Another character

joon61 · 09-02-2012, 01:20 PM

Name:Zero hetto
Release:Can manipulate blue flames that will burn my foes until there is nothing left.

2nd release:My fire becomes powerful enough to burn reitsu and heirro.

Vasto lordes: A blue fire barreir forms around me that can only be broken by wind or water.
Then,20 blue fire arrows start to rain down on my opponet at shunpo speed.
My sword turns into 5 inches sharp claws that appear on my hands with blazing blue fire on each of them.

loganace · 09-02-2012, 06:01 PM

Cough, controlling all solids is uber hax and GM, cough

joon61 · 09-02-2012, 06:22 PM

I didn't know.
This is why i wanted to make a list.
But as long as i do it up to a certain extent then i will be fine.
I cannot control someone's weapon. I can only control what i create,and what i am touching.(the ground)

ILIKEPIE · 09-02-2012, 06:29 PM

if a freeverse character was in the verse it's based on it would solo that verse lol

joon61 · 09-02-2012, 06:34 PM

IS this good or not?

loganace · 09-02-2012, 09:45 PM

i think its way to much, but ehh, i'll beat you anyway XD

joon61 · 09-03-2012, 04:32 AM

Just tell me what i should take away.

Noctis Arashi · 09-03-2012, 04:45 AM

This is what I see wrong with your characters. You give yourself 800000 powers, all of them open ended. And it's kinda OP and hax to some, and it doesn't execute well.

You need to have ONE power, fairly open ended, and make it something special.

If you want to use fire, use fire, but make it original. Not just fire.

joon61 · 09-03-2012, 04:47 AM

Okay.
I will edit it and make a new character.
EDIT:How's this?

Noctis Arashi · 09-03-2012, 05:03 AM

If the sound aspect is what I think it is, you should stick with just that.

joon61 · 09-03-2012, 05:04 AM

Huh??

loganace · 09-03-2012, 05:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Noctis Arashi

This is what I see wrong with your characters. You give yourself 800000 powers, all of them open ended. And it's kinda OP and hax to some, and it doesn't execute well.

You need to have ONE power, fairly open ended, and make it something special.

If you want to use fire, use fire, but make it original. Not just fire.

sorry joon, but he is right XD

joon61 · 09-03-2012, 05:13 AM

I changed it but what is he saying now? D:

loganace · 09-03-2012, 05:14 AM

what does the soind part do?

joon61 · 09-03-2012, 05:19 AM

I can turn it into sound,making it gain the chaiteristics of sound. It will still burn things though.

loganace · 09-03-2012, 05:21 AM

what noctis is saying you should just have that and normal fire.That is strong and usefull. Not against my sound guy, but hey, use it against everyone else.

joon61 · 09-03-2012, 05:23 AM

Okay then.
I already have something for my bankai and finai bankai.

loganace · 09-03-2012, 06:09 AM

no. the second release is just no. I am sure you could tell me whats wrong with it,

joon61 · 09-08-2012, 06:35 PM

Nope.

Hozuki · 09-09-2012, 11:54 AM

-.-...

2nd release..

Seriously Joon.

09-02-2012, 01:20 PM	#1
joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Another character Name:Zero hetto Release:Can manipulate blue flames that will burn my foes until there is nothing left. 2nd release:My fire becomes powerful enough to burn reitsu and heirro. Vasto lordes: A blue fire barreir forms around me that can only be broken by wind or water. Then,20 blue fire arrows start to rain down on my opponet at shunpo speed. My sword turns into 5 inches sharp claws that appear on my hands with blazing blue fire on each of them. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by joon61; 09-11-2012 at 04:50 AM.

09-02-2012, 06:01 PM	#2
loganace Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: somewhere over the rainbow Posts: 6,315 Rep Power: 6	Re: Another character Cough, controlling all solids is uber hax and GM, cough __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-02-2012, 06:22 PM	#3
joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character I didn't know. This is why i wanted to make a list. But as long as i do it up to a certain extent then i will be fine. I cannot control someone's weapon. I can only control what i create,and what i am touching.(the ground) __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character IS this good or not? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-02-2012, 09:45 PM	#6
loganace Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: somewhere over the rainbow Posts: 6,315 Rep Power: 6	Re: Another character i think its way to much, but ehh, i'll beat you anyway XD __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-03-2012, 04:32 AM	#7
joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character Just tell me what i should take away. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-03-2012, 04:45 AM	#8
Noctis Arashi is rapidly losing blood from Naijeru's jugular attack Formerly Susanoo Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Transcendent of Space. Denizen of Fate. Posts: 24,185 Rep Power: 27 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character This is what I see wrong with your characters. You give yourself 800000 powers, all of them open ended. And it's kinda OP and hax to some, and it doesn't execute well. You need to have ONE power, fairly open ended, and make it something special. If you want to use fire, use fire, but make it original. Not just fire. __________________ ~~ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ~~ "Memento Mori" ______________ Feel free to PM me if you need help with anything.

09-03-2012, 04:47 AM	#9
joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character Okay. I will edit it and make a new character. EDIT:How's this? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by joon61; 09-03-2012 at 04:54 AM.

09-03-2012, 05:03 AM	#10
Noctis Arashi is rapidly losing blood from Naijeru's jugular attack Formerly Susanoo Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Transcendent of Space. Denizen of Fate. Posts: 24,185 Rep Power: 27 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character If the sound aspect is what I think it is, you should stick with just that. __________________ ~~ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. ~~ "Memento Mori" ______________ Feel free to PM me if you need help with anything.

09-03-2012, 05:04 AM	#11
joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character Huh?? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character I changed it but what is he saying now? D: __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-03-2012, 05:14 AM	#14
loganace Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: somewhere over the rainbow Posts: 6,315 Rep Power: 6	Re: Another character what does the soind part do? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character I can turn it into sound,making it gain the chaiteristics of sound. It will still burn things though. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-03-2012, 05:21 AM	#16
loganace Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: somewhere over the rainbow Posts: 6,315 Rep Power: 6	Re: Another character what noctis is saying you should just have that and normal fire.That is strong and usefull. Not against my sound guy, but hey, use it against everyone else. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-03-2012, 05:23 AM	#17
joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character Okay then. I already have something for my bankai and finai bankai. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-03-2012, 06:09 AM	#18
loganace Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: somewhere over the rainbow Posts: 6,315 Rep Power: 6	Re: Another character no. the second release is just no. I am sure you could tell me whats wrong with it, __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-08-2012, 06:35 PM	#19
joon61 Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Trying to eleminate the source of people's problems. Or make their day better by saying funny things Posts: 10,795 Rep Power: 17 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Another character Nope. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

09-09-2012, 11:54 AM	#20
Hozuki Chunin Exam Proctor Join Date: Jan 2012 Location: Inside Arachnophobia's Base Posts: 1,917 Rep Power: 4	Re: Another character -.-... 2nd release.. Seriously Joon. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Lol. Spoiler: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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