Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3]

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 01-09-2012, 01:21 AM

This is the thread that contains the third and final book in my The Reaper Trilogy before continuing with The Licharius Trilogy.

Do not read this if you haven't read the other two books.

Tarnished Tranquility

Sinister Ambition

Enjoy!

Chapter 1

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 01-09-2012, 01:21 AM

[Chapters will be placed here when requested]

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 03-23-2012, 06:31 AM

[Chapters will be placed here when requested]

Hidden Ninja45 · 03-23-2012, 10:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Maikeru D. Shinigami

I'm about 27,5% complete with this book now. Perhaps I shall post it when I return.

How do you come up with these percentages?

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 03-24-2012, 12:13 AM

Computer calculator.

Hidden Ninja45 · 03-24-2012, 02:42 AM

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Originally Posted by Maikeru D. Shinigami

Computer calculator.

Is there a particular reason you are doing all these specific percentage? Or are you just having fun with it?

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 03-24-2012, 09:14 AM

It makes me feel accomplished.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 04-19-2012, 12:31 PM

I'm now up to 81% finished. 6 chapters to write. Maybe I'll put it up on the forum when I'm done.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 06-20-2012, 02:49 PM

I have this book completed. I'm going to hold off on posting it for now though.

takuya · 06-20-2012, 06:49 PM

That's nice. I used to read your books, but I forgot what it was about and what happened so I wanted to reread Tarnished Tranquilty. The only problem is that I was only able to read the Prologue and Chapter 1. lol I want to read the rest please.

Jonesy · 06-21-2012, 06:09 AM

Very nice read.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 06-23-2012, 04:46 PM

Have you read the first two Jonesy?

Jonesy · 06-23-2012, 10:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Maikeru D. Shinigami

Have you read the first two Jonesy?

Yes I have.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 06-24-2012, 05:02 PM

So, do you have a more long-winded opinion?

takuya · 06-30-2012, 12:17 AM

I've finished the first two books. I almost cried at what happened to Ms. Pragmer and was thinking "oh crap" after what happened to Shyann. I then got about a dozen theories as to what happens with Eric. I love the kinds of stories. I can imagine them actually happening and becoming attached to the characters.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 06-30-2012, 03:36 PM

Thank you very much takuya. I think you're the only person who has actually finished two of my books now. It only gets more intense as it goes along.

takuya · 06-30-2012, 03:43 PM

You're welcome. I think they're pretty good stories. Sometimes I'll be up at 3 in the morning reading the story and staying up a bit later to finish a chapter or read another one.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-02-2012, 11:39 AM

I used to stay up until three in the morning writing them. Sometimes I'd even get so into it that I'd write another chapter or two while I was at it.

takuya · 07-02-2012, 04:00 PM

Are all the chapters up in this thread? I just finished the last one involving the aftermath of the infiltration.

Maikeru D. Shinigami · 07-02-2012, 04:13 PM

Yes, there's 32 total chapters.

01-09-2012, 01:21 AM	#1
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] This is the thread that contains the third and final book in my The Reaper Trilogy before continuing with The Licharius Trilogy. Do not read this if you haven't read the other two books. Tarnished Tranquility Sinister Ambition Enjoy! Chapter 1 __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube: Last edited by Maikeru D. Shinigami; 01-09-2012 at 01:26 AM.

01-09-2012, 01:21 AM	#2
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03-23-2012, 06:31 AM	#3
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03-24-2012, 12:13 AM	#5
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (7% Complete) [Book 3] Computer calculator. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

03-24-2012, 09:14 AM	#7
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (7% Complete) [Book 3] It makes me feel accomplished. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

04-19-2012, 12:31 PM	#8
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (81% Complete) [Book 3] I'm now up to 81% finished. 6 chapters to write. Maybe I'll put it up on the forum when I'm done. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

06-20-2012, 02:49 PM	#9
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] I have this book completed. I'm going to hold off on posting it for now though. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

06-20-2012, 06:49 PM	#10
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,541 Rep Power: 12	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] That's nice. I used to read your books, but I forgot what it was about and what happened so I wanted to reread Tarnished Tranquilty. The only problem is that I was only able to read the Prologue and Chapter 1. lol I want to read the rest please. __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

06-21-2012, 06:09 AM	#11
Jonesy likes to post-it post-it Konoha Military Force Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 36,013 Rep Power: 24	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] Very nice read.

06-23-2012, 04:46 PM	#12
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] Have you read the first two Jonesy? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

06-24-2012, 05:02 PM	#14
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] So, do you have a more long-winded opinion? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

06-30-2012, 12:17 AM	#15
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,541 Rep Power: 12	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] I've finished the first two books. I almost cried at what happened to Ms. Pragmer and was thinking "oh crap" after what happened to Shyann. I then got about a dozen theories as to what happens with Eric. I love the kinds of stories. I can imagine them actually happening and becoming attached to the characters. __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

06-30-2012, 03:36 PM	#16
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] Thank you very much takuya. I think you're the only person who has actually finished two of my books now. It only gets more intense as it goes along. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

06-30-2012, 03:43 PM	#17
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,541 Rep Power: 12	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] You're welcome. I think they're pretty good stories. Sometimes I'll be up at 3 in the morning reading the story and staying up a bit later to finish a chapter or read another one. __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

07-02-2012, 11:39 AM	#18
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] I used to stay up until three in the morning writing them. Sometimes I'd even get so into it that I'd write another chapter or two while I was at it. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

07-02-2012, 04:00 PM	#19
takuya Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: USA Posts: 7,541 Rep Power: 12	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] Are all the chapters up in this thread? I just finished the last one involving the aftermath of the infiltration. __________________ ''Then I will break that curse. If there's such thing as peace, I will find it. I won't give up!" ~Naruto "I have long since closed my eyes...My Only Goal is in the Darkness" ~Sasuke

07-02-2012, 04:13 PM	#20
Maikeru D. Shinigami The Grand Vizier Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Funhouse Posts: 43,551 Rep Power: 45 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Focal Atrophy (Complete) [Book 3] Yes, there's 32 total chapters. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. YouTube:

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