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Old 09-19-2012, 03:44 PM   #61
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I'm sad
Sad your not by my side
I'm sad
Sad you ruined the good relationship we had
I'm sad
Sad we won't have what we used to admire
I'm suffering
Suffering so much can't get any sleep
I'm suffering
Suffering because I still love you, but I've been heart broken too many times

This is kinda how i feel right now
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I be riding through my old hood, same old attitude
Chillin with your girlfriend, why she always mad at you
She be like blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah
Only time that she quiet, when finger's inside her
Don't you know I'm a writer
Yeah, I sleep in her stomach
And I slip her a 50, just to keep her 100
Yeah, my swaggers so dummy
We so stupid, so silly
I watch them girls getting lower than the kick in the Mille
Gambino, why you got a gold chain
Cause girls only gonna see you when you stuntin, man
I'm coming back, swag on Rogaine
Girl lemme see you 2Chainz old name
So hood, man what you talking bout
I'm watching Law and Order on my grandma's couch
Eating Lucky Charms for dinner
Loser to a winner
Swag so Clippers
Me and Blake Griffin
Me and Blake Griffin
Why your goals dripping
You ever seen ballas like us po' pimping?
Ha, we getting drunk like a Kennedy
Ha, we stay fly like the end of Grease
Yeah, I got Os like CP3
Don't worry, don't worry, don't you worry 'bout me
I'm only worried when that period's on CPT
When that period's on CPT
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Old 10-04-2012, 11:13 AM   #63
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[Verse 1]
Hollerin’ at this Japanese girl, Asian mommy
But is it too soon for Japanese girls? Too tsunami?
Is it racist if I say she tastes like edamame?
Was I supposed to stay uncool? Please remind me
(What the is up?)
Yeah, it’s Cheezy, ho
I’m so cheesy, ho, my swag’s got high cholesterol
I know y’all girls, I met them all
You're her ex-man like Cannonball
I ain’t got to say to ya, I’m known for bad behavior
Look at me
Man, I went to the W from Double Tree
Makin’ out with girls who black and yellow like a bumblebee
Can I live up to all this hype they have for me? It’s hard to tell
But these girls I’m kissin’ chase the blues away like Gargamel
I’m back in the game, coach put me in
T-Pain flow, all I do is win
With a glass full of Macallan to mess me up
And the cash we can throw at them unless we
Dopeness
After this I hit the highway
I’m headin’ west like I’m fuckin’ blowin’ Kanye
Read the fuckin’ news, Huey Lewis, nigga
You can’t go H
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How i feel right now.....
Because of someone.....

So Alone
That's how she felt

Abandoned by her only hope
Broken and bleeding
Wanting it to end
But now her friend is leaving
This cant be the end
She cries herself to sleep
Wakes with dread
Puts on a smile
Until the end
She tries to be strong
But her strength is gone
So now she waits
For her last good thing
To leave her again
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I have one in video form from an open mic, but I dropped a few lines and a stanza.
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I seriously came down to a major low at one point and then I suddenly started singing this and my hand just went with it and wrote this down, the words I was singing, absolutely no rhyme or anything much at all really, it's a terribly rough song.. Though with a little effort could make it better, though I am not sure if I want to considering, it's goes quite deep for me...
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Nothing more than fantasy
only but dreams
the truth of reality
nothing comes about
no matter how much you try
everything always remains the same
life always repeats
so much never changes
all the hurt and pain
it never seems to be any different
just always worst than before
it never changes
once again I am left alone
just no one ever caring enough
everything always feels the same
like I am not even
ever meant to be happy
I always get left to deal with everything on my own
I don't want to always be left by myself
people say they would be there for me
though never are
always having to bring myself back
my dreams never going to come through
the truth to reality is that
how it is now just never will be any different
just never being anything to anyone
always the same I don't even know
why I expected any different
why did I even try when I knew
that nothing would be any different
no one ever wants anything to do with me
it always has been like that
it always ends with me unwanted
and in tears, just nothing, just nothing
notheing ever changes no matter how hard I try
no matter what effort I put in
it always ends up like this
always no different
so I just forget, there's no point
to havw what comes to my mind there
since I mean nothing to no one
those images, those dreams
are just fantasies and are not going to come true
they never want anything to do with me
didn't even want to talk to me
so there's no point just no point
I mean nothing to them
I don't care what they may have said
the truth, they didn't feel the same
as I did for them
just unwanted, that's all I ever am
I have no place anywhere
I just belong no where
so just forget it, leave me alone
since the simple fact is
that I have no one who really cares
when I care for them
my efforts are just invain
the reality is this, just alone
with a pen in hand, in this room
with nobody anywhere wanting anything to do with me.


..And then I have a couple of smaller ones I wrote and put thought in with when I wrote them some while back.
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The Shattered...

Within the darkness the light may be there,
though before the end, the light only fades,
forever more within the shadows surrounding me,
my heart may be strong, my spirit holding hope,

the silence breaks, with the soft tones,
of a voice, echoing on the many winds,
inthe light of dawn, the light passing over me,
as the golden tones touch and warm all,
I see in the distance, the silver glow,

reflecting onto everything, in the end,
the only thing one can do, is dream,
dream of hope, within the shadows,
the voice maybe lost, the silence broken,
bringing forward difference, the ongoing light,

shining over all the sorrow,
yet one can only hold their faith,
listening to the broken voice,
reasoning on the breeze, such peril,
awaits all, when one falls, falls for another soul,

whispering on the conscious of the one,
who's voice, all but touches the truth,
always bringing the reasoning, within shadows,
over everything, the voices fades with the light,
bringing a great silence once more...
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True Emotion...

In the subtle hints on the horizon,
in the golden hue,
the setting sun, on the waves,
in the distance, my dreams go on,

a light breeze comes over me,
also, the delicate rays,
of the suns gentle warmth,
my mind, awaay in the distance,

as the sun sets, glowing ever so faintly,
along with my hope, I see,
th differences, of the shining suns rays,
as my faith becomes dim, fading so,

my life continues on,
as the rays shift, the breeze blows,
a new hope within me, comes,
the waves, calming my thoughts,

as the gentle light, dims,
the moon rises, and a new light,
that shadows out the pain,
bringing new clarity,

the shadows are banished by this light,
bring forward new hope,
banishing all the doubts away,
my life, will continue on, constantly,
and forever more, the truth revealed...
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This is a poem I'm typing at 6 am.

Oh how thy head is aching
Like a thousand needles stabbing
So painful
Another morning scratching my back
Yawning endlessly
Pop a pill I must
This could go down with some nice ice cold water.
Gulp gulp, ah!
Now back to sleep
Screw that, I'll play eroges instead
Life is beautiful
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Dream

alone.
on the beach.
you came to me.
you said nothing.
you didn't have to.
i know you.
you sat.
took my hand.
kissed my cheek.
my nose.
my lips.
your eyes shone.
reflecting the dying light of dawn.
then you pulled me close.
and whispered "i love you."
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Ahehehehem!

Poop.

Poop poop poop.
Poop, poop poop poop poop.
Poop poop, poop.
Poop poop poop poop poop.
Poop poop.
Feces.
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Ahehehehem!

Poop.

Poop poop poop.
Poop, poop poop poop poop.
Poop poop, poop.
Poop poop poop poop poop.
Poop poop.
Feces.
I especially enjoyed the surprise twist ending, but it had a pretty crappy word choice.
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I love on and reading everyones poems, even "crappy" ones. Oh im sorry, "poop" ones :P No they are all good, and all make me smile or laugh. And for the sad ones, ver touching. I pretty much only write sad ones. LOVE THEM ALL! Keep up the amazing work everyone X3
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When I Said Good-bye

All the Promises we said,
All the lies I told.
Slowly I lay down in bed,
and think "this is getting old."

I cry myself to sleep,
In my dreams I die again.
Our conversation would be better heard as a "beep,"
And I'm as sad as I've ever been.

Rain falls from my eyes.
Is all you speak the half-truth
Or full lies?
Is there really any valid proof?

Footsteps in the sand.
Snow in my heart.
I leave this heart-broken land,
And now we are apart.

Why won't you let me go?
Why won't you let me smile?
How much it hurts, you'll never know.
Thoughts of us are tainted with bile.

I find shelter.
I find love.
From my mistakes, I never learn.
But my heart flies like a dove.

I won't be sad.
I won't be broken.
But still you continue to make me mad.
Steal my broken heart as a token.

Enough, it's over.
We are no more.
Still I fall lower and lower,
Still you try to steal what my pain tore.

My heart, my soul,
My love, my wife.
All your words take their toll,
And stab me like a knife.

Leave me be.
Let me die.
Maybe then you'll see
That I really ment it when I said "good-bye!"
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Thanks sis.
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No problema hermana (I suck at spanish XD) <3 love la <3
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The anger like a rapid burning fire shoved down my throat.
Swallow back the words.
The clenching fists holding on to the edge.
Looks that would kill.

Strangle, mangle, mutilation. Hatred for the festering open wounds you left me.
No apologies, just good bye.

The OCD to stop the horrid thoughts from piling up. I should have left you to die.
No longer anger, just white hot rage.
The stupidity, assumptions, your false superiority, I want to choke it. Torture it. Kill it.

Why am I always the wrong one. Why can't you look past and see?
Instead of you, it's killing me.
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The anger like a rapid burning fire shoved down my throat.
Swallow back the words.
The clenching fists holding on to the edge.
Looks that would kill.

Strangle, mangle, mutilation. Hatred for the festering open wounds you left me.
No apologies, just good bye.

The OCD to stop the horrid thoughts from piling up. I should have left you to die.
No longer anger, just white hot rage.
The stupidity, assumptions, your false superiority, I want to choke it. Torture it. Kill it.

Why am I always the wrong one. Why can't you look past and see?
Instead of you, it's killing me.
Wow, I really like this poem and really understand where it's comming from. Wonderful work animelover.
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