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Old 09-21-2012, 05:37 PM   #21
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|As you begin to recite the incantation, I start realizing what it is. I increase my spiritual pressure, and, in effect, drag nearly every speck of stardust within inches of my body, outfitting me in a suit. The Hado spawns, covering me up. Inside the box, the spears attempt to pierce me, but with out results. The Spears that had tried to stab through me had made contact with my stardust first, and as they did, the Spiritual Energy that they are made out of was converted into more stardust. I drop my Pressure and The Newly made Stardust crawls up the spears and onto the box, which, too, is eaten by my stardust. Slowly, the box begins to deform and in the end, nothing but stardust is left of it. The fresh stardust that was just made begins to radiate outwards in a sphere with me at the center, covering the surrounding area of about 30 yards.

You release your shikai and blow fire at me. As the fire makes contact with my plume, it dies out. The flames made contact with my stardust, and had been sapped of their power source, your energy. The same effect applies to your following attacks; the smoke rises, but it too was sapped of it's energy and malicious intent through the solid ash that had rose above the ground and into my cloud first. I stabilize my spiritual pressure and pull the stardust back in towards me, to a space of 10 feet. This new area is extremely dense, maybe airtight, with Stardust, and conforms to to fit the general shape of my body and zanpokuto, the both of us. I slowly glide forward to my opponent.
"Attack again, and I'll stop playing defensively."|
Side note, when ever I say my stardust as a whole, I'll have to let you know that my lance is made out of an entirely different tier of stardust which permanently attached to my zanpokuto itself, unless otherwise stated.
"Damn!!!"
I was stumped and loss. As you were coming towards me,i thought to myself. What was i going to do? But then,i thought of something.

I release a whole bunch of spiritual energy around me while spining around. Your stardust start to move towards me,taking off the sheild that is around you,leaving you with only your lance.
I then quickly make a large ball of pure spiritual energy and throw it into the sky,making the stardust follow it.
I knew that this would not keep it busy for long so i had to move fast.
I quickly take out 4 cigars and throw them at you.
The cigars explode when they reach 3 feet,leaving a large cloud of smoke that will lead to faster cancer infection. I shunpo behind you,and blow my breath in your face whle stomping to ground.
A huge piller of fire apears below you as i turn into smoke and fly away.

I throw my sword into the air and yell the word to victory.
"BANKAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!"

My kimono turns fire red and smoking gray as i hold my zanpakuto with one hand.
"My zanpakuto has holes everywhere on it but other than that,it looks like a normal zanpakuto.

I shunpo to your right as i attempt to trip you with my left foot while stomping the ground with my other.
"Here she comes."
Nothing happens as i facepalm myself.
"Dammit."
I raise my sword into the air with my right hand and fire begins to blow out of it at shunpo speed.
I then attempt to slash you in the face while releasing smoke from my sword that will eat you up complely.

My ball of pure spirit energy depletes,making you stardust begin to return to you.
I then boost up my spirit energy once,making the stardust slowly come towards me.
As smoke begins to come up from the ground,i shunpo away 40 feet and use the forbbiden hado.
"Hado 96,itto kaso!!!"
A huge pillar of fire shaped as a kantana's tip rushes out of the ground while smoke surrounds it.
I then shunpo away 30 more feet and the smoke explodes along with the tip in a 50 foot radius.
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Old 09-21-2012, 08:21 PM   #22
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|The moment I see you obviously making a fake attack, I Move my Zanpakuto to make contact with a single particle of stardust, and it freezes in place, and each particle that had touched it stops moving, and so on and so forth until each particle has stop becoming reactive to foreign Spiritual Energy. This simple motion proves your strategy useless, so long as one of my Lance Dust (henceforth referred to as L Dust) is making contact with this suit, they won't be be pulled toward to any other source of energy besides my own. Your cigars don't even bother me, as my stardust covering is my body. I easily bare through the flames a slide out of its range. The from the blow doesn't make more dust, but that's at my own conscience request. I don't want to end the fight so soon, so instead of letting your blade and foot hit me, I nimbly dodge each blow. As your energy ball dissipates I pull my lance back, and the stardust covering expands a few feet out, reacting to your increase in spiritual energy. I raise mine too to stabilize the distance.
You get the bright idea to summon a high leveled Kido. As the sword comes up, it section that touches me is prevented from growing. Once the blade reaches full height, you begin to notice that it begins to slowly collapse, due to my stardust eating it up. Absorbing the high energy Hado generates Billions of Trillions of Stardust Particles. I pull each one in as close as I can. The Result is a 30 foot high, 10 foot wide(at the shoulders) humanoid giant. I keep gliding at you.
"Your powerful attacks will be your undoing. You've just released your bankai I didn't return the courtesy. You first idea of confusing my dust was clever and could have got me, but you applied it wrong. You can quit now, or you can try to fight me again. Be aware, I will not show mercy.|
That first part would have normally worked, but like I said earlier, my Lance is made out of a different type of Stardust which isn't moved by pressure and causes each particle to remain stationary.

You know, I could train you if you give up here.
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Old 09-22-2012, 06:42 AM   #23
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Hmmmmmm I think the stardust is a little much for a shikai. But if Joon agreed to the character than there is no God mod problem.
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Old 09-22-2012, 02:24 PM   #24
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Having to use my Bankai so early into the fight like he has doesn't make it fun, which is why I encoporated as many things as I could into Shikai.
If he doesn't do something about my stardust by the end of the next round, he's going to lose.
Also, Sorry for the messy last post, I was sleepy and was throwing stuff together. I should have done what I said last turn, but I'm starting to get bored again.
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Old 09-22-2012, 03:36 PM   #25
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|The moment I see you obviously making a fake attack, I Move my Zanpakuto to make contact with a single particle of stardust, and it freezes in place, and each particle that had touched it stops moving, and so on and so forth until each particle has stop becoming reactive to foreign Spiritual Energy. This simple motion proves your strategy useless, so long as one of my Lance Dust (henceforth referred to as L Dust) is making contact with this suit, they won't be be pulled toward to any other source of energy besides my own. Your cigars don't even bother me, as my stardust covering is my body. I easily bare through the flames a slide out of its range. The from the blow doesn't make more dust, but that's at my own conscience request. I don't want to end the fight so soon, so instead of letting your blade and foot hit me, I nimbly dodge each blow. As your energy ball dissipates I pull my lance back, and the stardust covering expands a few feet out, reacting to your increase in spiritual energy. I raise mine too to stabilize the distance.
You get the bright idea to summon a high leveled Kido. As the sword comes up, it section that touches me is prevented from growing. Once the blade reaches full height, you begin to notice that it begins to slowly collapse, due to my stardust eating it up. Absorbing the high energy Hado generates Billions of Trillions of Stardust Particles. I pull each one in as close as I can. The Result is a 30 foot high, 10 foot wide(at the shoulders) humanoid giant. I keep gliding at you.
"Your powerful attacks will be your undoing. You've just released your bankai I didn't return the courtesy. You first idea of confusing my dust was clever and could have got me, but you applied it wrong. You can quit now, or you can try to fight me again. Be aware, I will not show mercy.|
That first part would have normally worked, but like I said earlier, my Lance is made out of a different type of Stardust which isn't moved by pressure and causes each particle to remain stationary.

You know, I could train you if you give up here.
Well,i am not going to even try to continue this fight because i know i will lose.
I have nothing else to do in order to attack.
Thing is,you are not even attacking me.
I hate to see you attack me so i'm just going to surrender.
and yes,i would like you to train me.

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Hmmmmmm I think the stardust is a little much for a shikai. But if Joon agreed to the character than there is no God mod problem.
I knew nothing of the stardust.XD
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Old 09-22-2012, 04:57 PM   #26
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I'll see how you preform in the Multiverse Tourney. Once it ends, if Vat gets back to me, or If I decide to get into contact with Susan, there's going to be a lot going on.
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So you'll train me?
If you can,i would like to be trained before the tournament starts.
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Yeah, I'll train you, but I need to see what you're at first to accurately do so. Do your best in the tournament and I'll take you from there. We'll preform together in the next one.
I'm telling you now, these element things aren't working for you.
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Yeah.
No matter how hard i try to come up with something uniqe,i ultimately fail.
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I was trained/is being trained by noctis. At this point he just told me to practice and fight people stronger than me. Can i fight you cosmos?
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If you make the first move in my part 4 thread, sure.
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Okay.
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