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Old 12-29-2011, 09:58 PM   #21
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Chapter 5: Shadows

After arriving at the Realm of Shadow, my reaction was the opposite of the one at the Eternal Palace. I wasn’t entranced but scared. The presence of this place felt like someone trying to strangle me. The air was thick and hard to breath. I then realized that we were inside a giant cave. As we walked to the base, we waded through water that was strangely pink; I then noticed that it was blood. The occasional cavern breeze came from nowhere, and wearing thin robes and hoods didn’t help either.

When we reached the base, I saw other Reapers that looked pretty tough. Inside the base, we took our masks off and I immediately noticed that my five minutes if fame was over. These guys here looked like they could even beat Akio, let alone me. They had six-packs and tattoos on their arms and faces. You’d be surprised that these Reapers were the good guys since they looked like inmates.


“Another batch of bait huh?” A Reaper chuckled along with his friends as they played poker. These guys looked like they could kill me just with those poker cards. Akio went to go run some minor orders as Giovanna led us on.

“These young kids are throwing their lives away,” said an elderly Reaper who was healing some wounded people as we passed by the infirmary. The wounds on these guys were worse than a few cuts. They had gashes on their chest and stomachs, bones turned in way they weren’t supposed to, and even more injuries that would make anyone sick to their stomach. Alice rushed ahead to the front of the line, avoiding any more sights of the patients.

“This is where you will take orders,” announced Giovanna. She stamped a mark on our masks. The stamp said, “10,” “The lower the number, higher the rank.” she explained. On the wall there was a diagram that wrote:

Rank 10: Rookie
Rank 9: Private
Rank 8: Corporeal
Rank 7: Sergeant
Rank 6: Officer
Rank 5:Lieutenant
Rank 4: Captain
Rank 3: Major
Rank 2: Colonel
Rank 1: General
Rank 0: Commander-In-Chief

“The King is rank 0. You guys will be rookies, no matter how good you are at the beginning,” Giovanna glared at me, “You have to make your way up like Akio and I” She pointed to her mask that had 7-ST on it.

“What’s the ST in 7-ST stand for?” I asked.

“It means, specialist trainer retard, look at the other board,” she chided.

Specialist Ranks
Trainer-ST
Technician-STC
Transport-STP
Medic-SM
Messenger-SMS
Special Forces- SX
That last one interested me, ”What’s special forces?”

Alex was also interested, “Yeah, what is it?”

“What you’re not going to be in it anytime soon,” Giovanna chuckled. “You have to be at least a Lieutenant and have showed extraordinary skills in battle. That pretty much means that you have to have killed a high-ranking BD official. Even though you have to be a Lieutenant, the only people who have killed high rank BD members are Majors and above. Anyways-”

“Yes, thank you for doing my job Giovanna,” said a man who walked through the door. He had dirty blonde hair brushed to the side and a short goatee. He had a stupid mischievous grin that made him look like he would steal your wallet if he needed some chips. However, that grin made him look like one of those cool guys you would go partying with. His age was somewhere between 25 and 30. The scariest factor of him was the mask he was holding. It had a 4 on it.

“Come on… Don’t stress yourself with a hammy speech,” He said softly. Giovanna was blushing and was trying to hide it. “Can you go and help out Derek with some mortar cannons?” She nodded and quickly spurted off. I looked back at Alice, who was reacting the same way as Giovanna, which angered Alex a bit.

“The name’s Chase Rogers,” He told us. He shook our hands and told us, “We need you to go on a short skirmish out in the east. They’ve destroyed al sector walls, so the space in here is gigantic. Without any borders, this place is approximately 200 square miles. It’s smaller that other levels due to there not being that many bad people who fit in here. However, the Black Dawn has taken the Frosted Volcano and they are headed towards the basin of demons. I will be leading your group and others to take a command point.” He said.

As he continued he told us, “These people don’t fight like Reapers with scythes, but they specialize in using the art of the shadow, sort of like magic. They can conger up their own weapons, but our scythes are far superior. Anyways, let’s go,”

“Yay!” Alice squeaked suddenly. We all glanced at her as Alex rolled his eyes and we walked onward, joining up with some other Rookie and Private groups.

“I don’t see the big deal about that guy,” Alex whispered to me. I shrugged as all the girls in the group swooned over him. As we walked for about 15 minutes, Chase stopped and looked around as he drew his scythe. He spun it around and signaled us to follow him as we put on our masks.

Suddenly, a bunch of rocks slid off a cliff and we barely managed to dodge it. What I saw next was a bunch of things that I would like to call human souls. The Black Dawn rioter looked like prison inmates, more so than the reapers back there. However, their faces and bodies were covered in tattoos and random areas of their bodies had stitches that sealed black some dark energy.

Honestly, I was scared. It looked way easier in movies or mangas, but in real life, I had no idea what was ahead of me. The rioters lifted their hands up, which glowed with a black energy that turned into random weapons like machetes and javelins. “Attack!” Chase cried out as we both rushed toward each other.

Luckily, they were less trained that Akio. Their attacks were slow and choppy and their movements were unbalanced. I could easily kick them and trip them allowing me to destroy them with my epic bone scythe. However, it wasn’t easy when they noticed you were a pretty big threat. At one time 3 guys ganged up on me, but Chase managed to help fend them off with me.

One guy husky guy came after me with a gigantic spiked club. I dodge his first hit and got scratched on the second. As I was fighting, I slid through his feet while slicing his Achilles tendon, causing him to fall to the ground as I stabbed the end of my scythe to his head.

Another guy stabbed with a spear and was faster and more aggressive and caused me to get some pretty bad wounds, but my reflexes kicked in as I managed to perfectly dodge the spear and throw my blade over it, then pulling, making my scythe break the shaft. I then spun around and finally stabbed his heart.

Alex was doing pretty well, especially with his oversized scythe. One time, he skewered three people in a row on his blade. With its long shaft, he would usually feint attacking to the side and missing by having the curved blade go behind the enemy. However, as the enemy blocks to the left of right, he pulls back and slices the guy in two. He always had a small grin after killing a bunch of enemies in a row

Even the migraine-maker Alice was doing okay. With her small scythe, she could swiftly attack peoples’ vitals like their hearts and throat. She seemed like an assassin moving fast and killing fast. She had me entranced for a second, reminding me of times with Laura, but I snapped myself back.

In all, I probably killed 7 out of the 30 in the enemy group. Chase backpacked us through the fight; there was no denying it. He was a maniac, even though it didn’t seem like he had gone to level 2, he didn’t need to. He whirled and destroyed people just with his SHAFT. His blade would somehow always find the perfect place to hit, and instantly kill anyone.

After we finished the group we headed on to capture the command post. It was a small camp, filled with about 15 enemies that we finished easily. However, Chase stopped and said, “Their leader… They use the same rank system so they should be a Sergeant or Officer commanding this group but…” Suddenly, out from the cliffs behind me came down a guy who was glowing with black energy while carrying a giant broadsword that he aimed for me. I barley managed to dodge, but in a surprisingly quick blow, he had delivered a horrible blow to my ribs.

As he went down to stab me, Chase zoomed up at parried his attack. “You’re no Officer, you’re a Lieutenant. Guys, let me kill this guy, you’ll all get in the way. Collect enemy plans in the tents!” He and the guy traded so many blows that it looked like an explosion was occurring. Chase would spin around, attack his legs, throat and backside but he would counter while attacking Chase’s neck, heart, and gut.

Soon, chase got a nasty stab on the arm. As I lay down being healed by some 9-SMs, medical Privates, I was horrified. “A mere captain like you couldn’t defeat a Lieutenant of the shadow! The shadow gives us more power than any Reaper, allowing me to defeat you!” The Black Dawn Lieutenant yelled.

“You see there is something you need to know. I have TWO forms to this scythe.” He replied coolly. He jumped back and his scythe rotated in his hand. “Gouge, Rosae,” his shaft became limp like a rope and the blade stuck up and sprouted a collection of other blades next to it that made its shape like a rose. Spikes tuck out on the shaft as an uncomfortable presence loomed over us.

“GWAHAHAHAHA! A flower? Is that really your second level? GWAHAHAHA” The Lieutenant laughed but in a blink, a giant metal rose mauled him. He fell back 10 feet as Chase somehow jumped high and spun Rosae in the air and threw it down. There seemed to be no limit to its length as it magically produced more rope as it sailed down and smashed the Lieutenant’s head. The rose blade turned back into scythe form as he asked, “You guys done?” We all nodded in unison as the girls were going even crazier over him.

As we headed back to our base, I saw a flying apparition in the sky. Chase apparently saw it too as his eye went wide. “RUN!” He yelled. We all bolted for it as the thing came down and turned to be a giant raven, with the wingspan of 20 feet. Chase tried to slash at it, but it dodged and started fighting him.

He quickly got Rosae out and tried attacking it, but it caught the blades with its talon and whipped Chase around and sent him flying back 15 feet. It then stared at me and charged with its talons. My legs were frozen as I took out my scythe and parried its talons. I flew around me pecking me, as I desperately tried to hit it until I stopped and saw a mark right above its eye: 3.
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Awesome Chapter!! Does Akio have a second form for his scyth?
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Cool! Is it awesome? Do I even need to ask?
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How much longer untill chapter 6 daddy?
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Chapter 6: Between Light and Darkness
That thing was the level of a Major. I’m screwed. The raven flew around me clawing me and dodging all my strikes. Suddenly, time slowed down as I was fighting. I analyzed its movements and dodged it beak. I swung down at an angle, not letting it dodge and actually slashed its back. I had regained strength and managed to slash it a few times. However, time then just returned to normal.

Suddenly, it flew back into the air and then flapped its wings, sending down shadow feathers that were like arrows. I ran away but it merely just turned its body and I soon had a back full of arrows. “Where’s Chase?” I thought, as I was dying. I then looked ahead, as I saw Chase knocked out with black energy rising from his eyes. Behind me everyone else was in that condition.

“Concussive smoke, huh? I see. You took out Captain Chase and then sprayed concussive smoke everywhere, but the only one who was immune was this kid,” said a voice. I was barley able to look around my back without it hurting. What I saw was a Reaper the size of a kid, who couldn’t have been over 14 or 15. “You are a Major in the Black Dawn, but you don’t stand a chance against a real one, let alone a Colonel,” On his skull was a stamp that said 2-SX. He was part of the special ops. “You’ve done a horrible thing, Aviana. This will be our final fight,”

The kid spun his scythe and said, “Expose and Shroud, Die ac Nocte,” The scythe disappeared as the left side of his body became jet-black while the right side was lit up. “The power of the shadow and of darkness are two different things, luckily, I have the latter, the stronger one. He lifted his left arm as chains appeared out of nowhere onto the raven and dragged him down. “Darkness is everywhere. Shadow can only be found with light, while darkness can be found simply on colors. Unfortunately for you, this cave is filled with black stone and you are a raven.”

“However, let me shine some light into your fate,” He pointed his right finger at Aviana and a beam of light that burned its face. “Light is rarer than darkness, but it can be more powerful. When combined however, you will cease to exist.” The beam of light disappeared as its body started turning brighter, although there was no source, as its whole body turned bright, the chains started rattling.

“When light and darkness meet, they create an equilibrium. A balance or equilibrium is the strongest force of nature.” Suddenly, where Aviana was, a giant grey beam of thick light rose up into the air. Even though it was a grey light, you couldn’t see inside of it. When the beam disappeared, nothing was there. He lifted his right hand and glowing rings of light carried us all back to the base with him.

“Who… are you?” I asked.

He was silent for a moment as he looked at me for one second and said, “It is not your place to be commanding a Colonel of the Special Ops, but name is Thomas Peralxi. I was killed in World War 1 in Germany. My father fought against Nazi soldiers who were aiming to take over our country. I was slaughtered in the struggle… That is all you need to know,” He closed his eyes and walked silently towards the base.

As we all healed up, Alex and I were hanging out in the lounge drinking Cherry Coke as I explained everything during the Aviana fight. He seemed pretty alarmed at the fact of a Special Ops Colonel saving us. I then said, “Looking at all these insane 2nd levels, it makes me want to get one,”

“That’s not gonna be easy man. I heard you have to get pushed to your utmost limit before you die and survive by achieving level two. If you don’t achieve it, your soul withers and fades away,” he said in a laid back voice.

“Yes, that it true,” said a quiet voice. I was scared as I saw Akio behind me. His eyes widened as he backed up, “Sorry, for scaring you, but that is true. I thought I might’ve died, ”Should I explain for you?” He said quietly.

We nodded as he said, “Well there are three kinds of second levels… There are physical types, like you saw Chase with, special types that have to do with magic,” He explained, looking over his back scared of something. He continued saying, ”And the rarest, elemental. They are elements found in the real world. Thomas has one of these…”

“Which one do you have?” Alex asked.

“I have the magic type and its-“

He saw Chase coming our way and way ready to bolt, but then he gestured Akio to sit down. “You three have an important mission. This is part of your training, and if you complete this, you’ll become a Private. You need to collect extra intelligence at the Command Point we captured. Ever since you returned, there was no one manning the posts, except for a few guards patrolling. I would get them to run the errand, but at this time, they could be 10 miles away from the command post. The intelligence should be in a scroll hidden around the camp somewhere. Do you accept?”

We nodded s we got our supplies. Akio said, “Sorry if I was acting a bit weird, I’m not supposed to release stuff like that, to Rookies because it would apparently make them lust for power. Then again you guys already are,” he laughed. It seemed that he enjoyed actually having a friend who wasn’t sarcastic and aggressive all the time.

We put on our masks and headed out to the outpost.

THANK YOU ROYELRIC FOR THE CHARACTER THOMAS PERLAXI!
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Just wanted to say. AWESOME CHAPTER! I can't wait for later.
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I think he's running late...
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Chapter 7: A Starry Sky
On the trail out, we ran into little trouble. Only a few Black Dawn members attacked us, which we (mostly Akio) destroyed. It wasn’t too hard going back to the base, as the Lieutenant is dead. When we reached there, we started looking for the scroll. We checked under the tents, between rocks, and in anything that we didn’t ransack.

There was no rock overturned or tent looked under. I thought that it was a mistake, but then I just got an idea. I got some of the tents and took out all of their legs. One of the legs was hollow and then I took out the plans. As we headed back, me head started hurting worse than before. I started remembering bit by bit about the time after the movie.
I called up Laura, and we talked for around 15 minutes and we scheduled a date at a seafood place. I got an outside seat under a starry sky where we ate. That was one of the best nights of my life, and remembering it didn’t make me feel so good.

“Memory sickness. This happens to everyone, but not this bad. Maybe these memories had to do with his death,” Akio quickly grabbed some pills out of the rations that I swallowed. Everything faded to black as I regained consciousness.

“What really happened on the night you died?” Alex asked me.

I couldn’t dodge it. I had to say some of it. These memories had already caused me some pain. “Well this is what happened…”

It had been the night of the winter ball. We had a great time there. It was relaxing, the music was nice, and everything just couldn’t have gotten better. After we ate some dinner, we hopped into my car where I drove her home.

“Thanks, Hayden. It couldn’t have been better!” She smiled and kissed me as she went into the house. As I drove back, my car wheels suddenly popped and I spun out of control into a small ditch. I climbed out and saw some local thugs that I apparently stole Laura from. They were the unruly guys who would be smoking weed in the corner and always giving you a rough feeling when around them.

They beat her and forced her to stay with them against her own will. A few days after dating her, I fought one of these thugs and only suffered a few bruises and a cut from a knife. He did pull out a gun, but I was lucky that he missed. I tackled him to the ground and disarmed him, and after that they seemed suspiciously quiet. I then swore to protect her from anyone and anything.

“C’mon. Aint ya gonna get out?” They chuckled. In their hand was an empty beer case, which must’ve been how they popped my tires. They probably followed our car and traced it back to her house. Then they probably smashed the twelve-pack of beer bottles and laid it out on the ground. I also saw a guy with a pistol in his hand, so he also must’ve shot the car’s wheels.

Suddenly, I just noticed the worse situation. The pistol. They pointed the gun at me and fired. I managed to duck the first hot, but the second one hit me in the chest. After a few shots, I was left to die. They had an extra beer bottle in their hand as well as a lighter. They chucked the lighter and the beer, creating a fire on the car, which would explode due to the gasoline.

They were about to drive off as I saw some neighbors poking their heads out. While they shot at them I dialed 911, and knew that the calls were recorded even before an operator picks up. I whispered the address three times and then played dead. The beer flame had reached me, and my arm felt like it was exploding on the inside. I screamed and yelled, but they retaliated by shooting more.

Suddenly, the police came, after some neighbors had apparently heard shooting and a car crash right when the incident happened. The thugs tried to bolt it out of there and headed back to their car, which was parked in some bushes. The police managed to arrest them first and doused the fire as Laura saw me, and started screaming.

The look on her face was worse than anything I had seen. I couldn’t bear looking at her, and I promised to protect her from anything, a promise I couldn’t keep. As the sirens blared, I being picked up and I saw a horrific sight. Some guy was hugging Laura with a slight grin on his face. That was the last sight I ever saw. I died sad and filled with despair.
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Just read the 1st chapter. It's really good. I'm gonna read the rest later.
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Interesting chapter..... I want to see my form number 2! I literally think my character is the perfect picture in my imagination. When should I expect the next chapter? Don't feel rushed I just want to know if possible.
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“Wow…” They both said in unison.

“This explains why your memory sickness his so bad,” Akio said.

“Damn, I’ve never had it that bad!” Alex said. As we walked on, we heard a sound of flapping. We looked behind to see a flock just like Aviana, luckily, when they swooped down, I saw that they were just weak level 10’s and 9’s. As we easily tore through these birds, some stronger opponents immediately ambushed us. These guys were 7’s and 8’s. With some attacks we managed to take them out.

Over the hill we saw more and more people. This had to be set up. We bolted back to the base, but they were ahead of us as well. We needed to get to the high ground. As we threw a grappling hook up to a cliff, we easily went up and looked down. There were about 20 enemies below. In another cliff, 10 more Black Dawn members shot arrows and crossbow bolts at us.

The BDs at the bottom were climbing their way up. Some had already reached pretty high and we were using our scythes to jab them down. More archers were on the other cliffs and were getting pretty swarmed. My head still hurt, and I was a little unbalanced, but I was still fighting fine. We got shot sometimes in some non-vital areas, but they still hurt like heck.

Akio finally had enough and said, “I’m going to end this, guys. Swiftly walk on the heavens, Cursoribus,” His shaft glowed and changed shape. It had relics, jewels, and different furs tied to it. It also had a candy cane like design down the shaft. The blade hummed with energy and had a white tint.

His clothes seemed to change as he had some rings and jewelry on. He had leather gloves on and his skull was slightly red.

Suddenly, he disappeared and reappeared behind the archers and sliced them up with his insane fighting style. “Sorry!” He yelled out as he faked them out by teleporting wildly around them, slashing. We jumped down the cliff with the rope while slashing around at random BDs. However, as more reinforcements came along, we were getting pushed back more and more, until Akio yelled out to us, “Hey guys… can you stand back for a while?”

As we jumped back and climbed up, Akio disappeared and reappeared at extremely fast around the ground, slicing and dicing everything in sight. You would see a streak of red or white and in a blink it would be somewhere else. Things would be slashed up, and it was hard to believe that this guy was just a 7. With his rapid, crazy, and aggressive swinging, we almost died, but it quickly ended with all of their corpses fading away.

We continued on, but we heard a roar and the side of a mountain burst open with a giant, about 10 feet tall glowing with black energy. It seemed like a humanoid appearance except for its dog-like face. Its weapon of choice was a curved sword on one hand and spiked iron knuckles on the other. He let out a giant roar and punched at Akio.

Akio easily teleported out and attacked all around it, like a tornado of red and white that slashed rapidly around the golem, who had a giant 5 on its belly. It kept on standing up and only rarely ever hitting Akio. He saw us and threw his sword at us, which we easily dodged. Suddenly a clone of itself appeared and attacked us.

We rolled through its feet, stabbed and slashed at vitals, but this clone didn’t go down. I even managed to cut its throat but nothing happened. Its sword was deadly and fast, slicing clean through rocks while making cracks on the ground. We started cutting off limbs. It lost its sword arm but the blade just flew into his left arm. We cut off a leg and then he could still move around as quick as usual.

Alex managed to slice off its other leg and I cut off its head but STILL nothing ever happened. We sliced off its final arm and the sword just floated in the air with its torso used to bum rush us into a cliff wall. We figured that we had to destroy the main body, but helping Akio was out of the question. The weakness of his style was that if we got caught in it, then we’d be as dead as a door hinge.

We both lunged at the torso at the same time, chopping it into three pieces leaving only the sword to parry. It wasn’t easy fighting a flying sword because the number of moves it could make is endless. It flew back and sent some rocks tumbling down, and as we dodged them it started slashing wildly at us, giving us some pretty bad cuts, but nothing worse than we’ve seen before. The blade suddenly dropped as I saw Akio holding the dog-man’s fading head.

Suddenly, more creatures jumped down from the mountains. They weren’t human at all. They had thin bodies that were nimble and could easily maneuver between our attacks, however, we easily disposed of each of them. It wasn’t too easy when they group you, though. They would swarm us and chase us. We were exhausted and couldn’t take anymore. We rushed back toward the base to get some reinforcements to help us fight.

In the roof of the cave, we saw some more birds. I then noticed that they were they ones calling the enemies towards us. They would call, perch, and hide. I told Akio and he teleported up to a cliff face and jumped to slash them. He teleported in mid-air and spun around, skewering all of them, we had to report this finding back to the base at once.

As we made it back, Chase was waiting for us, as we quickly explained everything. He looked at the scroll and his face turned pale. I didn’t bother reading the scroll since I would bring it back to base where we would discuss it, but Chase looked scared and quickly got out a stamp and promoted us to Privates. ”I need to attend a war counsel meeting. Now.” He ran back into the base as fast as he could, looking like the world was going to end.
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