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Join Date: Dec 2009
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I'm not on as much as I was before, I'll start reading then ;]
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Special Jonin Candidate
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Here's a sneak peek at the next chapter.
Chapter 7: Look at his power level, it's over 9,000! "Well, off we go..." Daniel commented as he and Pool started walking onto Route 3, which leads to Cerulean City. Pool started babbling something about Eminem when he ran into a post in the ground. "Route 3: Beware of Caterpie!" Pool read aloud. "I thought Caterpie sucked." "They do," Daniel responded. "It's just that they attack in groups which can get very huge if need be" "Oh, well whatever. With me and you on a team they have no chance!" Pool then struted around while continuing his rant about Eminem. A dark shadow came over the forest the same time as a shriek was heard. Ok well give me feedback on this i guess, I haven't written anything in a while. I am also working on a piece about this guy whos family gets killed by the mafia.
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Freshmen Academy Student
Join Date: Nov 2009
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Nice fanfic Pool. I might make one myself one day.
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Special Jonin Candidate
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As much as I want to continue this, I'd need some time to think about it all. I'm glad I found this thread. xD
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: In Johto catching Pokemon
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POOL WAS HERE. DEAL WITH IT. Call me Cloukana now, I'm becoming a woman. GF/BF: None ): Fight back against bullies! Go down on your feet, not your knees! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Thunder Buddy: Pool Friends: Tifa Legacy, Ino's Girl, deadtaka, Sagemaster, Apa, Sai's Brother, Taker, The Shady Ninja, Shayd, Kanisawa,Vino, Hikari-Chan, Leaf, Ninja Pink, and many more |
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Special Jonin Candidate
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Chapter 7: Hard As A Rock
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Chapter 8: Experience Is Key
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Arc 1 is completed. Please comment and tell me what you think about the Arc 1 finale!
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Dec 2010
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Awesome, getting better at your writing, really flows. But Kakuna should still know Weedle's old attacks shouldn't it?
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I'm just making it like that for simplicity's sake, lol.
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I thought he lied casue Kakuna was too weak to win that fight
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I'm thinking of the next arc... Thinking of doing something different, but also it might make some plot holes xD
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Special Jonin Candidate
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Chapter 9: Enter: Kyozu!
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Special Jonin Candidate
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O_O
A secret organization...AWESOME! Secret Organizations are always helpful to use in stories XD
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Special Jonin Candidate
Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: /人◕ ‿‿ ◕人\ Contract?
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Chapter 10: Reunion
"Kaiser!" Pool yelled. He ran to Kaiser and gave him a hi-5. "What's been happening dude?" "Nico went along without me... Again. So, not much, you?" Kaiser responded. "Well, this is Daniel" Pool said while pointing at Daniel. "Nice to meet ya" Kaiser said while giving Daniel a handshake. "Ditto" Daniel said back. "Wanna travel with us for a while?" "Yeah! That'd be great" Kaiser replied. He brought his Growlithe out of its pokeball. "I see where this is going" Pool flashed a quick smile, then he brought out Tentacool. "You're such a cheater, using type advantage" Kaiser joked. "Growlithe, bite!" Kaiser's Growlithe charged at Tentacool and got a good grip with its teeth on Tentacool. "Blast it away with water gun!" Tentacool shot a stream of water at Growlithe, but Growlithe was too fast and sidestepped before it got hit with the attack. "Go again!" Tentacool once again shot another stream of water at Growlithe. "Jump over it and bite again!" Growlithe followed orders exactly. Wasting no time, it jumped over the blast of water and sank its teeth into Tentacool. "Damn, that little guy is fast" Pool commented. "Ram it with tackle!" A tired Tentacool caught the Growlithe off guard and struck it with tackle. "No problem, use your own tackle!" Growlithe bashed itself into Tentacool and knocked the water pokemon out. "ONE FOR ONE BABY!" Kaiser gloated. "Hey, I still have two more pokemon! Go, Kakuna! Oh wait... Uhm harden" Kakuna's shell glowed and become rougher. "Ha! Use Bite!" Growlithe tried to bite Kakuna but hurt it's teeth in the process. "Wait, duh" Kaiser commented on his stupid move. "Flamethrower" Growlithe shot a condensed ray of fire at Kakuna. Just then, Kakuna began glowing. The shell that was known as Kakuna was breaking. Out came... A bee? Yes, a bee! With a giant stinger and stingers on its arms. "I knew it! Beedrill!" Pool shouted. "Use Pin Missle!" Beedrill shot it's newfound stingers at the Growlithe. The dog was stricken with awe and was hit by the attack. "Finish with Poison Jab!" Beedrill rushed towards Growlithe and smacked it right across the face. Needless to say that Growlithe fainted. "Go get em, Rhyhorn!" Kaiser returned Growlithe, then he threw his pokeball and a giant quadruped rhino rock creature with a horn on its head came out. "D-DANG" Pool said in amazement. "Yup. I picked him up on my way here" Kaiser showed off. "Rock Blast!" Rhyhorn scraped up some rocks and chucked them at Beedrill. "Dodge em!" Beedrill flew to the side and got away from the rocks. "I know! Sunny Day!" Pool had an idea. The suns rays intensified and became much brighter and hotter. "Solar Beam!" Instantly an extremely fast powerful ray of light came from Beedrill and struck Rhyhorn. Rhyhorn fainted slowly. "Nice man, that Beedrill sure is powerful!" Kaiser commented. He returned Rhyhorn as Pool returned Beedrill. "I'm glad Kakuna evolved... This is great" Pool said "Pool, I'm here for you" A bold voice could be heard nearby. A man about six feet tall stood there in between Pool and the gym. "You're not going any farther."
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Special Jonin Candidate
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Stalker gym leader xD
Nice chapter ![]() also, I'm in your sig O:
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Special Jonin Candidate
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Or, IS IT A GYM LEADER? DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNN
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Scizor is 5 feet 11 inches
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Nice chapter, Kaiser's a bish.
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Special Jonin Candidate
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The people in the anime must be short then. Last I remember Scizor was taller than them.
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