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Old 01-10-2012, 09:36 PM   #21
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Chapter 5

A Gluttonous Man Cannot Control His Appetite

Darren and Faris both stand alone, talking about some small things, seemingly becoming friends. They laugh and enjoy themselves very much. It must be nice to have a friend who is so kind and generous even on such an island. Most of the friends you could make on the island are nothing more than thugs and low-life fools. What is increasingly odd though is that everyone except the seven people playing cards, are staring at Darren and Faris as they converse.


Darren: Oh, yeah, I'm a pretty big fan of this one show, A Haunting. I've been a pretty big fan of ghost stories and the paranormal for a long time. I once considered writing a book about it, but I could never come up with a story about it and I'm too afraid to look for a story like that myself.

Faris: Hauntings huh? So, you like stories of possession and death. That sounds very intriguing. I'm not quite so much into things like that. I more enjoy anything that emphasizes intelligence, no matter what kind. I am a big fan of things like Bill Nye and a couple movies known as Cube and Hackers. I like when people have to use their brains to accomplish something and seeing people trapped in a seemingly inescapable situation. Though this prison island isn't really what I had in mind. *Faris laughs*

Darren: *Darren laughs too* I'm not really the most intelligent guy in the world, so I don't always understand things like that. However, I have seen all three of those things, and they seem pretty interesting. As a guy who enjoys things such as A Haunting, I can surely appreciate intelligence in things. Even though I was having difficulty keeping up with Cube for instance, it was still interesting the things played out. I really enjoyed the characters. It also made me think about what I want to do with my life. I'd still like to be a writer, but I haven't come up with anything yet.

Faris: Yes, the characters were very well created, I really liked Quentin in the movies. It was nice to see him suffer mentally in the cubed prison. It's not something you see all the time, which made me happy. I kind of know what you mean too. After watching the movie, I also thought about what I wanted to be. My mom always told me that I should become a cook. Even though I am good at cooking though, it's not really what I'd like to do. I'd really like to be a hacker. Not really a hacker who breaks into things to destroy, but one who breaks into things to assist.

Darren: That could be interesting. There's not many people with so much knowledge on hacking that will use it to assist. Or at least, it seems like most want to just screw around with things. You mom wants you to be a cook because of your cooking skills though. When we get out of here, maybe we could hang out and you can show me some of those skills.

Faris: Why wait for then? There's enough items around here to create a meal. In fact, I can go ahead and create one right now, if you like. So, what do you say? Would you like to try out one of my delicacies?

Darren: Yes, very much so.


Faris walks over to the woods nearby and starts searching around for something or another. It takes him a few minutes, but when he finally notices a small animal, he pulls out a knife and stabs into a pig, killing it. He places the pig down and then looks at the trees around the area before finding the tree he wants. Faris cuts down several pieces of the tree until the tree begins to fall over. He takes the wood from the tree and starts carrying it back to the open area. After placing the wood down in a spot away from people, he starts rubbing wood together, causing a fire to start. As the smoke rises he goes back into the woods and picks up a larger stick that he found lying around. After wiping it off with his shirt, he picks up the pig and pulls the knife out of its body. Faris sticks the stick through the knife hole and out the other side before wiping off the pig with his shirt as well. Faris takes the pig back over to the fire and begins to cook it. Darren walks over to him.


Darren: That's kind of nasty to be going in and killing an innocent pig like that. I feel kind of bad for the thing.

Faris: We don't really have any other choice. You heard what the warden says. This is a game of survival, and unless we do things like this, we won't have a chance to survive, right? It is nasty, but just remember, we eat pigs all the time, so this is nothing new.


After a while of cooking, Faris tells Darren that the pig is finished and hands it to him after letting it cool off a little. Darren insists that Faris have part of the pig as well, but Faris denies it saying that he's not hungry and that Darren was the one wanting to taste it anyways. Darren smiles and goes to bite into the pig, but before he could take a bite, the fat man that was playing cards, runs over and snatches the pig out of his hands.


Darren: Hey! What's the big idea you fat bastard. That's my meal, give it back before I gut you.

Lance: You don't need anything in that skinny body of yours. As you can see, I need my food, so get lost loser.


Lance pushes Darren across the ground and then starts devouring the pig. Darren gets pissed off at the man and is about to jump in at him, until something crazy happens. Lance begins to choke and call out for someone to help him. Everyone stares at Lance at he chokes, but no one does anything. The six people he were playing cards with before simply look over at him and then turn back around to play their game.


Lance: This isn't funny guys. Seriously something is wrong--


Before Lance can finish his last statement, the stick drops out of his hands and he falls to the ground. Faris walks over to the body and puts two fingers on his wrist. After a couple seconds, he decides to make his own sort of announcement about the man and some other things, as he picks Lance's key up and puts it into his shirt pocket.


Faris: Killing off this tub of lard was too easy. This is what happens when you trust food made my someone for you I guess. Your key didn't help you out much did it, you disgusting pig? *Faris spits in Lance's face* What do you expect though from a man that received the Gluttony Key? It has to be one of the weakest keys ever. It only allows you to find meals in any situation. It certainly is no match for my key.

Darren: You, you were trying to poison me.

Faris: You can think of it that way all you want, but I don't like you or dislike you. As long as you stay out of my way, the same fate will not befall you. I merely used you as a pawn to draw out the weakest link and expose him for the fool that he is. It's amazing what one can do by poisoning a man's dinner. Here's a free lesson for you though. These keys are special, I noticed mine automatically, because I am much more intelligent than you. If you want to survive on this island, I advise you to find the ability of yours. Otherwise, you are going to die. This is a survival game, and I can assure you, the warden will not be letting more than one person off of this island. That said, you should probably watch out for the one man that has already ran into the woods. It seems he already understands the game and probably has a very powerful key. The man known as Caleb Winters.
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Old 01-16-2012, 08:12 PM   #24
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That disturbed face makes feel all tingly.
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Good, it will give you more ideas!
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are you going to kill someone almost every chapter?
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I didn't kill anyone in chapter 3, and technically didn't kill anyone in chapter 1. 3:
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Old 02-02-2012, 05:34 AM   #30
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that is why I said almost :3
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