Mikomi

Ishtar · 08-22-2011, 07:26 AM

A poem foretelling the events of my story: Ishtar

My body, it hurts to move, because of the pain my chest. The horrible pains that life gave to me for so many years, dwells within me. Never seeing the light of day, until now. Now, I don the name of the "Hero of Darkness". A legendary being of darkness. What keeps me going is Mikomi.
"Mikomi" literally meaning "hope."
I will cling to Mikomi. The moment I lose faith, and lose all hope is the moment I should consider myself dead. Mikomi will always be there for me.
Mikomi keeps me going. Hope brings light. Light will always shine with a bright future. But light and darkness are two sides of the same coin. One cannot exist without the other. Darkness will always stalk the light, light will always glow within the shadows. The deeper the light, the deeper the darkness.
The Hero of light, bringing Mikomi with him, will eventually step up to the Hero of Darkness and clash, once again.

Ishtar · 08-22-2011, 07:34 AM

It's kinda hard to understand and it's vague. But if you read my story til the end, it all makes sense

Kiseki · 08-22-2011, 07:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ishtar

My body, it hurts to move, because of the pain my chest.
The horrible pains that life gave to me for so many years, dwells within me.
Never seeing the light of day, until now.
Now, I don the name of the "Hero of Darkness". A legendary being of darkness.

What keeps me going is Mikomi. "Mikomi" literally meaning "hope."
I will cling to Mikomi. The moment I lose faith,
and lose all hope is the moment I should consider myself dead.
Mikomi will always be there for me.
Mikomi keeps me going. Hope brings light.
Light will always shine with a bright future.

But light and darkness are two sides of the same coin.
One cannot exist without the other.
Darkness will always stalk the light, light will always glow within the shadows.
The deeper the light, the deeper the darkness.
The Hero of light, bringing Mikomi with him,
will eventually step up to the Hero of Darkness and clash, once again.

I think I would have do it like this to make it more look like a poem.
A+ for the content and the message. Its a really good story too!

kay · 08-22-2011, 08:31 AM

is it like a poem that delivers the idea of the story?
its cool anyway

08-22-2011, 07:26 AM	#1
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Mikomi A poem foretelling the events of my story: Ishtar My body, it hurts to move, because of the pain my chest. The horrible pains that life gave to me for so many years, dwells within me. Never seeing the light of day, until now. Now, I don the name of the "Hero of Darkness". A legendary being of darkness. What keeps me going is Mikomi. "Mikomi" literally meaning "hope." I will cling to Mikomi. The moment I lose faith, and lose all hope is the moment I should consider myself dead. Mikomi will always be there for me. Mikomi keeps me going. Hope brings light. Light will always shine with a bright future. But light and darkness are two sides of the same coin. One cannot exist without the other. Darkness will always stalk the light, light will always glow within the shadows. The deeper the light, the deeper the darkness. The Hero of light, bringing Mikomi with him, will eventually step up to the Hero of Darkness and clash, once again. Last edited by Ishtar; 08-22-2011 at 07:34 AM.

08-22-2011, 07:34 AM	#2
Ishtar Banned Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 9,955 Rep Power: 0	Re: Mikomi It's kinda hard to understand and it's vague. But if you read my story til the end, it all makes sense

08-22-2011, 08:31 AM	#4
kay Special Jonin Candidate Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 2,557 Rep Power: 9	Re: Mikomi is it like a poem that delivers the idea of the story? its cool anyway

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