it at Max.
Max:I shoot a exploding fireball at the rock. The rock and the fireball hit each other as the fireball explodes, destroying the rock.
"That the best you got?"
The smoke clears and I see ben with some kind of energy blast in his hand.
Ben:"Jumpo time!!!"
I shoot a energy blast at max that will destroy all the bones in his body if it hits.
Max:As the blast was coming to me, I didn't know what to do.
I then blacked out.

Max's mind:
???:I will now help you.
Max:No! I saw what you did last time and I won't let it happen again.
???:How about this,let's make a deal.
Max:A deal.
???:Yes. We will take turns fighting but on one condition.
Max: *gulps*
???:You cannot interfere with my fights. But don't worry. I won't hurt your freinds.
Max:Ok. But when my fights come, I can call you at anytime and, you have to do what I say.
Because I think that if I die, you die.
???:yes, our fates are linked.
Now, let's go.

Real world

Blaze max:My eyes open as I quickly knock the blast to the side with my fire covered hand.
Ben:"There goes that power again."
Blaze max:"You shall now feel the power of a god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
I shoot a black beam of fire at ben at blinding speed.
Ben:I quickly roll out of the way of the beam and open up a hole in the ground with my earth powers.
I then jump in and make a tunnel to get away.
"If I don't find soemthing to counter that power, I might as well search for a new career!"

Blaze max:
(???:Let's let him go for now.
I will now swich back to you.
Max:Ok, thanks for the help.)
Max:I turn back to normal with no flames on my body.
"This is awesome!!!
Now to find my freinds."



To be continued.

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John:I was looking at all the trees that have fallen down.
"What happened here I wonder."
Max then bumped into me.
"Watch where you're going."
Max:"I felt anna's energy fading away."
John:"Where did you feel it last."
Max:"Just now. Move!!"
I pushed john out of the way and ignited my feet.
I boosted towards the location of where I last felt anna's energy.
John:"I need to find marik but max is being a ass.
What to do, what to do"
A person came out of the bushes.
Zero:"I will go after him."
John:"Who are you?"
Zero:"I am zero. I will help max. Just go do what you need to do."
John:"How do i know I can trust you?"
Zero:"Do you have a choice?"
John:"True. Fine then. But i'm counting on you."
Zero:"Rest assured"
I make a wind saucer and ride it into the sky to keep a eye on max.
I then see zebelidus and his guards walking away from the location of where max is heading.
"This could maybe end bad."


Meanwhile


Julie:I ran over to marik as I saw him lying on the ground.
"Marik,wake up!!"
I started to shake him but he still wasen't waking up.
"I need to find someone to heal his wounds.
Someone help!!!!! Anybody!!!!!"



John:I rushed over to marik as I saw him with julie.
"Is he okay?"
Julie:"I don't know."
John:"It's gonna be alright."
I conjure up a lot of wind and make a wind sphere around me, Julie and Marik.
I then launch into the air and look for a town.


Meanwhile

Max:I arrived at my location but Anna was not there.
I did however, see zack.
"Zack, are you okay?"
Zack:"That's.............. A stupid question dumbass.
Reach into my pocket........ And take out a blue bottle.
Max:I did what he asked and gave to bottle to him.
Zack:I took the bottle and drank what was inside.
"Just.....wait."
Max:I waited for about 30 seconds and zack got up real quick.
"What the....."
Zack:"Phew. That was close.
I was going to save that for julie but it looks like I had to use it.
I won't find another one of those for 100 years. If I even live that long."
Max:"Ummmm ok. so anyway, where's anna?"
Zack:"We were fighting zebelidus and he took her away after he kicked my ass."
Max:"You guys fought zebelidus?"
Zack:"Yep!!! I bet you're jealous right about now."
Max:"I didn't get my ass kicked, you did."
Zero:I fly down to where zack and max are.
"While you guys are here talking, they are geting away."
Max:"Dammit!"
Zero:"Let's go."

Zack, Max, and Zero rushed to where Zebelidus was.

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Appearance of characters:
Max:

Spoiler:

eyes:blue
Hieght:5'5
weight:135
Hair color:black
Hair style:ivy league
Age:16
Clothes:red shirt,blue jeans with red and gray shoes.

John:

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Eyes:blue
Hieght:5'9
weight:150
Hair color:brown
hair style:ivy leaugue
Age:19
clothes:Black shirt with a gray flanel jacket.
Black jeans with green shoes.

Marik:

Spoiler:

Eyes:Blue
height:5'0
weight:100
Hair color:black
Hair style:Curtained hair
age:13
clothesark goldish shirt with a pair of gray jogging pants.
blue shoes with green stripes.

Zack:

Spoiler:

eyes:brown
height:5'8
weight:160
hair color:black
hair style:crew cut
Age:18
clothes:black polo with a logo on the back that says"pain"
Black jeans with a gun holster. Gray shoes with black stripes.

Zero:

Spoiler:

eyes:black
height:5'7
weight:149
hair color:black
hair style:emo hair
age:18
clothes:Black jacket with some white jeans.
Wears a pair of are air jordan shoes.

Julie:

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Eyes:turqoise
height:4'8
weight:80
Hair color:Brown
hair style:mullet
Age:14
clothes:orange shirt with blue pants.
No shoes.

Anna:

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eyes:blue
height:5'1
weight:98
hair color:blonde
hair style:Straight hair
Age:16
Clothesink shirt with blue jeans.
Black shoes.

Ben:

Spoiler:

eyes:blue eyes
height:6'3
weight:220
black skin with no hair
age:22
clothes:black and gray armor with black pants with big brown boots.

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Zebelidus:"Three people are coming for us."
Donna:"I will stand to face them. After all, you're injured."
Zebelidus:"Very well then. Soilders,let us move faster."
We ran so we could let donna hold them off. When she uses her power, you would not want to be around.

Max:I stoped running and saw a girl stand in my way. "Move it!!"
Donna:"I'm sorry but I can't let you pass." I throw a metalic ball with some yellow goo on it into the air and slam it in the middle of Max, Zero, and Zack, making the goo splatter all over everything.
Zack:"Max, watch out." I jump on top of Max, pushing him out of the way of the goop as some get's on my shoe.
Zero:I make a wind barrier around me to stop the goo from reaching me.
Donna:"That's not going to be enough to beat me. I really don't think you gus have what it takes to win." I make the goo that is on zack's shoe eat it up.
"The worse thing about the goo for you guys is that i can also make it explode.
Max:"I'll just burn it."
Donna:"I would like to see you try little boy."

Max, Zack, and Zero prepared to fight donna.
OBito be continued.
Sorry it's so short.
It will now come at a faster pace.

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Donna:I twirl around and shoot 10 metalic goo coated balls into tha air. They rain down on my foes.
Max:I ignite my whole body and hit one of the balls but my hand begins to corrode. "Dammit."
Zero:I make a giant gust of wind and hurl it at the metalic balls, throwing them somewhere else. I then quickly shoot a blade of wind at max's arm, causing it to come off once it hits.
Max:"AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!" Zero cut off my arm off. I quickly took off my shirt with my other arm and put it on my wound, slowing down the bleeding.
(???:need help)
(Max:I need a doctor.)
Donna:"I know your powers already. Why do you think I'm so confident."
I make a cannon and fill it with my goo. I shoot the goo at zack at blinding speed.
Zack:I quickly duck, dodging the attack.
Donna:"Moron." The goo on explodes while it is over zack's head.
Zack:I blacked out, not knowing what hit me.
Max:"This is bad. She's too strong."
(I might have to ask you to-)
Zero:"Max, just let me handle this."
I begin to transform as a shockwave of wind blasts from my body. Nothing harful of course but anyone could be thrown off balence by it if not on guard.
My eyes turn green as my breath goes beyond human cabability.
"Are you ready to face death!!!!"
I cough at donna, causing a ball of wind to shoot out of my mouth like a cannon.
Donna:I am hit in the stomech with the ball of wind as it takes me into the air.
I could not even see it coming.
Zero:I make the ball of wind expand, trapping donna in it. I then make it explode.
"I think that takes care of here. Let's hurry and get you to a doctor."
Me and max run to the nearest town we can find.


Meanwhile

Donna:"Those damn...... Brats. I'll be back."

TO be continued.

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Zack:I woke up about 30 minutes later and looked around. "Where did everyone go?"
I got up with lots up burns and cuts. "I need to find a town." I begin to travel with my injuries.

Meanwhile

John:Me, Julie, and marik, who was unconcious, arrived at a town called riddleson. As we approched the gates, a man was standing there and we were given a riddle. It went:There are some months that have 31 days. Some have 30. How many have 28? I thought real hard about it but julie gave the right answer.
Julie:

Spoiler:

All 12 of them.

John:And with that,the man let us in the town. We looked for the nearest hospital. "there it is." We tried to go in but a woman was standing there and she also had a riddle."Another one?"
Julie:"Maybe coming to this town was not the best thing to do."
The riddle was:There was 2 fathers and 2 sons. They went fishing and caught each of them caught one fish,equaling 3. How did it equal 3?
John:"I'm not good at these things."
julie:"The answer is"

Spoiler:

It was a father,a grandfather,and a son!!"

John:Julie gave the right answer yet again."Nice work. You're pretty good at this. How did you learn to do that?"
Julie:"I.......I don't know."
john:"Did your paents teach you?"
Julie:"I don't remember anything about my parents. I don't even know who or where they are."
John:"It's ok. Maybe you're just gifted with the power of riddles."
Julie:"Yeah I guess."
John:The woman let us in and we put marik in a hospital bed.
"Julie, you stay here with marik. I will go book us in for a inn tonight. Hopefully I won't get anymore riddles."
I leave the hospital and go to the inn.
Julie:John left me with marik in the hospital. The doctors treated his wounds and let him rest. I stayed with him until john came back but I fell asleep.
John:I got back to the hospital and one of the doctors told me that marik was resting. I went in his room and saw Julie sleeping with her head resting on the bed marik was laying on."I guess you can sleep here for tonight." I go to get a blanket and put it on Julie. I then leave the room and go back to the inn.

Meanwhile

Max:Me and zero got to a town called fansal. We quickly went to the hospital. This town seemed to revolve around magic. It was everywhere. They said my arm would be brought back in 2 months. I did not belive them but I guess I would have to just wait and see.
Zero:"Sorry about your arm."
Max:"No problem. Better than being dead. Besides,it's getting taken care of now."
Zero:"I feel like i'm forgeting something."
Max:"Dammit! We forgot zack."
Zero:"I would go look for him, but I promised your brother to keep an eye on you."
Max:"I'm in a hospital with my arm cut off. If he knew about this, you would be dead."
Zero:"He can't be that far away. I'll go look for him."
Max:"Don't get caught by zebelidus's forces."
Zero:"I won't."
I make a wind saucer and fly on it to look for zack.


Meanwhile

Zebelidus:I am glad that you have decided to work for me again. I like the new look I gave you. Don't you?
Anna apeared before me with her eyes pitch black and her hair was purple. A shady black mist was coming from her body.
Dark Anna:"Yes master"

To be continued.

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John:I woke up up in the morning and got out of bed. I went in the bathroom and took a shower. I then went to the hospital to see how marik was doing. I did not see julie there. Marik woke up.
Marik:I saw john as I woke up. I then got up quickly but felt alot of pain.
John:I made Marik lay back down."Don't strain yourself."
Marik:"Where's julie? Did you find Max and Zack? where am I?"
John:In order:Julie is somewhere in this town I guess. I did not find max yet. You are in a town called riddleson.
Marik:"Oh. When can I get out of the hospital."
John:"Well you were beat up real bad so there is no telling when you will get out."
Marik:"Ok then."
John:"I'm going to go look for Julie."
Marik:Ok, bye."
John:I walk outside and see a merchant. I walk over to him. "What kind of stuff do you sell?"
Merchant:"Well let's see here. I have this potion. It will heal anybody completely. I know it sounds a bit shady but I can guarante you it will work."
John:"What flower did this come from?"
Merchant:"Flower?"
John:"Never mind. I'm not interested. What else do you have?"
Merchant:"Well I have this chiyu flower. I don't know what it does but it's good to get money off something you can't use."
John:"I'll take it."
Merchant:"That'll be 100 kigs"
John:I give the merchant 100 kigs and leave. The potion he was trying to sell me was fake. This flower will give me the real thing.

Meanwhile

Max:I always hated hospitals. I started thinking about Anna, John, and Marik. I wish I knew where they were. And then there is Ben, who keeps running away from me. I need to hurry and get better. "That's it!!!!! I just need to find Anna. She might be able to fix my arm faster.........But, how am I supposed to carry the healling equipment around?"

Meanwhile

Zack:I see Zero up in the air as I begin to shout out to him."Heeeeeeeeey!!!"
Zero:I see Zack on the ground as I fly down to pick him up. "...........How's it going?"
Zack:I punch Zero in the face. "What do you mean how's it going? You guys forgot all about me!! I'm just out here stranded and-"
Zero:"You talk to damn much. Stop taking your anger out on people physically."
Zack:".................. Whatever. Take me to Max."
When we got to where Max was, I was put in a hospital bed. I just had some slight cuts and burns. Nothing compared to Max's situation.

Meanwhile

Julie:I was sitting by a river in a forest, trying to remember something about my parents. "What's wrong with me." The only thing I can remember was Zack. I had no memories of my parents. Jinku was dead so I only had one brother left.
I sat there crying as my tears droped into the river. The water became more pure as it reflected upon the sky.

Meanwhile

Marik:I sat in my bed, looking out the window. I almost died protecting julie this time. I don't want to die. I want to live with my brothers. I want to live with Julie. I don't want anyone to die. I'll get stronger when I get out of the hospital. Then, I will be able to beat anybody so I can protect Julie.

Meawhile

Dragon:I see a woman on the ground, injured."Well what do we have here?"
Donna:"Please don't kill me."
Dragon:I put her in my mouth carfully and carried her to my cave.

Meanwhile

Zebelidus:I sat in my chair as my army standed before me."We are running out of food and weapons. We have to restock. I wanted to do this after I captured one more elemental but I guess that will have to wait. We will wait 2 months to begin the hunt again in order to prepare ourselves for the upcoming apocalpyse."
My army cheered as I got up from my chair and went to my quarters.
"Anna,it's almost time."
Dark anna:"Yes master."
Ben:I'll get Max the next time we meet for sure. Then, I will get eternal life.


The time has been set for both sides. A deadly showdown will be assured the next time light clashes with dark. But who will survive? That's what we will have to wait for.

Joon:It will be a time skip next time. It will also be more new characters appearing so i will continue this in a month or so.

[joon61]

Intro:


Max:My arm was fixed and I was ready to go. First thing I had to do,was find John and the others. That's easier said than done. Also, me, Zack, and Zero ran out of money. We headed out to look for John and the others because Zack was going crazy about his sister.
Zack:"Do you even know where they are, Max?"
Max:"I know as much as you do right now."
Zack:"What's that supposed to mean?"
Max:"I don't know, you tell me."
Zero:"I could scout ahead."
Max:"Sure."
Zack:"What's the matter? We're not going fast enough."
Zero:"Yep." I create a wind saucer and jump on it as I fly into the air with it.
Zack:"He thinks he's so great."
Max:"Considering the fact he never lost a fight since we've known him, as opposed to you."
Zack:"Why do you have to run your mouth all the time?"
Max:"Hehehe. It needed to be said." Zero came back and landed.
Zero:"Zebelidus soilders are comming here. It's practically a whole army."
Max:"Damn! What should we do?"
Zero:"I suggest we go back to the town. Zebelidus is trying to flush us out of hiding. That being said, he's going to take over lots of towns and villages."
Zack:"Then why are we going back?"
Zero:"The whole place is surrounded. If we tried to fight them, we'd lose. There are just too many of them. I also saw a girl with dark mist all around her. I'm just going to assume she has powers."
Zack:"She could be a elemental."
Zero:"But if she's with Zebelidus, she's not our ally."
Max:"Alright then, let's hurry up and get inside."
We go back inside the town and warn everyone about the soilders.
The town agreed to help us get out of town without being detected by the soilders.



Max:The soilders came in the town in a quiet manner. They had the whole place surrounded.
Lady:"Please come with me."
Max:The lady showed us a underground passage that we could use to get away. "Why don't any of you use this?"
Lady:"Well we love this place. And if we left, we would not be able to experiment anymore with magic."
Max:"Well, okay." Before I went down, I saw anna walking pass the window. She looked kinda creepy and scary. Her eyes were glowing yellow as she was grinning. "Anna!"
Zack:"What the hell is wrong with you?"
Max:"It's Anna."
Zero:"No, that is the girl I was talking about. Whoever she was when you met her, is not the same person you see now."


Max:I run over to the window and jump out of it, placing myself outside.
"Anna,what are you doing?"

Zack:"What a dumbass."
Zero:"Once we get out of this town, we'll go look for John and the others. Then, we'll come back for him."
Me and Zack take the underground passage and get out of the town.

Dark Anna:"The elemental of fire, come with me."
Max:"Noooooo. It's max. Not elemental of fire."
Dark Anna:"Does that qualify as a no?"
Max:"Oh crap."
Dark anna:I blast a fast dark sphere at max.
Max:I quickly blast the ground with a beam of fire, lanching me into the sky, and dodging the dark blast. I then point my hand in the opposite direction of anna and release a firebeam from it, boosting myself to Anna as I attempt to kick her in the face.
Dark Anna:I catch Max's leg and slam him to the floor. "Dark nightmaray" Mist surrounds max as he falls asleep. I call the soilders as I head back to Zebelidus's lair with Max.
As I was halfway there, two people showed up in front of me.

John:"I'm sorry but that's our brother. Could you give him back to us?"
Dark Anna:"Out of the question."
Marik:"John, she's scary."
John:"Yes, she is. I don't know how she got that way. Anna, give back max before I am forced to do something I don't want to."
Dark Anna:"Go ahead. I'm waiting."
John:"I guess I'll have to then."


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Zack:"We got out of there. Max got captured but hey, survival of the fittest."
I see Julie running toward me and zero.
"Julie?"
Julie:"Zack, I missed you so much.
Zack:"I missed you too. Where are the others?"
Julie:"Over here. Follow me."
Zack:Me and Zero follow Julie.


Meanwhile

John:I run over to anna and jump into the air while holding out my leg. I spin around, creating a tornado that I then hurl at Anna.
Dark Anna: I dissapear in complete darkness, leaving my soilders to be killed as I teleport to where Zebelidus is, taking Max with me.
John:"Where did she go?"
Marik:"I think she teleported."
John:"But where?"
Marik:"I don't know."
John:"Wait, Anna could use holy right?"
Marik:"Yeah."
John:"She must have a new power. Her nature was reversed."
Marik:"What power do you think it is?"
John:"Something complicated I'm sure." I then see julie,zack and zero running towards us. "Hello everyone. It's nice to see you both."
Zero:"Where's Max?"
John:"Anna took him away."
Marik:"We can talk later, if we don't get out of here soon, more soilders will come."
John:"He's right, let's get out of here. I have a town we can go to that Zebelius has not captured yet. And he won't capture it anytime soon. We can go there." We all head to the town of fantasia.

Meanwhile



Max:I knew I was having a nightmare, but I could not wake up. Everything was dark and I heard strange noises. There were people chanting. The chanting got louder and louder as I closed my ears. I could still hear it as if it was in my head. Then, all of the sudden, it stoped. And I woke up.

Inside head:

Spoiler:

???:"I undid the spell that was casted on you."
Max:"Thanks. I can't see anything though."
???:"I'll take over for now."
Max:"But-"
???:"When we get out of here, you can take over."
Max:"K"

Blaze Max:My body ignites as I light up the whole room. I see a door on my left as I walk over to it and open it. No one was there so I tried to find a way out of this place. There were no windows so it was hard to figure out if I was in the air or on the ground. I found another door as I opened it quietly. I took a peek in and saw no one in the room. I then saw 3 doors. A door on the right was blue, the door on the left was yellow and the door in the middle was black. I picked the door in the middle as a hand pushed me inside. Zebelidus sat in his chair while soilders where sitting before him. It looked like a confrence meeting.

Inside head:

Spoiler:

Max:"Swich now."
???:"You sure?"
Max:"Yeah."

Max:As I stood before Zebelidus and his soilders, I did not feel the slightest fear in me. I knew who this guy was and I knew what he wanted me for. And he did something to anna.

Zebelidus:"Max, it's so nice of you to join us. Why don't you sit down? Soilders, leave us."
The soilders left out of the room as Max sat down.
"How do you like my castle, isen't it fasinating?"
Max:"........................"
Zebelidus:"Would you like anything to eat?"
Max:"........................."
Zebelidus:"You're not very talkative today are you?"
Max:"I have questions....... I'm just going to wait until you shut up."
Zebelidus:"Ask away."
Max:"What do you plan to do once you capture all the elementals."
Zebelidus:"I want to change the world, Max. I want to rule the universe. If everything is under my control, nothing will go wrong for anyone. Making everything perfect is going to be a hard task but someone has to do it. If not me, who else is fit for it?"
Max:"The world can't be perfect. The only way for it to be perfect, is for the human race to evolve."
Zebelidus:"But that will take too long. Why wait if you can get rid of less than 10 people to make everything better for more than millions of people.
Max:"Show me what you showed Ben."
Zebelidus:I hold out my hand as 2 people appear in front of me. "You like what you see?"
Max:"You ba-"
Zebelidus:"This can be given to you if you do as I say."
Max:"..................."
Zebelidus:"Yes Max, I can make everything better if you follow the path to a new world."
Anna walks in the room and sits down.
"I convinced Anna and she said she would do it."
Max:"No, you did something to her."
Zebelidus:"No, I just sent her to a place where she realized her true feelings."
Max:"Grrrrrrrrr"
Zebelidus:"I can help you obtain power and get what you want. I can even make it so that you still live. Even after I sacrifice you."
Max:"Okay, send me to where you sent Anna."
Zebelidus:"As you wish." I open a portal to hell. "This is where I sent Anna. Go in. Anna will acompany you on your journey to acheive power."
Max:I go in the portal as Anna follows me in there.
Inside head:

Spoiler:

Max:"I have a plan."
???:"I hope you know what your doing."

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Max:I was transported to hell, where demons of all kind were lurking about. "I already don't like this place."
Dark anna:"You will soon."
Max:Anna still had that grin on her face. She just would not stop smiling. It was really creepy. "Umm why do you keep smiling?"
Dark anna:"Why not smile. Who wants to be sad all the time?"
Max:"It's kind of giving me the creeps."
Dark anna:"Then don't look."
Max:I turn away and begin to walk north. "Where are we going?"
Dark anna:"You are the one walking that way."
Max:"....................." I turn towards anna. "Where are we supposed to go!?
Dark anna:"We are going to satan. He will give you the power you need to evolve."
Max:"What are you talking about. Wait, he's the kind of fallen angels right? I'm not going to him."
Dark anna:"Then there is no reason for you to be here. We will go back to Zebelidus."
Max:"Wait! Ok, I'll go."
Dark anna:"What made you change your mind all of the sudden?"
Max:"Nothing, I want to evolve. Now let's go." Anna led me to the castle of where satan was. When we got there, Anna just stoped moving. "What's wrong?"
Dark anna:"Go in yourself."
Max:"I need you to come with me."
Dark anna:"Why?"
Max:"What if someone is in there waiting for me?"
Dark anna:"Satan will take care of it."
Max:"Please."
Dark anna:"I don't know why you need me to come but if you insist then I shall acompany you inside."
Max:"Thanks."
Inside head:

Spoiler:

Max:"I need her to stay with me. If I let her out of my sight, she might go back to Zebelidus."
???:"Go in the castle and stop procrastinating."
Max:"Ok........."

Max:As me and anna go in, we see a man sitting in a chair. He was completely black.
Satan:"Hello Max, welcome to my lair. I am Satan."
Max:As satan was talking,his words echoed in my head. Then, I felt a giant pain in my head and heart as I got on my knees. "AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" A black sphere lanched out of my mouth as it went into satan's hand. Everything was covered in mist as satan grew bigger. "What was that!?"
Satan:"I was the person you talked to in your mind. I am the person who controls hell. I am the king of fallen angels, the king of devils and the king of hell. There is not anything that has less power than a god that can defeat me."
Max:"What the hell?"
Satan:"And just what is that supposed to mean? No matter. I have received my other halve already. Now you may leave. Unless there is something else you want."
Max:I thrust my hand at satan, trying to throw a fireball at him but no flame is produced. "Why can't I use my powers?"
Satan:"When my halve left you, it took it's powers with it. The power you had was no ordinary power. It was hellfire. The flames that are summoned from hell."
Max:"Give them back!!!!" I run over to satan as I try to punch him in the face."
Satan:I snap my fingers as a blast a darkness envelops max.
Max:The darkness cleared up as I was teleported out of the castle. "All of my powers are lost. How do I get them back?"
Dark anna:Satan teleported me where max was. "I guess we can go back to Zebelidus now."
Max:"No......No......I'm not going back to him. I want to know where I can find the gates of heaven and hell. I need to go to heaven. Where can I find the gates?"
Dark anna:"Zebelidus told me to take you to hell and nothing else. If we did not get what we came for, than we are going back to Zebelidus."
Max:"Fine, take me back to him."
Dark anna:I open the portal to Zebelidus's lair.
Max:I go in the portal as I am back where zebelidus is.
Zebelidus:"Have a nice trip?"
Max:"......................."
Dark anna:"Satan took his powers."
Zebelidus:"So it seems you are not a elemental, are you?"
Max:"How the heck am I supposed to know?"
Zebelidus:"How did you get your powers? Was it by crystal or a god?"
Max:"Crystal."
Zebelidus:"Then you must not be a elemental. A elemental gets his powers from a god, meaning that they are on of the chosen. Ethier that or a god has not chosen you yet. Come here." As Max approches me, I touch his chest. "You are indeed a elemental, but of what element?"
Max:"I know what I need to do."
Zebelidus:"What is that?"

Max:I quickly take a chair and throw it at anna as she then falls on the ground. I flip on the table as I pick up 2 chairs and run out the room.
Zebelidus:"Catch him!!!!!!!"
Max:I See guards on the right as I bust out the door. I go left as I see a spear. I throw the chairs behind me and pick up the spear as I point it in front of me. I quickly run down a staircase as I end up outside, but not yet on the ground. I see lots of soilders heading for me. As I turn back, I hear the voices of the ones chasing me. I look down on the ground as I see a horse near lots of hay. I quickly jump off the castle as I throw away the spear and land in the hay as it breaks my fall. I get on the horse as begin to ride it. I begin to go north as I see other soilders following me with their own horses. 2 soilders come up on the side of me as one trys to stab me. I lean back as I grab his sword. I then slash his horse's leg. His horse collapses as I slash the other soilder and grab his sword. I keep heading north.

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Max:I didn't know where I was going but I knew where I needed to go. First thing was that I needed a map. It was getting darker as it started to rain. I needed to find a town. The horse threw me off as it headed back to Zebelidus's lair. "Guess I'm walking." As I looked for shelter, I found a small cave. I went in as I saw nothing inside but pebbles and branches. I went back outside as I found 2 trees. I cut them down with my 2 swords as the tree fell on the ground. I then cut wood off the tree as I took the wood into the cave. I needed to find some flint to light a fire. A man came inside the cave and zaped the wood, creating fire for warmth. The man had light yellow eyes with blode hair. He was wearing a blue shirt with black jeans and white sneakers. "Who are you?"
Rajin:"My name is Rajin. What are you doing in a place like this?"
Max:"This is the only place I have to go. If this is your home or something then I'll just leave."
Rajin:"What's your name?"
Max:"I'm Max Speed."
Rajin:"Come with me."
Max:"Huh?"
Rajin:"I am the elemental of lightning. It's time for you to evolve."
Max:"Can you evolve without powers?"
Rajin:"What do you mean?"
Max:"I lost my powers."
Rajin:"How did that happen?"
Max:I told Rajin what happened. I was tired of running around this whole place. I wanted to go home.
Rajin:"Wow. Well here's the thing. You need to get you powers from a god. Not a crystal. The crystals are things that anybody can pick up and gain powers. They are feathers of ethier angels or fallen angels. You had a god feather, which gives you the power that only a elemental can achive."
Max:"But I am a elemental. So I got that power but it was not the power I was supposed to have?"
Rajin:"Right. Almost right. You were supposed to have that power if you were the opposite of a elemental, a nue."
Max:"A nue?"
Rajin:"A nue is the opposite of a elemental. The elementals are supposed to bring peace to Harufune. The nues are the people who are supposed to destroy it and let hell control it."
Max:"So they are our enemies?"
Rajin:"Yes. We need to unlock your powers so you can evolve."
Max:"Where do we need to go?"
Rajin:"The town of Fantasia. We will head out tommorow. Get some sleep."
Max:"Ok." As it stoped raining, I went to sleep.


Meanwhile



John:"OK everyone, we must present ourselves to the king."
Marik:"The king?"
John:"Yes. The king of holy. We will be safe here. Zebelidus would not dare attack this place."
Zack:"Why not?"
Zero:"He does not have enough fire power. His forces would lose. A sad loss it would be."
Man:"Hurry up and get inside!!!"
John:"What's wrong?"
Man:"The nues are attacking!!"
John:"What!!!"
Man:"They have 1000 soilders and 4 nues with them."
John:"Let's get inside."
Zack:"I hear loud stomping. I don't like the sound of it."


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John:I look up as I see a giant beast heading for fantasia. "That's crazy."
Marik:"How are we supposed to fight something like that?!"
Zero:"It's huge!!!!"
Julie:"Oh no!!"
Zack:"Come on! We got to go!"
Marik:"This will destroy the town if it reaches it right?"
John:"Marik!!!! Don't do anything stupid!!!"
Marik:I surge my body with lightning as I fly up to the giant.
Julie:"Marik no!!!!!"
John:"Dammit!!"
Zero:"I'll stop him."
John:"Ok, we'll be back soon." Me, Julie, and Zack go inside the town and run to the king's castle.
Zero:I bump my fists together as I begin to float in the air. I then begin to fly over to where Marik is.

Marik:As I get close to the giant, I shoot lightning bolts at it's chest, hoping to damage him at least a little, but it seemed like they had no effect on him. "Hurron saton!!!" I shoot a beam of lightning into the sky as it splits into 30 lightning balls. They rain down on the giant. I smile as the balls of lightning hit the giant but nothing happened to it. The giant then lunged his arm at me in a attempt to capture me. I let him catch me as I discharge my body with lightning, trying to shock him but it has no effect. "It's immune to lightning!!!?"
Zero:".........." I see the giant catch marik as I sigh in dissapointment. "If you're gonna try to go stop something this big, you should at least not get caught by it." I begin to transform as a shockwave of wind blasts from my body. Nothing harful of course but anyone could be thrown off balence by it if not on guard.
My eyes turn green as my breath goes beyond human cabability. "Let's finish this up quickly!!" I fly over to the giant as he trys to grab me with his free hand. I begin to whistle as a sharp beam of wind is released from my mouth. It pierces through the giant's hand as I move my head left and right continuesly, cutting through the giant's hand as I spin around. "Sonic wind slash!!!!" I send a blade of wind at the giant's other arm as Marik is freed from it's grasp. "And now, it's time to wrap this up." I create 2 mini tornado's in my hands as I inhale. "I'm gonna blow you away!!! Sonic gash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" 3 giant blasts of concentrated wind are blown at the giant as it rips it to shreds. I land on the ground as I go back to my original form. "Finished."
Marik:"Umm thanks. That was awesome!"
Zero:"It's nothing....."
???:"I was hoping that we could let the giant take care of this town, but-"
???:"It seems we will have to-"
BOTH:"Do it ourselves!!!!!!!!!!"
Marik:2 strange boys were standing in front of me and zero. "Who are you guys!!!"
Mag:"I'm Mag. The nue of magma!"
Coldool:"I'm coldool. The nue of ice!"
Marik:"Nue?"
Zero:"Nues are the opposite of elementals. They serve satan as me and the other elementals serve the holy king. I don't have much energy left. We need to retreat."
Mag:"That's right, run! You have no chance of beating us!"
Marik:"I'll fight them."
Coldool:"I don't like fighting kids. Mag, you handle him."
Mag:"Fine!"
Zero:"You can't beat him alone. You're not a elemental. Nues and elementals have more power than a crystal bearer can have. Even if you trained is much as you could, a elemental or nue would be stronger since they got their powers from a god. You got yours from a crystal."
Marik:"I show you just how much I've been training."


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Marik:I dash at Mag as I try to punch him in the face.
Mag:I duck under marik's punch as I jump up, trying to knee Marik in the stomech.
Marik:I catch Mag's knee as I quickly jab him in the face. I then grab his leg and course electricity through my body, electicuting him.
Mag:"Woaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!" I spit magma at Marik's arm as he lets go of my leg before the magma touches him. I then jump away from him. "You're pretty good, kid. But it will take more than that to beat me." I begin to spit at Marik, releasing balls of magma that will burn him alive.
Marik:"Woah!" I shoot 2 beams of electricity in the air as they begin to rain down on my opponet. At the last second, I transport myself through the beams as dodge the magma. The beams then go behind Mag as I appear behind him. I then fill my hand with electricity as I try to punch Mag in the back.
Mag:"Nice try." Marik's punch connects as my back turns to magma and solidfies, traping marik's hand in it as I turn into magma and duplicate myself, leaving the clone of me to keep marik traped. "Now, let's finish this."
Marik:"Two can play at that game!" I turn my traped hand into a blade of electricity as it phases through the hardened magma. I then turn my hand back to normal as I clap my hands together, creating a flash of thunder as I appear behind Mag. "I'm going to finish you quickly. My whole body turns yellow as electricity flows through it. I kick Mag into the air as I keep kicking him higher and higher. I then spin foward as I deliver a crushing heel blow to his chest and he begins to fall to his death.
Mag:"Nope." I quickly spit balls of magma at the ground as they solidfy as they hit the ground, making cracks in the ground. I turn my body to magma as I slip through the cracks, surviving the fall.
Coldool:"This is interesting. A crystal user keeping up with a nue."
Marik:I land on the ground as I discharge my electricity as it forms into a ball. I hold it into my hands as I wait for Mag to come out of the cracks.
Coldool:"But this is as far as you go."
As the ground starts shaking, magma shoots out of the ground as Mag comes out of the cracks.
Mag:"I'm gonna watch you melt as I take my time killing you!!!!!!!" I spit in the sky 10 times, releasing magma hawks from my mouth as they head for Marik.
Marik:"Darn it!!"



Meanwhile


Max:"We are almost there right?"
Rajin:"We might have to take another path."
Max:"Why?"
Rajin:"Listen."
Max:I hear lots of soilders yelling. "Oh. Now what?"
Rajin:"Hold on to my shoulder."
Max:"Ok but I don't see how that's going to help us." I grab on the rajin's shoulder he shoots a beam of lightning into the sky. Suddenly, me and Rajin appear into the sky. "Woah!"
Rajin:"I can transport other people through lightning with me. As a elemental, you get uniqe powers that a crystal user can't have." I shoot a beam of lightning as me and Max appear on a building in fantasia. "let's go."
Max:"Wow!" I follow rajin as we go inside a castle.



Meanwhile in the king's palace



John:"My king, we have come to fight for you." We could not see the king's face. There was a white cloth over his face at all times.
King:"Very well then. Who have you brought to take the trials?"
Zack:"That would be me."
King:"Ok, considering you came here to take the trials, I assume that you chose heaven?"
Zack:"Yes."
King:"Ok."
I hold out my hand as a green circle appears on the floor.
"Step on that circle so you can take the trials."
Zack:"Ok." I stand on the circle as I am transported to a unknown place.
Julie:"Will he be okay?"
John:"Of course. Let's go check on Marik."
We head out the door as bump into Max.
"Max!!!!"
Max:"Hey, John."
John:"What are you doing here!!!?"
Rajin:"I'm sorry to interupt but we are in a hurry. John is it? I will have to ask you to come with me."
John:"Okay. I guess i'll see you later, Max."
Max:"Ummmm okay."
As John, Julie, and Rajin left, I approched the king.
King:"Do you wish to take the trials?"
Max:"I don't have my powers."
King:"Come here." As max walks over to me, I grab his head and give him his elemental powers. "You now have new powers, but, you will have to take the trials to fully awaken them."
Max:"Cool, I'll try-"
King:"Er, let's wait until you take the trials first."
Max:"Ok."
King:"Tell me, do you know Zack?"
Max:"Yeah. Can't say I care for him alot."
King:"I shall send you to train with him."
Max:"Wait what!?"
King:"We don't have much time." I make a circle appear on the floor. "step on this portal so you can take the trials."
Max:As I step on the portal, I am transported to a unknown place as I see Zack.
"Hey Zack, what's up!?"



Meanwhile



Zero:"I got to help marik. But I used up too much energy."
John:"I run over to Zero as I see marik fighting someone."
Rajin:"Whoever is fighting that nue, sure isen't a elemental."
John:"Marik!!!!!"
Marik:My shirt was torn up and I had burns and briuses all over me. This guy was no amatuer.
Julie:"Get out of there before you get yourself killed!!!"
Marik:"Don't worry, Julie. I'm gonna win this."
Rajin:"No, you won't."
John:"Marik, I'll take over from here."
Marik:"But I........"
Mag:"I won't let you escape!!!!!" As my eyes glowed red, I began to throw up magma, a magma behemoth formed out of the magma I spit out.
Coldool:"You feeling okay. It's not everyday that comes out of you. Be carful how much power you use up."
Mag:"I don't need your help!! Shut up!!!!!"
Coldool:".........................."
Marik:"The behemoth charged at me as John got in front of me."
John:I create a wind wall in front of me and Marik as the behemoth charged at me. The behemoth is blown up my the wind wall as I jump up into the air and kick it with my wind covered leg. I then land on the ground and blow Marik over to Rajin.
Rajin:I catch Marik and lay him on the ground.
Julie:"Marik, are you ok?"
marik:"Stop worrying. I'm ok."
Zero:"Let's get out of here."
Rajin:"I'll fight the other guy."
Coldool:"But, I don't like fightning kids."
Rajin:"Sorry. I guess the difficulty level will be on hard!!" I lunge at coldool as John lunges at Mag.

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John:I try to kick Mag in the face as I use my wind powers to make the kick faster.
Mag:I let john kick me but as I turn into magma and the kick goes right through me. I then catch john's leg and spin around. I let john go, sending him a great distance. I then inhale. "Magam blaster!!!!!!!" I release a beam of magma at john.
John:"I see physical attacks will not work on you." As the beam of magma charges at me, I quickly make my arm into a mini tornado and thrust it at the magma blast as it makes a straight line through the blast, stopping it. "Great tornado!!!" I spin around until a tornado suddenly appears around me. I then dash at Mag as I stick my leg out as the tornado draws Mag closer to me, attempting to kick him.
Mag:"Damn!" The tornado was pulling me towards it. "Magma flood!!!" I release magma from my hands as it blends with john's tornado.
John:I quickly stop the tornado and form a wind dome around me as the magma falls on the wind dome. I then expand the wind dome, blowing away the magma. "You're not playing around, are you?"
Mag:"Why don't you just die!!!? Transform!!!!"
My eyes glow red as everything on my body turns into magma.
"Nue transform!!!!!"
My whole body turns black as I gain a new power.
"Now, I have the power of dark magma! You won't even be able to keep up with me."
I explode in magma as the magma goes into cracks all over the battlefield.
John:"This power is crazy!!" I look around as i don't see Mag. "Where are you?"
Mag:"I'm right behind you!" I come out of a crack behind John and explode in magma again as the magma gets in John. It then covers John in darkness. I get inside John's body and take control of it.
Mag:"Hahahahaha!!!"

Rajin:"John!"
Coldool:"Go fight him. I told you how I don't like fighting kids."
Rajin:"Whatever!" I run over to john as his eyes glow red. "Get out of his body!"
Mag:"But what fun would that be!"
Rajin:I snap my fingers as a small spark of electricity comes out of my hand and goes around John. I then appear behind Mag. "I said get out!! Great discharge!!!!!!!!!!!!" My body releases all of it's energy as electricity comes out of it, shocking john almost black.
Mag:I get out of john's body and land of the ground, almost dead.
Rajin:"The weakness for that was that you feel the same pain john feels."
Mag:"I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" My body starts to disolve as I begin to black out. "Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Rajin:"Mag is dead. Coldool, you're next!"
Coldool:"You can't beat me because you don't have any power left."
Rajin:"But you have a handicap."
Coldool:"You just became a man by killing a nue. You hurt someone on your team in order to get the job done. I will now fight you. Also, you're asking for it!"
Rajin: This isen't good. I have no power at all. Coldool won't be easy to handle. I need some more energy so i can transform.

Marik:"Julie,go in the castle and wait there."
Julie:"I can't do that."
Zero:"Go in now!"
"I'm gonna use what little energy I have left. The bad thing about my transformation, is that it uses up my energy. I have to use my elemental transformation. Marik, you go with julie and get out of here."
Marik:"But-"
Zero:"It's time for you to protect the things you love. Now that the nues have come, you have to fill in like everyone else. Since this is the only thing you can do right now, you will just have to settle for it."
Marik:"Ok!" I get up slowly and grab julie's hand. "Let's go!" I take julie back inside town.
Julie:"Hey wait!!"

Zero:"......................" As marik and julie went inside the town, I ran over to rajin.
"I'll help you."
Rajin:"You might as well say you're gonna do the battle."

Zebelidus:Me,anna and 500 of my soilders appear at the battlefield. "It's time to attack!!!!!"
Coldool:"What the hell is Zebelidus doing here?"
Zebelidus:I form a dark energy barrier around me. "Anna, take out as many soilders as you can."
Dark anna:"Yes, my lord!"
Zebelidus:I fly over to where Coldool, Rajin, and Zero is and land on the ground.
"Hello everyone. How have you been over the years?"
Coldool:"You are a betrayer of the nues, Zebelidus. We have no business with you anymore."
Zebelidus:"I'm not here for you anyway. I'm here for the elementals."
Coldool:"As soon as you left the nues, the business with the elementals was no longer any business of yours. Scram, you sorry excuse for a nue."
Zebelidus:"I will not."
Coldool:The air around me gets cold as the ground below me begins to freeze.
"What did I say?"
Zebelidus:"What of it?"
Rajin:"Now might be a good time to get out of here!!!"
Zero:"Interesting, Zebelidus was a nue. I wonder what his special power is."
Rajin:"I'm just gonna go to the king and report this." I run inside the town to go tell the king.

Meanwhile with max and zack

Max:"It's about time to get out of here huh?"
Zack:"That test were not as hard as I thought they'd would be."
Max:"Hehehe."

Meanwhile with marik and julie

Marik:"Ok julie. We're safe."
Julie:"That's good."
Marik:"Don't worry,we're gonna get out of this."
I look up as I see something giant fly over me and julie.
"What is that!!!"
Julie:"Ahhhhhhhh!!"
Dragon:"Donna!"
Donna:"Right."
As the dragon flys down to the town, I jump off and land on a building. I then jump off the building and land where Marik and Julie is. I then knock Julie out and put her on my shoulder.
Marik:"Give back julie!!!!" I lunge at Donna and try to punch her.
Donna:I throw Julie up into the air as the dragon catches her. I then dodge Marik's punch and knee him in the stomech.
Dragon:"Shall we head back, Donna?"
Donna:"I still have business I need to take care of first." As the dragon flys away, I walk to the gates of fantasia, where I sense Zebelidus's energy at.

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Marik:As donna walked away, I began to run after the dragon. I quickly surged my body with electricity. Not having alot of energy, I quickly chased after the dragon.
Dragon:"Hahahahahahahahahahaha! You won't catch me!" I see the boy chasing me as I soar through the air. I fly over to a forest and land softly.
Marik:The dragon landed near a forest. "This is the forest where me and julie first met." I land where the dragon is.
Dragon:"I will destroy you if you get in my way. This girl has the power to enhance anything, at the cost of her life. I will sacrifice her in order to achive eternal life."
Marik:"She must have gotten that power where I first met her. Why do you want to do this to her?"
Dragon:"I want to become a human dragon. That is when my true power will come. And when it does, I will rule the world."
Marik:"I hate people like you. You're just too damn selfish!!!" I rush at the dragon and try to punch him with my lightning fist.
Dragon:My tail grabs marik's body and throws him somewhere into the forest.
I then place julie on the ground and inhale. This sacrifice will help me with world domination.
Suddenly, a wide beam of lightning cuts my leg off. "Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!"
Marik:I transport through the lightning beam. "That was the last of my energy. But it was worth it." I run over to julie as the dragon roars, blowing me, julie, and all of the trees away.
Dragon:"I will achive my true power!!!"
Marik:"Julie wakes up as the dragon gets closer to me and her."
Julie:"Marik..............I'm going to give you some power. So that you can live on."
Marik:Julie started to fade away. "Noooo,don't leave me! I love you!! Nooooo!!!!"
Julie:"I'm glad to hear that. I'm sorry marik."
Marik:Julie faded away as the dragon stoped walking.
Dragon:I see julie's spirit go inside marik. "If it was not for you, I would have my immortality. I will have to kill you in order for me to be satisfied."
Marik:"........................................... . Shut up."

I stomp the ground as a shard of earth comes out of the ground and impales the dragon's stomech.
Dragon:"What is this power!!"
Marik:"This is for julie!!!!" I stomp the ground as 2 electrified blocks of earth come out of the ground. I hurl them at the dragon as they explode earth rocks. The earth rocks fly around the dragon at high speed. "Discharge of tetra!!!!!" The rocks cover the dragon completely as the shock him black. The rocks then explode as the dragon crumbles into nothing. "Julie..............................." *Crys*


Meanwhile

Zebelidus:I shoot a beam of darkness at Coldool.
Coldool:I create a ice wall in front of me to block the darkness beam as I begin to hit the ice wall, making ice shards shoot out at zebelidus.
Zebelidus:I create a portal of nothingness to block the ice shards.
Coldool:"I know your powers, Zebelidus. Everytime you use that portal, your heart stops for the amount of time that you used it."
Zebelidus:"That does not mean you will defeat me. You should also thank your freind for this victory."
Zero:"Damn!!!" I quickly fly up into the air as Zebelidus punches the ground.
Zebelidus:Waves of darkness come up from the cracks that Mag made ealier, enveloping Coldool in darkness.
Coldool:"It seems you have forgoten that I am a nue. Darkness won't work on me. You have just given me more power."
Zebelidus:"Dammit!!"
Coldool:"Transform!!!!"
I gain ice armor around my whole body as my eyes glow light blue.
"Nue transform!!!!"
Nothing about my appearance changes. As I walk to Zebelidus, the ground in front of me begins to freeze.
Donna:I create a cannon and shoot goo out of it as it hits and disolves the ice.
"That won't be happening today."
Coldool:"Great. Everyone keeps appearing out of no where."
Donna:"Let me finish what master Zebelidus started." I punch the ground as a metal dome appears around Coldool. I then make spikes appear inside the dome as the dome shrinks real fast, killing Coldool.
"That was too easy."
Zebelidus:"I will have to upgrade your rank, Donna."
Donna:"Zebelidus, you are too kind." A boy walks out of town. "I remember you."
Zack:"Things will be different this time. I got a new sword and a new power." I take out my sword and infuse it fire. "Let's go."

Meanwhile

Dark anna:"All my soilders are down. Zebelidus, help!"
I then see fireballs rain down the enemy soilders.

Max:".............."
Dark anna:"You?"
Max:I land on the ground as I see 2 nues walking towards me and Anna.
"We gonna do this?"
Gairend:"Yes. My name is Gairend."
Darmok:"Yeah. My name is Darmok."
Max:"Bring it."

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Darmok:"We are both going to fight you at the same time. If you don't mind."
Max:"That's not really fair."
Gairend:"Don't worry, we'll kill you nice and fast."
Max:"No, I meant it's not fair for you." I rush at Gairend as create 2 fire swords in my hands. I swing them at Gairend as the instensity of the flames increase immenssly.
Gairend: I quickly clap my hands as a wall of wind appears in front of as it quickly puts the flames out. I then send the wind at Max, pushing him away.
Darmok:I quickly create a shadow wall behind max, attempting to transport him somewhere else.
Max:I quickly ignite my hands as I release fire from them while swinging them downwards, boosting myself into the air as I avoid the shadow wall. "I obtained a new power through my training. It's a awesome power that's just for me."
Gairend:"My wind can put out anything."
Darmok:"And I can copy anything with my shadows."
Max:"I doubt that." I send a energy wave at Gairend and Darmok that will incenrate anything in it's path.
Darmok:I put a shadow wall in front of the attack as it creates a duplicate of the blast, shooting it at Max's wave as they both cancel each other out.
Max:"Wow, you weren't kidding."
Darmok:"Of course boy. Do you really think that a attack like that would stop us?"
Gairend:"We're not going to let you win that easily."
Max:"Energy piller!!!" Energy forms around me as I land on the ground with a bang, transfering energy under the ground as it bursts up below Gairend, attempting to incenerate him.
Gairend:I blend into the wind as I blow away from the blast, dodging the attack. "I can dodge it too."
Max:"Don't get so full of yourself."
Gairend:I send a wave of wind at Max that is cabable of cutting though steel.
Max:I form a barrier of energy around me as it hardens and blocks the wind attack. I then ignite my hands as I boost towards Gairend. "Fireball shotgun." I hold my hand in front of Gairend as 20 mini fireballs are shot at him, attempting to impale him as I attempt to ram darmok.
Gairend:I send a wave of wind at the fireballs as they are put out. "I told you it would not work."
Darmok:I create a shadow wall in front of me as max dashes at me, attempting to make a shadow copy of him.
Max:"That's just what I wanted you to do." I quickly stop and slam the ground while energy flows around me. "Energy piller!!!" A piller of energy comes up from below Darmok, attempting to incenerate him.
Darmok:I quickly get rid of the shadow wall as I hide in my shadow. I'll just stay here until he kills Gairend.
Max:"That was too easy." Just one more Nue to take out. Should be as easy as the first one.
Gairend:"Dammit. Darmok!! Transform."
A barrier of wind appears around me that is able to rip almost anything to shreds.
"Nue transform." A heavy gale barrier appear around me. This barrier holds wind pressure and water pressure. "What do you think?"
Max:I say nothing as I stare at Gairend with pity.
Gairend:"Fine, be that way. I'll make short work of you." I dash behind max quickly as I expand my barrier outwards, attempting to release the pressure of wind and water on him.
Max:Surprised by his speed, I am almost caught by his attack. I quickly from a barrier of my energy around him as it incenrates the water pressure inside. "Boiling pot!!!" The heat inside the barrier increases as the barrier explodes inside after letting out Gairend's body. I walk away from his dead body as I walk towards Anna. All of the sudden, a wall of shadow passes through me.
Darmok:"Got you." A shadow copy of max is created as I come out of the ground. "I made a copy of you. Don't you like it?"
Max:"You......you........He looks just like me when I used my hellfire form."
Blaze shadow max:"Heheheh. Come on, Max, let's play."

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Blaze shadow max:I lunge at Max as I create 2 hellfire swords and throw them into the air. I attempt to tackle Max as the swords split into many small spears of hellfire. Just one of these will ignite you and burn you away.
Max:I quickly blast away from my doppelganger by igniting my hands as I blast aginst the ground. I then form a barrier of energy around me, blocking the fireballs as I quickly expand the energy, attempting to hit my doppelganger.
Blaze shadow max:I quickly blast the ground with my hellfire as it creates a large hole. I jump into the hole as I form into the darkness of the hole, dodging the energy blast. I jump out of the hole as I send a wave of darkness at Max. If hit, this will blind him for eternity. I then smash the ground with hellfire. "Hellfire piller."
Max:I fly to greater heights with my fists releasing my flames as I fly over the wave of darkness. I then look down as I see the piller of fire heading towards me. "Tch copy cat. Desending lion." A lion made of my green energy rains down on the hellfire piller as they both colide and result in a explosion. "I'm coming for you. Forceful hell giant stomp." My green energy forms around me as it looks like my body is ignited by green flames. I rush down to the ground as I attempt to smash my doppelganger's body.

Blaze shadow max:I quickly blast a hellfire beam at max as he desends, slowing him down a bit as I boost myself up with hellfire. I then slam into Max as we both fall and hit the ground.
Max:As I lay on the ground and start to wonder what I'm doing wrong. Wait, he is already transformed. So I can defeat him if I transform. That should work.
Darmok:"Transform."
I am covered in complete darkness as the clone of max multiples into 2.
"Nue transform."
A chair of darkness appears behind me as iIsit in it. Then, the 2 clones multiply into 2, having a total of 4 doppelgangers. "I am the king. Go and defeat my foes, my knights."
The doppelgangers charge at Max as they release their own beams of hellfire at max.
Max:I quickly get up and stat running as I ignite my fists and boost into the sky while spining around, dodging the blasts of hellfire as I shoot energy blasts at the doppelgangers.
Darmok:The doppelgangers copy max and dash into the sky while igniting their fists, dodging the energy blasts. They then try to knock max out of the sky by attempting to punch him with thier hellfire fists.
Max:"Damn!" I quickly form a barrier of energy around me as it spins around. The barier spins faster and faster as it spins up to 330 miles per hour, the speed of sound. I use my new speed to dodge the attacks by dashing around the battle field.
Darmok:The doppelgangers copy max and use the same method of gaining speed as all 4 spin around max at high speed, creating a barrier of hellfire as it closes in on max.
Max:I'm not going to let these guys beat me. I still have to get John for getting me in this mess. I still have to save Marik and Anna. I still have so much to do. As the barrier closes in on me I whisper 1 word. "Transform."

Shining buster Max:A bright light shines as it eradicates the hellfire. I land on the ground as my body is ignited with holy fire. "Holy fire flash." A the holy fire flashes brightly as all the clones are eradicated. "In this form, my speed is increased. ALong with the ability to use holy fire."
Darmok:"I don't care. You still won't be able to defeat me. I am the king now. I order you to die!!!" I form a spear of nothingness as I lanch it at Max, attempting to end the fight.
Shining buster Max:I form a ball of immense light as it shines rather dim. I throw the ball at the spear as it explodes in a bright light after coming within 5 feet of the spear, eradicating the spear. "Holy fire flash." The holy fire flames on me glow brightly as I appear behind Darmok with a light sword. The sword disspears as darmok falls out of his chair. "You thought you were safe by hiding behind your so called knights. But once they were destroyed, you panicked and you lost your concentration. And now look at you. You lost all your power. And, your life. Send a message to Satan when you see him. Tell him, I'm coming. And no matter how many Nues you send, I'll kill them too. But as for you, the king." Darmok hits the ground. "The king is dead."
I then walk over to Anna as I put my hand on her head. "I'm going to cure you of this darkness."

Dark anna:"I won't let you!!"
Shining buster Max:A bright light flashes as me and Anna dissapear.

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