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Old 06-12-2012, 02:19 PM   #1
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Shut up!

Shut up! Shut up!
I don't want to hear it!
Shut up! Shut up!
I don't really care!
Shut up! Shut up!
How can you not see it?!
Shut up! Shut up!
You were never really there!

How can you always take his side?!
Can't you see all he says are lies?!
How can you say I'm always wrong?!
He's been fooling you all along!

Shut up! Shut up!
Go ahead and hate me!
Shut up! Shut up!
You'll see the truth one day!
Shut up! Shut up!
What you want will never be!
Shut up! Shut up!
He won't have it any other way!

How can you take his lies over what is really true?!
It's hard to say but the truth is he don't love you!
Go ahead and sob into the long, long night!
He won't wrap his arms around and hold you tight!

Shut up! Shut up!
He was lying from the start!
Shut up! Shut up!
When did Love equal verbal assault?!
Shut up! Shut up!
Be ready to fall, fall, fall apart!
Shut up! Shut up!
You know it's really all his fault!

How can you always choose his side over mine?!
Even when he crosses the big white line?!
Why do you always defend his pride?!
Love does not mean believing lies!

Shut up, shut up.
I can hear you screaming.
Shut up, shut up.
I always knew he'd snap.
Shut up, shut up.
He's stopping you from leaving.
Shut up, shut up.
Since "I do" you've been trapped.

Now do you believe as you face begins to bleed?
Now do you see as he punches out all your teeth?
I tried to tell you but he struck me in the head.
And now...we are both dead...
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Old 06-12-2012, 02:40 PM   #2
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.... This is really great. I can't really say how to describe it... Sorta fits my mood right now though xD
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Old 06-12-2012, 03:12 PM   #3
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Lol ruuuude. :P
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Old 06-12-2012, 03:22 PM   #4
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.... This is really great. I can't really say how to describe it... Sorta fits my mood right now though xD
I'm sorry about that Cherry. I wrote this awhile ago after my mother took my father's side (AGAIN) in an argument and I just wondered just how far she'd go to keep supporting him...I was quite angry.
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Shut upt! Shut up! I don't want to hear it! Lol.
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Old 06-12-2012, 03:40 PM   #5
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You don't have to apologize, I really liked the poem.

And I'm sorry about that. I don't know your story but I do know that I hate how parents always believe or side with their spouse over their children even if the child was correct and stuff. Sorry if that didn't have anything to do with the poem but I decided to put my two cents out there.
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Old 06-12-2012, 03:54 PM   #6
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You don't have to apologize, I really liked the poem.

And I'm sorry about that. I don't know your story but I do know that I hate how parents always believe or side with their spouse over their children even if the child was correct and stuff. Sorry if that didn't have anything to do with the poem but I decided to put my two cents out there.
That actually is exactly what the poem is about. You see, my dad had an affair recently and for the first time in my life, my mother sided with me, but unfortunately he's back in our lives and back to his old self (which believe me is NOT pleasent. There's a reason why all the "fathers" in my poems are cruel) and once again is ignoring my opinion to listen to his. It drives me absolutely mad. I also appreciate your kind comments. Not many poems I write are liked, or atleast aren't...how can I put it..."judged" if that makes any sense? Anyways, thank you.
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Old 06-12-2012, 04:34 PM   #7
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That actually is exactly what the poem is about. You see, my dad had an affair recently and for the first time in my life, my mother sided with me, but unfortunately he's back in our lives and back to his old self (which believe me is NOT pleasent. There's a reason why all the "fathers" in my poems are cruel) and once again is ignoring my opinion to listen to his. It drives me absolutely mad. I also appreciate your kind comments. Not many poems I write are liked, or atleast aren't...how can I put it..."judged" if that makes any sense. thank you.
Okay, I had a feeling it had to do with some bigger meaning. I"m sorry about that. Hearing stories like that makes me sad. And your welcome

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Old 06-12-2012, 04:37 PM   #8
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Wow o.o Very good poem.
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Old 06-13-2012, 10:26 AM   #9
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Okay, I'll shut up.
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This poem is really really good, I can relate. My mom took my dad's side when I was trying to get out and get help and now I'm still stuck in the exact same spot I have been in my whole life. Of course, the social services worker didn't do crap either, but still. I think it's stupid how people side with their spouse over their own flesh and blood. But good poem
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This poem is really really good, I can relate. My mom took my dad's side when I was trying to get out and get help and now I'm still stuck in the exact same spot I have been in my whole life. Of course, the social services worker didn't do crap either, but still. I think it's stupid how people side with their spouse over their own flesh and blood. But good poem
I'm glad you can relate and I'm sorry for the tough time you're going through. If you wanna talk feel free to PM me and I'll listen.
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