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CHAPTER 9: The War Council
Although I wasn’t there, Chase later told me what happened… It was a dark and gloomy circular room with dim lighting. In the seat of the General was General Arlington, known for his superior intellect in battle. To the right of him was the first seat of honor, Thomas Peralxi and to his left was Captain Chase, for some reason. Only the top 3 ranking members were at the councils. As all the Majors and Colonels got into the seats, and General Arlington gestured Captain Chase to talk.

He cleared his throat and said, ”As we all know, the Black Dawn gets their power from The End, a place where criminals that are too powerful go to be slowly destroyed. However, somehow, these criminals survived and fed their power off to other criminals to start the Black Dawn. However, this secret is only shared with Majors and Colonels for they do not want anyone sending off rash skirmishes to The End,”

“However, the General decided to open this secret up to me for I am going to be a major in due time. After I led a group of Privates and Rookies, and ransacked a command post, nothing was found of use there. I sent off two Rookies to find any possible plan as a promotional mission, but the results after were disastrous. They were attacked. They noticed that dark ravens, once servants of death are now bonding with the Black Dawn such as the rogue Major Aviana once has. They now act as security cameras, calling various wild cave beasts, which were originally used to attack prisoners, to kill any Reaper in sight. The hound golems have awoken and a Lieutenant hound-golem has been killed, and it is not odd to think that other golems have woken,” He continued.

Everyone shuddered at the fact that the golems have awoken. They had been a failed experiment that had been sealed inside the mountains. However, it seems that Thomas had some things to say after he investigated some findings. He closed his eyes and said, “In the past days after noticing strange events and saving Captain Chase, who had been easily defeated by concussive smoke,” Chase sighed and rolled his eyes as Thomas continued.

“I have evidence to support that the General who is supporting the control of the wildlife is none other than Captain Heinrich Schmidt, a Nazi general who has gotten his old rank once again in the Black Dawn. He has somehow been communicating with the wildlife, bribing them with power. I have suspected that he is an Umbra or shadow in Latin. These Umbras have gained special powers from The End and are Generals in the Black Dawn,” He finished.

“So what do you plan to do with this revelation, General?” a Major asked.

“We must send off groups to scout the enemy bases on the sides. With this, we will see their plans, as I predict that they are starting an invasion of this base,” he said.

“Who is going to be scouting out?” Chase asked.

“That is up to you, Captain Chase,” the General said. Chase looked unsure and closed his eyes and thought about whom he could bring along.

“Sir, I will bring a group of Lieutenants, but I have remembered something else. A private by the name of Hayden Johnson somehow was unaffected by the concussive smoke used by Aviana,” He said.

“So are you planning to bring along a Private on such a crucial mission with you?” the General asked with a slight angry tone.

“N-no sir. I was just brining up this fact so he could be observed on,” Chase said, slightly scared.

“Fine. I will get some medical specialists to figure this revelation out,” the General responded. “Colonel Thomas,” he called out to him.

Thomas opened his eyes and looked at the General in the yes and said, “Yes, sir?” in a serious, but calm voice.

“Commence operation 42 immediately. You know what you have to do, correct?” The General asked. Thomas nodded slowly as he left the council room. “This council meeting is adjourned,” The General and everyone else got up and left the building,”
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Chapter 10: Extermination
As I woke up the next day, some medical Officers took me to their testing lab and tried concussive gas on me. They tried using 3 types, each more concentrated than the next. The last one only made me sneeze once. They were baffled and tried more gases, like sleeping and even some toxic gases, but NOTHING worked.

Everyone was baffled. They had no idea what was happening. I survived any gas sprayed at me. Sooner or later, they gave up and sent me out. “So what happened?” Alex asked me.

“Nothing. Even toxic gas didn’t work,” he seemed to doubt it a bit, but then he accepted it as Chase approached us. He had a bad cut on his forearm that went vertically to his palm that was wrapped in a bloody bandage. He had more bandages wrapped around his torso. His face was stern and he looked us in the eyes.

“You two possess more fighting ability than any other Private at this base. You may even be as strong as a Corporal. Then again, most people are stronger than their rank like Giovanna, who is at least a Lieutenant, and I’m about as strong as a Major, but that’s besides the point. I’ll explain to you what happened at the war council yesterday,”

As he finished explaining, he said, “Now I need you guys to exterminate all BDs that come in. I fought off hordes of scouts and drew some other unneeded attention to our group. I got badly injured, but I can still fight. Your group will consist of Akio, Giovanna, Alice, and you two. Your group will be lead by me,” He stamped our masks to say 9-EX, for extermination.

I figured I needed to make friends with Alice. Throughout the week I’ve been here, we’ve only engaged in awkward small talk. As we met outside, I noticed something strange. Alice’s skull mask had 8-EX on it. 8. She was a Corporeal. I was outraged. Even though she was fast and could attack quickly, that meant nothing. I though that my swift bone scythe could easily defeat her.

Alex noticed as well. “Wait. You’re a Corporeal?” He asked.

Alice nodded while smiling, “Yeah, when they want to promote someone over one rank, multiple Captains or higher discuss and they decided that my speed and swift movements made me a Corporeal. They thought about making me higher, but they didn’t want me to look weak in front of Sergeants. Cool, huh?” Alex and I slowly nodded.

“Whatever, you retards, lets go,” Giovanna and Akio appeared behind us. Alex rolled his eyes and walked forward with his hands behind his head. As we headed out on a new trail, I noticed different stone. Even with the dim lighting of the light stone on the top of the cavern, I could still tell that the walls were glimmering.

“These walls are made of shimmer stone, a stone that will glow brilliantly if there is light. People can get blinded if there is too much light on it,” Chris explained. We walked on as we heard flapping. I looked up and then I heard cave beats coming down cliffs.

“Gouge, Rosae,” Chase said. He swung the giant metal rose into the air and attacked the bird and hit every other one with extending thorns on the rope. As we slashed and stabbed all those cave beasts, I saw Alice fight. She would zoom around and somehow dodge all the shots, while perfectly stabbing and slashing everything. She used her shaft to trip groups, as she would down them all with one swift slash.

The cave beasts, birds, and various members of the Black Dawn attacked us and we could barely defend all of our sides, but we managed to mow through them. While holding my scythe, I felt lighter and I was able to do some ridiculous stunts like flipping and somersaulting in combat, allowing me to decapitate and dismember them.

We heard a roar and a cat-man jumped down and attacked Alice. It was like the hound golem except with a lion’s head and a giant 5 on its chest. Some giant steel claws erupted from its fingertips. It swiped at her, but she slid under and slashed at its legs. We ganged up on it, but its fur was like chainmail and caught our slashes, forcing us to stab on the sides.

“Swiftly walk on the Heavens, Cursoribus,” Akio disappeared, and reappeared slashing at its belly with perfectly angled strikes. Suddenly, the cat-golem roared and hit Akio in the shin with the back of its paw at extremely fast speeds into a wall. I was alarmed that something could keep up with him.

As it pounced toward him, a scythe pierced the back of its neck and swung him into a wall. It was Giovanna. I was in awe of her strength as she said, “Dang, physical combat isn’t gonna be easy. I can’t believe I’m forced to used this… Fire! Tormenta!”

Suddenly her scythe turned into an assault rifle. It shot out pure white bullets that riddled its backside with shots. It still limped towards her and jumped as it changed into a shotgun and hit its face at point-blank range. The cat golem fell back as she fired at its neck and decapitated it.

We looked shocked and Alex asked, “H-how did you…?”

“It’s my second form, retard,”

“I thought that there were only three types of level two forms: physical, magic, and elemental,” I said.

Giovanna looked back at Akio and sighed, “Yeah, but I have a ranged physical release. The ranged physical scythe is one of the rarest scythes, behind elemental. These are powerful, but their ammo is based on their energy and adrenaline. If you have more stamina, the more you can fight, and because most people don’t have as much energy as me, these are rare,”

As we continued on, I felt weaker than everyone else. Seeing Alice, a girl I hated because she brought back memories of Laura, is destroying people swiftly. Akio, Giovanna, and Chase all have level two scythes. Alex’s giant scythe made my light bone scythe seem fragile and small. I felt helpless, like I once did while in the ditch, being shot at and then seeing another guy embracing Laura as I died.

As we approached a camp we overheard some BD’s talking. “They should be at the enemy base in about a week or so,”

“How many are there?”

“About 3000,” They noticed us spying as we killed them quickly.

“We have to warn the base immediately,” Chase said as we sprinted back. We almost made it back as a mountain literally exploded. We managed to dodge some of the rocks as a herd of 5 bull golems appeared before us. They had the head of longhorn cattle; dark brown muscular bodies with a 6 painted on them, and spiked iron knuckles on each fist.

They rushed as us as Akio appeared behind one and stabbed its head, but the scythe barely went inside the skull. It shook him off and almost impaled him with horns, but he teleported out of the way. Chase flailed around Rosae, but he barely crushed any bones and barely punctured anyone with the blades.

However, Giovanna was the first one to destroy a bull, though. Her shotgun riddled one with pellets as she turned the shotgun into a rocket launcher and blasted one away into oblivion. She panted for a while as we protected her, ignoring her protests saying that she didn’t need help.

Chase jumped around two bulls constantly smashing and stabbing, but it was useless. Then I noticed he was throwing the rope around the bull-golems. He the pulled the rope tying them, and as much as they struggled they couldn’t get out. He tugged once more as giant thorns appeared on the rope and impaled the enemies.

There were 3 down and two to go. Alex and I grouped up on one guy as we continually slashed at his abdominals. Finally, we both lunged and sliced him in half. As we were doing that, we saw Alice slash the throat out of the bull-golem, with help from Akio.

Out of the rubble from the mountain, we saw a giant black bull, which had two giant spiked clubs and horns that were 3 feet long. He stood 8 feet in the air and grunted as we saw a giant 2 on his chest. Chase whispered to us, “…Run,”
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Chapter 11: The Bull’s Rage
We ran as fast as we could, but the giant bull charged towards us. As it got closer, Akio grabbed and teleported us to the side as the bull ran into a wall. “You guys, are kind of heavy…” he said quietly as we dashed on. The Minotaur unearthed itself from the wall as we barely dodged it. It charged back again at Alice and she ducked, but he stuck out his spiked club and pummeled her into a wall.

Suddenly, it talked, saying, “One down… Do not be alarmed of a golem talking. I am Colonel Taurus in the Black Dawn and am perfectly capable of speech. I have been told that a group of six had seen the army and is going to tell their base. I am have been assigned the position to kill any spies. Now I have five left…”

He charged again as Akio teleported to Alice and warped ahead as he healed her, since he was a part-time medical specialist. Suddenly, a club went sailing at us. We ducked, but a bunch of the spikes extended and scratched us. The club sailed back to his head as he chucked the next one, which hit a cliff and dropped a bunch of rocks with toppled over Giovanna’s legs.

Giovanna managed to muster up another rocket launcher and shot one at Taurus, but he blocked it with the clubs, which were surprisingly sturdy enough to withstand such a large blast. She coughed and looked at us, as we knew exactly what we needed to do.

Chase shot Rosae once more and he blocked it with the clubs. Chase kept jumping around and tied him up while he tried to impale the bull. “I have seen you attacks before, so I know exactly what to do,” His clubs disappeared as he turned into a statue that the thorns shattered on when they extended. He reverted out of statue form and broke through the rope and hit Chase in the chest, where his original wound was.

In the window of time, Alex and I used our blades on Taurus’s shoulders, making its chest stick out as it falls down. Giovanna shot another rocket, but he turned into a statue at the last second and absorbed the blast. When he got out of statue form, he shrugged us off and looked a bit more tired. “He only can use it once more, but Giovanna can fire once more, also.” I whispered to Alex.

He rushed towards Giovanna as Akio teleported her and Alice out of the way. I flipped and jumped on Taurus and stabbed him. He shook me off, but in the process Alex used all his strength to stab Taurus in the gut. His blade started entering the body, but Taurus turned into stone and the blade shattered as he transformed and smashed Alex with the club.

In that process, Giovanna shot a rocket launcher that hit Taurus straight in the chest as he went flying back into a wall as he succumbed to all of his injuries. I panted as rocks fell on him and rushed back with Giovanna and Alex to Akio. “So I guess we’re going to be carrying them,” I told them. Giovanna offered to help, but her legs were damaged.

Suddenly, we heard the rocks move. Taurus glowed with black energy as his corpse floated into the air as he started moving with the power of the shadow. His soulless eyes pierced into us as he rushed at us fast than ever. Giovanna used the last of her energy to hit him with a rocket launcher, but he barely got knocked back this time.

I dodged the club, but Giovanna got hit in her exhausted form. Akio teleported behind him and attempted to decapitate him by sticking the scythe in front of him and pulling, but the scythe shattered as he got hit by an extremely fast club to the chest.

Taurus stared at me as I ran away as fast as I can. I used my lightness to dodge his first attack by sending him into a wall as I saw the lights of the base. He busted out of the wall and hit me in the back with a club. I recuperated as time slowed down. I blinked and saw him rushing again. I dodged and slashed at his Achilles Tendons, but he was just an animated corpse, who didn’t rely on muscles.

I ran away, as I dodged and dodged. Eventually, Taurus hit me with the head of the club and I fell down as he tried to smashed my body, not once, not twice, but three times. However, on the third time, I dodged the strike and slashed his chest. He then got enraged as the clubs combined into one giant one with huge spikes as he slammed it down on me, shattering my scythe along with me.

I had died. Twice…
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Chapter 12: Wind
… Or so I thought. I had woken up again with newfound strength as Taurus looked around at our bodies. Suddenly, I looked at my scythe as it had reformed into it original shape except the holes had wind flowing through it. The blade was shiny and new as I was filled with strength. I stood up as Taurus charged towards me as I figured out what was happening.

“I heard you have to get pushed to your utmost limit before you die and survive by achieving level two. If you don’t achieve it, your soul withers and fades away,” Alex had once said. Taurus was gaining speed as I twirled my scythe.

Suddenly, Taurus had gone straight through me as he continually tried attacking me. I twirled the scythe and sliced off one arm with ease. He seemed alarmed as I dodged and fazed through every attack he threw at me.

“And the rarest, elemental. They are elements found in the real world. Thomas has one of these…” Akio had said to me once. With his remaining arm, Taurus swung his giant club, which fazed through me. My instincts kicked in as the scythe dematerialized into air. “Gust, Ventus…”

I closed my eyes and swung my arm as a sharp, concentrated wave of air sliced his other arm off. He charged towards me and tried to body slam me, but he fazed through. I jumped high up into the air, lifted by wind as I swung my arm to send down another blade of air, which sliced his back.

Finally, I threw my arm back and punched in mid-air sending down a highly concentrated bolt of air at supersonic speeds at Taurus. He turned into a statue with all of his remaining energy, as my punch, which created a giant crater, shattered him. The crater was about 10 feet deep and 15 feet in diameter, I then fell back to the ground as I fazed through the impact and bobbed back up to the surface.

I then felt my power draining as my scythe returned, without any wind blowing and my invulnerability withering away. I saw a medical group come towards us with the Special Forces as protection. Thomas and another Colonel were leading the group as they picked me up and noticed what I had done. I then blacked out.

I woke up in the infirmary as I saw Thomas looking over me. “You were the last one awake, so I presume that you had killed the bull-golem Colonel, am I correct?” I nodded as I explained everything. “So you have already unlocked level 2 at the level of a Private, and it is an elemental level two… Not to mention that with that, you destroyed a Colonel. Do not feel cocky or arrogant, you powers are greatly increased the first time you use them,”

I nodded as he placed my mask on the table that surprised me more than anything. It said 7-EX.
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Chapter 13: A Training Assignment

I was overjoyed, that I had elevated two ranks, but I also wondered if killing a Colonel wasn’t enough to get me a little higher, but I digress.

I was happier than ever until I heard a voice say, “Why do you act like that?” It was Alice.

“Act like what?” I asked.

“Your body language always acts like you hate me. Why am I making you freak out like that?” she asked.

“It’s complicated…” I told her, but I figured it wouldn’t help the problem, so I told her about my last moments in life and why I am annoyed by her appearance.

“Wow… I had no idea that happened,” she said, “My appearance can’t change, though, and I like wearing my hair like that, so you’ll have to stick with it,” she said in a happy tone. She was trying to make me feel better, but I knew that inside I still had my anger stored up.

After a few days, I was the last one to get out of the infirmary. My body had more injuries than you could count. I was practically a mummy. As I walked outside, everyone kept whispering about another elemental user.

“Why does a kid like that get such a powerful level 2?”

“He doesn’t deserve that power, he can’t control it,”

I walked by them, ignoring the gossip until I confronted Chase. “I hear what happened… I feel pretty bad that I could outclassed by a 7, but whatever…” I patted him on the back.

“Nah, Thomas said that I was at the height of my power at the first release,” I said as Chase shrugged.

“So how’re you gonna fix you’re scythe?” I asked.

“It regenerates by itself. The speed depends on how much energy you have,” He explained. When I got a rush of energy from level 2, my scythe regenerated. I stared at my scythe, knowing now that it is a weapon that killed a Colonel in the Black Dawn.

As I walked to the outside of the base, I saw giant black chains attached to the roof of the base. “Marvelous isn’t it?”

I turned around and saw General Arlington. “Do you mean the chains, sir?”

“Yes, that, but I mean your second release. You are the fourth person in recent times that has an elemental level 2. It’s quite a treat. I don’t even have it,” he told me.

“Then who does, sir?” I asked.

“Colonel Peralxi and Colonel Baker in the Special Forces. There was Major Miller, a technician specialist, but he went missing in action. It was such a shame because he had so much potential to be a Colonel or even a General with his powers,”

“What were his powers?” I asked.

“Electricity and lightning,” the General responded.

“Also, what are these chains?” I asked.

“It is known as operation 42, specially assigned to Colonel Peralxi. He puts dark chains around the base and will activate them like a shield if an army approaches. We seldom ever use it. The only times I do remember using it were false alarms. Now are you capable of combat?” he asked.

“Yes, sir,” I responded,

“Good. I want you to practice you second level with Sergeant Hamaka and Sergeant Russo in a duel. You did damage Sergeant Hamaka the first time, am I correct?”

I nodded and said, “Yes sir, but-”

“Is there a problem?” he asked. I shook my head and saluted as I ran to Akio and Giovanna.
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Chapter 14: A Rematch
As I met up with them, we went to the training room as Akio told me the instructions. “Um… Release your scythe by saying the command and then try attacking the dummy,”

“Gust, Ventus,” My scythe started blowing wind out of its holes as I turned it into wind with my mind. I slashed with my arms in an X formation, turning the dummy into four pieces. They pointed to another one and I punched a concentrated bullet of air and blasted it into pieces.

“So they are as strong as they are rumored,” Akio pressed some buttons on the back wall as we entered duel mode. “So I guess that means I won’t hold back… Swiftly walk on the Heavens, Cursoribus,” His scythe changed as he appeared behind me. I didn’t try to dodge until I noticed that I wasn’t intangible this time. He gave me a small scratch on the back as I propelled myself backwards.

“At least try!” Giovanna yelled. As Akio appeared on my side, trying to stab my heart, I focused and conjured a blade of wind in the shape of a knife in my hand. I parried his attack as he quickly teleported around me at insane speeds. After a while, it was too much, and then I yelled as a small explosion of air occurred around me, blowing Akio into a wall. I punched and shot an air bullet, but he teleported away at the last second.

My instincts kicked in as I created blades of air around my hands when I put my fingers together. I parried his attacks and fought back with twin blades. I spun around and faked attacking him on the side as I predicted him to teleport and intercepted his scythe. I tried to punch, but he dodged and at the last second, I flicked my fingers, sending a bullet of air to hit him in the face.

As he warped away with a few missing teeth, he started warping faster. As I felt the wind around his presence, I could keep up with him more and more until I sensed him and spin kicked his chest. Suddenly, a white figure passed by my face. I saw Giovanna enter this battle as I groaned while dealing with two people at my level.

A long ranged fighter was worse, so I focused on her. I jumped over a teleported strike at ducked under some bullets as I pointed my fingers at her. Suddenly, my fingertips exploded and started regenerating over and over. When they exploded multiple bullets of air sailed at her. She had dodged some, but I could somewhat control the projectiles and hit her it the gut and chest a few times.

I got slashed by Akio in the back during that time as I spun kicked him forward, dazing him. I noticed that he only teleports when concentrating, or else he’s stuck in place. I then used the momentum to juggle him forward and shoot an air bullet at his back and propel him towards Giovanna into a wall.

I started feeling dizzy and fell toward the ground as they got up coughing. I looked at them retaliating. I couldn’t fight back against Akio. Giovanna riddled my chest with bullets as I was dying. She got a shotgun out as Akio aimed towards my head. As they attacked, Akio phased through my body and took the fire from the shotgun.
They were dying along with me as everything got dark and then I woke up. I looked around and saw that everything had changed back to normal. “Guess, who’s the winner,” Giovanna said. I couldn’t tell to be honest.

“I don’t know,” I said. Giovanna kicked me in the gut and laughed as she left. Akio pointed to me as we followed her upstairs. As I headed up, I ran as fast as I could to my cot and dozed off, feeling like my five minutes of fame had restarted.
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i found it.
now my reward i get to read it.
aw man i have to go eat breakfast oh well.
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I bet he will. Joon.
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Sorry, busy this week, also, what context is your FF logan?
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Chapter 15: Healing Wounds
I woke up with another guy in my room dozing off on a chair. He was the man next to Thomas when they came to get us after I unlocked level 2. The guy had short red hair that was a bit messed up and a small goatee. As I got out of bed, he blinked and looked at me. He had a strange smile and suddenly attacked me with his scythe. I remembered I fell asleep with level 2 still on so I countered it with a blade of wind.

His scythe was breaking through the wind blade and almost slashed me, but I pushed my palm out and shot a blast of wind and pushed him back. I started punching the air rapidly, but his body started moving in a speed that wasn’t possible. He dodged all of the attacks and then rushed up to me faster than ever. His hand went to my face as he…

…Poked me. He had stopped his running and poked me, sending me into a wall, “Hahaha. You’re not half bad! If I had it my way, you’d be in the Special Forces, but the old farts at the palace refused. Oh well, you still need practice either way,”

“W-who are you?!” I asked confused.

“Oh yeah, I’m the leader of the Special Forces, Roy Baker. Nice to meet you,” I shook his hand.

“You could’ve started with a handshake and not an all out attack…” I said as he laughed. “Wait, you’re the leader? That means you’re stronger than Thomas?”

“You mean equal-boy? He’s all bark. He just makes speeches before fighting; acting all cool, but I probably could beat him in a fight. He can’t really stand up to much, but whatever, he’s still a big-shot with everyone else,” This guy found Thomas weak. It was amazing.

“You’re name was Roy Baker, right?”

“Yes… I just said that 10 seconds ago.”

“You have an elemental level 2, right?”

“Y-Yeah, but I don’t like showing it off, especially indoors… Anyways, the old farts here wanted me to examine your memory. Why they told me out of all people to do this is out of question with them. If an elemental user is mentally unstable – no offense – then they will pose a threat when distracted by their past life. Akio told me all about it, and wow…” he remarked.

My eyes widened, as everything got blurrier. “Oh looks like that memory sickness is kicking in,” Roy said. He put a strange dish thing over my head and I was knocked out.

As I awoke, I was in a dream-like state. I looked around, but everything around me was blank and white. Suddenly, I could somehow sense an approaching force. I looked around and was hit square in the chest by a black beam. The beam went straight through me and I just witnessed everything. I literally saw every memory of me with Laura pass through me.

I could see every memory race through my eyes, faster than the speed of sound. I remembered the time under the stars, the times at the movies, the times at each other’s houses, the times on cold, rainy nights. It didn’t hurt in this dream state. I didn’t have migraines or throw up at the memories.

“Sacrifice, lust, solitude, and despair,” The judge’s words echoed through my mind.

“You have to overcome these if you wish to cope with yourself, today, we’ll start with the easiest, so lets roll them down,” said a voice that I instantly recognized was Roy’s. “You’ve sacrificed many things for her. In fights, you sacrificed your well being, and soon you would have sacrificed your life by meeting her,”

“Your lust is strong. I had the same problem. You have a lust for your power, almost to the point that arrogance is building, and your lust for Laura is overwhelming, especially after that last memory… Anyways, continuing on, we have solitude… After that last sight, you felt alone and apart from her, and couldn’t help yourself, bringing us to despair. You’re full of despair and loss of hope that you will overcome this, but you will like many people have… Most powerful Reapers have horrible memory sicknesses,”

“Okay, I think today we’ll start with solitude. This is a bit easy,” Suddenly, the black beam shrinked into a ball, and then, the scene changed back to my final moments, except I could move around. I saw my body being lifted and Laura hugging the guy. “Remember, you jumping to conclusions caused this. Analyze this and overcome it. In this memory sequence, you basically have full control of this scene,”

I walked over to the frozen time and looked at the guy closely. He didn’t look too familiar, he wasn’t on the football team, or was anyone remotely known. I looked at him carefully and analyzed how she was hugging him, even though this put an uncomfortable feeling in the back of my neck.

Suddenly, it hit me. After analyzing this, I looked at their faces. It couldn’t be a coincidence. I looked at their faces and they looked oddly similar. I put my hand on the black ball and memories rushed back. I remember that this shooting was after the Winter Ball.

He must’ve been a family member that came over for Christmas… No. It had to be different. I walked around and then reached into his pocket and found a wallet. I looked and his last name was the same as hers’. I was enraged at that moment. I had lived over a year and a half thinking that she was cheating on me secretly and finding out that it was her relative. I felt stupid. No. I felt less intelligent than any Reaper on the face of the earth.

The scene fazed away as I was brought back to reality. “One down three to go,” Roy smiled. “That was kind of funny that you were tricked by something like than,” he said with a small grin.

I rolled my eyes and then clenched my palms, “That still doesn’t solve anything! It’s over a year and she probably got a new boyfriend,”

“Dude, you got to learn to move on,” he told me, slightly annoyed.

“Y-you don’t-“

“Yes I do,” he said with a stern voice. “Go to sleep, it’s 2300 hours right now, and your next assignment will be at 0600,” I rolled onto my bed and thought that even though my solitude was gone, being alone and confused was a whole of a lot better than knowing the truth.
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Yay! New chapter. It's a little slower than the rest but it is still good nonetheless
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Yeah, I wanted to add in some development before the giant 20+ chapter war arc to end the first book.
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Cool. Are some of the other characters pasts going to be touched on more? Anyway, good chapter.
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