Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story - Page 3

Sephiroth · 07-15-2009, 08:04 PM

good story man if i could give u rep i would

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-15-2009, 08:06 PM

Thanks, Jeremy.

Luna Mikazuki · 07-15-2009, 08:12 PM

I love it

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-15-2009, 08:12 PM

Cool....have you read Chapter Two yet???

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-16-2009, 08:18 AM

Progress on Chapter Four will Begin soon!

mangagirl · 07-16-2009, 11:14 AM

i love it!!!!1its awesome!!!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-16-2009, 11:15 AM

Thanks for the compliment.

mangagirl · 07-16-2009, 11:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Vatanui AKA Pride

Thanks!!!
*kisses manga*

*kisses back*anytime

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-16-2009, 11:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mangagirl

*kisses back*anytime

News: Work on Chapter Four will start in Half an Hour.

mangagirl · 07-16-2009, 11:33 AM

yay!!!!!!!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-16-2009, 12:25 PM

Chapter Four: The Leader of the Light Clan.

Just as Kama swung his black sword down, Nui began to instantly form one handed handsings with his free hand. Suddenly, a burst of pure light exploded out of Nui's hand. The power generating from it sent Kama flying. He smashed into a wall, and through it. Rubble and bricks fell down as Kama lay on the ground. A human-sized hole was in the wall. Soon, it was a normal circular hole because of the rubble falling in. Nui stood before it, gazing grimly at the sight.
"Light Style: Light Palm: Achieved."

__________________________________________________ ________________________

"What do you mean that someone's here?" Vatas questioned. "I said that someone is watching us." Toshi replied. Just then, an giant object appeared out of the dark sky. It was big, about the size of a house. Watching the object, Vatas and Toshi stood, surprised. Menrui hung on Vatas's shoulder, asleep as ever, drooling, and seemingly snoring.

__________________________________________________ ________________________

Kama stumbled out of the ruined wall, obviously injured. His left foot was uncontrolably shaking; part of his rib has been broken and his face had signs of burnt: it seemed as if he had took a blast to the face. Kama's short black sword was broken in half, the sharp point dangling. In his other hand was his scythe, smoke hanging from it and drifting up to the sky. "You managed to put a dent in me.....who are you exactly?" Kama muttered, his eyes alert.
Nui ruffled through his hair with his hand. "I already said, Nui Onimusha." Immediatly, Kama's eyebrows shot up. "Onimusha? You don't mean...yes, you are." With that, he raised his scythe at Nui.
"You are the Kage of the Light Clan!"

To Be Continued

Obito · 07-16-2009, 12:27 PM

Another one! Another one!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-16-2009, 12:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Obito

Another one! Another one!

You finished Chapter Four already? It's just been 2 mintues since it was out!

Obito · 07-16-2009, 12:43 PM

I want to read another one!

mangagirl · 07-16-2009, 01:07 PM

me too!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-16-2009, 01:08 PM

Thanks, guys.

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-16-2009, 01:10 PM

same as the others before me!

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-16-2009, 01:10 PM

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Originally Posted by NaruSakufluff4ever

same as the others before me!

So I see you have read Chapter Four?

NaruSakufluff4ever · 07-16-2009, 01:12 PM

yes, yes i have and nice concealment who knew that dude was important? well u did but who else

Vatanui AKA Pride · 07-16-2009, 01:27 PM

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Originally Posted by NaruSakufluff4ever

yes, yes i have and nice twist!!

Which twist exactly?

07-15-2009, 08:04 PM	#41
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07-15-2009, 08:12 PM	#43
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07-15-2009, 08:12 PM	#44
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Cool....have you read Chapter Two yet??? __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-16-2009, 08:18 AM	#45
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Progress on Chapter Four will Begin soon! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-16-2009, 11:14 AM	#46
mangagirl Drama King Perpetually leaving the forum Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: I moved to Panem O: Posts: 13,882 Rep Power: 12	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story i love it!!!!1its awesome!!! __________________ Booh! Say that you remember.

07-16-2009, 11:15 AM	#47
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Thanks for the compliment. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Vatanui AKA Pride; 12-22-2009 at 07:12 PM.

07-16-2009, 11:33 AM	#50
mangagirl Drama King Perpetually leaving the forum Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: I moved to Panem O: Posts: 13,882 Rep Power: 12	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story yay!!!!!!! __________________ Booh! Say that you remember.

07-16-2009, 12:25 PM	#51
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story *Chapter Four: The Leader of the Light Clan.* Just as Kama swung his black sword down, Nui began to instantly form one handed handsings with his free hand. Suddenly, a burst of pure light exploded out of Nui's hand. The power generating from it sent Kama flying. He smashed into a wall, and through it. Rubble and bricks fell down as Kama lay on the ground. A human-sized hole was in the wall. Soon, it was a normal circular hole because of the rubble falling in. Nui stood before it, gazing grimly at the sight. "Light Style: Light Palm: Achieved." __________________________________________________ ________________________ "What do you mean that someone's here?" Vatas questioned. "I said that someone is watching us." Toshi replied. Just then, an giant object appeared out of the dark sky. It was big, about the size of a house. Watching the object, Vatas and Toshi stood, surprised. Menrui hung on Vatas's shoulder, asleep as ever, drooling, and seemingly snoring. __________________________________________________ ________________________ Kama stumbled out of the ruined wall, obviously injured. His left foot was uncontrolably shaking; part of his rib has been broken and his face had signs of burnt: it seemed as if he had took a blast to the face. Kama's short black sword was broken in half, the sharp point dangling. In his other hand was his scythe, smoke hanging from it and drifting up to the sky. "You managed to put a dent in me.....who are you exactly?" Kama muttered, his eyes alert. Nui ruffled through his hair with his hand. "I already said, Nui Onimusha." Immediatly, Kama's eyebrows shot up. "Onimusha? You don't mean...yes, you are." With that, he raised his scythe at Nui. "You are the Kage of the Light Clan!" To Be Continued __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

07-16-2009, 12:27 PM	#52
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07-16-2009, 12:43 PM	#54
Obito Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: May 2009 Location: Coolsville Avenue Posts: 3,663 Rep Power: 10	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story I want to read another one! __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. No you.

07-16-2009, 01:07 PM	#55
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07-16-2009, 01:08 PM	#56
Vatanui AKA Pride has a farm... WCA Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: You know what? Dammit, just call me Vat. Posts: 30,646 Rep Power: 19 Member's Picture Albums	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story Thanks, guys. __________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

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NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story same as the others before me!

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NaruSakufluff4ever Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: I somehow got stuck in the portal to Hyrule and Naruto... NOT AGAIN! Posts: 2,420 Rep Power: 9	Re: Vatas Shadow Pridus: The Story yes, yes i have and nice concealment who knew that dude was important? well u did but who else Last edited by NaruSakufluff4ever; 07-16-2009 at 01:41 PM.

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