Spiritual world of magic

[joon61]

???:I thoght I was done for but a fireball blasted him away from me. I then got up and looked around and saw max.
Max:I don't know how I ended up here but, all I knew was that I had to kick his ass.
???:"Wait Max!!!"
Max:"How do you know my name?"
???:"Because I held you when you were a baby."
Max:I was surprised that this man held me as a baby. I never see him before in my life.
"Who are you?"
Ben:"My name is Ben and I am your brother."
Max:"John never told me about me having another brother."
Ben:"John has been keeping this from you because of what I have become.
You are a elemental of fire and you are needed by Zebelidus so that he can gain power and make this world a better place. He also needs the elemental of water, earth, wind, lighting, darkness, and holy."
Max:"The world can't be made a better place with power."
Ben:"I thoght so too but zebelidus showed me the truth.
I will have to ask you to come with me."

Max:"I decline you offer."
Ben:"I will just have to take you with me by force!!!"
Max:I look at the girl and without hesatation, I pick her up and start to run away from Ben.
???:"Put me down."
Ben:I smash the ground and lots of rocks come out of the ground. I then hit the rocks at max.
Max:"How about up." I throw the girl up and start to hit the rocks with fire punches. I then catch the girl and send a fire wave with my leg at ben and start to run away.
Ben:As the fire wave aproches me, I stomp the ground and a wall of earth comes up.
I make a earth tidal wave and ride on it to chase after max.
Max:"Hold on." I shoot fire out of my feet continuesly and fly up in the air away from ben.
Ben:I make 20 earth shards come out of the ground and fire them at max.
Max:I fly around spining around dodging all the shards but one witch hits me in the back."Ahh!!" I then fly away to the ocean.
Ben:"The master will not be happy with this."


To be continued.

[joon61]

Max:I land at the beach and put the girl down softly. I then walk over to a cave and lay down.
???:I get up and run over to max.
"Are you okay?"
Max:I smile. "I just need some sleep."
???:"I will go look for some food"
Max:I grab the girl's hand.
"No...... I need to protect..... You....."
???:Max fell unconcious. He was not fully healed so he did need rest.
I started to heal him to speed up the process.


Meanwhile


John:"She should be okay now."
Marik:"That's good."
Zack:"What were you doing with her anyway?"
Marik:"I met her in a cave and cause she was running from logoon.
And I was started protecting her up until now."
Zack:"Thank you for protecting my sister."
Marik:"Your sister?"
Zack:"Yeah."
Matik:"k. So john,what is this place?"
John:"This place is called harufune."
Zack:"Where did you guys come from?"
Marik:"Earth."
Zack:"Then you guys must have been transported here."
Marik:"Yeah."
John:"Were you transported here too?"
Zack:"Yeah.
I had a kung fu teacher and as soon as I graduated, he asked me a strange question.
He said:"Do you want to go to the next step?" I said yes and he transported me to this world."
Marik:"What have you been doing since then?"
Zack:"I was looking for Julie because my teacher said that she was here."
Marik:"Oh. Wait where's Max?"
John:"He was taken away by a strange girl but we are going to look for him now."
Zack:"Ok,let's go."
Marik:"I will carry julie."
I put Julie on my back.
"Can't we just sense his energy."
John:"He is too far away so our best bet is to head for the mountains."

John, Zack, and Marik holding Julie on his back, set out to look for Max.

[Noctis Arashi]

Not bad. Not bad at all.

[joon61]

Everything is in post number 2
http://naruto.viz.com/forum/showpost...17&postcount=2

[joon61]

Originally Posted by Noctis Arashi

Not bad. Not bad at all.

you like?

[Noctis Arashi]

Indeed.

[joon61]

I had this whole thing in my head since i was 8 but i had nowhere to put it.

[joon61]

???:Max was still down and I needed to find some food because I was geting hungry. As I was about to go outside the cave, I saw dark knights which are working for Zebelidus, searching for something. I looked at Max and went out there.
"How is the search going?"
Knight:We are looking for the elemental for General Ben.
???:If they find max, then I won't be able to....
"Then continue but I do need you to help me carry something."
I run over to the cave a quickly make a earth bag around max with tiny holes for breathing.
"This is what I want you to carry."
Khight:"Yes milady."
I pick up the earth bag and carry it for milady.
???:I travel to zebelidus's lair.



Meanwhile



Ben:"Hurry and find that elemental."
Knight:"Sir!!"
Ben:"What is it."
Knight:"I just saw lady Anna and another Knight walk away with a earth bag."
Ben:"Gather all of your troops and follow her."




Meanwhile



Marik:"This is taking forever!"
John:"Yes well, I am not to blame for it."
Zack:"Would you guys shut up!"
Marik:Julie finaly wakes up.
"Are you ok?"
Julie:"My head always seems to be hurting every time I wake up."
Marik:"You were injured on the head so thats the reason why it hurts."
Julie:"Oh. So where is that guy who took me away."
Marik:"Zack, John, and Max took care of him."
Julie:"Speaking of that, you shot me down with lightning didn't you?"
Marik:Yeah, sorry.
Julie:"I guess I forgive you. Where are we going now?"
Marik:Max got taken away by a strange girl and we are going to go look for him.
Julie:"Oh ok. Well you can put me down now."
Marik:"Oh ok"
I put julie down.
Julie:"Thanks for taking care of me though. Zack!!"
I run over to zack and start to talk to him.
John:"You like her,don't you."
Marik:"That's not any of your business"
John:"Hahahaha. We then have it your way. A word a advice though, you should tell her before it is too late. I've had my share of girlfriends too."
I walk away.
"Ok everyone, let's get going."


Meanwhile


Max:I wake up only to find myself inside a earth bag.
I then look outside one of the holes and see Anna.
It's time to bust out of here.


To be continued.

[joon61]

Spoiler:

Max

Spoiler:

Max is a fiery 16 year old boy who is lives with his 2 brothers john and marik after his parents died. Max never did have any freinds because he would never talk to anyone but one day he met a girl named anna and they talked alot. Then one day,she disapeared and some people said she was dead. Max then swore to himself to never again get anymore freinds because he did not want to get hurt again by his emotions. Max uses the element fire and is a elemental that zebelidus needs for power.

John

Spoiler:

John is max and marik's cool-headed 19 year old brother who works for the post office. John was quite popular in school so he had many freinds. John discovered his powers when he was 14 and told his parents he was going on a trip with his freinds. It was a lie so he could learn to use his powers. He got back after a month and 4 years after he got back,his parents died so he finished collage so he could take care max and marik. John uses the elements water and wind.

Marik

Spoiler:

Marik is a kind 13 year old boy that lost his parents. Max would always pick on marik. In school,marik was had some freinds and they had lots of fun together. One day he went to the movies with his freinds and some people started shooting. They shot one of marik's freinds and marik went crazy. The police showed up at that moment and caught the criminals and threw them in jail. Marik then went home to find his parents dead.
For the pass 2 weeks,he did not go to school,sat in his room crying all day and was not really eating anything. Then one day,john showed him a letter that his parents left before they died.
Those words that marik saw that day keep him going through life.
Marik uses the element lightning.

Zack

Spoiler:

Zack is a 17 year old man who saves max from the a behemoth. He was looking for his sister julie when he kung fu teacher put him in harufune where he could"go to the next level" Zack then engaged in a battle with max later on and fell unconcious. When he woke up,he learned that julie was taken away by a ghost named logoon. He pursued and defeated logoon to save julie.

Julie

Spoiler:

Julie is zack's 14 year old sister. She was looking for her brother but ran into marik while running from a ghost named logoon. (Thats it until later.)

[joon61]

Max:I gather energy and burst out of the earth bag.
Knight:"What the hell!"
Max:I hit the knight with a fire kick and he falls down unconcious.
"Anna,what's going on?"
Anna:"How do you know my name?"
Max:"You don't remember anything?"
Anna:"What are you talking about? The only thing I know is that you are the elemental th.."
Max:"Wait. You're working for zebelidus too?"
Anna:"Yes but for a different reason."
Max:"And what's that?"
Anna:"Immortality."
Max:"Why do you need Immortality and how will you get it.
Anna:"Zebelidus made a deal with us. Whoever gets the highest number of elementals, will be granted eternal life."
Max:"And you belive that crap? What if he kills you as soon as he gets them? How will you know for sure?"
Anna:"Well I........."

Ben:I walk where Max and Anna are talking."Hello Max."
Max:"Damn!"
Anna:"Go away."
Ben:"I have come for the elemental."
Max:"Bring it on."
I run towards Ben and try to kick him in the face with a fire kick but a knight gets in the way with a fire sheild that renders my kick powerless.
He then pushes me away with his sheild as I then tumble along the ground.
Ben:"Charge!!!!!!!!!!!"
I send an army of soiders at Max to capture him.
Anna:"Max no!!!"
Ben:I make a giant earth prison around Anna and shrink it down to her size letting only her head stick out.
Max:As the knights jumped on top of me trying to surpress me, I got angry and was getting more angry by the second.
"GET THE HELL OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Something inside me snaped and I then lost control of my body.
"It's time!"

Blaze max:Orange, yellow, and red flames appear all over my body and I push all the knights off me.
I then appear next to Ben and hit him in the face and place flames on his face that won't come off no matter what he does as he stands there screaming in pain.
I then kick him in the water but it still does not come off.
The knights then ran away after seeing me in this state of power.
Anna:"Max, please stop."
Ben:I endure the pain as I get out of the water. I then control the sand and wrap it around Max.
Blaze Max:I turn the sand into glass by making it heat up to 5000 degrees and break out of it.
Ben:"Damn!!
That's way too hot."
I make a sand tidal wave and ride on it to get away from Max.
Blaze Max:I fly after ben and shoot 10 giant sized fireballs at him.
Ben:I turn around and see the fireballs.
"Gates of the giant!!!"
A giant gate appears in front of me and protects me aginst the fireballs but the flames stay on the gate.
"Thats some power you got there, Max. But I will be back."
Blaze max:I roar very loudly not being able to control myself.
Anna:"I don't know what to do."
I then see 4 people show up.
John"Max!!!"
Zack:"I didn't know the boy was that powerful."
Anna:"We have to calm him down or he will stay that way"
Marik:I shoot 5 lightning bolts at Max.
Blaze max:5 lightning bolts hit me so I look at Marik try to ram him.
Zack:"That just made him madder."





To be continued.

[deadtaka]

Somebody make a Spiritual world of spirits. GOGOGOGO

[joon61]

lol wut.
You like it?

[Hinata126]

Sorry i ment to put awsome on the poll but i was destracted

any way its really good!!

[joon61]

Thanks!

[joon61]

John:"This is not good." I shoot a blast of wind at Marik, pushing him out of the way.
Blaze max:I crash down to the ground after trying to ram Marik from above.
Anna:I spin around drawing the water from the sea to me. I then blast it at Max, hoping to put out the flames.
John:I make a tornado around max as Anna's water combines with it, making it have the powers of wind and water.
Blaze max:I try to get out of the tornado but everytime I touch it,the water repels me. I spin around and turn the water into steam and the wind into hot air. "Rawrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!" the steam and the hot air is blown away from me.
Marik:He's just too powerful.
Anna:I charge up all of my energy and shoot a holy beam at Max.
Blaze max:I am hit with a powerful holy beam that starts to take away my flames.
"I will be back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Max:I fall down as I revert back to my normal form.
Anna:I start fall back as John catches me.
John:"Sleep now. We will take care of him."
Julie:"That was close."
Zack:I walk over to Max to pick him up.
"I have a quick question. Why did that beam do something to him but our stuff couldn't?
John:"Because those flames that were around Max were evil flames. The power of holy drains the user of how much power the opponet has when you use it on them.
You have to be have evil energy for it to have a effect on you. If she would have used it on the ghost that we were fighting earlier, he would have died easier and she would not have passed out. There are 3 types of spirit energy.

Light:This means that holy will not work on you and that you have a good reason for doing anything. Even if you act cold hearted towards people. You must complete the holy queen's list in order to have the light spirit transformation. But you have no way of knowing what's on the list. You could do something on the list and not even have a clue. If you do pick light, you will under go a transformation.

Dark:Holy will work on you but darkness will give you power. These kind of people only care about themselves and nobody else. You have to complete the darkness king's list in order to have the darkness spirit transformation. Once you start on the path to becoming a dark spirit user, you will get the list of the things you have to do in order to achieve it and transform.

Nature:These people are neutral and will help anybody who needs it.
Depending on who they help, will decide if they are light or dark.
Holy and dark won't work on them. If they chose dark, they will get a list of what to do to gain a dark spirit transformation. If they chose light, they will not get a list. Once they do chose, they will under go a transformation.
In order to chose which path you want to take, you must go to the trials of heaven and hell."
Zack:"Does that mean that Max has dark spirit energy then?"
John:"I don't know yet. If he did, he would be aware of what he was doing.
Marik:"So then he's safe?"
John:"For now."
Zack:"Well let's find somewhere to sleep but when he wakes up, we'll have to tell him what happened and everything."
John:"Of course."
I put Anna on my back.
"Zack, get Max and let us be on our way."
Zack:"Okay"
I pick Max up and carry him on my back.
Me, John, Marik, Julie, Max and Anna travel to a nearby town and let Max and Anna rest there.



3 days later



Max:I wake up and find myself inside a house.
I then sit up and see Anna in a bed next to me.
"What am I doing here?"
I get up and walk outside.
I see alot of people walking around as I look around.
I go back inside and walk over to Anna.
"Anna? Anna? Wake up."
Anna:I wake up and see max.
"Max!!! You're ok."
Max:Anna jumped at me and huged me.
"What do you mean?"
Anna:"You don't remember?"
Max:"Remember what?"
I start seeing flash backs of before I blacked out.
"I blacked out but I don't know what happened after that."
John:"I guess that means you wasen't doing it on purpose then."
I come in though the window.
"And you."
I point at Anna.
"You know something,don't you?"
Anna:"Yes. Gather everyone here and I will explain everything."


To be continued.

[joon61]

Anna:"Zebelidus is a incarnation of hades and he seeks power. In order to beat him, you have to seal him with holy."
John:"So then you could kill him then?"
Anna:"I would have to transform again because I don't have enough power.
Also, he does not know I can even use holy. He needs me for the power he seeks."
Max:"Or we could weaken him. You could seal him then right?"
Anna:"Yes but he has too much power for you to even fight him. You guys are too weak. You must get stronger first."
Max:"Is there a way I could beat him without using holy power?"
Anna:"No because if you do, he will just come back in another body and will be more powerful."
Max:"You are the only one who can seal him?"
Anna:"Yeah."
Zack:"What keeps bringing him back?"
Anna:"I don't know"
Marik:"So what should we do then?"
Anna:"We should find the other elementals and kill them so he can't gain power."
Max:"Why kill them? He needs all of us right? As long as he does not have all 7 then he cannot become no stronger then he already is."
Anna:"We still can't take any chances!"
Max:"I am not killing anyone who does not deserve it. These people could have a family for all you know!!! I won't let myself be captured so you won't have to worry about that!" I storm out of the house.
Zack:"I will go get him."
John:"You have to excuse Max. me, him and Marik lost our parents when we were younger. I guess Max does not want anyone else to die like his parents did."
Anna:"I am sorry for your loss but we cannot act so childish on this matter. I will go back to Zebelidus and when I get back to you guys, I will have more information."
I walk out of the house and head for Zebelidus's lair.
Julie:"I am going to go see if we can buy some food."
I walk out of the house to look for some shops.
Max:I walk though the forest and I then see a strange man.
I ignore him and try to walk past him but he keeps geting in my way so I flip over him and keep walking. I then look behind me and I don't see him. I then bumped into something and when I looked to see what it was, it was the man again.
"What do you want?!"
???"I want you to come with me."
Max:"I don't respond well to orders."
???:"We could always do this the hard way."
Max:"Might have too because this is too boring."
I ukemi up trying to kick the man in the face.
???:I see Max ukemi up so I grab his legs and throw him at a tree, causing him to bump his head.
Max:I bump my head and fall unconcious.
???:As I am about to take Max with me ,a young man appears and shoots a fireball at my head. I knock the fireball away with my hand. I then zoom over to him and kick him in the face.
Zack:The man kicked me in the face as I fell to the ground. I got up and swung my sword at him making a fire wave come out to burn him but he easily stops it by knocking the fire away.
"Who are you?"
???:"My name is Zebelidus."



Zebelidus:I make 5 dark minons and send them to Zack.
"Cloud of darkness"
I make a cloud of darkness over zack that rains darkness down on Zack. This rain is harmless but if any of the rain hits him, he wont be able to see anything.
Zack:I see his minons and pull out my sword.
"This is nothing."
I then feel rain touching me from above and my eyesight goes out.
I could not see anything at all but I could feel the punches coming from the dark minons hiiting me repeately.
Zebelidus:"Time to end this sorry excuse for a show."
I make a mid sized dark energy ball and throw it at Zack at high speed.
It hits him and carrys him up to the sky and explodes.
My minons then carry Max back to my lair with me.



Tobi continued. XD

[loganace]

Goodness i have alot to read XD. I will in a few days.

[joon61]

Julie:I look around and see lots of shops. As well as kids with thier mothers and fathers. "............" I walk up to a shop. "Hi."
Shopkeeper:"What do ya want?"
Julie:"Could I have a basket of fruit and some bread?"
Shopkeeper:"Sure. That will be 2 kigs."
Julie:I give him 2 kigs and he gives me what I asked for.
"Thanks." I then run back to the house.
"I brought the food."
Marik:"Oh, hey, Julie"
John:"Have you seen your brother?"
Julie:"No."
Someone then opens the door.
Marik:"Don't you know how to knock?"
Man:"I heard some explosions in the forest, we are under attack!!!!"



John:"Marik, Julie, let's go!!"
We run out the door and head to the forest.


Meanwhile

Zebelidus:I sense 3 people coming.
"Reinforcements eh? Intercept them."
I send 20 soilders at my foes to delay them.

Meanwhile


John:I sense a lot of people rushing at us.
Marik:"I will use my lightning to kill them.
John:"No!! That might start a fire and kill Max."
Julie:"Here they come."
Our foes come out of the bushes and lunge at us.
"Here we go."


Zack:I found myself lying down after waking up from Zebelidus.
"Heh heh look at me, all beat up. If I don't find a doctor soon, I'll die.
Then I see Anna walking though the forest.
"Hey!!!" I yell but softly.
Anna:I see Zack on the floor, injured.
"Zack?"


Meanwhile


???:I see Zebelidus in the forest with Max so I swoop down and grab Max.
I then send wind bubbles down on Zebelidus and his soilders after fly back up to the air. The bubbles explode with air bursting out of them, blowing my foes away.
Zebelidus:"Follow him and catch him."
My soilders fly into the air to capture the elementals.

I start to spin around, dodging the soilders and killing them with sharp wind blast as I then fly away south.


TOBI continued

[joon61]

Zack:Anna was healing me with her powers as I then sensed someone flying though the air. "I wonder who that is."
Anna:"He's got Max!!"
Zack:"How do you know?"
Anna:"Because..... Ummmm..... I see him."
Zack:"But the trees are in the way of the sky so how could you possibly see him?"
Anna:I hit zack in the head. "The more you talk, the longer it will take to heal you."
Zack:"Ouch." Touchy aren't we?


Meanwhile



John:As me, Marik, and Juile finished fighting off the soilders, we then headed for the person who took max. "I can sense his energy."
Marik:"let's get moving."
Jinku:I come down from a tree and take Julie hostage.
Marik:I turn around after hearing leaves rustle and I see Jinku take Julie.
"Hey,get back here."
I run after Jinku.
Jinku:"You'll never catch me, ya little punk."
I keep running away, trying to shake Marik off my tail.
John:"Marik wait!!!"
Calling for him would be useless as I was too late.
"He should be ok."
I run after the man who captured Max.


Meanwhile


Max:I wake up seeing a boy holding me in the air.
"Let me go, you freak."
???:"..............Wait."
Max:"Huh?"
I waited until he put me down by a cave and he still remained silent.
"You don't talk much, do you?"
???:"Name."
Max:"Name?"
???:"You do have one, don't you?"
Max:"Of course. It's max. And what about you? Whats your name?"
???:"........."
Max:"You do have one, don't you?"
Zero:"Zero......"
I walk into the cave.
Max:I follow Zero into the cave.
As I sensed his aura, I felt a dark vibe coming from him.
But I could not even sense John or Marik so I just went with him cause I had nowhere else to go.


Meanwhile


Zebelidus:I see John walking past the forest.
"So you were the person who was following me."
John:"Where's Max?"
Zebelidus:"If you beat me then I might tell you. I am Zebelidus."
John:"So you are Zebelidus? Well then, let's see how good you really are."
Zebelidus:"So you have heard of me?"
John:"I have heard enough."
Zebelidus:"No sense in talking anymore. Let's get started."

[joon61]

John:I run over to Zebelidus and jump in the air. I then send 5 wind blades down on him.
Zebelidus:I see the wind blades coming at me so I make a spear filled with dark energy in the palm of my hand and hit the wind blades away one by one. I then throw the spear at John and jump up.
I shoot 3 dark balls at John that will erase his body if hit.
John:Zebelidus's spear was headed towards me so I spun around, making a wind barrier around me which deflects the spear. I then see 3 dark balls coming towards me at high speed so I put them in wind bubbles and make them explode.
I then try to execute a flying kick on Zebelidus while holding up my hand, shooting out a blast of wind that makes me go faster towards him.
Zebelidus:John easily countered my moves. "Not bad." As John trys to kick me, I grab his leg and swing him around so fast, a dark barrier forms around us. I then let go, throwing him at the barrier.
John:I get hit by the barrier and dark flames appear around me as I fall though the barrier and fall to the ground.
"Damn!!" I get up as I suffer from the pain of the flames. I create waterball in the palm of my hand and throw it at zebelidus.
Zebelidus:The ball misses it's target as I don't even move.
"It seems you have missed."
John:"Did I?"
The water ball explodes, leaving a barrier around him. I make the water ball spin around. I then make it fly around in circles.
I then throw it far away while zebelidus is in it.
Zebelidus:As John tries to get rid of me, I quickly make a barrier of nothingness and expand it to get rid of the water bubble.
I then shoot darkness out of my hands continuesly to zoom at john.
"Here I come."
John:I shoot 10 wind balls at zebelidus.
I then jump back 10 feet and quickly make a wind rocket that zooms behind Zebelidus and makes him fall faster.
Zebelidus:I make a spear filled with darkness energy and deflect the windballs. I then see a rocket made of sense a rocket made a pure wind come from behind me and slams me to the ground.
I get up and brush myself off.
"That it?"
John:"Nope. Transform!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Harsh winds blow everywhere. Water begins to swirl around me with the wind guiding it's course.
The dark flames disspear.
A large blue and green beams shoots me from above.
Everything dipearses and I stand up completly healed.
The fire on me was gone and I had blue and green aura covering me like a sheild.
"This is my transformation."
I appear behind Zebelidus and quickly try to kick him in the face.
Zebelidus:I quickly turn around, only to get kicked in the face, causing me to crash though many trees.
John:I appear in front of Zebelidus and kick him upwards. I then put a gale barrier around him, spinning him around. The barrier then comes to me as I focus it into one little ball and throw it at zebelidus.
The ball reaches hypersonic speed as soon as i throw it.
It hits zebelidus and carrys him in the air and explodes with lots of boiling water and harsh winds everywhere.
Zebelidus gets blow far away and is heading straight for the ground and blinding speed.
"It is finished."
Zebelidus:I get slamed to the ground with boiling water all over me.
"Arrrg"
I then sense 2 energys in a cave that I locate by looking behind me.
It was the 2 elementals from before.
But I was injured so I called my medic team by sending a dark bird to my base.

Meanwhile




Marik:"Get your ass back here!!!!!"
Jinku:"Why can't you get loss?"
Julie:"let me go!!!"
Jinku:"You guys whine to damn much."
I thow Julie on the ground and make a earth dome around her.
Marik:I was about to shoot a lightning bolt at the dome to break julie free but Jinku interupted me.
Jinku:"If you break it open, I will stomp the ground, making earth spikes impale her. Better think twice."
Marik:I charge at jinku attempting to punch him in the face.


Tobi conten ued.XD