my poem

CutieSakura · 08-21-2009, 08:11 AM

i do feel a little better,I do feel a little stronger
I do feel like I'm brave,I do feel like im strong
but there is just a tiny pain in me,it wants out
it makes me feel sad,I want everything back
I'll have to work so hard again,things might never be the same,
it will be a long time probably in October when I can say,
what I need to say,I'm going to try my hardest,
I wanna make people proud,I wanna prove that I can do it
I wanna prove myself to a very important person to me,
with everyones help,I think I can get through it
my depression is fading,my cheerfulness is coming back
I want to be more happy,I still want to be noticed by some people
but I would like to thank,all you people,
for what you have done,has changed my life

CutieSakura · 08-21-2009, 08:13 AM

iam not depressed anymore but I feel this way

SaiyoichiUchiha · 08-21-2009, 08:15 AM

Well poetry is one of the best ways to let your emotions out so yeah

abby750 · 08-21-2009, 08:18 AM

awesome poem

Hebi · 08-25-2009, 05:49 PM

You is a true poet Sakura-chan

NinjaVanish · 08-25-2009, 07:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CutieSakura

i do feel a little better,I do feel a little stronger
I do feel like I'm brave,I do feel like im strong
but there is just a tiny pain in me,it wants out
it makes me feel sad,I want everything back
I'll have to work so hard again,things might never be the same,
it will be a long time probably in October when I can say,
what I need to say,I'm going to try my hardest,
I wanna make people proud,I wanna prove that I can do it
I wanna prove myself to a very important person to me,
with everyones help,I think I can get through it
my depression is fading,my cheerfulness is coming back
I want to be more happy,I still want to be noticed by some people
but I would like to thank,all you people,
for what you have done,has changed my life

im so glad that youre feeling better...i was so sad when i read your other poem...

i cant wait until october!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 08-25-2009, 08:00 PM

Good poem.

CutieSakura · 08-25-2009, 11:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NinjaVanish

im so glad that youre feeling better...i was so sad when i read your other poem...

i cant wait until october!

i wanna throw it out in the garbage..and yeah mean either!

Taker369 · 08-26-2009, 12:04 AM

awsome my friend simply awsome.

SakuraGirl · 08-26-2009, 08:17 AM

wow lady hana i like it

Shinobi_Kitten · 10-25-2009, 06:30 PM

Awesome poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Vatanui AKA Pride · 10-25-2009, 07:56 PM

Gravedigger, huh...=\

princezzhinata · 10-26-2009, 05:08 AM

*Sobs* Very touchy poem! ^__^

Shinagami · 06-06-2012, 09:35 PM

Good

08-21-2009, 08:11 AM	#1
CutieSakura Jonin Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: "STEAL MY BOYFRIEND, TASTE MY STEEL!" ;D Posts: 5,421 Rep Power: 9	my poem i do feel a little better,I do feel a little stronger I do feel like I'm brave,I do feel like im strong but there is just a tiny pain in me,it wants out it makes me feel sad,I want everything back I'll have to work so hard again,things might never be the same, it will be a long time probably in October when I can say, what I need to say,I'm going to try my hardest, I wanna make people proud,I wanna prove that I can do it I wanna prove myself to a very important person to me, with everyones help,I think I can get through it my depression is fading,my cheerfulness is coming back I want to be more happy,I still want to be noticed by some people but I would like to thank,all you people, for what you have done,has changed my life __________________ ...It seems a waste To reminisce about you Because i want to keep you mine and mine alone. I don't really wanna remember you I mean, it's embarassing Grinning to myself. Eventhough you were late coming home Tired from a late night You picked me up in your arms Even in my dreams, i knew it... ...I miss you so I couldn't feel anymore helpless I miss you so I'll always love you.

08-21-2009, 08:13 AM	#2
CutieSakura Jonin Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: "STEAL MY BOYFRIEND, TASTE MY STEEL!" ;D Posts: 5,421 Rep Power: 9	Re: my poem iam not depressed anymore but I feel this way __________________ ...It seems a waste To reminisce about you Because i want to keep you mine and mine alone. I don't really wanna remember you I mean, it's embarassing Grinning to myself. Eventhough you were late coming home Tired from a late night You picked me up in your arms Even in my dreams, i knew it... ...I miss you so I couldn't feel anymore helpless I miss you so I'll always love you.

08-21-2009, 08:15 AM	#3
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08-25-2009, 05:49 PM	#5
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08-25-2009, 08:00 PM	#7
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08-26-2009, 12:04 AM	#9
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08-26-2009, 08:17 AM	#10
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10-25-2009, 06:30 PM	#11
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10-25-2009, 07:56 PM	#12
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10-26-2009, 05:08 AM	#13
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06-06-2012, 09:35 PM	#14
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