Power Surge Discussion Thread - Page 2

Vatanui AKA Pride · 06-04-2010, 10:05 AM

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Originally Posted by Maikeru Shinigami

How so exactly?

Classic Stereotypical Plot, normal Boy attending a school with a teacher that everyone likes but isn't so normal. Also has a childhood friend who has a crush on him. One day got into an incident/fight where he comes into contact with a not-so-normal person who saves his ass.

Well, that's all I can tell from just what I've read. And that basically is very few, so you'll have many chances to change the story and twist it around in the later chapters.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 06-04-2010, 10:26 AM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Classic Stereotypical Plot, normal Boy attending a school with a teacher that everyone likes but isn't so normal. Also has a childhood friend who has a crush on him. One day got into an incident/fight where he comes into contact with a not-so-normal person who saves his ass.

Well, that's all I can tell from just what I've read. And that basically is very few, so you'll have many chances to change the story and twist it around in the later chapters.

True on that part. But even with the most cliche beginnings, the author can make up for it by delivering a wonderful story.

Vatanui AKA Pride · 06-04-2010, 10:33 AM

Indeed, as I had said.

So which of your two Fan Fics are you gonna focus on more?

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 06-04-2010, 10:51 AM

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Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Indeed, as I had said.

So which of your two Fan Fics are you gonna focus on more?

Indeed.

Well, I'll probably do about an arc or two of this one and then kind of split the focus.

The Demon Zabuza · 06-04-2010, 11:38 AM

Oh ma gawd, it's Bakuman.

Seriously, wow. If you didn't mean that to happen, I'm amazed.

Kid just wants to play video games, has a childhood crush, someone finds his notebook and encourages him to follow his childhood crush, he runs out, finds them, chapter ends.

kvSaku · 06-04-2010, 11:54 AM

Good story, I like it. Keep up with the good work

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 06-04-2010, 11:55 AM

I haven't even read Bakuman.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 12-03-2011, 09:17 AM

I think I'm going to continue this.

Devroux · 12-03-2011, 01:45 PM

I hear Maik might continue this. I shall read!

Jonesy · 12-03-2011, 03:10 PM

I can't wait to see what you can do.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 10-10-2012, 09:10 AM

I'm trying to find time to work on this, but homework has been making that difficult.

Mangetsu Hozuki · 10-11-2012, 10:28 AM

I likey. But, I thought it was weird that the stone dude (What's his name again? Jericho?) said, "Yo, I got some awesome supernatural powers." And Draco just replied, "Oh, cool."

He just absolutely believed him? No hesitation?

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 10-12-2012, 07:07 AM

Yes, because not everyone is skeptical of things they see with their own eyes. >_>

Mangetsu Hozuki · 10-12-2012, 07:20 AM

<.< First he thought it was a trick of the light, though.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 10-12-2012, 07:36 AM

Where did it say that at? [o.o]

Also, Cherill was the one who said it was cool.

Mangetsu Hozuki · 10-12-2012, 08:05 AM

Draco: Draco, Draco Storm. I am a junior this year. By the way, what you did, that was really strange. It was like your entire arm turned to stone before you hit him. That's not possible though of course, so I must have been seeing things.

Not a trick of the light, whatever.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 10-12-2012, 08:19 AM

It was intended to be one of those kind of situations where you rub your eyes after seeing something strange, and then realized that nothing changed.

Mangetsu Hozuki · 10-12-2012, 08:44 AM

Eh...

Devroux · 10-27-2012, 08:18 PM

Ten months and you finally roll out a new one? Tsk, tsk...

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 10-27-2012, 08:19 PM

Don't forget that eight of those months I was unable to because I had no internet. D:

06-04-2010, 10:33 AM	#23
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06-04-2010, 11:54 AM	#26
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06-04-2010, 11:55 AM	#27
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,401 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Power Surge (An Original Work) I haven't even read Bakuman. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

12-03-2011, 09:17 AM	#28
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,401 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread I think I'm going to continue this. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

12-03-2011, 01:45 PM	#29
Devroux Bronze V 4 lyfe Join Date: May 2010 Location: All Pizza Posts: 18,884 Rep Power: 27	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread I hear Maik might continue this. I shall read! __________________ 卐 DΣVR To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Uχ Δ\|✝ΣR 卍 To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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10-10-2012, 09:10 AM	#31
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,401 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread I'm trying to find time to work on this, but homework has been making that difficult. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

10-11-2012, 10:28 AM	#32
Mangetsu Hozuki Chunin Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: The Netherworld. Or school, either one. Posts: 956 Rep Power: 3	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread I likey. But, I thought it was weird that the stone dude (What's his name again? Jericho?) said, "Yo, I got some awesome supernatural powers." And Draco just replied, "Oh, cool." He just absolutely believed him? No hesitation? __________________ Ranger of The Night's Watch For Castle Black! Village Hidden in Blood *Officially a cat-addict.* To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-12-2012, 07:07 AM	#33
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,401 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread Yes, because not everyone is skeptical of things they see with their own eyes. >_> __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

10-12-2012, 07:20 AM	#34
Mangetsu Hozuki Chunin Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: The Netherworld. Or school, either one. Posts: 956 Rep Power: 3	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread <.< First he thought it was a trick of the light, though. __________________ Ranger of The Night's Watch For Castle Black! Village Hidden in Blood *Officially a cat-addict.* To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-12-2012, 07:36 AM	#35
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,401 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread Where did it say that at? [o.o] Also, Cherill was the one who said it was cool. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

10-12-2012, 08:05 AM	#36
Mangetsu Hozuki Chunin Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: The Netherworld. Or school, either one. Posts: 956 Rep Power: 3	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread Draco: Draco, Draco Storm. I am a junior this year. By the way, what you did, that was really strange. It was like your entire arm turned to stone before you hit him. That's not possible though of course, so I must have been seeing things. Not a trick of the light, whatever. __________________ Ranger of The Night's Watch For Castle Black! Village Hidden in Blood *Officially a cat-addict.* To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-12-2012, 08:19 AM	#37
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,401 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread It was intended to be one of those kind of situations where you rub your eyes after seeing something strange, and then realized that nothing changed. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

10-12-2012, 08:44 AM	#38
Mangetsu Hozuki Chunin Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: The Netherworld. Or school, either one. Posts: 956 Rep Power: 3	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread Eh... __________________ Ranger of The Night's Watch For Castle Black! Village Hidden in Blood *Officially a cat-addict.* To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-27-2012, 08:18 PM	#39
Devroux Bronze V 4 lyfe Join Date: May 2010 Location: All Pizza Posts: 18,884 Rep Power: 27	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread Ten months and you finally roll out a new one? Tsk, tsk... __________________ 卐 DΣVR To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Uχ Δ\|✝ΣR 卍 To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

10-27-2012, 08:19 PM	#40
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,401 Rep Power: 44 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Power Surge Discussion Thread Don't forget that eight of those months I was unable to because I had no internet. D: __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

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