Pokemon Fan-Fic

[Cloukora]

Originally Posted by ILIKEPIE

I didn't like the Ash reference

Why's that?

[ILIKEPIE]

Ash is annoying a lot of the time and forgets the lessons he learned in previous episodes. Plus it's out of character for him to seal all the pokemon in their egg forms considering he believes pokemon should be free. The first couple of chapters it seemed it was the first time the world had pokemon and I was thinking the plot would of had something do with the pokemon god Arceus sending the eggs to new world to save them from the destruction of their world.

[Cloukora]

Yeah, true. But Ash would do anything to save Pokemon, and he did what he did to save them. I'll probably explain it more later on throughout the story.

[Cloukora]

Spoiler:

Chapter 4: Creatures called Pokemon

Michael and his class walked through the museum, awed at what they all saw: dinosaur replicas made out of their bones, sarcophaguses, a mummy in a glass, and other strange and wondrous creatures all over the place. They finally reached the dinosaur egg exhibit. The eggs that were recently found and brought here. There were 15 eggs lined up in a row, and each one had an etching on it, except for one blue one. The first was red and had a flame etched into it. The second was green and had a vine wrapped around the egg. The third was blue and had hexagons covering it, giving off the illusion of a turtle shell. The fourth was green and had a leaf. The fifth had flame and was red as well, but the top of the flame was sharper and had more points on it. The sixth had red spikes protruding out of the back of the blue shell, and was the only one that was like that. The seventh was green had a tail etched into the egg. The eighth, a red egg, had chicken feet etched in. The ninth had a head with a fin. The tenth was just green with no etchings. The eleventh, red, had a snout. The twelfth was blue and had a seashell. The thirteenth was green and had a twig. The fourteenth was blue and had fins. Finally, the fifteenth was red with a tail.

Michael, Lisa, and Trey just stared at the eggs with the rest of the class. They had never seen anything like this before; they were amazing.

“What makes each of these eggs stand out is the etchings on each one of them. How those etchings are on them, or why, we do not know. Experts believe the cavemen used them as a way to inscribe their art onto them after taking them from the dinosaur nests.” The guide lectured.

“Actually, that’s not true. And these aren’t dinosaur eggs.” An old man approached the group, leaning on a cane, as he spoke. “Well, they are old, and some resemble dinosaur qualities, but they’re not the dinosaurs we are thinking of. They’re actually called Pokemon. They are creatures that existed long ago, during another time. How or why we came up on them though, I’m still trying to figure out.”

“I’m sorry sir, Pokeman?” The teacher asked like the man was crazy, which he seemed like it.

“Pokemon.” The man replied. “When they were dug up, we came across some devices as well. Probably placed by the people who put them there.” He pulled out a small red and white ball out of his pocket. “I call this, a Pokemon Ball.”

Michael raised his hand. “Why not call it…Pokeball…for short?”

“Pokeball! Yes! That sounds about right. Thank you…” The man searched for a name.

“Michael.”

“Michael! Here, you can have this.” The man tossed the Pokeball to Michael. “I have more. In fact, if any of you want one, help yourself.” He pointed to a bin full of them. “I have enough in my possession to research, so I don’t need them. Now, for the next device. I call this…a poke…dex. Pokedex. I have went through this device and found many types of creatures within it and information on them. Some of them even evolve! Michael, you can have this as well.” He handed the Pokedex to Michael. “You! Are you a boy or a girl?” He was pointing to Trey, and he was referring to his long and curly hair.
“I’m a boy. Why?” Trey replied.

“Just wondering. Here, you can have this one as well. You too, young girl.” He handed Trey and Lisa each one as well.

“Hey what about the rest of us?” Jerry asked, making fun of this old man. “We want to be able to learn about ‘Pokemen.’ As well.” The popular crowd laughed. Michael hated people like that. They have to make fun of others to feel better about themselves. One day, he was going to put a fist in his face.

“It’s Pokemon!” This caused them to laugh even more.

“Alright! Knock it off Jerry!” Trey stepped forward to confront them.

“Oh no, Miss Curls is going to slap us!”

Michael had it. He started towards Jerry, but stopped. The eggs inside the glass started shaking, the glass shattered, and the egg with the spikes burst open, and out came an crocodile-looking creature. It was blue, and the same red spikes ran down its back and tail. It landed in between Michael and Jerry, and stood up on two legs. Michael decided to give it a shot, and opened the Pokedex and a robotic voice immediately said: “Totodile. A water type Pokemon. Totodiles like to live near water, and like to bite almost anything they see. Suddenly, more Pokemon came out of the eggs, and hopped down. Michael aimed the Pokedex at each one. The one that came out of the first one was a Charmander, a small red creature that looked like T-rex dinosaur without the really small arms, and had a tail with flame on the end. From the second was a Bulbasuar, a green dinosaur creature that crawled on all fours with a bulb on its back. The third was a Squirtle, a blue turtle that stood on two fours, had a curled tail, and a shell on its back. The fourth looked like a miniature green Brachiosaurus, except its neck was normal and it had a leaf coming out from the top of its head, and a “necklace” of buds around its neck. It was called a Chikorita. The fifth was called a Cyndaquil that looked like an blue echidna that stood on two legs, but instead of needles, it was a flame coming out its back. The creature that came out of the seventh egg was a green creature that looked like a gecko, but with a large and bulky tail and stood on two legs, and was called a Treecko. The next one, the eighth egg, was a orange baby chick, with three large feathers coming out from the top of its head. This one was called a Torchic. The ninth egg was a blue creature that looked like some kind of fish, but it walked on four legs, and had a huge fin on top of its head. The Pokemon was called a Mudkip.

The tenth Pokemon was a green creature that looked somewhat like a snake, but had limbs, stood up on two legs, and gave the illusion of having a collar around its neck; a Snivy. The next one was some kind of brownish pig, with long dark brown ears and a face, which also had a yellow marking on it, and a curly tail with a ball on the end. Its name was Tepig. The twelfth Pokemon was a white and blue otter-like Pokemon with triangle ears, stood on two feet, short whiskers, and had a yellow seashell symbol on its blue torso; an Oshawott. The next Pokemon was a Turtwig: a green turtle with a twig and leaves sprouting from its head. The next, a Chimchar, was a brown monkey with a flame tail, and had hair that stood up on its head, like it was a high ponytail. The final Pokemon was a light blue penguin chick that had markings that looked like buttons in its body, and what looks like a cape on its back.

These creatures were ones that no one has laid eyes on before. They were just spectacular beings. Suddenly, the Totodile growled at Jerry, who just froze where he stood. He didn’t move an inch. Charmander ran up to Lisa, and hid behind her legs. She patted its head and assured it was going to be okay. The Turtwig came up to Trey while the rest of the Pokemon scattered, and ran outside. Michael, Trey, and Lisa walked outside, and the sight was just unbelievable. Pokemon overran the city. Huge birds flew in the sky, among other odd Pokemon, they ran through the streets causing cars to abruptly stop, they crawled from under the ground, some hopped from building to building. Michael even saw gigantic serpent creatures jumping in the air within the ocean. His world had changed. Something finally had happened in his life that wasn’t normal, but he wasn’t sure how he was supposed to feel about it.

The latest chapter. Sorry for the long ass descriptions xD

[Pool]

Nice job, Clou. My little protege is growing up ;'D

[Cloukora]

lolthankyou
when does a chapter of yours get relased?

[ILIKEPIE]

maybe I'll to make one but I'm kind of lazy with writing (starts a 5 paper two days before it's due)

[Cloukora]

pfft, I've done 5 paper essays the DAY before it's due xD
but I need more readers D: I'm losing interest in writing

[ILIKEPIE]

i did most of the night before it was due

[Cloukora]

Ahh
I don't spread it out, because I might lose some information I had. I like to just get it all done in one go. Although, that doesn't explain why I do it at the last minute xD

[Forum alt]

I do mine 5 weeks before they are due and then forget what I wrote.

[Cloukora]

Originally Posted by Forum alt

I do mine 5 weeks before they are due and then forget what I wrote.

lol, I suppose that's why I do mine close to the due date xD

[loganace]

Originally Posted by Pool

Pfft... It was implied.

that was my point ._.

[ILIKEPIE]

I should finsh chapter 3 of my pokemon story but I'm kind of lazy and should I make a thread and post the first two chapters?

[Cloukora]

yes, you should. THIS FORUM NEEDS MORE POKEMON

[ILIKEPIE]

Ok I posted it

[Cloukora]

I'm at a dead end with this story, but I'll think of a way to continue it. I'll get a new chapter up eventually.

[ILIKEPIE]

my story is going slow cause I'm lazy and don't spend much time on it

[Cloukora]

same here xD