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Hello. My name is Yogen, of the Tsukaite clan heritage. Long ago, in the land of Konoha, there was great Hokage named Naruto, The Orange Hokage. He was a brave fighter. Until he died. The Nine-Tails was released. It was caught by the late Akatsuki. The Akatsuki had been reformed after it was disbanded, years and years later. The Akatsuki sealed him up as the last demon. Then they were able to release the Ten Tails. The Ten Tails was released upon the village. A later hero appeared, much stronger than anything I've ever heard of. He took away the power of Ten Tails. Then all the other demons escaped. The villages decided this was a terrible crisis. It was caused by the son of Naruto Uzumaki, Senmon Uzumaki. The Slip Up they called him. As he let each village take on each other demon, he decided to take on the dying Ten Tails, WITHOUT THE HELP OF KONOHA. It slightly died in terms of energy each day. Just then, as this warrior of enormous chakra was about to stab the beast.....it absorbed his chakra. His chakra drained, hopeless, there was nothing that could save him. His son after him, Masuta Uzumaki, was 10 at the day of his death. It was his 11th birthday, and the time hadn't struck yet. The beast had moved on to the village of Suna. Suna, already to busy to take it on wasbusy with One Tails. They sent in a squad of assault mercenaries. The mercenaries included a powerful friend of Senmon's, his name being Kasai, the Master of Flames. Kasai had been absorbed, along with the mercenaries, making the beast stronger. By now, One Tails was dealt with and sealed. The beast was a formidable foe though. The villages of Ame and Ishi had come to help. They obviously weren't going to beat him without a seal. Then, all of a sudden, Masuta attacked him by placing a sticker on him. The sticker was a seal. All of a sudden, they suddenly realized what had happpened. He has imprinted the seal on himself to protect everyone.The creature for some reason, had changed into a a wolf before the sealing. A symbol of nullification maybe. This wasn't just a seal. This was a seal made by Uzumaki Naruto, stored in a chest in is father's room. After the kid died, guess what happened? My clan had been attacked by the wolf demon. They simply sealed in my brother, 2 years before my birth. The end of that history lesson for you. My clan had a special art. this art was called The Art of Chaos. This was a powerful art. It was made by combining Wind and Fire. We also had an ocular jutsu. They call it, the Kurai Me. It was the ability to absorb chakra just by looking at your opponents. So anyway, That all led up to current day me, my brother a Jinchuriki and me with another "Special Talent". I had a darker side to me that could increase my talents by over 10 fold. They called him Anbu. So, here I am today with my squad, Team 2, Team Kizoku. We're the tem of freaks and an amazing leader. We were in the middle of a training session, when suddenly, we were called to the Hokage office. This was gonna be weird.
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You can't post fan-fictions about actual character from the anime/manga. Re-read (or just read) the forum rules closely.
(and this is probably the most dead section of the forum, so no one is going to read it anyway)
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it's not about actual characters. It's about a whole new character and ninja team after the 10 tails invasion.
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You can't even mention them in the story. At all. This has been verified and fought over long before you joined this place.
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